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*rapidly pokes* HEY just cause you're offline doesn't mean you get to have a break in writing. *shot*

Yeah! ( pokes)

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*rapidly pokes* HEY just cause you're offline doesn't mean you get to have a break in writing. *shot*

*pokes back* D:<
I had to get off the computer So i couldnt get on with the story, i'm doing it now tho, well most of it xD I'l finish it when i get back from the Doctors xD

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Yeah! ( pokes)

Dont poke meh! D:< xDD

Sorry for the double post, but heres the next chapter.

Chapter 10~

Comet woke up during the night and looked out his window, his Family was brought into his mind once again. He felt another wave of tears rush up his throat, but did the best he could to hold them back. He knew he had to try and forget about the incident, and get on with his life and what the future, was going to bring.

Many Years Later.......

Comet walked around the small field happily, Krystal by his side. He had grown quite a lot over the years, especially by being seventeen years of age now. Krystal had grown into a cute and sweet little 10 year old Dragoness, her voice as light as a feather. She pranced around happily, sniffing the snow. Comet sighed and looked at the sky, small snow drops landed on his nose as the crisp cold wind blew past him. ''Krystal!'' he shouted, looking back at her. Krystal raised her head and ran over ''Yes?'' she asked. Comet flapped his wings and lifted into the air ''Lets go'' he said shivering ''Its freezing out here''.
Krystal looked at him and sighed, she flew into the air after him and they both flew up to the temple.

Upon arriving at the temple they saw a bright yellow light flying in the air, noticing it was Cynder looking at them coming in, she grunted as she saw Comet. Krystal landed first and walked inside, the snow was beginning to get heavier as thicker. ''Well what are you doing out here?'' he asked. ''Getting away from Sparx and you'' she chuckled. Comet gave her a fierce look ''Haha very funny miss prissy'' he said sarcastically. ''What am i on about Miss?'' he chuckled ''I meant Mister'' he stepped back a little. Cynder glared at him ''No problem,....Miss'' she smiled evily ''I remember that time you were screaming like a Girl yesterday'' she burst out laughing as Comet blushed a little ''I meant that'' he smiled.
''Sure you did'' she teased and sniggered walking inside. Comet glared at her and shook his head ''EVIL!'' he shouted running to the entrance. Inside sat the guardians, all circled around the pool of visions, Ignitus had a stern and shocked look on his face from what he just saw.

Comet looked up at him in confusion ''What is it?'' he asked ''You look like you have seen a ghost'' he chuckled. Ignitus gave him a stern look ''This isnt funny'' he snapped ''We just got some bad news, very bad.'' Comet's smile drooped ''Like what?'' he asked. Cyril sat up ''Well we just got news that darkness may be returning, althou----
''Although we may not have proof yet'' interupted Volteer. Cyril looked at him fiercely ''Just shut up for once and let me speak'' he snapped. ''He just likes to talk too much'' said Comet ''Thats the bad thing about living here, i wonder why that is''
''Yes'' said Cyril ''And most of the stuff he says is just a load of rubbish and chatter''
''Indeed'' cukled Comet, Volteer just sighed as he looked at the both of them.

''Can i continue?'' asked Ignitus sternly.''Uhhh...yeah'' said Comet ''Of course''
Ignitus sat up ''Well as i have seen, it looks like darkness has been descending across the land once again. We dont have full proof yet though'' Comet tilted his head ''Annndd....?'' Terrador gave Comet a fierce look ''Just listen will you!?'' he snapped.
''O.k,...O.k'' said Comet ''No need to shout.'' Terrador grunted ''Continue Ignitus'' he said.
Ignitus sighed ''Well.......''

I'm start on the next chapter now xD

Clifhanger alert D8
Good chapter though

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Clifhanger alert D8
Good chapter though

Agreed. Tell us, please! Don't leave us innocent people in suspense!

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Clifhanger alert D8
Good chapter though

Agreed. Tell us, please! Don't leave us innocent people in suspense!

Deal with it xDDD lol
Have to wait till the next chapter to find out its isnt much of a surprise anyway xD

That ain't an excuse. >:C

Get to it now. *shot*

Really good! >w<

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That ain't an excuse. >:C

Get to it now. *shot*

Your a bully! xD

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Really good! >w<

Thanx!

>W<

*chops off your leg* You'll get it back when you write more.

*w* *noms on it* ^w^

But.....i need my leg D:

*noms on it still* Well write then. xD

Also.

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Your a bully! xD

I'm sigging that. xDD

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*noms on it still* Well write then. xD

Also.

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Your a bully! xD

I'm sigging that. xDD

Noooooo! dont! xDDD

To late. >:D

That smilie doesn't work though. >w>

xD I'm thinking of starting the next chapter tommorow xD

*Sigh* All this voilnce for a story? meh, its a good one. Write more please, *yawns in bordom.*

Will do
lolz, i'l need to fit Talana somewhere in the story soon xDD

Oh baw I'm playing. >.>

Yeah, how are you going to do that?

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Oh baw I'm playing. >.>

Yeah, how are you going to do that?

I dunno to be honest xDDD

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Oh baw I'm playing. >.>

Yeah, how are you going to do that?

I dunno to be honest xDDD

*thinks* I don't know either. xDD

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Oh baw I'm playing. >.>

Yeah, how are you going to do that?

I dunno to be honest xDDD

*thinks* I don't know either. xDD

I might stick along with the story of when they met from the RP, but explain it in a different way xD

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I dunno to be honest xDDD

*thinks* I don't know either. xDD

I might stick along with the story of when they met from the RP, but explain it in a different way xD

That could work.

