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#151 Posted: 00:47:33 06/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Can't think of stuff at the minute.
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#152 Posted: 05:44:42 07/09/2009
You will think something
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#153 Posted: 17:36:40 07/09/2009
Come on don't make us wait ages like before
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#154 Posted: 23:09:17 08/09/2009
Yeah,or I will forget what's going on smilie
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#155 Posted: 00:10:54 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Umm... lets see how we go...

A couple of weeks had passed, and with the days going, Lyra became more worried, not just about her and Sylvia's fate, but the where-abouts of Narva. She hadn't known when Narva would be comming, but she never saw her in the town, or anywhere else. Sylvia had noticed her adoptive parent obviously worried, and had gone over to comfort her.
'I think.... by just talking in day.... i may have had something terrible come her way... No, i have to keep hope. She's out there still... i can feel it.' She looked at Sylvia who lay beside her watching. 'And i know she has to be ok, because otherwise you wouldn't be...' She looked out and thought wether she had seen Narva but not noticed, wether she was still there but just busy.

Lyra thought back to the week before. The first days nothing really had happened. She had watched Sylvia grow and play and learn new things, but Narva wasn't there. The days after there was a scare in the town about an attack presumed to have happened, yet nothing did. Most people felt feared for no reason and began blaming one another, but still Narva wasn't there. Lyra though of the days after, how she had gone on a journey with Sylvia, showing her new places and sights, how she had camped away from home and had built a strogn bond with Sylvia, but again, no Narva. That brought her to the current day, now becoming night. She sighed and looked down.
'What if they did get her...?'

'Right, now you see why i told you not to go near there?! Do you think i told you for the good of my health?!' Ray took a step back in fear, shaking. Surviron's bellowing voice was enough to scare him, let alone what he thought would happen. He knew it was all because of what was on the side of his body. The grazed and bleeding skin was the result of his wandering. He had been exploring while Surviron was out, yet despite being told never to go in, he still decided he'd not touch anything and try to look round not leaving a trace. His plan had gone wrong during his adventure however, while wondering, he found an old ledge, made out of wood which had now began rotting. Ontop pearched a stone wheel, not being used, just laying there. Ray had wanted to see closer, and he tried by climbing some near ledges and looking. Not seeing a stone in such a shape, he wanted to know how it felt on the surface, and so, trying carefully to step on the rotting ledge, he began to move over, but the wood wasn't fresh enough to accommodate his medium weight, and as soon as he put one paw on it began creaking, but after leaving it it didn't creak. Not knowing the danger he carefully put more weight on as he moved further on. As soon as he moved one of his back legs onto it, it's tension held no more as it broke off the wall leaving the stone wheel and Ray falling to the ground.

The stone wheel in a stroke of luck hadn't gone near Ray at all, it was the wood that scrapped along his side as he fell that had caused the cut, and minutes on it still hurt him. His tears however didn't calm Surviron down as he continued yelling.
'That wheel could have killed you or taken of one of your limbs! And i can bet you they wouldn't grow back!' Ray stood speachless, in fear, shivering. 'And now you've given me even more work to do and now i can't leave you alone without a fear of you hurting or almost killing youself again! Now listen here, things are going to get better, and you will listen and acknowledge everything i say, am i right?' Ray still shivered and didn't move. 'Am i right?!' He roared. He barely nodded but enough to be noticed. 'Good! Now stay in here!' He yelled as he slammed the door. Ray instantly ran under his cover and hid himself, under it he cried.

