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Chapter 40,

Dragsooth stood outside the training room, lucifer walked up to him.

lucifer: "i want you to go to Heaven and get me a relic!"

Dragsooth: "ok fine..." he walks toward Heaven, he walks inside, he goes toward the Temple, two angels pin Dragsooth to the ground, the angels were Micheal and Gabriel, they put a heavy chain around Dragsooth's neck.

Michael: "you're coming with us you traitor!!"

they pulled Dragsooth into the Temple, they drug him up to Jesus, Dragsooth looked down...

Gabriel: "bow before Christ!"

the two angels made Dragsooth bow down in front of Jesus. Dragsooth prostrated himself before Jesus.

Dragsooth: *weeping* "Master... i...i'm sorry... i'm so sorry.... please have mercy on me... may you forgive me Master..."

Jesus: "Dragsooth you went against me, you bowed down to satan, you killed for him, you stole relics for him and you disobeyed 4 commandments and sinned mortally... i'm going to have to punish you for these crimes."

Dragsooth: "i know Master and i deserve whatever i get..."

Jesus: "but don't worry you'll soon be back in Heaven..."

Dragsooth suddenly found himself in a small white room, he felt slight pain in his entire body, he layed down on the ground "i deserve this slight pain for my sins..." it was stinging pain, it did not cease...


ok this chapter was rather short, more coming tomorrow...

Interesting...

thanks,

Chapter 40,

Dragsooth spent the entire night feeling pain, the pain wasn't too bad but Dragsooth couldn't sleep all night long, the pain went throughout his entire body constantly.
when morning came Dragsooth found himself in Heaven, he looked around and he was back at the Temple, he looked up and saw Jesus.

Dragsooth: "Master can you forgive me for betraying you?"

Jesus: "of course i forgive you, now come here so i can remove that mark from your chest..."

Dragsooth walks over to him, Jesus touches Dragsooth's chest and the black pentagram goes away.

Dragsooth: "thank you Master..."


In hell,

a demon walks over to lucifer.

demon: "Dragsooth has betrayed us."

lucifer: "WHAT! AGAIN!? that no good traitor!!! well since i didn't have any luck with him maybe i can have luck with Marissa..."he walks into Marissa's cell,

Marissa was still trapped in crystal, lucifer touches the middle of the crystal and it shatters, Marissa falls to the ground. she breathes deeply and realized she's still alive, she has chains around her legs and a muzzle around her jaws, the muzzle is removed.

Marissa: "what did you do to Dragsooth!!"

lucifer: "i made him join me, but he betrayed me again! you will join me!"

Marissa: "no i will never join you again!!!"

lucifer came closer to her but a big bright light came in between him and Marissa, lucifer stepped back, Jesus appeared in the middle of the light,

Jesus: "stay away from her!" the light grew brighter

lucifer ran away.

Jesus: "Dragsooth was right lucifer is a coward..." he turns towards Marissa and the chains from around her legs disappear, Jesus picks her up and she is healed.

Marissa: "thank you Master... what happen to Dragsooth?"

Jesus: "he's in Heaven waiting for you... and i'm proud of you, you didn't betray me even though you were threatened with death... and that's true courage. now let's get back to Heaven..." he disappears with Marissa.

they are inside the Temple, Jesus puts Marissa on the floor,

Dragsooth: "Marissa!" he runs towards her "are you ok?"

Marissa: "yes Dragsooth i'm fine... are you alright?"

Dragsooth: "yes i am fine..."

Marissa: "what happen to you when you joined lucifer?"

Dragsooth: "well he made me call him master, he made me worship him, he made me do work on the sabbath, he made me steal some relics and he made me kill an angel... i got whipped if i didn't do what he said..."

Marissa: "i'm sorry that he made you sin so much..."

Dragsooth: "the Master forgave me so it's alright... now i have to get some sleep because i just had to spend all night in a painful version of purgatory and i'm tired..."

he walked over and layed down next to Jesus' throne, Marissa came and layed down beside Dragsooth, he had fallen asleep, Marissa fell asleep with him...


ok, next chapter coming tomorrow...

Yay, Dragsooth and Marissa are back in heaven

Chapter 42,

afew hours later in hell,

a demon army in full body armor was standing in front of lucifer's lair, it was bigger than any other army, lucifer stood at the front.

lucifer: "today we shall have victory over our enemies! our numbers have grown to the largest they have ever been! we will have the upper hand in this battle! we will take Heaven and i will take the throne!"

all the demon's cheered...

lucifer: "FORWARD DEMONS!!!"

the demons charged towards Heaven...


In Heaven,

Michael and the angel army were standing a good distance away from the gates of Heaven. Gabriel came up next to Michael,

Gabriel: "Michael the demon army is doubled in size and they are coming this way!"

