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The new age: pure moon ( luna story) [CLOSED]
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#51 Posted: 00:48:49 18/10/2009 | Topic Creator
page two i think yeah!!!! ok back to story....

Nighta then looked to pepper who eyes were closed and head with winkles on them meaning she was concentrating. Pepper's eyes popped open, " the book of fates is in nature, ivy will need to lead the way" it was nice having pepper on your side. Ivy looked around sadly" i think it know where it is, in a place which was destroyed by luna herself, an enchanted forests, right before the valley of the dragons., i can lead the way, the trees will tell me." it was still so confusing for Nighta to understand that she can read nature. Nighta nodded and said "good, lets get it fast, my mother must be stopped, the sooner the better, she must not have that key, she already has her amulet back............who knows what she can do with both." thye group nodded already worried by the idea of luna with those weapons. but nighta couldn't help think of the mother she used to know. The bush's rustsled close by and arrows golden arrows were ready and huntress looked ready to kill, nighta was prepared for another luna monster attack. instead of a monster a dragon came out, it wasn't luna, it was constelation.
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#52 Posted: 00:58:58 18/10/2009
Yeah sis, story is great!!!!!!!!
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yo i am cynder21's younger sister smilie yayz she won't let meh on much guys so..........
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#53 Posted: 21:57:02 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
this is the end of part one..........
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#54 Posted: 21:03:19 21/10/2009
great story. please continue. smilie
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#55 Posted: 00:01:38 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
ugh i have no time to write part two, sorry people
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#56 Posted: 22:49:54 27/10/2009
thats ok. i don't always have time to write my story either.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#57 Posted: 23:06:47 28/10/2009 | Topic Creator
life, you know what i am saying?
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#58 Posted: 00:06:46 29/10/2009
yep. darn life. it'd be nice if the school would close, or blow up, that's even better
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#59 Posted: 00:17:46 31/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder09
yep. darn life. it'd be nice if the school would close, or blow up, that's even better


or go on fire, take your pick smilie
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#60 Posted: 00:25:04 31/10/2009
yeah smilie
F: i could do something! smilie
or have an empath destory it, even better! smilie
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Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#61 Posted: 13:59:30 31/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna: yeah or i can use eclipse powers and take care of the job.........
Nighta: or i can absorb the schools evil powers and throw it right back at em.
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#62 Posted: 02:59:25 03/11/2009 | Topic Creator
part two: Spirits