'Right, i may have a plan...' A dragon said around a fire, aound it there was a group of them, all dark.
'Oh yeah? Is it going to kill us all?'
'No it's going to bloody save our hides! Think about it! It was only Amilia who sent the eggs away, and we attacked her right? She had to have lost some energy, and she had to carry three eggs, and i can tell you it aint going to be light, so with that, where would she go? I'd say about to that town before needing to rest. So, it's simple, since it's more of a village anyway, out of all the kids there has to be the siblings, so all we need to do is round them up and find three similar ones, and then we know thats them.' The others thought. One stood up.
'A good plan, but what if there are more than we can sort? How can we get the kids anywya? And even if we do, how do we know for certain that they are the siblings?'
'Well Amilia's white right?'
'Well yeah.'
'SO, if you sort it out from that darker coloured ones and the lights, and find similar ones, then we have them.'
'But we know they aren't all white.' Another spoke out.
'Yeah, and thanks to killa-lot up there we lost the ones who do know what the other colour might be!' Another one shouted out.
'We would have got them ages ago if he hadn't forced us and killed most of us!' Said another as more became enraged.
'Well fine! Why not go up to him in this outrising and kill him and go back to our lives hey?!' A new one stood up and yelled. The others became silent and slowly layed back down. 'Just as i thought.' He nodded as the one who said the plan looked at the group.
'So, if everyone thought that this uprising was good, surely you have better plans than mine?' The others looked as the quietly admitted they didn't. 'So we do my plan, get the siblings, get rid of the rest and survive unlike the other un-grateful gits.' He smiled. 'Who's with me?!' The rest stood up and agreed. 'Right, then follow me!'
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#156 Posted: 00:58:06 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
There we go, i make up for the long delay with the longest post on resistance yet.................... don't expect that for a while smilie
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#157 Posted: 01:17:18 13/09/2009
nice chapter i think its the longest one so far
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#158 Posted: 07:52:13 13/09/2009
I can't say anything smilie
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#159 Posted: 11:19:41 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Tyren was walking about, searching. He had a smile on.
'You can't hide forever.... I'll find you.' He said as he walked around more, searching. 'Come on out... and i promise i won't taunt you...' He smiled. He looked in some bushes. Manic then juped at him playfully, Tyren fell over and laughed. 'Found ya!' Manic shook his head.
'me find you!' He smiled. Manic hadn't taken so long to start talking, but beside him only being able to say a few words, he learnt more everyday and very quickly. Tyren smiled.
'Well maybe so... But im older, so i win anyway.'
'Unfair!' Tyren laughed.
'Lifes unfair.' He smiled. He looked the other way to see his dad coming up to him.
'Listen, Tyren, im just going out ok? Take Manic back to he cave and don't leave.'
'Ok dad.' He then walked away. 'You heard him... come on.' MAnic followed Tyren as he walked back to the cave. The male had gone off into the town centre, looking like he waited for someone. He then saw someone and walked up. They were female and green also.
'Look, Ioren, i...i really am flattered, but you know we went our seperate ways..'
'I know, but i love you, and Tyren misses you.'
'If i could i would of looked after him, but... but i just can't. And you know how we used to argue allot, and that it wasn't good for him to see that.'
'But we could work things out, i mean, i don't want to leave you... Miran, please...' He asked, almost looking like we was begging. Miran thought.
'Maybe... Maybe if he can visit at times but... but i just don't think we can sort everything out and be back together...'
'You'd know i'd do anything for you, can't we start at that?'
'I....I don't think so. Ioren, please, we can be freinds, and you can keep your crush on me, but i just don't see us as a couple in reality.' Ioren looked down sadly, taking a minute before looking up.
'Maybe.... maybe you're right....' It hurt him to say.
'Please, think of me as a friend... but whatever you do, i have to go...' She hugged him and flew off. Ioren looked down sadly.

Ray had since cried himself to sleep. Surviron had noticed when he had come back before, after fixing the damage done by Ray. He had no clue what he would do with Ray, since he neither was a parent nor did he know how to handle children. He sighed and looked into the fire Ray slept near by, then at the cloth that ray hid himself under. He moved it so it didn't cover Ray's head to make sure he didn't choke on it. He then moved away, but still looked. He then thought. It was nearing night and he had no work to do. He got up and walked outside. Surviron began walking towards the beach, and upon reaching there, he looked out to the sea. Voices replayed in his head as visions showed them selfs again. He looked down.
'I knew i should of never taken you out.... Yet i did anyway...' He looked out again.

Ioren looked around. Now it was turning late, and he had to make sure Tyren and manic weren't out playing. He picked himself up and slowly walked. But something made him stop and look up. He looked at what he thought was a star, but a large and bright one. Yet he had only seen it recently. He was curious about it, more began to appear like it with them all creating a circle. It made the sky lighter and more people curious as to why began coming out. They grow bigger and became lighter upon the ground, amazing some people. But the bigger they got, the more people realized they were no ordinary stars, and how they changed from being a spec of light to being orangy yellow balls. It took Ioren a while to figure out. 'They....can't be stars..'. He then knew what it was as theygrew bigger. He was right, they weren't stars, they were burning fireballs that fell to the ground with speed. Ioren quickly jumped out of the way as one hit the ground where he stood exploding on contact. Some of the ground flew and hit the other dragons while a clump of it landed on iorens leg. The dragons turned to panic as more flew and hit the ground, hurting and killing more. They then knew they were being attacked.
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#160 Posted: 11:25:04 13/09/2009
Lightdragon status: waiting...
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#161 Posted: 11:34:42 13/09/2009
I'm still reading,it's long,but it's good too.
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#162 Posted: 11:41:14 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Light dragon
Lightdragon status: waiting...


