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#451 Posted: 23:54:43 07/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#452 Posted: 00:09:31 08/09/2009
Pearl for June
Formed inside the shell of an oyster, most pearls today come from pearl farms in Japan where people insert tiny beads into the shell to start the growth. Pearls vary widely in color and shape and are said to signify wealth.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#453 Posted: 23:00:50 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#454 Posted: 23:35:09 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 14:" Controlled & Near Death"
"Agh! Rookie! growled Dawn, looking at her wound with teeth marks, and a few drops of blood on it. Since she is a healer, Dawn can cure herself- and not just the injured ones. As her pendant started to glow, Dawn's tail got recovered. "I'm sorry! But I don't want you to go back down their!" Rookie finally replied. "I'm not surprised," she said, in a low tone. "No one in this group wouldn't want anyone to disappear or leave," said Hunter. "Well, two just left this group! And I am not gonna sit around and do nothing!" Dawn yelled. "Dawn, calm yourself!" walked in Spyro. "If not, you'll turn back to...well you know," added Cynder. "Yeah, go back to being corrupted again, I know," she replied, trying to hide her anger. But she was full of rage, and couldn't take it any longer. As her markings began to appear, Hunter said," It was a mistake to go down their. I needed to learn more about the Vhalzars & Lhoraks. I was completely selfish. "It was a total mistake!" Dawn burst out, turning into Corrupted Dawn- a.k.a ShadowWing. "So....b....b....big!" studded Sparx, hiding behind Spyro. ShadowWing glared at everybody, showing her sharp deadly teeth, to show that she has no mercy. "It was a total mistake to go down there! We could have just flew over the mountains...like regular dragons!" she snarled. "But the only way to study them, is to--" "Is to confront them! I get the point!" she continued, cutting Hunter's words. "Then why show so much anger?!" yelled Spyro. The group was beginning to feel a little frighten, and half of them planned to leave--pronto. "You don't know what is it like to lose someone you love, to have this feeling that part of you is already dead. You have no idea how it feels to be controlled!" she burst out. The mountains started to rumble a little, as a flock of birds flew out of the trees. Some cheetahs cowardly ran away from this situation, following the same trail-- back to their home. ~Underground: As Laghora and the twins felt the ground rumble, the shape-shifter had question,"What was that?" Syrah then began to cry, terrified of what was going on. "Don't worry, we have each other," whispered Malak, hugging his sister. "NightSky! Where are you?!" she roared, looking around. Just then the black panther appeared close to her, bowing down, he asked,"What is it that you require, my master?" The shape-shifter looked down at him, and responded," You're here, good. My minion, it is now time for I to disappear." "you mean..." "Yes! My time to leave. Now, gather up the other minions, and tell them- it's time to crown the new king and queen!" she ended, raising up her wings, widely. NightSky got up, and ran off to locate all the minions. Laghora had then finally opened up the door, and let the twins out. They both carefully walked out, not knowing what to do- now that they are free.... .......To Be Continued......... |
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#455 Posted: 23:41:29 03/10/2009
I like this chapter :3 The end has a lot of potential
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#456 Posted: 23:56:17 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#457 Posted: 00:32:00 04/10/2009
OMG!!!