chily was watching from an island high in the sky, not chit islands, but instead the floating islands" of coarse, she would choose this place, the place her parents were at right before they fought her grandfather" Chily mused. A breeze rolled in, peaceful, but only one thing was wrong, they were imprisioned here, her and comet. Luna put them here to take them out of the way. Comet came back " escape route 80 is not good, were stuck and i have no clue what is going on out there........." Chily looked around, can it really be fool proof? thats when she saw it, how to get out, the dragon Sosa lamps were around the islands, covered with dark magic, it was so obvious" fire the lamps up! Chily spyro did that luna wouldn't make it so obvious!!!!" Chily sighed" maybe it's the first part of the puzzle........." comet nodded and started to blow fire everywhere, Chily knew they were right.
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#63 Posted: 03:01:09 03/11/2009
continue. smilie
F: yeah, more. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#64 Posted: 00:25:49 29/11/2009 | Topic Creator
my Gosh i have been super lazy.
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#65 Posted: 21:54:55 30/11/2009 | Topic Creator
soon the twim gates opened, they slightnly walked through into the inner chamber, cynder and spyro probaly didnt know that when they first walked in throught these doors, but comet knew, they would use it to worship the stars, back in the days. The door shut behind them but the door infront of them flung open. the training Arena was the next part of this temple but Comet grabbed Chily's hands " there is something wrong about this arena" chily paused " well we have to take our chances, there is no other way out." The two walked in and the door shut and an evil voice rang out" hello spirits and welcome to the Arena! Now i can offer you a deal, one of you can get out! But you must fight, whoever is stronger wins their freedom!" Chily growled" why dont you come and fight us yourself Luna?" Luna smiled " i have my daughters to worry about don't I? Now hurry up, i am starting to get bored" With that Comet, king of the souls looked at chily, the savior. Comet knew whta it would mean if one won, you would be free, but also alive.......again.
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#66 Posted: 21:31:18 01/12/2009
continue! by the way, i like your avi. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#67 Posted: 23:07:19 01/12/2009 | Topic Creator
yes, i have been bitten by the love bug at school! yipee! i like your avie too smilie
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#68 Posted: 23:31:01 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Comet imadedialty looked at chily" beat me, and you can be freed, find nighta and tell her what we found out while trapped here." chily looked at Comet with sullen eyes" no, you must go, i am not as strong as you, you are the king of spirits, you can use them to help you.................................. while i can not" Luna roared " hurry up, i have souls to reap!!!!" Chily looked at Comet" whatever she will do to me i can handle, but you.....are strong smart and amazing" she kissed him on the cheek and started to cry a little " desperate times..." chily said. Comet knew she was right, he needed to be the one freed, his next move will haunt him for eternity. He used his long tail to flick her right below the jaw, and painful numbing move, then he jabbed her in the stomach, another numbing move, she was the the floor, comet knew she could not get up, he was completely torn up inside. Luna crackled and said " wow comet didnt know you had it in ya, Monkey Giants carry Chily to her cell, comet you may have you body back, and your life" as she finished talking a wind tunnel appeared which lead back down the the ground. Comet looked at Luna with an evil glare and jumped intot eh wind tunnel and was back down to Earth, he felt his powers come back and everything " i must find Nighta..." and with that said comet went into the night to find the dragoness.
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#69 Posted: 23:44:14 09/12/2009
more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#70 Posted: 20:05:19 26/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Comet first took care to make sure he knew were he was. He was deep in a forrest, a high mist clung densly to the night air, it smelled sweet, happy. comet sighed, it was natures doing. He stepped un afraid threw the forest then took flight, there was no time to admire the living world again. He looked down after he cleared the forest and the tortures he saw was hideous. how could someone with some muich good do this much hate? He shook his head rabidly. the eclipse did this to her, it was evil. Comet let his rage almost get a hold of him, he can still save Luna, turn her to what she once was, if he found her oldest daughter. Not that anyone knew but Luna had four children, not three. there was one more other than nighta, star, and comet. she is very young only a few months, she was born when Luna was evil. Her father is still constelation though. comet didnt know this till now, he set his coarse to Nighta faster, two rescue missions needed to happen, one to make Luna good again and another to save Nighta's young sister.........Ruby.
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#71 Posted: 03:27:52 17/01/2010 | Topic Creator
ok sory writers block somewhat ( i really just have too many ideas) so i guess i am on hituas till i choose a proper time to write.
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#72 Posted: 01:01:54 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Part 3: Luna