There is more you know.
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#163 Posted: 12:13:34 13/09/2009
awesome fireball attack cant wait 2 see wats happens next
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
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#164 Posted: 16:15:41 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
might do some later...
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#165 Posted: 13:43:59 14/09/2009
Cool. Heh,miran means calm on Croatian smilie
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#166 Posted: 21:35:29 14/09/2009
Quote: Cynder_fan
Quote: Light dragon
Lightdragon status: waiting...


There is more you know.


I've read it, I only post once I've read it I will not post I am waiting twice between sections of the story. I am only notifieing you that I've read the new section and waiting for an update.

oh and please stop taking ideas from the TV show sonic underground I think it ruins the story a bit an example is calling one of the characters Manic?

I'm not being mean I'm just giving you advise ok I still like your stories I'm just giving you your downfall.

p.s sorry Im in a bad mood and reading what you posting lighted my fuse.
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 21:37:35 14/09/2009 by Light dragon
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#167 Posted: 22:58:46 14/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Well, fine. Firstly, i could have gotten the name anywhere you know, not just TV series. Secondly, i don't update because i am busy you know, plus i may not have idea's at points. Thirdly, if you think this story is going to be my downfall, then leave. I will not have people judge me by how i write or when i write it. Ok?

Anyway...

Lyra had since retreated further into her cave and sat upset, wondering if Narva was still there. Sylvia had known something was wrong, yet she knew not what to do, but she wanted to do something. Sylvia rubbed her head along Lyra's arms, but instead of being petted or held, Lyra did nothing, she just sat and moped. Sylvia looked up at her, she saw a tear drop from Lyra's shut eyes. She felt the impact and heard the sound of the fireball hitting the ground before, but took no notice, i had been the only one to have been near her.
'....My fault...' She wimpered from her mouth, sniffing and crying. Sylvia watched before looking down.
'LYRA!' Yelled the voice that she had longed to hear. Lyra jumped round to see Narva quickly fly in in panic.
'Narva! You're alive!'
'But if we don't leave none of us will be!' She said, looking upset aswell.
'What's going on?!'
'Lyra! We're being attacked! This town isnt safe anymore!'
'But who's attacking?'
'These...i don't know! I looked up.... i think it's those dark dragons! I think it's them!' Lyra sunk back, staying silent. 'Lyra.... you ok?'
'This is my fault...... all of it...'

Ioren was hit by another chunk of land, this time it had more rock and was hevier. The rock and land mix which fell on him made bone break and disslocate with him yelling in pain, but where ever he looked, no one would help much, they were trying t save they're own lives. He tried standing up, but the damage done was too much, yelling as he fell back to the ground. He saw less fireballs saw, but now the dragons had come. They came in through various methods, killing villagers as they flew increasing the body count. Ioren made no movement to try and fool them into thinking he had already been killed, but then something stuck his mind, Tyren and Manic. despite the pain and the hardness brought by the attack, he still picked himself up. But seeing and hearing the attack, he neededn't have bothered, as Tyren and Ray had moved they're way through the attack to Ioren. But the pain grew to worse for him, making him stumble to the ground again. Tyren ran over screaming for his father.
'Tyren! Take Manic to somewhere safe! Do it now!' Tyren looked at Manic, then to Ioren before his father again. He then ran to manic before being stopped by a dragon landing in front.
'And where do you think you're going?' Ioren tried to get up to fend for his family, but as soon as he got up, he felt a new pain, not one from the injuries, but a new sharp pain. He lost all strength in his body, collapsing in front of Tyren horrified. Behind Ioren was another dragon, who had since moved his tail blade away. Tyren tried to run with manic, but was grabbed and flown off.
DDDAAADDD!!!' he screamed for help, tears streaming from his eyes as he eventually realized what had been done.