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*thinks* I don't know either. xDD

I might stick along with the story of when they met from the RP, but explain it in a different way xD

That could work.

Yey xD I'l probablly do that then xD

Hurry up with the story already!

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Hurry up with the story already!

K hang on
I'm thinking about how to write the last half of it out, its not easy you know, especially when some of it is part of another story i wrote and some parts from an RP

*noms and stares at the computer screen*

Nearly got it done xD
I'm not gonna include the whole of Comets life story in this though, i think i'm just gonna keep the story up till a few years after he meets Talana. xD

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Nearly got it done xD
I'm not gonna include the whole of Comets life story in this though, i think i'm just gonna keep the story up till a few years after he meets Talana. xD

Wouldn't that confuse people? Also don't give everything away. xD

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Nearly got it done xD
I'm not gonna include the whole of Comets life story in this though, i think i'm just gonna keep the story up till a few years after he meets Talana. xD

Wouldn't that confuse people? Also don't give everything away. xD

It might, but i just may change the name, again I'm trying to think of a name where it just shows that its the younger part of his life, but dont know xDD any suggestions?

The younger years of Comet?

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The younger years of Comet?

Hmm, thats a good one, i'l use that xDD thanx


*Opens word document*
Back to the story

thats a good story

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Hurry up with the story already!

K hang on
I'm thinking about how to write the last half of it out, its not easy you know, especially when some of it is part of another story i wrote and some parts from an RP

Of course its easy! iam a writer, and I got a little advice for you. When you write, if you can't figure out how to write a part, quit and just let the ideas flow. You'll probaly know what to do after a few hours.

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Hurry up with the story already!

K hang on
I'm thinking about how to write the last half of it out, its not easy you know, especially when some of it is part of another story i wrote and some parts from an RP

Of course its easy! iam a writer, and I got a little advice for you. When you write, if you can't figure out how to write a part, quit and just let the ideas flow. You'll probaly know what to do after a few hours.

I've got the next chapter nearly finished.

Yayz!

Chapter 11 ~

The whole room was silent after what was told, Spyro especially, his face was drooping in shock 'How could this happen?'' he asked, still full of disbelief.
''We have no idea'' said Ignitus ''We thought it would never possibly happen again, especially not at this time.''
''But wasnt darkness drained away years ago?'' asked Cynder.
''Seems not'' muttered Comet ''It's been here all this time''
''Yeah..'' said Cynder sighing, but she suddenly clicked a few moments later ''Wait!'' she said ''Whats that supposed to mean?''
Comet smiled cheekily for a moment. ''Well seeing as you are a dark creature'' he smirked ''Its obvious we've been among darkness all this time'' Cynder shot a fierce glance at him ''Haha very funny Smarta**'' she said sarcastically.
''I know ri...'' ''Thats enough!'' shouted Spyro ''Listen for once'' Comet muttered under his breath, Cynder just looked away.
Ignitus sighed ''And none of that language please Cynder'' he said shaking his head, Cynder looked at the ground. ''Well..'' said Ignitus ''We dont exactly know of this fact for sure yet, it may be true, or it may be false. But...what we really need to consider is being prepared incase it is true, they can start a surprise attack, putting our city in peril and danger. But if we are ready, mabye we will just outsmart them'' Comet hung his head and looked at the ground.
''So...they may be coming back for me......?'' he asked.

Sorry about the short chapter, i was running outta ideas. I'l try and think of some for the next chapter xD

W00T!
Good chapter

thats really good! i wish i can write storys like that

I really gotta get the next chapter started

Yes, YOU BETTER!

I'm writing it now

Yes, YOU BETTER BETTER OR EXPECT PUNISHMENT YOUNG LADY!!!

Update! xD

Chapter 12 -

Ignitus shook his head ''I really have no idea Comet'' he said ''They may just forget about it now, seeing as it was years and years back. You arnt that important to them either, i see no point certainly''. Comet nodded, he felt somewhat a relieved feeling in his heart from hearing this, from what he thought otherwise. He shifted from his spot, walked over to to the temple's main door, the sun was starting to set and the darkness was creeping in. He yawned as a force overtook his eyelids, he knew he was tired, and in need of sleep. Cyril looked at Ignitus with a dissaproving look, he wasnt happy with what had been said.

Meanwhile -

The large Dragon sat in his throne, skulls placed around him and fire lit torches sitting at either side. A small Grublin walked up to him, both had worried and decieving looks on their faces. The Grublin look up, thinking ''How are we going to do this?'' he asked. The Dragon climbed off his throne and walked onto the cold stone ground. ''I really have no idea'' he said in his dark and dwelling voice ''If you had just got rid of him all those years ago, we would have this problem!'' he snapped. ''I also wonder why i havnt killed you already for failing me...''. The Grublin gulped, he had always been afraid of his Master, dying would be a nightmare come true, especially with the pain he causes to those who have to suffer. ''Uhh..what about Kariana?'' he asked, hopefully ''She's been following in your footsteps her whole life, and she is vile and vicios. Please, Malefor.'' he said in fear ''You have to let me live, Kariana will never fail you. She has never failed anyone'' Malefor looked at the begging creture full of spite, but also hope. He sighed, knowing it would be worth a try ''O.k, one chance Grublin...'' he snapped ''But if Kariana fails me, you know what will happen...''

W00T, a chapter
Good chapter