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#51 Posted: 19:51:51 22/11/2009
I LOLed at the last bit
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#52 Posted: 19:53:56 22/11/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah i did too.
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#53 Posted: 20:41:17 22/11/2009
lucy should die!!!
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#54 Posted: 20:41:57 22/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i agree, but he's not.
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#55 Posted: 20:50:28 22/11/2009
Yeah, the last bit was FUNNY!!!
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#56 Posted: 20:52:59 22/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks...
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#57 Posted: 20:55:41 22/11/2009
That's fine!
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#58 Posted: 23:18:07 22/11/2009 | Topic Creator
ok, i'll be giving you the next chapter tomorrow morning
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#59 Posted: 09:20:23 23/11/2009
Oh...
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#60 Posted: 13:56:02 23/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11,
Dragsooth went to his room, he walked up to Malinda who was sitting on the bed, he sat down on the floor beside her. Malinda: "what happen?" Dragsooth: "well i told the master about my dreams and he told me not to believe anything that happen, so i told him i kinda believed what Jesus said in my dreams... the master threaten to torture me..." Malinda: "i'm sure he was just upset about the whole thing... he just wants to protect you." Dragsooth: "protect me from what?" Malinda: "protect you from being a slave to Jesus..." Dragsooth: "i have a feeling that Jesus is right about everything..." Malinda: "he's just trying to play tricks on you..." Dragsooth: "somehow i doubt that mom." Malinda: "why don't we get some sleep we'll talk about this in the morning..." she layed down on the bed. Dragsooth: "go ahead and get some rest, i've got some thinking to do..." he walked out of the room. Dragsooth walked through the building thinking about everything Jesus said in his dreams, Dragsooth was confused about it...he heard someone walking behind him, he turns around and sees lucifer. Dragsooth: "oh master it's only you... why are you following me?" lucifer: "never mind that! do you still think that Jesus loves you?" Dragsooth: "...y-...yes..." lucifer: "prepare to think differently! i have something to show you follow me!" lucifer led Dragsooth outside and they walked away from the lair, lucifer stopped at a large pit. lucifer: "look inside." Dragsooth came to the edge of the pit and looked inside, there was fire in the pit and in the fire were countless humans screaming and crying out for mercy. Dragsooth: "wha-... what happen to them?... why are they here?" lucifer: "this is what Jesus did to them... this is what happens to humans who refuse to be his slaves and worship him... this is what might happen to us if we loose this war..." Dragsooth: "couldn't we prevent it by giving up and worshiping Jesus instead of fighting against him and ending up like the humans?" lucifer: "WHAT!? i don't know the meaning of those horrible words!" Dragsooth: "it means we stop fighting and we worship Jesus." lucifer: "i would never do that! how dare you suggest such a horrible thing!?" Dragsooth: "well i'd rather worship Jesus then end up like them..." he looked over at the fire pit filled with humans. lucifer gripped Dragsooth by the horn and picked him up. lucifer: "i would never worship that tyrant if my life depended on it!!" Dragsooth: "well... in this case it kinda dose... all those humans had to do is worship Jesus to prevent themselves from going to hell... shouldn't we do what they refused to do?" lucifer: "never!! how dare you suggest such a horrible thing!?" Dragsooth: "well it's either worshiping Jesus or that..." he pointed to the pit of fire. lucifer magically chained Dragsooth's legs together and threw him in the pit of fire. Dragsooth screams and cries in pain. lucifer: "you could just stay there until the thought of worshiping that tyrant leaves your mind! i'll be back for you in the morning that should be enough time for you to regret what you said!" he leaves. Dragsooth: "wait! WAIT DON'T LEAVE ME HERE!!!" his entire body was being burnt by the flames... next chapter coming today |
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#61 Posted: 20:09:15 23/11/2009
OH NO D8
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#62 Posted: 21:22:59 23/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12,
