darkSpyro

Nice
Could you possibly do longer parts?

thanks

part 24

I,malefor,spyro and cynder went to catacombs,find ice golem."quiet,I hope ice golem didn't heard us"cynder said."I going find craft"I said.

Good part

I hope my story need full,I haven' t done yet.thanks

part 25

in catacombs's gate,malefor went look other armor."this way,lead to twlight falls"maefor said."my turn to fly"I said."you lead,me,spyro and malefor would follow"cynder said."I hope ice golem doesn't follow us"spyro said."I would think terrador find us in valley of avalar"I said.

This is dire.

part 26

in twlight falls,I went look vine to hold."look vine,just hold and swing here"I said."malefor,cynder,grab vine and swing"spyro said."ok"malefor and cynder said.

part 27

"ice golem's shadow army doesn't find us,soon after,fly to valley of avalar and find terrador in dragon city,warfang"malefor said.

Good parts

part 28

in dragon city,warfang at night."fly down and walk slow"malefor said."look,I found my own armor and helmet"spyro said.

Nice part

part 29

"I would fly back"I said."hold on,gary"spyro said.

Good part

part 30

ice gary appear in my form."you turn ice form,before you using your dark pioson brearth and I'm still you like dark gary when your dream"ice gary said.

part 31

"in my dream,dark gary were me"I said."true,your dark and ice form"ice gary said.

Good parts

part 32

I,spyro,cynder and malefor went stange place."it look like unknown place"malefor said."well yeah,should turn back,when you go inside"spyro said."wait,I heard that,move quick"I said.

Good part

part 33

shadow army would said."I could grab you,gary"shadow army said.very soon,shadow army has grab me and my green eye turn red eye.

part 34

shadow army couldn't grab me anylonger.my eye green eye turn red eye."my dark pioson brearth make you feel faint,shadow army"I said.

Quote: dingodile555

This is dire.

I think it's really good. Like razz said on my artwork, why don;t you show us your story before you go complaining about everyone elses

Good parts

part 35

"oh no"dark ignitus said."you turn your normal form now and I would push you"cynder said.

part 36

"I would protect you two"I said."before you turn dark form"spyro,cynder and malefor said.

part 37

not sooner,I turn dark form and spyro told me."turn dark form very quick" cynder said.

part 38

I went change my dark form.spyro told me and malefor.

part 39

very soon,there another dream."you almost turn shadow form"dark gary said."my shadow form"I said

part 40

"hold on,your shadow form"cynder said."dark gary would said you turn shadow form"malefor said.