Surviron heard the attack and had looked outside before running to get something, soon coming back.
'If there's anything i hate more than my days being ruined, it's invaders!!' He said as he flew up and grabbed one of the dragons before bitting hard on it's neck, pulling as he did. He then remembered about Ray and hit the dragon away before landing to get him. As he ran, another dragon blocked the way, with more surrounding him. He looked round, preparing to fight, but knowing the numbers overthrew him.
'Let me guess, this is something about Ray isn't it?' He growled.
'Oh, so there's a child inside?' He smiled. Surviron could only hate himself for giving it away, but he wouldn't let Ray down. He lunged at the dragon before attacking, but he couln't get into the hut, he was pulled back and thrown against the wall, with somemore things falling of the shelves above, a couple landing on him causing him more pain, but others making it even worse. A few peices of flint had fallen onto some cloth before rocks falling on them made sparcs, setting the cloth ablaze. Surviron watched as the dragons looked in the hut, but Ray had hidden himself well and the dragons didn't bother looking. Surviron couldn't move, some heavy items had fallen on his legs and arms crushing them. He glared at the fire erupting on the cloths, spreading. He then stared at the dragons which looked at him.
'Burn in hell!!' He yelled at them, the one at the front smiled.
'You first.' Before flying off. The fabric ripped and made the stack of items held by it collapse, also setting on fire. Surviron tried moving the heavy stones which had fallen on him, but the more he moved them the more pain he caused. He looked at the now great fire around him and spreading to the hut.

'How is it your fault when it's not you attacking?'
'Narva...' Lyra said looking down. 'They're not trying to kill us... they're looking for people..'
'What? H..How do you know?'
'Because Sylvia isn't really mine! If she was then none of this would happen!' Narva was shocked. She had qeustions riddle through her head.
'But... how can one detail change the fate of our home?'
'Because..... because she's......am....ilia's....' She struggled to say, her throat blocking up with sadness and guilt. Narva was now even more shocked.
'Y...y..you mean...'
'YEs.. i do.... They're looking for her!' She lifted her head in tears saying. 'Her and and the other two..'
'O..Other..two?'
'Yes!... Surviron has one, and im not sure who has the other! I mean i had to help her! Without she would have been killed and the eggs destroyed! I couldn't let something like that happen... And now they're looking for her... Thoose killers are looking for her!' She cried.
'L...Lyra....... If your words... and others are right.... we need to get the away to saftey!'
'But how?!' Narva thought.
'I'll distract them, you get the kids and take them away!'
'But you'll be killed!!' She protested.
'.... Honestly... i've....already lost one i care about.... im not letting more die!!' She said with sadness showing in her eyes.

Surviron was now seriously weak because of the smoke and heat. He couldn't hold on for much longer, he knew he had to get out. The hut had already set ablaze, and Ray looked fearfully around. The roof burnt as it collapsed, the smoke choking Ray and filling his lungs with soot. The heat was also affecting him, but he didn't know where to run, the walls were setting alight and left Ray with fewer choices, but he did nothing. He screamed and cried in fear as he looked around through the burning building. Someone then burst through the door creating fresh air and an escape rought, but Ray remained where he was. He looked as Surviron, burnt and wounded ran over to rescue Ray, grabbing him before a beam of wood fell to the ground where Ray once was. Surviron turned to exit, but more of the hut collapsed blocking the door off. His only escape was through the burning roof, and despite the risks, he jumped through the ceiling and out through the roof, but his strength couldn't hold him as he only flew a few feet before colapsing and sending Ray in front. Ray picked himself up imediatly and ran to Surviron.
'G...go! Now!! While.... you have chance!....Run!' Ray held onto him before Surviron pushed him away. 'Go now!' Ray then ran away from surviron, crying. Surviron watched as the deadly gas finally caught with him, coughing only a few times before his head dropped lifeless.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:11:20 15/09/2009 by Cynder_fan
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#168 Posted: 05:47:40 15/09/2009
I am............geez.....sad part........smilie
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#169 Posted: 15:17:35 15/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Narva and Lyra flew out of the cave with Sylvia. They flew away from the cave and instantly had gained followers, but not friendly ones. Narva turned round and attacked the dragons while Lyra flew further on. She looked back tosee how Narva was doing and thought it would be fine, so continued on. She flew Sylvia to a small tunnel not far away, putting her down.
'Sylvia... listen to me... You need to go through there... go through and don't come back...' Sylvia looked at her sadly. 'Please... go....' Lyra said, almost crying. Sylvia looked in and slowly walked in. She turned her head looked back, running and hugging Lyra's leg upset. Lyra still tried holding herself tyogether as she held Sylvia.
'l....love...you.' Sylvia said for the first time. Lyra then let her tears drop.
'I love you too....' She cried. Sylvia the let go and looked, with Lyra wattching her. She watched until she could no longer see her before crying harder.
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#170 Posted: 15:53:10 15/09/2009
......more tears-...
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#171 Posted: 18:16:50 15/09/2009 | Topic Creator
She looked arond and saw the dragon that held Tyren and Manic, screaming for their lives. She jumped and flew after it before scratching it's back and trying to get the two, but she only managed to grab Manic before the dragon swung round and hit its claws accross her face. It then tried to grab manic, but Lyra began flying away, the dragon flying after her. Lyra quickly braked and hit the dragon again, this time it dropped Tyren. Lyra couldn't see him on the ground but flew off to save Manic. She Flew to the tunnell and put him down.
'Run!!' She shouted before flying off to save Tyren. Manic looked and ran away from the chaos of the attack. Lyra ran through the now burning grounds as she looked for Tyren, eventually finding him, but unconscious in the grasp of the dragon she had hit. She heard others land as they surrounded her. The dragon threw Tyren into a cage with other children in it, then turning to her. She looked up but could not escape even there, as more dragons waited.
'Face it! Your surrounded! You can't escape even if you tried!' She still turned around looking for anyway to make a plan to escape, but nothing came. As a last resort she called out to Narva.
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#172 Posted: 05:29:08 16/09/2009
smilie.........bad....
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#173 Posted: 23:25:49 16/09/2009 | Topic Creator
More Tommorow... Too tired... *yawn*
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#174 Posted: 19:31:19 18/09/2009
*Cough*
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#175 Posted: 00:05:36 19/09/2009 | Topic Creator
'OH... that must be this one...' A voice behind her said. She turned round imediatly to see another dragon throw Narva to the ground, not flinching nor making any movement, just laying deadly still. Lyra knew what had happened, what happened to Narva, but she couldn't believe it. Her grief made it seem like time was paused as Lya wanted to just collapse and cry, now seeing her life-long friend lay lifeless only a few feet away from her, thinking how it could have been her instead.