Dragsooth was left in the pit of fire all night long, his body was burnt, he cried in pain all night, when morning came lucifer came over to the pit and saw Dragsooth. lucifer: "had enough?" Dragsooth: "GET ME OUT OF HERE!! PLEASE!!!" lucifer: "apologize to me first!" Dragsooth: "I'M SORRY ABOUT EVERYTHING!!!" lucifer: "now beg to be let out!" Dragsooth: "PLEASE FORGIVE ME!! I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT I WAS SAYING!!! LET ME OUT MASTER!!!" lucifer picks up Dragsooth by the horn and drops him on the ground in front of him, the chains from around Dragsooth's legs disappear. lucifer: "are you ever going to suggest that we worship that tyrant ever again!?" Dragsooth: "...no..." lucifer: "do you love Jesus?" Dragsooth did not answer. lucifer: "answer me when i'm talking to you!!" Dragsooth: "....no i don't love him..." lucifer: "prove it..." Dragsooth: "...how?..." lucifer: "bow down and worship me!" Dragsooth: "...master... i can barley move... my whole body is burnt... i can't move..." lucifer: "you can't suffer even a little bit of pain to worship me!? you little liar! you love Jesus don't you!?" Dragsooth: "i... never said that...master..." lucifer: "but you're refusing to worship me!" Dragsooth: "it's only because me whole body is burnt.... i can't move without causing myself pain..." lucifer: "you're not willing to suffer for me are you?" Dragsooth: "it's too much pain..." lucifer: "you are weak!" he picks Dragsooth up by the back of the neck. Dragsooth starts crying, lucifer: "i'll show you too much pain!" he starts walking toward the torture chamber. Dragsooth: "please master... don't take me to the torture chamber again... i'm sorry..." lucifer: "oh you're going to be sorry!" he continued walking toward the torture chamber carrying Dragsooth. i feel bad about what's going to happen next next chapter coming today |
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#63 Posted: 23:19:15 23/11/2009
OH NO D8... Again
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#64 Posted: 01:18:59 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 13,
lucifer carried Dragsooth to the torture chamber, he chained him to a table. it wasn't an ordinary table small spikes came out of the table and pierced Dragsooth's back, he screamed in pain, lucifer smiled at the sound of the screams. Dragsooth: "please let me go!!" lucifer: "no! this is what you get for refusing to worship me!" Dragsooth: "Jesus was right. you really don't love me." tears came down his cheeks. lucifer: " why should i love you? i don't... you feeble weakling!!" Dragsooth didn't say anything, he just kept crying because of the pain... lucifer: "i'll leave you here... see you in a few hours." Dragsooth: "NO! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE!!" lucifer leaves... a few minutes later Malinda walks by the chamber, she hears crying Malinda: "what poor soul is he tormenting now?" she looks inside and sees Dragsooth. Malinda: "DRAGSOOTH!" she runs to him and unchains him, the spikes go down, she picks him up gently and cradles him in her arms. she magically heals him. Dragsooth continues crying. Malinda: "why are you still crying?" Dragsooth: "the master scares me..." Malinda: "how?" Dragsooth: "he threw me in a pit of fire and left me there all night." Malinda: "well it's all over now..." lucifer was standing behind them. lucifer: "how dare you interfere with Dragsooth's punishment!?" Malinda turns around and looks at him. Malinda: "what has Dragsooth done to make you punish him?" lucifer: "he refused to worship me! that's a good enough reason for me to punish him! and since you stopped it you can punish him! i command you to!" Malinda: "i... i won't..." lucifer: "Malinda think of who's side you're on mine or the side of that tyrant?" Malinda: "yours..." lucifer: "good, now chain him up and torture him!" Malinda chains Dragsooth to a wall by his paws. she gets a whip, she whips Dragsooth across the back, Dragsooth screams in pain. lucifer: "whip him harder!" Malinda whips him harder and repeatedly, Dragsooth cried in pain. Malinda continues, she gives Dragsooth 50 lashes... lucifer: "stop! that's enough..." Malinda stops... Dragsooth whimpers and sobs in pain. lucifer: "do whatever you want with him..." he leaves. Malinda drops the whip and puts her hand on Dragsooth's back healing him. she unchains Dragsooth and cradles him in her arms... Malinda: "i'm sorry Draggy.." Dragsooth: "it's ok mom... you didn't have a choice..." Malinda: "i have always had a choice... i just wish i had chosen differently..." she walks out of the chamber carrying Dragsooth... next chapter coming tomorrow |
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#65 Posted: 16:01:20 24/11/2009
U can always change who u r, Malinda!
