darkSpyro

chapter 1
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After the defet of malefor the world was at peace once again and the young dragons have grown sicnce we last saw them.Some of spyros old dragon friends have joiend the story aswell.Spyro and cynder had a little dragon so did flame ember.But that was not the end.....it was only the begining.....as soon as the world was a complete peace it happend Zonya and malefor they roes together as one was this the end of the world once again.Zonya came down and picked up emerald spyro and cynders little dragon and malefor came down and picked up flame and embers little dragon fireball.But emerald and fireball where not about to have it they used there first abiltes emerald used fear and fireball used fire ball and they fell out of the sky.Spyro and cynder said"EMERALD NO!!!!!!"flame and ember said"FIREBALL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!"and they flew over and got them.They were happy to see them and they all said"we are never leaving you again.
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ill give you the next chapter soon
hope you like it so far

Good story, but try to put spaces after the speech.
Like this.
"Hello" Said Spyro
"Hi," Said Cynder.
Also heres a tip, instead of said, you could use words like;
"No!" Yelled Malefor
"No," Snarled Gaul
Keep up with the great work!

This sounds oddly familiar.... *eyes Shalonesk's comic*

yeah that is from shalonesk's comic!
why do you do a story about her dragons and storyline?
but still great

How is it great when she copyed off of someone esle?

well i liked it so much i had to make a story bout it

It's Shalone's story not yours.

This is not your story, it is mine!, Please come up with you own idea's instead of other artists work.

You got told!!

And hi shaloneSK!

It is Shalone's story/ characters. (Nina, Ash, Zonoya, Burdons, ect.)


Stealing other peoples' ideas/stories/characters really isn't a good thing.

This is Shalonesk's story. It's ok to take inspiration from other people's stories and make up your own but don't copy them. Be original.

Quote: Shalonesk

This is not your story, it is mine!, Please come up with you own idea's instead of other artists work.

And your comic is 10000 times better, might I add.

1. Stop stealing from other people. If you wanted to make a fanfiction, or something, you should have told the original artist. Though reading this, you just ripped it off completely.

2. Learn to spell please. I can understand if you're foreign or 9 but what irks me the most in fanfic is people who do not know how to spell or use grammar. That just shows you're lazy. And if you're too lazy to spell, I'm too lazy to read

Don't be offended, I'm just giving you warnings so you don't run into some trouble later on. Just try to make your own story next time, ok?

^ Completely agree.

If you want to make a story similar to someone elses, you need to ask for permission. And even if they allow you, you can't just go and rip it off like you did. Better yet, come up with your own great idea, instead of stealing someone elses.

phhhfffttttt!!!! death horn ya story sucked
shalone ur story is better becuz u dont write in a weird way

Shut up Troll! You bumped a vry old topic! She and her other accounts have been banned.