Judgement day
Ignitus: There lay the dragon realms to ashes, crumbled to the earth. How did this horrific event started?...Not Malefor, not Gaul, nor Red........I'll tell you how it all began with one dragoness named Lem. Lem was a dark green dragon who was no different from all the others....BUT something was different. It just that no one knew about it. She had a disease. Now, your wondering how can one little disease cause the dragon realms in ruins? This is the story I'm going to tell you...
Spyro: Ignitus....Is everyone safe?
Ignitus: Yes, Spyro, they're in this haven. Go check up on Cynder...
Spyro: Okay, Ignitus (Runs off)
Ignitus: This time, our ancestors didn't save everyone from the worlds distruction....Here is the stpry of the Black Plague....
Dragon Village
Ember: who is she?
Flame: Ember, it's not nice to point! Let's talk to her.....
????: Hm...This looks like a nice place to stay...
Flame: Hey! Where you came from?
????: I don't know....I came from the woods....
Flame: I'm Flame the red dragon....
Ember: I'm Ember...the pink dragon!
????: I'm Lem.....
Ember: Lem? What a cute name! Huh, Flame?
Flame: It's cool!
Lem: Huh?
She looks up to the grey depressing sky, seeing dark clouds rolling in. A rain drop land on the tip of her nose, follow her cheek, her neck, and to her arm. She shakes it off and taps Flame
Lem: Uh...We should go inside! It's going to rain! Plase, um can we go inside?
Flame: Um..Why, Lem? It's just rain...
Lem: Uh..You don't understand, Flame! If I stay out here, everyone around me is going to-
Before she said the word "die" it began to pour down raining Flame and Ember just give an idle stare. Lem stand back from them fearing what was going to happen.
Flame: Lem, what's wrong?
Ember: Lem, why are you going away?
Lem: Stay away from me!!.....The humidity in the rain cause it to spread..
Flame: What to spread?
One dragon walked pass Lem and collapes on the ground in seconds.
Lem: Oh no..It's happening again....
To be continued....
[ I know your wondering " Why is Ember and Flame doing in a TLOS story". This is how it starts.... I might show you an image of Lem soon. So, tell me what you think?]
© by Xia
EDIT: THIS IS LEM : LEM
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#1 Posted: 01:36:23 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 02:24:38 04/11/2009
Hmm, i don't know what to make of it. Write more!
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#3 Posted: 02:56:21 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay! More wil come soon! 8D
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#4 Posted: 03:13:20 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Ember: F-f-flame!
Flame: Ember, calm down! Ember: H-h-he died!! She let out streaking cry. Flame: Lem, what did you do?! Lem: I told you...... Flame: He's dead?!! Lem: Yes! Everytime it rains, my disease spreads through the air! I'm sorry! I can't help it! I-I-I don't know whats wrong with me! Flame: Stay away from us! Lem: But, Fl- Flame: Stay back!!..Someone help!! A dragon ran to the incident to help, but ends up dying as well. Black ooz begain leaking out his notrols and his eyes roll back. Lem: No!! Flame: Ember, let's go!!! Ember: Okay!! They ran away. Lem:..No.....Everytime I try to get help,.....They runaway from me like I'm some kind of monster! I'm not a monster! I'm not a monster! Spyro: Hello.....What happend here?! Lem: DON'T GO NEAR ME! Spyro: Huh?! Lem: STEP.....BACK! Spyro made 5 steps back from her. Spyro: I saw Flame and Ember running away! They said you did something bad! What was it? Lem: Everyone hates me! Spyro: Wait, calm down- Lem: NO, NO, NO!!! I can't! I can't! Everyone dies when I come around! THEY ALL DIE!! Spyro: I said calm down!!! Everything became quiet and the rain finally stop. Lem blinks at Spyro with a neutral look on her face, standing silent, breathing heavily from yelling. She walks up to him, shivering like a fragile leaf. Once she relise she didn't kill him it was okay to speak up. Lem: Please, don't hate me.... Spyro: WHY?! Lem: Because......B-because I can't help it.... Spyro: Help what? Lem: Killing.... Spyro: HOW?! Lem: BECAUSE OF MY DISEASE! Spyro: D-d-disease?...That's ridiculous! Lem: You do NOT under...STAND!.... Spyro: Look, the elders can help you- Lem: NO ONE CAN HELP ME! Spyro: Wait! I can help you!...Ignitus might know what's going on.... Lem:...Ignitus? Spyro: Yes! He can help any young dragon who's in a state of need. If you follow me, I can show you... Lem:...O-o-o-okay.....I believe you... |
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#5 Posted: 07:56:16 04/11/2009
Good story so far
Please continue
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#6 Posted: 18:39:34 04/11/2009
yeah this is good.