"We all have a choice. We always have a choice. We choose what we do, how we act, where ur future will take us, etc. Some say when people get to bad, it's to late... they can't change! It's never to late to change who u r." MniM(My kNowledge Is Meaningless to what i could know)
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#66 Posted: 16:24:39 24/11/2009
Good chapter
and nice knowledge MinM20
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#67 Posted: 18:13:44 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
yes, nicely put MinM20.
Chapter 14, 5 years later... Dragsooth was now 10 years old, he had gotten stronger, he still had those dreams but he just kept them to himself, he still felt the same way about Jesus but he didn't tell anyone. Dragsooth had done a lot of training and lucifer thought he was ready to fight in an actual battle. Malinda tried to stop it but she knew it was inevitable, that she had to let Dragsooth go into battle. Dragsooth was in the armory putting some armor on, Malinda walks up to him. Malinda: "Draggy you don't have to go into war it's too dangerous." Dragsooth: "don't worry mother i was trained for this." Malinda: "yes... but what if you get hurt or... or killed?" Dragsooth: "i was trained by the best... so don't worry..." lucifer came in "are you ready yet!? the army is already at my lair waiting!" Dragsooth: "i'm ready master..." lucifer and Dragsooth left the armory, Malinda just watched as the whole demon army went toward the gates of Heaven. lucifer and Dragsooth were in the front. lucifer: "Dragsooth we are going strait for the Temple, and we're going to attack that miserable tyrant together!" Dragsooth: "right, i'm with you." the demon army broke through the gates and charged into Heaven. an army of angels came and clashed with them, there was vicious fighting happening everywhere, lucifer flew in the air toward the Temple, Dragsooth followed behind him, they reached the Temple, lucifer broke through the doors, Dragsooth followed closely behind him, lucifer saw Jesus and lunged at him, but Michael and a few other angels tackled lucifer to the ground and began to stab him, lucifer tried to get up but there were too many angels on him, he breathed fire but the angels dodged it and went for him again, they had lucifer pinned down. lucifer: "Dragsooth! don't worry about me! attack him!" Dragsooth looks at Jesus but didn't make any movement. lucifer: "what are you waiting for!? kill him! kill him now!" a few angels stabbed him in the back and wings "AHHH! GET OFF ME!!" he knocked some of them off and makes an attempt to go for Jesus, Michael stabs lucifer in the ribs, lucifer knocks him away, lucifer was heavily wounded, but he makes an attempt to attack again but Michael stabs him in the back, lucifer knocks him away with his tail. lucifer: "RETREAT!!" he runs out of the Temple. Dragsooth follows him, all the demons were in full retreat, they run back to hell. oh if some of you are wondering who Michael is he is the leader of the angel army. next chapter coming today |
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#68 Posted: 20:21:05 24/11/2009
Why couldn't hell do some sort of infiltration attack
anyway, good chapter
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#69 Posted: 23:11:51 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
it wouldn't really work out.
Chapter 15, Dragsooth sees that lucifer is gravely injured but he's still able to stand, Dragsooth walks over to him. Dragsooth: "master are you alright?" lucifer: "no!... heal me!" Dragsooth magically heals him. lucifer: "why didn't you do as i had said and attacked Jesus!?" Dragsooth: "i couldn't do it..." lucifer: "why not!?" Dragsooth: "i... i don't know master... i... i'm sorry" lucifer: "it's too late for an apology! you disobeyed my command! how do you even dare disobey me!?" Dragsooth: "i... i don't know... i just couldn't go through with it..." lucifer: "i nearly died and you didn't want to follow my orders!?" Dragsooth: "it's not that i didn't want to master i couldn't... something stopped me and i couldn't attack..." lucifer: "you're even weaker then i thought! go to the torture chamber!!" Dragsooth: "what happen was not my fault master... i had no control..." lucifer: "do you dare disobey me now!!?" Dragsooth: "no..." lucifer: "then go to the torture chamber NOW!!" Dragsooth slowly walks toward the chamber, lucifer