Michael saw the demons coming through the gates of Heaven, they suddenly stopped, lucifer stood at the front of the demon army, he looked in the distance and saw the smaller army of angels... the angels drew thier weapons...

lucifer: "CHARGE!" the demon army charged towards the angels,

Gabriel: "may God help us..."

Michael: "CHARGE!!!" the angel army charged towards the demons... the two armies collided,

the angels fought off the demons as best they could but they were greatly out numbered, lucifer flew towards the Temple, Michael flew after him, lucifer turned around and stabbed Michael in the hip with a sword, Michael plummeted to the ground, lucifer continued to fly to the Temple, the angels were quickly retreating and the demons were advancing,


In the Temple,

Jesus saw what was happening, he turned to Dragsooth and Marissa,

Dragsooth: "Master what do we do?"

a big bright light came around all 3 of them and they disappeared.


suddenly lucifer came through the doors of the Temple, he looked around, no one was there, he walked over to the throne, he sat in it. great power came upon him.

lucifer: "I AM NOW GOD!!!"

there was a great burst of darkness that overshadowed the Temple and everything in Heaven, every angel was magically chained up and every demon was brought back to life, the Temple was now a stone fortress with a big stature of lucifer at the top, everything in Heaven was wilted, the sky became dark and cloudy. everything that was gold was now stone...

lucifer's voice rang out through Heaven "i am god and now everyone will worship me!!!"

the demons dragged all the angels into the Temple, they were dragged in front of lucifer and forced to kneel before him, every demon bowed down to lucifer, the angels looked at him with disgust, some of the demons stood behind the angels and forced them into a bowing position... lucifer looked over and saw Michael being forced into a bow....

lucifer: "well well, look who's worshiping me..."

Michael: "you won't get away with this!"

lucifer: "oh but i have. i am your god now..."

Michael struggled to get up but a demon held him down in a bowing position.


next chapter coming today...

Sweet xD

Oh no D8 Heaven has been finally taken by lucifer

oh no is right...

Chapter 42,

the demons took all the angels and put them in one giant cell and locked them in there...

all the demons came before lucifer and bowed to him, they were worshiping him, lucifer was the happiest he had ever been...


On a big hill a half a mile away from the Temple Jesus stood there looking at what lucifer had done to Heaven... right behind Jesus was all the humans that had gotten into Heaven, he turned around and looked at all of them...

Jesus: "everyone who is able to fight come forward..."

most of the humans stepped forward, mostly men and some women. the children and most of the women stayed back. a white light overshadowed all the humans that stepped forward, they were given armor and weapons.
Dragsooth stepped forward too and so did Marissa, Jesus looked at them.

Jesus: "Dragsooth, Marissa step back... it's too dangerous for you two to go in there..."

Dragsooth and Marissa stepped back and stood with the others who didn't step forward.

Jesus turned to the humans who stepped forward "you are to go toward that dark fortress and distract the demons until i have a chance to free the angels..."

the humans ran toward the fortress.

the demons ran out of the fortress and toward the humans. the two armies collided... the demons were strong but the humans were stronger they had been given great power and fought the demons with great success...


Jesus appears inside the cell where the angels are being held, the chains from around them disappear and they are given weapons and armor.

Jesus: "let's take Heaven back!"

the gate on the cell disappears and the angels run out of the cell and toward the demons, now the demons were out numbered they were being attacked from all sides and couldn't fight back as well...

lucifer was aware at what was happening and walked outside and saw the battle, he walked towards it, when suddenly Jesus appears in front of him, lucifer feels great fear at his presence and begins to step back, a great light comes over Heaven and it is restored to it's original state, everything grows back, the sky becomes blue and bright, lucifer and the demons are magically chained up, The Golden Temple comes back and everything is back to normal, everyone was brought back to life and power was given back to Jesus...


wow lucifer's reign was quite short wasn't it?
more coming tomorrow

Very good xD

Very short but very good

thanks,

Chapter 43,

every human and angel was inside the Temple, Michael and Gabriel were bringing lucifer into the Temple in chains, the humans and angels stepped aside to let them pass. they were shouting curses at lucifer as he was being taken past them, Michael and Gabriel dragged lucifer up to Jesus who was sitting on his throne, the two angels made lucifer kneel in front of Jesus. lucifer looked up at Jesus with great fear in his eyes.
Dragsooth and Marissa were standing beside Jesus' throne, Dragsooth looked into lucifer's eyes and snarled at him, Marissa looked at lucifer and she saw the fear in his eyes.
the humans and angels shouted curses at lucifer and mocked him.

Jesus: "everyone quiet down."

everyone continued to curse at lucifer.