Wanderist: Not good! Awesome story. |
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#458 Posted: 00:38:17 04/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
I will try to type more right now |
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#459 Posted: 23:36:52 05/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 15: "So Much Pressure"
~Outside~ "Oh great! Now half of the group is gone!" exclaimed Sparx. ShadowWing was getting even more furious than ever, and began to rise, swishing her tail to the closest dragon--Rookie. "Aghh!!" he cried out, being hit. "Oof!" he said, falling on the ground. "Dawn! Snap out of this! Not only has Ignitus and Pablo died, but now you're going to cause death, if you continue to do this!" yelled Cynder. ShadowWing shut her eyes, firmly, trying to considerate. "This isn't going too well," said Spyro, to himself. "I know it's difficult to forget the ones you love, but you do not have to take your anger on us!" exclaimed Rookie, starting to get up. ShadowWing stared into Rookie's, as a tear fell from hers. She then began to transform back to her normal self, as she fainted. "Well, at least she's not gonna kill us now," Rookie said, fake laughing, as the others stared at him. "We should be going now, if we wait for Dawn to wake up, we would be losing time. We've got to carry her," said Hunter. "He's right." "Well, I'm not carrying her!" replied Sparx. Everyone glared at him, with a look on there faces. "Yeah Sparx, as if you can carry a dragon taller than you," said Cynder. "Everybody please!" exclaimed Hunter. "Can we get going now?!" said a cheetah, still left from the group. "The faster, the better," Rookie said, starting to walk off into the dim forest. "Hey, wait up!" yelled Spyro, running off. Hunter grabbed hold of Dawn, as everyone else followed. Underworld: "I am back with everyone you have commanded!" said NightSky, bowing down. There were lots and lots of minions that entered, and seated themselves on the ground. Many were dragons that was either young or elderly. Vhalzars & Lhoraks were there as well, and lots more; and all were immortal. Syrah and Malak glared at everybody, as NightSky made the twins walk next to the dieing shape-shifter. "Everybody! Settle down!" shouted the panther. "Yes. After all this time that you all have waited for, finally you shall bow down to your new queen and king!" roared Laghora. "As I pass away, my spirit shall still be here, and yet, keep control of my small kingdom," she progress. NightSky held the chest, in which held the crowns, as he remained bowing to his leader. The twins were planning on grabbing the box, and run off, but they were surrounded with the foes; much more powerful than themselves. "Behold! What I have here- inside this small chest- contains the crowns with the most powerful spell. Never did a set of eyes laid upon on these!" she exclaimed, opening the chest up. The crowd yelled with impatience, wanting to glare as the crowns unleashes its spell upon the twins. "Syrah, Malak! Approach here, so you can receive your gift!" Laghora smiled. "No! I don't want this at all!" cried out Syrah, running off. "Syrah! No!" yelled Malak. NightSky growled, as he raised his hands up, holding the zeptar. It shined up, as he commanded her to come back. Syrah was trying hard to not listen, as a group of Loraks surrounded her. She was about to attack them, but one of them scratched her; close to her eye. "Now, come back over here!" yelled the wizard. She cried, as she did what was told. Her brother hugged her, both frighten of the immortals and the shape-shifter...... ..........To Be Continued........... |
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#460 Posted: 00:13:40 06/10/2009
Aww!!! Poor Syrah!
Good story! |
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#461 Posted: 01:10:08 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, she's very scared right now
Thanks, btw! Oh yeah: I'm kicking out the Elders, lets just say that they are busy with other things..... |
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#462 Posted: 16:22:14 10/10/2009
Wanderist: That's child abuse!! They should go to jail!
Sally: We have a jail? Wanderist: |
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#463 Posted: 22:58:56 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Rookie: We do?!
Dawn: *slaps him* Of coarse! |
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#464 Posted: 23:30:16 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 16: "Dawn's Side of the Story"
(Part 1) Some much anger took over me and yet somehow I knew that, if I continue to let it control me, it may take over me- forever. Those words that were held inside my head,".....Not only has Ignitus and Pablo died....you're going to cause death, if you continue to do this!" My allies loved me so much, especially Cynder, since we grew attach when we first met. I couldn't considerate, but then something "hit'' me. "I know it's difficult to forget the ones you love, but you do not have to take your anger on us!" Rookie, poor little ally of mine. As I stared into his eyes, and it was just something that hit me hard-I'm not sure what- but I began to gain control of myself again; and finally, I'm back to my normal self once again. The last sight I saw-before fainting- was those times I had with my true love; happily enjoying each- others company. I woke up, yo a place full of beauty- nature. The grass was tall and ever so green. The trees stood up tall as well, as the breeze gently brushed the leaves, the grass, and anything else that would kindly do so. The skies, so full of blue with fluffy white clouds; and the sounds of the birds, those waterfalls! that's what hit me mostly. It sounded so peaceful and beautiful. So I began to rise up, and felt that I was actually free, to do what I love to do best. "Am I dead?," I questioned myself. For that reason I just let that part aside, as I roamed around, following the sounds of the waterfalls. Further and further down, I came upon my "destination", as me eyes widened. Little sparkles fell gently around the falls, and the falls itself was very clean and clear. I glared at the pool full of water, and I knew that have practiced swimming near my home for about a year. Therefore, I helped myself and began to swim into it- "It's very fresh," I thought. Swimming deeper and deeper to the falls, I saw an image that surprised me- "Pablo?" I said. I was concentrating on who I was staring at, I haven't noticed that something was behind me; and it tap my shoulder. I jumped a little as I looked back- it's my mother. |
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#465 Posted: 23:33:02 10/10/2009
Awesome!!