is following him. Dragsooth walks inside the chamber, lucifer: "take off your armor!" Dragsooth takes off the armor he was wearing. lucifer picks him up and chains him on a table, a whip appears in lucifer's hand, he raises it and whipped Dragsooth repeatedly 60 times. Dragsooth cries out in pain the entire time, when it was over lucifer hears Dragsooth's cries of pain and smiles. Dragsooth: "...is it over?" lucifer: "no! i'm not finished with you yet!" he unchains Dragsooth and chains him on another table, this time Dragsooth lays on his back chained to the table, small spkes come out of the table and goes into Dragsooth's back, Dragsooth screamed and cries in pain, lucifer laughs when he hears the crying, Dragsooth: "PLEASE LET ME GO!! i promise to obey you from now on!!" lucifer: "of course you will..." he puts his hand on Dragsooth and pushes him furture into the spikes. Dragsooth screams and cries ever louder, lucifer: "yes that's it. now beg for mercy." he pushed Dragsooth into the spikes. Dragsooth: "AHHHHH!! I AM SORRY I DISOBEYED YOU PLEASE HAVE MERCY MASTER!!" he sobbed and cried in pain lucifer smiles and laughs slightly at his pain. lucifer: "this is the greatest happiness i have felt in moths." he took his hand off of Dragsooth and got a metal rod, he breathed fire on it until it was red hot, he walked over to Dragsooth with it. Dragsooth: "...no... please... don't..." he had tears in his eyes. lucifer smiled "oh i will." he pressed the tip of the rod into Dragsooth's shoulder. Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain, tears flowed down his face. lucifer took the rod off of his shoulder, it left a burn mark. lucifer walked over to Dragsooth's other side. lucifer: "now for the other shoulder..." he breathed fire on the rod. Dragsooth: "no...please... have mercy... please..." he sobbed in pain. lucifer: "oh but you've made me so happy. you don't want to crush my joy now do you Draggy?" he pressed the tip of the red hot rod into Dragsooth's shoulder. Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain, he sobbed heavily, lucifer took the rod off of Dragsooth and laughed at his pain. lucifer: "i think you've learned your lesson... you are free to go..." he unchained Dragsooth, the spikes went down, lucifer walked away. Dragsooth rolled off the table and landed on his side. Dragsooth: "ow..." he just layed there crying in pain unable to move... the next chapter is coming tomorrow |
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#70 Posted: 23:14:38 24/11/2009
Poor Dragsooth D:
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#71 Posted: 23:19:57 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i know... even i was shocked at what i had lucifer do to him...
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#72 Posted: 01:56:34 25/11/2009
Quote: Solister
I only see the world has it is, Solister! Has I said, "My kNowledge Is Meaningless to what I could know." If that is wisdom, then we r all wiser then we know!!! Very good chapter so far, Torok!
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#73 Posted: 01:58:36 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you.
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#74 Posted: 02:05:07 25/11/2009
i have read them all nice one torok
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#75 Posted: 02:07:35 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
oh thank you.
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#76 Posted: 07:47:43 25/11/2009
OH NO D8... yet again D8
and MinM20, nice knowledge again
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#77 Posted: 13:45:46 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 16,
Dragsooth eventually passed out from the pain, (dream) Jesus appears in front of Dragsooth. Jesus: "my child, come to me... i can take you away from all this pain and misery... look at how lucifer treats you... come to me and i'll always treat you with love and respect..." Dragsooth: "can my mom come too?" Jesus: "of course she can... but you have to convince her... don't worry if she doesn't come right away... she will eventually." Dragsooth: "ok, i'll come..." (end dream) Dragsooth woke up and found out he was healed of his wounds. Dragsooth: "how am i healed?" he noticed Malinda was standing over him. Malinda: "oh honey are you alright?" Dragsooth: "yes, i'm fine..." he stands up "mom, Jesus appeared to me in my dreams, he said for me to come to him..." Malinda: "you're not actually thinking of going are you?" Dragsooth: "i already told him i'd go..." Malinda: "oh no you are?" Dragsooth: "yes i am... you can come too..." Malinda: "no...i... can't..." Dragsooth: "why?" Malinda: "i... i'm afraid of the master. you know very well he wouldn't like that." Dragsooth: "i don't care what he thinks... he never treated me with any love or respect... i'm going to Heaven..." he starts to leave. Malinda: "Draggy don't go..." Dragsooth: "i'm going to Heaven and you can't stop me..." he walks out of the torture chamber and toward Heaven. next chapter coming today. |