Luna say very unhappily on her throng made of darker medals. She waited for her son comet to return with news, perhaps they managed to capture star and recapture Nighta. Latly though Luna since seeing her eldest daughter again has had some memeories return. one time she even thought " what am i doing to these dragons?" the thought was quickly dismissed. Luna sat there, tickering with the amulet when Comet flew in the room " mother, they have the golden arrows!" Luna quickly swinged her head around, " the lumbering oaf, those giant apes to nothing at all! no matter, they will be dealt with soon............" Comet nodded and flew off. a shimmer started off the the left of her, " messanger i have been updated by my son, leave, Now!" she saw the shimmer fifure smirk " og Luna i am no messanger, just coming to finish a tab." Luna whilred around to find Storm, a dragon she fought a very long time ago, " you stole my daughter!" Then after that luna cared less and said " leave now, ill obliterate you." Strom laughed, luna hated it no fear showed in his eyes, but only a amused smirk. " cant obliterate a God can you? It's hard luna, i new you dragons have your angels and ancestors but the gods? forgotten, now Luna i believe we have an unfinished fight evil or not i am fighting you!" His eyes blazed red but Luna smiled and said " bring it" and her own eyes glowed a deep black.
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#73 Posted: 01:23:03 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
finally hitiaus is over!
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#74 Posted: 19:20:25 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
and lets hope the jets keep winning!
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#75 Posted: 01:01:14 21/01/2010 | Topic Creator
The god quickly sent an orb of pure energy toward Luna she just managed to jump out of the way before she cloaked her self in eclipse magic and blended into the back she then infused my power in her claws and scratched at storm's face, Storm himself made a strom in the room which created a mist that hided both him and luna. he is giving me an avantage i am hidden now thought Luna. She did not see when he came at her and hit her stomach head on wiith pure weather abilities.
she flew across the room and hit one of the pillars. " wow luna i have to admit you are putting up a fight, but you are a mere mortal and you can never win." Luna sputtered out " i am the eternal one! i am an ANGEL! i am immortal!" Strom looked at her confused for a second " you were immortal before the eclipse changed you, now you are an fallen angel." he walked up to her and before Luna could react he touched her forehead and she fainted, a god's direct touch will do that, and he picked her up and dragged her away from the palace without the guards noticing.
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#76 Posted: 01:10:48 21/01/2010
continue! i see you're using the pika slap avi again. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#77 Posted: 20:53:19 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah i went back to it, josh was supposed to make me another one by he hasnt given it to me yet smilie
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#78 Posted: 02:20:37 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Luna woke up and then examined the room quickly she immediatly found storm and freed herself from the magic chains " you'll pay for that Storm, i'll have your powers taken away!" She growled and hit him with a wave of energy from her palms it actually hit Storm who growled. " i thought, My dear sweet Luna that you'd appreciate this picture here" the picture showed constelation being veery hurt and nighta and star getting help for him. " here's the thing luna, i hate you and you hate me, but i figure we both want those three gone, i hate the fact that nighta is the queen of angels and star is very crafty with magic and you dont want them to foil your plans to take everyone's powers away so i figured since you are evil you can help me." luna started at him " i work for nobody" she huffed and them began to walk away " Luna you never learn do you help me and you get to keep your powers and you get the key or dont help me and ill give the key to nighta." Luna kept walking " key doesnt exist and you cant take an eclipse away."
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#79 Posted: 15:43:01 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Strom smiled, it was true Luna's powers could not go away, but the key was real, he saw it being created. So he went to the ancient temple of the gods and took the key off it's precious throne and immediatly flew to give it to Nighta, He might have a problem with Nighta but that can be solved after his vendetta is over with Luna.
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#80 Posted: 16:34:54 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
on hiatus again, ill might be writin bout luna on deviant art soon. Cynder21 there too.
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#81 Posted: 19:46:38 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
right, eventually ill write luna on deviant art smilie
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#82 Posted: 02:42:19 07/02/2010 | Topic Creator
* resuming nighta's part*

Nighta immediately ran to contelation " father! Father!" Only he wasn't responding. star ran up to her father as well and calmly placed a hand on his head and chanting something under he breath, soon he woke up and said " nighta! Star! sunny! I never thought i would see you again!!!" Neither did I thought nighta, in fact her mother left her with the impression that her father was dead. contelation spoke with a fury, he said Luna did attack him, but he managed with his light powers to escape just in a nick of time with only a few bruises. " i did find something though on my journey to save your mother, i can't use it so i figured maybe star can try" it was a book but automatically Huntress took it from his hands " the book of fates! we need this to stop Luna!" Huntress took out her knife and chanted something into it and it turned gray she swished it in the air and a small thunderstorm appeared. huntress couldn't help but grin. " so you and your little army going to stop your mother." said constelation grimly. " yes, yes we are, we just need the key." Nighta explained to him the story that's when pepper began to shout " Comet! comet!" star and nighta thought she was referring to their brother. " Comet the king! is freed!!! we must find him!" Nighta nodded " yes!!! this is essential, he can help us find the key!!!!" and save my mom nighta tacked on as an after thought.
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#83 Posted: 22:39:47 16/02/2010 | Topic Creator
another hiatus, not that anyone reads any more, even though i consider this a classic on fandom cause its more than a year old xD
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#84 Posted: 02:27:16 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
damm writers block..........
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#85 Posted: 02:44:33 18/02/2010
haha, it is a classic smilie well, i read it whenever i get around to it. great job, keep going. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#86 Posted: 02:50:25 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder09
haha, it is a classic smilie well, i read it whenever i get around to it. great job, keep going. smilie