Not much i know... but it's a hard bit.... smilie
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#176 Posted: 05:52:14 19/09/2009
Hmmm...
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#177 Posted: 15:17:44 19/09/2009
those were some awesome chapters
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#178 Posted: 14:30:07 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Bottle of coke day! Will post more! Hell or high water!
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#179 Posted: 15:35:53 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lyra looked at the dragons, just how htey looked at her, waiting. She looked at the one who threw Narva.
'Let me guess.... i'm your next kill?!' She cried. The male smiled.
'Actually, that's not for me to decide..'
'Then who's is it?!' He smiled, one silently walking up behind her.
'My leader, and you'll meet him very soon...' He smiled. Lyra was going to ask but her mind suddenly became blank as her consciousness quickly dissapeared. 'Well? What are you waiting for? Get her, get the cage and lets go!'
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#180 Posted: 05:20:16 26/09/2009
Heh....
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#181 Posted: 08:03:00 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie I said it was a hard bit...
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#182 Posted: 16:42:34 26/09/2009
Cool! But sad.....

Go Manic and Sylvia!
Hurry, Ray! Escape!
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#183 Posted: 14:51:37 28/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lyra soon felt her consciousness return to her. Squinting her eyes she began to look. The back of her head hurt and her neck had something tight around it, but not as tight as it could be. She kept her head down and looked around, it was still night, but she qeustioned if it was the same night. She smelt the blood and the dead bodies as the stench flew threw the air, but this wasn't what she feared, seeing the children trapped in a cage she wondered and feared if Sylvia or the overs were in there or not. She wanted to go see, but as soon as she tried to move, the chain which she know saw attached to her neck pulled her back down. She couldn't help but feel sorry for the kids, she couldn't help them, she had never known how to use or even if she had any powers, and now not being able to move mad her vaunrable. She looked round more, seeing very few fires, the old ones burnt out into charred wood or grass. Seeing some dark dragons walking around, she pretended that she was still unconscious.