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#78 Posted: 13:55:06 25/11/2009
short,but good
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#79 Posted: 14:52:07 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks,
Chapter 17, Dragsooth got to the gates of Heaven, he looked back at hell. Dragsooth: "goodbye forever..." he walked in front of the gates of Heaven. the gates opened, Dragsooth slowly walked inside, the gates closed behind him. he looked around him, he saw the beautiful grass and the flowers of all different colors, he heard singing and he liked the sound very much. he looked in the distance and saw a big city, there was a great golden street leading to the city, he walks on it towards the city. he walks inside the city there were giant buildings everywhere he looked. he walked around until he saw the Temple in the middle of the city. the doors of the Temple slowly opened and there in the doorway stood Jesus. Jesus: "welcome my child... are you here to stay?" Dragsooth: "yes sir..." Jesus: "come..." Dragsooth smiled and slowly walked towards Jesus. Dragsooth stopped when he heard someone calling his name in the distance, he turned around and saw lucifer behind him. Dragsooth cringed in fear lucifer: "Dragsooth! how dare you think of going to him!? come over here right now!!!" Dragsooth shook his head. he was really scared. he moved 3 paces toward Jesus. lucifer: "DRAGSOOTH! COME HERE NOW!!!" Dragsooth shook his head. Jesus: "maybe it's time to let him choose who he wants his master to be..." lucifer: "fine! but i'd like to remind him who it was that first loved him, who it was that first took care of him, who it was that stayed with him when he was ill!" Dragsooth: "you never did any of that for me... that was my mother who did all that..." lucifer: "go on Dragsooth choose!... come to me now!" Dragsooth looked at Jesus. lucifer: " Dragsooth what are you doing!!?" Dragsooth came closer to Jesus. lucifer: "Dragsooth don't do it!!!" Dragsooth was a foot away from Jesus. lucifer: "DRAGSOOTH!!... if you come to me your punishment won't be that painful. i'll only whip you 100 times!" Dragsooth looked at lucifer and shook his head, Dragsooth went to Jesus and looked up at him. Dragsooth: "i choose you..." Jesus: "well lucy looks like you lost..." lucifer looks at Dragsooth lucifer: "YOU UNGRATEFUL LITTLE SON OF A *****!!!" Dragsooth looked at lucifer with fear in his eyes. Dragsooth hides behind Jesus. lucifer lunges at them but a group of angels tackle him to the ground and chain him up. lucifer struggles. they hold him down. angel: "Master what should we do with him?" Jesus: "throw him in hell..." the angels drag lucifer away, he yells in anger and struggles to get free but the angels were too strong. lucifer is dragged toward hell, the gates opened and the angels throw him in, he lands on rocky ground, the angels leave and the gates close... Jesus looks at Dragsooth. Jesus: "it's ok, he's gone... he won't hurt you anymore..." Dragsooth gets out from behind Jesus. Dragsooth: "thank you... Master." Jesus: "you're welcome my child... come." Jesus walks in the Temple. Dragsooth follows him in joyfully. next chapter coming today |
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#80 Posted: 15:03:49 25/11/2009
awsome
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#81 Posted: 15:05:13 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you.
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#82 Posted: 15:06:07 25/11/2009
hehehe
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#83 Posted: 16:30:07 25/11/2009
W00T, Dragsooth is in heaven
Good chapters
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#84 Posted: 18:19:53 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks.
