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#101 Posted: 03:03:53 05/11/2009
*rapidly pokes* HEY just cause you're offline doesn't mean you get to have a break in writing. *shot*
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#102 Posted: 03:05:54 05/11/2009
Yeah! ( pokes)
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#103 Posted: 11:34:18 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
*pokes back* D:< I had to get off the computer So i couldnt get on with the story, i'm doing it now tho, well most of it xD I'l finish it when i get back from the Doctors xD Quote: IsisStormDragon
Dont poke meh! D:< xDD |
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#104 Posted: 15:23:24 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the double post, but heres the next chapter.
Chapter 10~ Comet woke up during the night and looked out his window, his Family was brought into his mind once again. He felt another wave of tears rush up his throat, but did the best he could to hold them back. He knew he had to try and forget about the incident, and get on with his life and what the future, was going to bring. Many Years Later....... Comet walked around the small field happily, Krystal by his side. He had grown quite a lot over the years, especially by being seventeen years of age now. Krystal had grown into a cute and sweet little 10 year old Dragoness, her voice as light as a feather. She pranced around happily, sniffing the snow. Comet sighed and looked at the sky, small snow drops landed on his nose as the crisp cold wind blew past him. ''Krystal!'' he shouted, looking back at her. Krystal raised her head and ran over ''Yes?'' she asked. Comet flapped his wings and lifted into the air ''Lets go'' he said shivering ''Its freezing out here''. Krystal looked at him and sighed, she flew into the air after him and they both flew up to the temple. Upon arriving at the temple they saw a bright yellow light flying in the air, noticing it was Cynder looking at them coming in, she grunted as she saw Comet. Krystal landed first and walked inside, the snow was beginning to get heavier as thicker. ''Well what are you doing out here?'' he asked. ''Getting away from Sparx and you'' she chuckled. Comet gave her a fierce look ''Haha very funny miss prissy'' he said sarcastically. ''What am i on about Miss?'' he chuckled ''I meant Mister'' he stepped back a little. Cynder glared at him ''No problem,....Miss'' she smiled evily ''I remember that time you were screaming like a Girl yesterday'' she burst out laughing as Comet blushed a little ''I meant that'' he smiled. ''Sure you did'' she teased and sniggered walking inside. Comet glared at her and shook his head ''EVIL!'' he shouted running to the entrance. Inside sat the guardians, all circled around the pool of visions, Ignitus had a stern and shocked look on his face from what he just saw. Comet looked up at him in confusion ''What is it?'' he asked ''You look like you have seen a ghost'' he chuckled. Ignitus gave him a stern look ''This isnt funny'' he snapped ''We just got some bad news, very bad.'' Comet's smile drooped ''Like what?'' he asked. Cyril sat up ''Well we just got news that darkness may be returning, althou---- ''Although we may not have proof yet'' interupted Volteer. Cyril looked at him fiercely ''Just shut up for once and let me speak'' he snapped. ''He just likes to talk too much'' said Comet ''Thats the bad thing about living here, i wonder why that is'' ''Yes'' said Cyril ''And most of the stuff he says is just a load of rubbish and chatter'' ''Indeed'' cukled Comet, Volteer just sighed as he looked at the both of them. ''Can i continue?'' asked Ignitus sternly.''Uhhh...yeah'' said Comet ''Of course'' Ignitus sat up ''Well as i have seen, it looks like darkness has been descending across the land once again. We dont have full proof yet though'' Comet tilted his head ''Annndd....?'' Terrador gave Comet a fierce look ''Just listen will you!?'' he snapped. ''O.k,...O.k'' said Comet ''No need to shout.'' Terrador grunted ''Continue Ignitus'' he said. Ignitus sighed ''Well.......'' I'm start on the next chapter now xD |
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#105 Posted: 16:46:16 05/11/2009
Clifhanger alert D8
Good chapter though
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#106 Posted: 17:49:01 05/11/2009
Quote: Solister
Agreed. Tell us, please! Don't leave us innocent people in suspense!
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#107 Posted: 17:52:28 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynderfyre
Deal with it xDDD lol Have to wait till the next chapter to find out its isnt much of a surprise anyway xD |
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#108 Posted: 23:08:08 05/11/2009
That ain't an excuse. >:C
Get to it now. *shot* |
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#109 Posted: 23:22:11 05/11/2009
Really good! >w<
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#110 Posted: 23:32:07 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
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#111 Posted: 23:35:43 05/11/2009
>W<
*chops off your leg* You'll get it back when you write more. *w* *noms on it* ^w^ |
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#112 Posted: 23:36:26 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
But.....i need my leg D:
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#113 Posted: 23:40:01 05/11/2009
*noms on it still* Well write then. xD
Also. Quote: xx chloebabez
I'm sigging that. xDD |
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#114 Posted: 23:40:43 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
Noooooo! dont! xDDD |
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#115 Posted: 23:42:29 05/11/2009
To late. >:D
That smilie doesn't work though. >w> |
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#116 Posted: 03:48:55 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
xD I'm thinking of starting the next chapter tommorow xD
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#117 Posted: 05:37:42 07/11/2009
*Sigh* All this voilnce for a story? meh, its a good one. Write more please, *yawns in bordom.*
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#118 Posted: 14:16:55 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Will do
lolz, i'l need to fit Talana somewhere in the story soon xDD |
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#119 Posted: 15:04:56 07/11/2009
Oh baw I'm playing. >.>
Yeah, how are you going to do that? |
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#120 Posted: 16:01:50 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
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#121 Posted: 16:24:05 07/11/2009
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#122 Posted: 18:17:21 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
I might stick along with the story of when they met from the RP, but explain it in a different way xD |
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#123 Posted: 18:19:25 07/11/2009
Quote: xx chloebabez
That could work. |
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#124 Posted: 18:25:19 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
Yey xD I'l probablly do that then xD |
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#125 Posted: 20:16:16 07/11/2009
Hurry up with the story already!