the only reason why ipost now is so it doesnt close smilie
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#87 Posted: 02:54:34 18/02/2010
good enough reason if you ask me smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#88 Posted: 15:51:18 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah now they only last a month smilie
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#89 Posted: 22:19:38 09/03/2010 | Topic Creator
oh noes! still haveing writers block sadly...
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#90 Posted: 01:03:33 27/03/2010 | Topic Creator
still thinking smilie
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#91 Posted: 18:31:39 08/04/2010 | Topic Creator
ok i actual have an idea now! yea! smilie ill write it next.
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#92 Posted: 23:05:26 01/05/2010 | Topic Creator
nest time..
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#93 Posted: 18:47:57 06/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Nighta watched as everyone started to take flight again. She suddenly felt very nervous but shook it off and she began to fly with them. the Breeze rolled past her easily touching her scales with cold, it felt right. It seems this part of the land was still in peace for now. Thats when it became disrupted. " well hello there sisters, didn't think i would actual see you again..." Star and Nighta whipped their heads around to find their brother Comet flying right behind them. " be gone brother, you are no match for me" comet just laughed at what nighta said " mom is very disappointed in you right now Sister, she was going to leave you a live but now she wants you dead." Nighta just stared at her brother until he attacked her. Comet bit down into his sister, there seemed to be poison on his teeth and he whipped her with his tail, which brought her back down to the ground. She stood up and started at him, he continued to bite and hit until nighta was filled with such anger that she roared and a wall of red energy came around her and she absorbed some of her brother's strength, then she shot red energy balls straight at him, angrily, he fell on the ground gasping and that's when he said it" Mother can't wait to kill you, she is forever evil now and there is nothing that can be done to save her now." Nighta then screamed in despair not wanting to believe it and then the sky darkened and half of her turned white and the other half black, she was evoking the eclipse. she shot her brother with the fury and might of dark and light combined. After the attack he was almost dead. comet stared wide eyed while nighta hissed " what do you know?" Comet immediately took a berry out of a pouch and ate it " no!" yelled star as he ate it. He shook once and died. Nighta cried out the eclipse still surrounding her. " Nighta.................you.....evoked the eclipse..........how?" nighta looked at star "I.......I.........don't know." nighta now knew she could control this power if she managed her emotions better, she now knew what the key unlocked, it unlocked her blood, the blood of the eclipse. Yes daughter of the day and night whispered a voice in her head.............the goddess of good and evil, the eclipse.
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#94 Posted: 19:08:39 06/05/2010
super good hannah, keep writing! smilie
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#95 Posted: 00:01:21 07/05/2010
this is great. keep writing. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#96 Posted: 22:27:04 18/05/2010 | Topic Creator
* back to comet ( spirit king) *

comet flew faster to the temple until simply he could't flap his wings any longer and landed on a patch of nice soft green Grass and leaves. Panting his breath quickly came in and out in little clouds which began to fill the air around him. He was not even close to the temple he managed to think in despair. Thats when he saw a figure slowly come their way down and his feet touched the ground right beside comet. " what can you possibly want storm" storm smiled " nice to see you alive and well again old friend. Funnily enough I actual came to help you and that puny Dragon they call Nighta." comet looked at his face, it was easy to tell when a God lied. Since after all they were bound by a code. But oddly enough storm was being truthful. " whats in it for you you help Nighta and me out hm?" storm laughed " I'll be honest with you spirit king, I've had a vendetta with Luna and well if she is knocked off her throne, well i suppose part of my revenge is complete. And the world is saved again, but the latter doesn't matter that much to me." without any other words storm threw the Key to comet and then flew away back into the moonless night. Comet shook his head and with renewed strength went to find Nighta. "There is new hope" thought comet, though for some, for the wrong reasons.
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#97 Posted: 21:04:26 28/05/2010
great job, continue.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#98 Posted: 21:43:14 08/06/2010 | Topic Creator
looove your new avie!
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#99 Posted: 23:48:46 08/06/2010
thanks. i like yours. X3
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#100 Posted: 14:38:20 15/06/2010 | Topic Creator
i never change mine though smilie
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