Chapter 18, Dragsooth follows Jesus through the Temple. Dragsooth: "is this where the humans worship you?" Jesus: "yes, and not just humans worship me, angels have always worshiped me... and for a time even your mother worshiped me." Dragsooth: "she did?" Jesus: "yes until lucifer convinced her otherwise, Malinda used to love me... i think she still dose." Dragsooth: "can i ask you a question?" Jesus: "of course what is it?" Dragsooth: "the mast-... i mean lucifer said you force others to worship you. is that true?" Jesus: "no, everyone is free to worship as they choose. everyone in Heaven wants to worship me. i don't force them to." Dragsooth: "oh..." Jesus: "don't worry i won't make you worship me. i'm not like that." Dragsooth: "oh... i saw a lot of big golden buildings in the city. what are they for?" Jesus: "they are mansions. many people live in them." Dragsooth: "oh... do i get to live in one?" Jesus: "no... you can live in the Temple with me." Dragsooth: "really?" Jesus: "of course..." Jesus sits on his throne... Jesus: "come here Draggy..." Dragsooth comes over to him, Jesus picks him up and cradles him in his arms and starts petting him. Dragsooth smiles. Dragsooth: "you're a much better Master then lucifer ever was." Jesus: "i know... if those demons wouldn't have stolen your egg you would've never suffered like you did." Dragsooth: "so Malinda is not my mother?" Jesus: "no..." Dragsooth: "who is my mother?" Jesus: "no one... you don't have a mother... i created you..." Dragsooth: "oh i see..." Jesus: "you could treat Malinda as your mother, she was very kind to you..." Dragsooth: "will Malinda come to Heaven too?" Jesus: "of course she will..." Dragsooth: "when?" Jesus: "soon..." he continues petting him. In hell, lucifer was still chained up, he trashed around trying to free himself but he couldn't break the chains. Malinda found him. she unchained him. Malinda: "master what happen? where's Dragsooth?" lucifer stood up "that little ******* joined the enemy!!" Malinda: "he did?" lucifer: "yes! did you know about this!?" Malinda: "yes. but i didn't know he'd go through with it." lucifer: "WHAT!? you knew about this and you didn't stop him!!?" Malinda: "i couldn't keep him here against his will..." lucifer picked up the chains and chained Malinda's hands together, he walked to the torture chamber pulling her behind him. i don't know if i'll be able to post tomorrow, so the next chapter may come on Friday. |
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#85 Posted: 19:09:31 25/11/2009
Good chapter
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#86 Posted: 16:33:21 26/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 19,
lucifer got to the torture chamber with Malinda, he took the chains off of Malinda and chained her to a wall by her wrists, lucifer: "you know i was going to give Dragsooth 100 lashes if he had come back to hell with me... but since you let him go to Heaven you'll get punished instead!" a whip appears in lucifer's hand, he raises it and whips her 100 times, Malinda screams in pain, lucifer smiles at her pain. he unchains her and takes her to a cell. he throws her in and closes the cell door. he leaves... Malinda lays on the floor slightly sobbing in pain. Malinda: "Dragsooth was right lucifer dose treat us unfairly... but what can i do about it... it's not like i can go back to Heaven... Jesus will never take me back..." she gets up and kneels, she starts to pray... In Heaven, Dragsooth is still laying in Jesus' arms. Jesus: "Dragsooth?" Dragsooth: "yes Master?" Jesus: "i hear Malinda praying... she's desperate to get back to Heaven... i'll find a way to get her back..." In hell, Malinda is still praying "Jesus i regret every moment i spent fighting against you... please take me back... take me out of hell..." next chapter coming today |
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#87 Posted: 20:49:02 26/11/2009
WELLLL... i'm a little behind O.O
like the chapters. (lol) |
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#88 Posted: 20:52:27 26/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you.
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#89 Posted: 21:29:32 26/11/2009
Good chapter
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#90 Posted: 23:01:02 26/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 20,
Malinda continued praying, suddenly two angels appeared on either side of her, she looked at them. Malinda: "Michael?... Gabriel?" Gabriel: "yes it is us..." Michael: "come... the Master heard your prayers and decided to take you back..." the angels helped her stand up and healed her, they disappeared with Malinda. Malinda found herself in front of the Temple, the doors slowly opened and in the doorway stood Jesus. Malinda: "Master..." she kneels. Jesus walked over to her "rise my child." Malinda stands up "Master forgive me for going against you for all those years..." Jesus: "of course i forgive you..." Malinda: "thank you..." Dragsooth comes outside "mom..." Malinda: "Draggy!" she runs to him and hugs him. Malinda: "i'm so glad you're safe..." she lets go of him. she turns to Jesus "i haven't seen Father in such a long time. where is he?" Jesus: "in the Temple waiting for you..." Malinda goes inside the Temple, Dragsooth follows her... next chapter coming today or tomorrow |
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#91 Posted: 07:48:04 27/11/2009
Good chapter
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#92 Posted: 16:47:20 27/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you.