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#126 Posted: 23:00:39 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: ignitusforever
K hang on I'm thinking about how to write the last half of it out, its not easy you know, especially when some of it is part of another story i wrote and some parts from an RP |
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#127 Posted: 23:11:16 07/11/2009
*noms and stares at the computer screen*
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#128 Posted: 00:17:07 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Nearly got it done xD
I'm not gonna include the whole of Comets life story in this though, i think i'm just gonna keep the story up till a few years after he meets Talana. xD |
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#129 Posted: 00:27:22 08/11/2009
Quote: xx chloebabez
Wouldn't that confuse people? Also don't give everything away. xD |
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#130 Posted: 00:30:45 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
It might, but i just may change the name, again I'm trying to think of a name where it just shows that its the younger part of his life, but dont know xDD any suggestions? |
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#131 Posted: 00:31:45 08/11/2009
The younger years of Comet?
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#132 Posted: 21:42:58 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Adria
Hmm, thats a good one, i'l use that xDD thanx *Opens word document* Back to the story |
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#133 Posted: 20:09:53 10/11/2009
thats a good story
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#134 Posted: 02:11:08 11/11/2009
Quote: xx chloebabez
Of course its easy! iam a writer, and I got a little advice for you. When you write, if you can't figure out how to write a part, quit and just let the ideas flow. You'll probaly know what to do after a few hours. |
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#135 Posted: 17:34:47 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: ignitusforever
I've got the next chapter nearly finished. |
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#136 Posted: 18:45:55 11/11/2009
Yayz!
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#137 Posted: 00:54:28 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11 ~
The whole room was silent after what was told, Spyro especially, his face was drooping in shock 'How could this happen?'' he asked, still full of disbelief. ''We have no idea'' said Ignitus ''We thought it would never possibly happen again, especially not at this time.'' ''But wasnt darkness drained away years ago?'' asked Cynder. ''Seems not'' muttered Comet ''It's been here all this time'' ''Yeah..'' said Cynder sighing, but she suddenly clicked a few moments later ''Wait!'' she said ''Whats that supposed to mean?'' Comet smiled cheekily for a moment. ''Well seeing as you are a dark creature'' he smirked ''Its obvious we've been among darkness all this time'' Cynder shot a fierce glance at him ''Haha very funny Smarta**'' she said sarcastically. ''I know ri...'' ''Thats enough!'' shouted Spyro ''Listen for once'' Comet muttered under his breath, Cynder just looked away. Ignitus sighed ''And none of that language please Cynder'' he said shaking his head, Cynder looked at the ground. ''Well..'' said Ignitus ''We dont exactly know of this fact for sure yet, it may be true, or it may be false. But...what we really need to consider is being prepared incase it is true, they can start a surprise attack, putting our city in peril and danger. But if we are ready, mabye we will just outsmart them'' Comet hung his head and looked at the ground. ''So...they may be coming back for me......?'' he asked. Sorry about the short chapter, i was running outta ideas. I'l try and think of some for the next chapter xD |
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#138 Posted: 09:26:39 13/11/2009
W00T!
Good chapter
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#139 Posted: 16:50:59 13/11/2009
thats really good! i wish i can write storys like that
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#140 Posted: 12:33:58 30/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I really gotta get the next chapter started
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#141 Posted: 16:50:35 30/11/2009
Yes, YOU BETTER!
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#142 Posted: 17:24:30 02/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm writing it now
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#143 Posted: 19:24:38 02/12/2009
Yes, YOU BETTER BETTER OR EXPECT PUNISHMENT YOUNG LADY!!!
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#144 Posted: 17:29:23 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Update! xD
Chapter 12 - Ignitus shook his head ''I really have no idea Comet'' he said ''They may just forget about it now, seeing as it was years and years back. You arnt that important to them either, i see no point certainly''. Comet nodded, he felt somewhat a relieved feeling in his heart from hearing this, from what he thought otherwise. He shifted from his spot, walked over to to the temple's main door, the sun was starting to set and the darkness was creeping in. He yawned as a force overtook his eyelids, he knew he was tired, and in need of sleep. Cyril looked at Ignitus with a dissaproving look, he wasnt happy with what had been said. Meanwhile - The large Dragon sat in his throne, skulls placed around him and fire lit torches sitting at either side. A small Grublin walked up to him, both had worried and decieving looks on their faces. The Grublin look up, thinking ''How are we going to do this?'' he asked. The Dragon climbed off his throne and walked onto the cold stone ground. ''I really have no idea'' he said in his dark and dwelling voice ''If you had just got rid of him all those years ago, we would have this problem!'' he snapped. ''I also wonder why i havnt killed you already for failing me...''. The Grublin gulped, he had always been afraid of his Master, dying would be a nightmare come true, especially with the pain he causes to those who have to suffer. ''Uhh..what about Kariana?'' he asked, hopefully ''She's been following in your footsteps her whole life, and she is vile and vicios. Please, Malefor.'' he said in fear ''You have to let me live, Kariana will never fail you. She has never failed anyone'' Malefor looked at the begging creture full of spite, but also hope. He sighed, knowing it would be worth a try ''O.k, one chance Grublin...'' he snapped ''But if Kariana fails me, you know what will happen...'' |
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#145 Posted: 20:26:16 28/12/2009
W00T, a chapter
Good chapter
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