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#466 Posted: 23:53:09 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#467 Posted: 23:57:19 10/10/2009
Awesome chapter!
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#468 Posted: 00:01:14 11/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! Again
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#469 Posted: 00:55:06 11/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 17:" Dawn's Part of the Story"
(Part 2) "Hello daughter," she greeted me. "Midnight, what's going on?" I asked, as I looked back- to see if "Pablo" was still there. No, his appearance has disappeared as I felt gloomy, once again. My mother smiled at me and replied," Do not feel so alone, my child. I know who you saw." "Then, is he actually here?" I asked, giving a small smile. "I mustn't speak of that now, there are other important subjects to learn right now." A tear started to fall on my cheek, as Midnight continued to talk," Now, now. Try not to hurt yourself, it isn't healthy for yourself, you know." "I'll try," I responded, not even feeling better. Without saying anything else, Midnight began to swim out onto the dry land; along with myself, going after her. "Do you know why I have sent you here for?" she questioned. I glanced at all of the land, and responded, “Am I here to practice more of my Nature element?" "Yes, that is correct. There is more to learn about the element of Nature, but before we begin, I must tell you something important," she said. "What is it?" "Since you have been corrupted, some of these powers may control your anger, but that will only happen occasionally. "Oh great, more control," I said. "I am not an animal to be commanded of" I spoke inside my head. Luckily, I knew that my mother cannot read minds anymore. "I can only teach you a few for now, of coarse," she said, ignoring my respond. "Well, the basics will do," I replied. "Then the basics it is," she ended, walking off to the plains- where I woke up. As we stood far apart from each other, she shouted out, “Now, not only can you breathe the element of wind, but you can also command the air surrounding you. "That's great! But how?!" I yelled. "You shall soon find out, Dawn!" she ended. ..........To Be Continued.......... |
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#470 Posted: 21:53:51 11/10/2009
Cool.
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#471 Posted: 21:56:14 11/10/2009
This is really good
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#472 Posted: 00:30:22 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks pplz
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#473 Posted: 02:05:01 19/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 18: "Dawn's Part of the Story"
(Last Part) Midnight calmly breathed in and out, concentrating on the air around her. After a few seconds, a chilly breeze approached, and then became very windy. To continue, she raised up her wings, as the clouds became very gloomy. I stood there-in shook- watching my mother make the air transform quickly to winds; and now into a terrifying tornado! As it came down lower and lower onto the ground, Midnight began to take control of this horrid windstorm. "Now, Think Fast!" she yelled, making the tornado face toward me! "What am I suppose to do?!" I exclaimed. I tried to fly off, but it just kept chasing me. Even worse, I was gonna get sucked in it as well. "Oh crud!" I screamed. I closed my eyes trying to think, and when I was suck inside it, I began to take over Midnight's control over the windstorm; turning it around in a circle. I was having fun and also glad that I am learning about the power of air. "Excellent! You're a quick learner, and a great thinker as well," smiled Midnight. "Thanks!" "Now, you shall try to form your own tornado, and when you finish, meet me back at the waterfalls," she told me, as she walked off. "I'll try my best," I said to myself. So I did the same as my mother first did: breathing in and out calmly, listening to the air all around me. After making a breeze, then the winds, I soon made it all into a tornado! Yet again, I fooled around with it, but I eventually came to a stop. "I can't waste any time! I thought. So I ran off to where I promised my mother I would meet her at. "I assume you mastered the power of the winds, correct?" "Yes, that is correct." "Well, the final power to teach- before you leave- is the control of water," she said. "Controlling water?!" I exclaimed. "Yes, it is part of Nature. Of coarse, how would the water turn by itself? It needs the assistance of Nature for it," she explained. "I understand," I replied. "Now stand by me, and watch the