Chapter 21, Malinda and Dragsooth walk through the Temple, they see God sitting on his throne, Malinda slowly walks in front of him and kneels down, Dragsooth walks beside Malinda. Malinda: "bow down Dragsooth. show some respect..." Dragsooth quickly bows down. God: "hello my daughter, i see you want to return to Heaven." Malinda: "i do Father. please forgive me for going against you for thousands of years." God: "of course i forgive you." Malinda: "thank you Father. can you restore me to my original form?" God: "yes..." a bright light shown down on Malinda and turned her into a beautiful angel. Dragsooth looked at her. Malinda: "thank you Father." God: "you're welcome my daughter." Malinda stood up and looked at herself "i feel so much better. i didn't like being a dragon..." Dragsooth stood up "what's wrong with being a dragon?" Malinda: "oh nothing honey. i just wasn't used to being a dragon because i was created as an angel..." she looks at God "i would like to make up for what i did..." God: "no need you've done enough by coming back to me..." Malinda: "i want to do more Father... i wish to worship you..." God: "if you wish to do so..." Malinda kneels down and starts to pray silently, Dragsooth bows down and worships God... In hell, lucifer was in his room planning an attack on Heaven, suddenly a demon barges in. demon: "master Malinda has escaped." lucifer: "what?" demon: "she's not in any of the cells... she's gone." lucifer: "how did?... never mind get out you idiot! i'll find her and that little purple weakling!" next chapter coming whenever... |
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#93 Posted: 17:17:47 27/11/2009
Good chapter
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#94 Posted: 23:54:31 27/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you,
Chapter 22, one hour later, Dragsooth and Malinda walked out of the Temple. they walked through the fields. Malinda: "it feels so good to be back up here, i don't know why i ever joined lucifer and fought against Father. it doesn't make sense to me why anyone would fight against him." Dragsooth: "maybe they want to be him..." Malinda: "that's exactly why lucifer started fighting against Father. do you think he'll ever stop fighting?" Dragsooth: "no... he's too determine. the way i see it he won't stop fighting until he wins or most likely losses..." Malinda: "i hope he repents before... judgment day..." Dragsooth: "when's that?" Malinda: "nobody knows. only Jesus knows..." Dragsooth: "let's ask him..." Malinda: "he won't tell us... not even the other angels know when judgment day is..." Dragsooth: "oh..." they walk through the gardens, the gardens were abundant with flowers and shinning grass. Dragsooth: "why would anyone want to leave this beautiful place i will never know..." Malinda: "lucifer didn't want to leave, he wanted to rule up here, but the angels threw him down into hell..." Dragsooth: "why did you go with him?" Malinda: "i was always very close to him, i loved him as my brother... i thought that following him would be best... but i was wrong..." Dragsooth: "was he always so evil, cruel and sadistic?" Malinda: "no... he's changed... he always wanted to do the best for his siblings and he loved them very much... he wasn't so full of hate before he fell from Heaven... he loved Father very much but when Father asked everyone to worship Jesus lucifer was the first to say no..." Dragsooth: "he had a dumb reason to rebel..." Malinda: "yes... i just wish he gives up before it's too late..." they continued walking through the garden. next chapter coming tomorrow |
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#95 Posted: 08:30:59 28/11/2009
Good chapter
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#96 Posted: 17:59:34 28/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you.
Chapter 23, In hell, lucifer had gathered a group of 30 demons to raid the Temple. they went toward Heaven. In Heaven, it was close to night time and it was getting dark, Malinda and Dragsooth went into the Temple. lucifer and the demons headed for the Temple, they walked though the city, the streets were empty. demon: "master why don't we raid one of these mansions? there's bound to be something in there worth something..." lucifer: "no. we came to raid the Temple not the mansions of the saints... a few of you go scout ahead for any guards." 10 demons walked ahead, they saw 2 guards walking through the city, the demons ambushed them and killed them. demon: "all clear..." they all walked through the city closer to the Temple, they got to the Temple, they walked inside and saw 2 angels guarding the relic room, the demons attacked and killed them. lucifer: "grab all the relics you can." they started taking relics. Dragsooth walked by the relic room and saw them. lucifer saw him. lucifer: "you! you're going to pay for you're betrayal!!!" he lunges at Dragsooth and pins him to the ground. Dragsooth struggled to get free but he couldn't... he was magically chained up. lucifer picked him up by the back of his neck. lucifer: "you are going to suffer for betraying me..." suddenly Malinda walked by and saw what was happening. she took out her sword and ran at lucifer, he hit her and knocked her to the ground. many angels appeared around her with their weapons drawn. lucifer: "all of you go back to hell!" the demons jumped out a window and flew toward hell, lucifer flew out another window with Dragsooth still in his claws. the angels helped Malinda to her feet Malinda: "we have to go after him! he's got Dragsooth." angel: "there's nothing we can do... only the Master can help Dragsooth now." the demons flew into hell with the relics they had stolen. next chapter coming today |
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#97 Posted: 19:00:34 28/11/2009
Good chapter
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#98 Posted: 23:26:23 28/11/2009
YO, TOROK!