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#7 Posted: 21:31:00 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
DRAGON TEMPLE
Spyro: Hello? Is anyone here? Lem: I think I should leave...Everyones going to di- Spyro: Don't be shy...Um...Oops! I forgot to ask for your name... Lem: Lem....My name is Lem, purple dragon. Spyro: Spyro.. Lem: Um...Spyro. Ignitus walk pass them, but then stops and make a slow glance at Lem. He turns around with his arms in place, approaching them. Lem stand behind Spyro, shivering, in fear of the big red dragon that was staring at her. Ignitus: Um, Spyro, who is this green dragon? Spyro: This is Lem! Lem: *Waves* Uh....Hi! Spyro: I found her around two dead bodies. Weird huh? Ignitus: Dead bodies? Spyro: Yes! I don't know what happend! One of them had black stuff coming out there mou- Lem: Um, Spyro! We shouldn't talk about it! Spyro: Why? It NOT like you killed them... Ignitus: That's enough, Spyro. If she does not want to talk about the incident, then you don't talk about it. I'm sure she's scared.....No one wants to see a dead bodie lying around them... Lem: (Mudders) I've seen plenty..... Spyro: Huh? Ignitus: Huh? Lem: NOTHING! |
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#8 Posted: 21:41:12 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I will, Solister. It's going to get more darker and twisted
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#9 Posted: 22:03:22 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro: She has no where else to go, Ignitus! Please, let her stay...
Ignitus: Hmm....Alright, young dragon. She can stay. Spyro: Yes! Lem: Hm.... Spyro: This is awesome, Lem. Your apart of the family now. Lem: Spyro, I can't stay around you....And everyone else who maybe living here! You don't understand... Spyro: But, Lem, your not dangerous! Stop saying you killed those dragons... Ignitus: Theres nothing dangerous about you at all. Lem: Hehehe.....Thats what you think.... Spyro: Lem, stop being so serious.... Lem: Fine! Don't believe me?! Watch! Everyones going to drop dead where I'm around.... Spyro: Lem! Ignitus: Young dragon! Lem: Hm...Sorry, I-I got carried away.... Ignitus: It's alright. Just don't make that same mistake again. Spyro, I'll be with the other gaurdians across the hall (Walks away) Spyro: Okay, Ignitus! Lem: Hmmm..... Spyro: Hey , Lem, I think Cynder is outside playing with Ember, Flame and some other dragons. Wanna come? It's only going to rain. Nothing bad is going to happen. Lem:..Sure....I'll meet you out there with everyone (Mudders) and you will see what "I" can do.... Spyro: Okay, See ya, Lem.... [ Action is about to start soon. I'm using a dialogue style because it's mostly just talk] |
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#10 Posted: 22:29:53 04/11/2009
Poor lem, the others just don't understand her disease and what will happen
Good parts anyway
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#11 Posted: 00:04:20 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thank you
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#12 Posted: 00:08:20 05/11/2009
Very good xD You've put a lot of work into it, i've only got a few chapters on my fanfic and i've had it for weeks! xDD
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#13 Posted: 00:23:19 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
OUTSIDE THE TEMPLE WALLS
In a large grassy field, Spyro and his friends were running around in circles. They all chuckle, giggle, scream, but their end was near. Lem was walking on top of a small hill, watching the dragons at a far distance, glaring with so much anger. She looks up at the sky as the dark clouds roar with anger. It was going to rain. Cynder: Hehehe! Can't catch me! Spyro: Yes I can! Dream: Hahaha! Frost: Hehehehe! Run! Ember: Watch out, Cynder! Flame: He's gaining on you! Cynder: Hehehehehe...he...he...he *Stops running*..hey, Spyro, who's that green dragon over there? Ember: ...No.....It's her.... Spyro: Oh, that's Lem! Marax: Let's see if she wants to play with us! Lollie: Hey, Lem, want to play with us?! Lem walks slowly towards them. Flame: Spyro, let's get out of here!! Spyro: Why? Flame: She's going to kill us all!! Ember: Flame is right! She;s evil!! Spyro: No she's not! Flame: Yes she is! She killed eveyone around her! Ember: They just walk pass her and - and- died.... Spyro: I don't believ you! Lollie: What's going on you guys? Ember: Lollie, Lem is bad! She's a killer run! Lollie just gave Ember a blank stare. Ember: Lollie?...Lollie?! Black ozz was dripping out her noise and she hits her head on a rock, causing her skull to smash open. Blood splattered on Ember and she streaked. One by one the dragons collapes in grass. First was Marax, Dream, and then Frost. All covered with black ooz and eyes rolled back till they were all white. The smell of frsh blood rolled into the humid air, making Ember sick to her stomach, and almost throwing up on her self. Ember: Flame!! Let's leave!! Spyro: What the..... Cynder:..Oh my...God..... Flame: We have to get out of here!!! [Don't worry, Marax, Lollie, Dream, and Frost were just background characters. I'm just making this up as it goes along] |
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#14 Posted: 00:24:38 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll check it out :3
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#15 Posted: 00:26:27 05/11/2009
Thanx
Anyway, MORE! |
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#16 Posted: 00:48:10 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay!