Ray had been hiding for hours, scared and worried. He carefully looked out of his hiding place to see the same horrors Lyra did, like a nightare, only real. He smelt the same things aswell, only making his experience more horrific. He moved round fast and tried to stay unseen, but his light colour made it harder to hide with. Seeing how somethings looked empty but insted having a dark dragon, he wished he could have they're colour to move round in. He then saw the cage with the kids in, some scared, others crying. He looked at himself, wondering that even if he did have black scales, would he be caught. He then looked for anything which might make him temporiarily dark coloured. He saw some charred wood in a heap at where they had burnt, also seeing the ashes, he sprinted over and hid. He walked over to them, he put his paw in and mubbed against some wood and ash, making it go slightly darker. He looked round to see if there were any dragons watching, before covering himself in it. He didn't move when he heard voices or saw some dragons move. Eventually he walked out, mostly covered in ash and soot, with some light specs, but hard to see, it would have to do. He walked away.
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#184 Posted: 19:35:42 28/09/2009
Nice, nice
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#185 Posted: 19:45:26 28/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Ray tried not to look at the bodies that lay around, but the smell made it harder to not focus. Ray wanted to get away from this nightmare, but wanted to help the children, so knew that sacrafices had to be made. He walked along side a dark wall to keep his likly hood of being seen low. He kept on walking and soon reached Lyra. Seeing her colours and her not moving, he moved over to hid himself. He looked at her.
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#186 Posted: 19:57:42 28/09/2009
Interesting
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#187 Posted: 20:11:45 28/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lyra felt Rays presence and looked at him. She didn't see his light patches, only the soot on his scales. She thought it was a corrupted child, then looked at the kids in the cage.
'Are they going to corrupt them all?' Ray looked at it too. Lyra looked back.
'Are you... one of them?' Ray was confused by what she meant, simply replying with a confused face. She looked down. Maybe she was wrong, but she wouldn't know, she didn't know what was going to happen to her, or about anything else. She looked around then back to him.
'Can you get me out?' She pointed to the brace round her neck.
'And who did we forget here?' Said a draogn who picked ray up and looked. He squirmed and tried to break free. The dragon looked at the soot, thinking it was also black scales. 'Thats interesting...' He said looking round. He then saw one of Ray's light patches and rubbed near it. 'Then again that's even more interesting.' He smiled. Lyra saw and wondered if it was one of the eggs she rescued. She tried slashing at the dragon, but he flew up. Ray screamed.
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#188 Posted: 09:18:00 29/09/2009
Uh...oh.....bad luck
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#189 Posted: 17:13:32 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
She watched as she knew she could do nothing. The dragon looked at her. Ray looked before bitting the dragons paw holding hard. The dragon yelled a he let go and let Ray fall. Lyra moved to help him stop. He jumped away and ran.
'Little git!' The dragon yelled as he fired dark balls at Ray. Ray ran scraed, seeing the dark balls and how they destroyed the ground he knew to run. The dragon became closer with everyshot, but never laid a single shot as Ray ran straight to the tunnel. With the dragon thinking it of as a cave, he shot at the top to make the roof collapse and cover the cave entrance. 'There! Starve to death!' He looked at his slightly bleeding paw. Lyralooked athim, but knew Ray was safe, yet she didn't knew who it was.

Does anyone think this is lacking something? I think it does but im not sure.. smilie
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#190 Posted: 17:53:50 29/09/2009
Dang it I missed a lot.
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#191 Posted: 19:10:51 29/09/2009
Lacking? a new word
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#192 Posted: 06:32:33 30/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Like missing something.
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#193 Posted: 16:31:11 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
*looks in empty room* Hello? Anyone here? *sigh*
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#194 Posted: 01:44:55 02/10/2009
i dont think its missing anything
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#195 Posted: 21:09:52 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Might post later.. can't be bothered and not im the mood now.
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#196 Posted: 17:38:29 04/10/2009
PC!!!
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#197 Posted: 11:14:58 08/10/2009
Finally managed to read the parts I missed...
Very interesting,and sad. Keep writing!
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#198 Posted: 12:04:09 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
dah... may aswell ddo some now.

'As for you! You have special geust coing. So don't try escape, be lucky your alive.' He said before leaving. Lyra wondered who he meant by his words, but she didn't have long to wait, she heard someone coming.
'Well well, what do we have here?' She looked up at the dark figured who smiled darkly at her. 'So you're the one who helped Amilia.' He chuckled. 'Well, now you can tell me where you hid the eggs.' Instant rage fillled her as she knew who he was.
'I'll never tell you! You killed this town, you killed my friend! Why would i give you they're location?!' The figurre moved closer. 'Because i have ways of getting you to tell..' He smiled.

Ray waqlked up to the enterance, only to see it blocked off, it made the entire tunnel pitch black, scaring him. He couldn't see where he was or if he could go anywhere. He touched the downed rocks and felt it around till he found a wall. He walked parallel to it while touching the wall to know where he was. He grew tired after sometime and laid down.
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#199 Posted: 02:25:32 21/10/2009
sweet
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#200 Posted: 08:11:40 21/10/2009
smilie......hmmm.....
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