Why does Dragsooth get captured every other chapter?
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#99 Posted: 14:42:12 29/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i don't know because i want to...
Chapter 24, a few hours later Dragsooth woke up, he looked around. he saw that he was in a cell, the chains from around his legs were gone but he now had a chain around his neck. Dragsooth stood up, lucifer appears in front of him, lucifer: "you miserable little traitor!! i try to save you from enslavement from that tyrant and this is how you show gratitude by worshiping him and his Father!?" Dragsooth backed away from him, Dragsooth backed up against the wall, he cringed in fear. lucifer came closer to him. lucifer: "you are going to pay dearly for your betrayal!" he took the chain off the wall and yanked Dragsooth towards him, Dragsooth stayed low to the ground. lucifer: "i will show you no mercy!!" he walked out of the cell dragging Dragsooth behind him, Dragsooth sunk his claws into the ground, lucifer pulled on the chain pulling Dragsooth to the ground, lucifer continued to drag Dragsooth behind him. lucifer: "no use trying to escape!" lucifer dragged him to the torture chamber. lucifer took Dragsooth and chained him on a table, Dragsooth was laying on his back on top of the table, spikes came out of the table and pierced his back, he screamed and cried in pain. the table began to get hot and it burned Dragsooth's back, he screamed in pain. lucifer stood over him and he saw tears in Dragsooth's eyes. lucifer: "that's it.." Dragsooth: "what do you want me to do join you?" lucifer: "that would be preferable... but right now i want you to SUFFER!" he put his hand on Dragsooth and roughly pushed him further into the burning spikes, Dragsooth screamed in pain, he sobbed heavily. lucifer: "that's right suffer!" he took his hand off of Dragsooth and picked up a metal rod, he heated it up until it was red hot, he pushed it against Dragsooth's stomach, Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain. lucifer: "that's it Draggy that's it suffer!!!" Dragsooth sobbed in pain "please... have... mercy..." lucifer laughed "why should i have mercy on a traitor like you!? i am enjoying this..." lucifer unchained Dragsooth from the table and picked him up. Dragsooth was crying. lucifer: "you're about to suffer a lot worse!!" lucifer took Dragsooth into another room, it was a small and dark room, with a table in the middle of the room, lucifer chained Dragsooth on the table and left, he closed the door. the room was completely dark. Dragsooth looked around but all he could see was darkness, he heard a noise and felt something on his back, there were many scorpions crawling on his back, he tried not to move but when one stung him he cried out in pain and the rest of the scorpions began stinging him multiple times, he screamed in pain but the stings kept coming, this went on for about an hour, the scorpions never stopped stinging for a second, then they suddenly left, Dragsooth was exhausted, he barely had enough energy to cry, he breathed heavily and sobbed, the door suddenly opened and lucifer stepped in, he had a grin on his face. lucifer: "well i see you had fun with the scorpions..." he laughed. Dragsooth slowly looked at him "i hate you..." lucifer: "now now didn't your new Master tell you it's not polite to hate?" Dragsooth: "no..." lucifer came over to Dragsooth, he had a whip in his hand. lucifer: "time for those hundred lashes i promised you." lucifer raises the whip and whips Dragsooth across the back, Dragsooth screams and cries in pain, lucifer doesn't stop he lashes him 100 times, when it was over Dragsooth was sobbing, lucifer laughed at his pain. lucifer: "you're going to suffer the same thing tomorrow!!" he unchains Dragsooth and takes him to a cell, he throws him in and shuts the cell door. lucifer: "have a pleasant night Draggy..." he leaves. Dragsooth is laying at the back of the cell crying in pain... next chapter coming today |
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#100 Posted: 14:53:59 29/11/2009
OH NO D8
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