way I give command over water." Midnight raised up her hand, moving it up and down, in a gentle motion. The water had then "watched" her command, and soon raised up, moving the same direction as her hand. "That's amazing!" I said, surprised. She then stood up, using both of her hands now- and made the amount of water turn into a ice shard. She finally throw it to the path of the falls. "You know what to do," she smiled. I breathed in, not knowing if I can do this, and moved my hand up and down. Seconds later, and nothing happened; what was it that I was doing wrong? A small voice entered my head, as I listened to what it said,"Come on Dawn,you can do it!" It was Pablo's voice, from when I was being taught of my Ice elements- long ago. Instead of crying, I smiled, and gently moved my hand. All of a sudden, the water followed my movement. Soon enough, I made it into a ice shard; and shot it to the falls. "You are becoming a true master of Nature, very rapidly!" she said. "Thank-you," I replied, as I remembered the image I saw. "Why wouldn't you tell me about who I just saw, when I first came here?" I questioned. Midnight had a frustrated look on her face; I knew something was going on here...... ..............To Be Continued......... |
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#474 Posted: 23:44:37 19/10/2009
Awesome!!!
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#475 Posted: 02:36:32 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks
Dawn: |
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#476 Posted: 23:26:51 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
you know what's weird?
I was dreaming that I was somewhere with my "friends" and there was a well filled with water; it wasn't deep, just a little shallow. I was controlling water (just like Dawn) and make it into a ice shard. I then throw it to my "friend's" chest. But that was awesome! |
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#477 Posted: 23:27:18 20/10/2009
Coolness!
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#478 Posted: 23:28:27 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. Did you read what I said about my dream?
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#479 Posted: 23:31:10 20/10/2009
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*steps back* Wanderist: She didn't say it was you. |
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#480 Posted: 23:32:53 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
It wasn't! It was just random people! Even more Weird, that person wasn't bleeding!
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#481 Posted: 23:33:24 20/10/2009
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Yeah...reminds me of waterbending....and Katara trying to attack Ozai in my Avatar fanfic. What a crazy coincidence
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#482 Posted: 23:34:47 20/10/2009
OMG!!!!
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#483 Posted: 23:37:54 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
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Freaky!^ |
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#484 Posted: 00:09:40 21/10/2009
Very. Ozai is always getting attacked in my dreams....and Team Avatar usually end up helping him. It's crazy I'm crazy
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#485 Posted: 21:42:28 21/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Now I dreamed of using some of Dawn's Nature powers Including: raising up dirt walls by just raising your hand up, and a wall just rises up from the ground
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#486 Posted: 22:14:18 21/10/2009
Um, sounds like earthbending Are you Toph? X3 just jokin'. That's awesome.
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#487 Posted: 22:20:49 21/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah... (no I'm not Toph)
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#488 Posted: 23:14:39 21/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ehh:
Click on QUIZ!! ME: You are a Moon Dragon! You have the Lunar Power within you. Lunar Dragons can control waves and are most powerful at night, at full or blue moon. Moon Dragons are usually white, silver, blue, or purple, or a mixture of the four. |
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#489 Posted: 00:01:58 22/10/2009
You are a Death Dragon!
Death Dragons have bad tempers and tend to be considered evil, but really can be great companins. They are called Death Dragons because they haunt cemeteries, but many are quite kind. Colors are red, black, an grey. OMG. Though, I like undead dragons and the colors red and black.