Jesus: "everyone be quiet."

everyone continued to shout curses at lucifer.

Jesus stood up "silence!"

it was dead silent now. Jesus sat back down in his throne, he looked at lucifer.

Jesus: "lucifer you have been the greatest disappointment, you have done the worst sins imaginable, you waged war against God and against humanity, you made mankind sin, you destroyed many lives and souls."

lucifer: "...i....i'm sorry... have mercy.... don't send me to hell..."

Jesus: "it's too late you already made your choice a long time ago..."

the ground opened up in front of lucifer, there was a giant hole in front of him, he looked down he saw flames everywhere.

some angels were dragging demons and throwing them into the hole, lucifer saw every demon go into the flames screaming and begging for mercy,

everyone started chanting "throw him in, throw him in, throw him in, throw him in!!!"

lucifer looked at Jesus with tears in his eyes "please have mercy!! i don't want to go in there!!"

everyone continued chanting "throw him in, throw him in, throw him in!"

lucifer: "no... NO....PLEASE HAVE MERCY!!!"

Jesus: "you had a choice and you chose to go against me! so this is your fate!"

lucifer could hear the screams and begging of every demon in hell, he could feel the heat of the flames already...

lucifer: "I'M SORRY... I'LL NEVER DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT AGAIN!!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!!" he prostrated before Jesus.

Dragsooth: "sucking up isn't going to help you!!!"

lucifer stayed in that position and cried "please have mercy on me... i'm sorry for everything..."

Jesus looked at Michael and Gabriel

Jesus: "throw him in."

the angels grabbed lucifer, he struggled to get free but it was no use,

Dragsooth looked at him "bye bye lucy have a pleasant eternity..." he waved at him

they threw him in,

lucifer:"NOOOOOOOO!!!" he fell into the flames, his entire body was being burned, he felt every bit of the pain, the hole closed up and he was in darkness "PLEASE.... HA- HAVE.... MERCY.... PL- PLEASE!!!" he felt alone and in the greatest pain imaginable...

everyone in Heaven cheered,

Dragsooth: "yes, YES HE'S GONE!"

Marissa looked upset

Dragsooth looked at her "what's wrong? you should be happy that that beast is gone forever... yet you look sad..."

Marissa: "it's just that he looked so sad and scared..."

Dragsooth: "yeah... so?"

Marissa: "so i felt bad for him... i could see the fear in his eyes... i think he was really sorry for what he has done..."

Dragsooth: "that was fake regret he just didn't want to get sent to hell is all... he was faking the whole regret thing..."

Marissa: "yeah but that was real fear i saw... i felt bad for what he has to endure now..."

Dragsooth: "HA! you actually feel bad for that beast? he got what he deserves!"

Jesus: "Dragsooth."

Dragsooth looks at Jesus

Dragsooth: "yes Master?"

Jesus: "do not mock her compassion! she has the right to feel sorry for lucifer because he is in the worst possible pain and torments imaginable!"

Dragsooth: "i'm sorry Master."

Jesus: "are you alright Marissa?"

Marissa: "i feel sorry for lucifer..."

Jesus: "i have felt sorry for lucifer ever since he betrayed me, i knew it would end this way... i just wish he hadn't betrayed me, it wouldn't have had to come to this... but sending him to hell is what my Father's justice demands..."

Marissa: "i understand Master..."

Jesus: "now don't worry about lucifer, there was nothing i could've done to save him anyway..."

Marissa: "i know Master..."

Jesus: "you won't have to worry about lucifer hurting you anymore..."

Dragsooth: "yeah that's right. now come on cheer up... at least you have me..." he smiled at her.

Marissa smiled back at him "yes you are right. i should cheer up... i was never happy when i was with lucifer... i am happy when i'm with you..."

Dragsooth: "yeah so am i... now come they're throwing a big celabration and we don't want to miss it..."

they walked out of the Temple together, they looked us in the sky and it was illuminated with fireworks of all different colors, Marissa smiled at Dragsooth and he returned the smile...

epilogue...

Dragsooth and Marissa spent everyday together, they were very happy together, Jesus helped Marissa get over her worries and fears... and Dragsooth and Marissa spent eternity together happily ever after...

THE END.

W00T great story

i'm probably going to do a second part to this story. it's going to be about Dragsooth and Marissa's child...

Good, a sequel

yeah i guess if i can figure out a good plot... any ideas?

I don't suppose people can return to earth from heaven, or is it that if they stay in heaven, they stay there forever

I like it xD

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I don't suppose people can return to earth from heaven, or is it that if they stay in heaven, they stay there forever

people stay in Heaven forever...

Isn't it true tho that Jesus will reign on earth for one thousands years, and turn earth into a heaven?

yes but i think his reign will be in heaven...