Oh by the way, I'm on Chapter 9 of your fanfic <w< IT IS SO CUTE!!! |
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#17 Posted: 07:57:09 05/11/2009
Good part
Please continue
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#18 Posted: 16:45:47 05/11/2009
Death come to us all... But ur death will be w/o honour!-Splinter.
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#19 Posted: 22:08:52 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
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#20 Posted: 22:30:25 05/11/2009
Really good PLZ keep going
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#21 Posted: 22:58:13 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
DRAGON TEMPLE
Cyril: What was this young dragon's name? Ignitus: Lem, Cyril, but somethings a little off about her.. Terrador: What could that be? Ignitus: She said she killed these dragons a while ago. Volteer: Murdered, Ignitus?! An adolescent?! That's prepoterous! Absolutely absord! Cyrl: Why would she say such thing? Ignitus: I don't know...Maybe she was mentally abused? Terrador: Where did Spyro find this dragon, Ignitus? Ignitus: I don't know...She didn't say anything about her home land.... Spyro: Ignitus! Ignitus! Ignitus: What is it, Spyro?! Cynder: E-everyone died! They all just drop dead! Just like that! Ember: Lollie....L-l-l-lollie h-h-head smashed open...and her b-b-blood was everywhere!! Flame: All our friends are dead! Ignitus: What the ancestors name are you talking about, Spyro?! Spyro: Lem killed our friends!! She was right!! She killed them!! Terrador: Are you serious?!!! Cynder: You have to believe us, Uncle Terrador!! Look at Ember! She has blood on her!! Volteer: Ignitus, are you going to be that naive to believe this?! Ignitus:......Yes, Volteer, I believe them. They're scared..and I know something is very wrong...Close the temple gates. We will keep Lem out! OUTSIDE IN THE FIELDS Lem: Told you, Spyro, that I can kill people.... Stalking her was some other dark green dragon. ????: Hey, I saw what happend.. Lem: Huh?.. ????: That was awesome! Making them all scared like that..... Lem: Who are you?! ????: I'm Toren...... Lem:...Toren?...What do you want? Toren: I have the same disease you have, Lem.... Lem: What?! Toren: It's very rare. We are the misfits of this world! We can't go any where without killing someone everytime it rains or get humid, Misty, Foggy? This viruswe have.... Lem: So? It means nothing to me! Toren: This is a gift! Your going to throw it away like that for their world? Lem: Their world? Toren: Yes, their world! The ones who see us as killers! Wait, you remember your birth? Lem: I don't remember my birth plae or my family... Toren: That's the whole thing....We aren't born from anyone. We came from the ground... Lem: Huh?! Toren: Organic Evolution...We are born from the organisms of this earth. The dirt from the soils, the roots of a tree, the maggots that form. All because of that, we are born....Your NOT just a dragon, BUT a dragon that is born from germs in the forests. Lem: What..... the.. hell?..... Toren: It's true...And you are going to join us... Lem: Theres more of us?! Toren: Yes, but only a few of us are surviving. We're plotting to get everyone infected... Lem: How is that even possibe? Toren:...You'll see.... |
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#22 Posted: 07:52:26 06/11/2009
Good chapter
This is getting more interesting by the minute Please continue
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#23 Posted: 21:01:58 06/11/2009
meh, A little depressing. I'll check back later.
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#24 Posted: 21:12:35 06/11/2009
PLZ keep going
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