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#490 Posted: 01:41:17 22/10/2009
cool, Fire Ledgend
F: C09 got Moon dragon! me: yeah, i did oh, great story, by the way
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#491 Posted: 02:27:24 23/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Awesome! I thought FL was gonna be like a Shadow Dragon or something
Thanks btw C09! |
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#492 Posted: 03:41:20 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
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#493 Posted: 04:25:52 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 19: "Arguments & Corruption"
~Back to Group~ They continued to walk for possibly about an hour now, and everyone began to feel exhausted. "Do you even know where we are suppose to go?!" exclaimed Chef Prowlus. "Um....kind of...?" replied Rookie, unsure. Chef Prowlus paused as he had an angry expression on his face. "Do you mean to tell us that we are traveling for no reason?!" He was about to walk up to Rookie, and fight him, but Hunter got into hid way and said, "There is no need to battle one another! If we spent our time fooling around-" "We'll be wasting time!" he jumped in. "But WE are losing time on? Trying to do what?! What is it that we are suppose to do?! The world is already going to end anyways," he continued. Hunter laid Dawn down on the grass, and responded, "I'm not sure," he sighed. "But we may figure out, when Dawn wakes up!" said Cynder. "Rookie is there any place where we can rest?" questioned Spyro. ''I remembered that I found a territory near by here, maybe they'll let us in as company," he replied. "Good. Then we will probably won't hear them complain," pointed out Sparx. Hunter remained quiet as he picked up Dawn, and asked calmly, "Where is it at?" "Just follow the map... maker...dragon...uh," he said confused, not knowing what word he was going to say. They had then progressed on there travel. But after a few minutes later, a huge blanket of fog and mist appeared. "Uh, now what's going on?" asked Cynder. "I think we are here," replied Rookie. The mist eventually disappeared quickly, as everybody glared at an astonishing view that stood in front of them. Underground-- "NightSky, command them to settle down, right now!" screamed Laghora. "As you wish. Both of you, calm down, and shut up!" he yelled at the twins, raising his zeptar toward them; and the twins did what they were told. "Excellent! Now the moment you have been waiting for!" she roared. The Shape-shifter took out the silver crowns; one containing black gems, and another one that has crystal-white gems. She placed the the crowns on Syrah and Malak; Syrah was now wearing the white one, as Malak wore the black gem crown. Just after placing the last crown on him, the spell had then took over rapidly. Malak and Syrah faced toward each other, as a diamond shaped beam appeared in front of them. This made them turn from hatching to child, to teen, and now as a full size adult! At the very same time, their appearance soon changed as well. Syrah was fully colored white with a black tip on her tail-with her scar still remaining on her. As for Malak, he is completely shaded black, with a white tip on his tail. All together, this formed them into the unstoppable--The Ying Yang Dragons. The immortals glared in awe, yet at the same time, they cheered out loud; now pleased that half of the plan is completed..... To Be Continued.......... |
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#494 Posted: 04:36:53 25/10/2009
Two new corrupted dragons? Oh crud. Something tells me that that's gonna go as well as Aang being mad...and in the Avatar state.
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#495 Posted: 04:40:22 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
GAH!!! WE BOTH HAVE THE SAME MINDS TOWARD OUR STORIES!!!!
Anyways, having them both around wouldn't be too easy to defeat |
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#496 Posted: 04:43:15 25/10/2009
I know, right? Remember Cynder in ANB? That times two...oh God...
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#497 Posted: 04:44:08 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
^ wait, what about Cynder in ANB?
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#498 Posted: 04:46:14 25/10/2009
She was corrupted until the end of the game. Ya know, all adult form and everything?
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#499 Posted: 04:48:20 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
oh! WEIRD!!!
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#500 Posted: 19:34:39 25/10/2009
Aw!! Poor little dragons!!
Wanderist: CHHHHIIIIIILDDD ABBBBBUUUUSEEE!!!! |
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