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Summer's End [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 14:36:53 05/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Before I go onto the darker things with all the terror and death and the like, I thought I'd write a HAPPY story. One without someone dying and all others being doomed for eternity.

Fishpaste said it would be hard for me to write one so I'm going to try.

Also, I'm doing a timeline so you know which order to read them in if you havn't already. The past is the bottom the present is the top.

Summer's End
Shadow
Thoran's Tail(s)
White Storm Clouds (Not written yet)

I realsise The Plot Hole isn't on there, that's because I'm not sure when it happened. I'll add it on later.

Writting some soon!
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#2 Posted: 19:24:04 05/09/2009 | Topic Creator
A dragon snuck through the shadows, blending in perfectly with the darkness, her blackish blue scales glimmered when the sun found her hiding behind a rock.
It was sunrise.
At the same moment, another dragon had seen her. It grinned and slowly crept over to the crest of the hill, wondering how to make the attack. He decided upon a plan and started edging towards her; if she had turned around she would have seen him for he was not under cover. But the other dragon was lucky, she was waiting until her partner arrived. And, he would not if Spyro’s plan had worked. The one he had discussed with Elixir…
“Waaaaahg!” Spyro was flung to the ground by Shadow, Cynder’s expected company.
“Huh? INTRUDER!” Cynder ran towards Spyro, who was struggling to get up.
“DIE!” Cynder was knocked over by Elixir, who had just been on his way after he had lost Shadow.
“Gettorf!” Spyro growled, standing and knocking Shadow off balance, but he was quick to recover. “Prepare to die!” He laughed, chasing Shadow into the temple, Elixir ran after him and Cynder jumped up and chased them all.
“This game of Tag has got severely out of hand…” Thoran mumbled, dodging out the way off the stampeding dragons.
“I agree, but it’s only a game, so we can’t stop them” Volteer said, ducking behind the wall to avoid them.
“I’m going to getcha!” Cynder half laughed, half growled. Gaining on Spyro.
“Oh no your not!” Spyro shouted, jumping into the air and flying through a hole in the ceiling.
“Arhhh!” Cynder growled, going to fast to stop and go after him.
She smiled, realising something. Spyro had abandoned his team-mate in the chase.
“Get him!” she yelled to Shadow, who turned around to face Elixir.
“Dammit!” Elixir swore, realising eh was cornered.
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#3 Posted: 09:36:45 06/09/2009
Nice to see the story continue again.
Good job smilie
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smilie
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#4 Posted: 14:26:26 06/09/2009
yay the story has continued
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#5 Posted: 19:21:13 08/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro ran to his base and blocked the door, the base was a tower opposite another tower which was Cynder’s and Shadow’s base.
“Ha ha! Spyro triumphs again!” He laughed, looking out through a large crack in the wall.
“Hey Spyro! We’ve got Elixir! And if you want him back, you’ve got to let us win!” Cynder said, leaning out a window.
“NEVER!!!” Spyro shouted, already forming a plan.
“Well then you’ll never see him again!” Cynder said and ducked back, Spyro heard screams from their base.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOO!” It was Elixir.
Spyro crept along the long corridors of the temple, there wasn’t much cover so he was quiet vulnerable, but he needn’t have worried, Cynder and Shadow were still inside the base. He walked up to the rotten wooden door and smashed it open.
“LET HIM GO!” He screeched, jumping forward and burning the ropes around his friend.
“Get them!” Cynder ordered Shadow, who was glad to oblige. All four dragons went racing down the temple stairs, over piles of rock and in and out of rooms. They were about to give up when.
“Spyro! Cynder! Shadow! Elixir! Dinner!!!!!!” Volteer.
“DINNER!” The three dragons screamed before running into the dinning room and feasting on the delicious meat, except for Shadow.
“Mmmm…yummy…shall we call it a draw?” Cynder asked Elixir and Spyro.
“Deal!” Spyro said, munching on some cooked beef.

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I'm hungry.
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#6 Posted: 19:24:58 08/09/2009
More story! Woot!

Yes, I love your stories.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
spyro92 Blue Sparx Gems: 890
#7 Posted: 07:51:11 09/09/2009
nice story. smilie
Pls continue asap. lol XP
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#8 Posted: 15:14:38 09/09/2009
Nice
Keep it up
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smilie
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#9 Posted: 19:49:20 09/09/2009
keep writeing i like it...
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#10 Posted: 19:51:10 09/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Continueing! ^^
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#11 Posted: 19:52:06 09/09/2009
good story smilie
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#12 Posted: 19:15:26 10/09/2009
Quote: Tango
Continueing! smilie


YAY...
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#13 Posted: 15:48:19 12/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder was late; she hurried along the temple towards the secret base, an old abandoned room where the wooden door had rotted away to nothing. She climbed over the pile of rubble and sat down. Now they were only missing Shadow, who had been outside watching the sunset last time Cynder had seen him.
He arrived soon, acknowledging Elixir and the others with a nod.
“Is everyone here? Good. We will start the meeting” Spyro said who was their main leader when they were all a team.
They talked for a long time in hushed voices, and then finally Spyro raised his voice again, felling no need to whisper anymore. “So it’s agreed?”
The others nodded
“Monday morning, I shall expect you all top be there” he said in dead seriousness, even though what they planned to do wasn’t.
The others nodded again and Spyro dismissed the meeting.


“Everyone to their stations!” Spyro shouted the command to his ‘troops’
“Aye aye captain!” Cynder shouted back, flying to part of a crumbling wall and holding the rope in her mouth.
“Here he comes!”
Terrador walked down the uneven path towards the temple doors, two giant stones that opened only when extreme force was applied.
“NOW!!!” Spyro screeched out from the trees as he saw Terrador.
Cynder pulled the rope, Elixir pulled the rope and Shadow pushed the double doors from behind.
Both doors simultaneously opened quickly, and a huge mound of leaves, twings and mud came rolling down from doors. Terrador didn’t even have time to gasp before he was covered in the sticky gloop.
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#14 Posted: 16:16:08 12/09/2009
smilie more this is good...
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#15 Posted: 19:45:33 12/09/2009
Very nice smilie
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smilie
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#16 Posted: 14:03:19 18/09/2009
Thats great! smilie
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#17 Posted: 16:33:33 18/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I should write more now, I've been lazy. :P
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#18 Posted: 16:34:34 18/09/2009
i know how you feel. i can never be bothered writing my stories, but i do it anyway smilie nice story by the way!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:34:52 18/09/2009 by xx chloebabez
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#19 Posted: 18:23:24 18/09/2009
looks like it. pls write. smilie
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#20 Posted: 11:28:36 19/09/2009
Yes, write more soon!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#21 Posted: 14:25:10 19/09/2009
more we want more
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#22 Posted: 21:22:49 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro jumped down onto the pile of mud and sticks. “Now, which one of these piles of mud is Terrador?” he asked cheekily.
Terrador’s head burst up from the mud. “You should be glad we still have an hour before the new arrival comes, or I would have had to kill you” He laughed, slapping Spyro into the mud with part of his tail (Not the spiky bit)
“Hey! No fair!” Spyro yelled as he fell into the pile of sticky mud.
“You call ganging up on a guardian fair?” Terrador said, grinning.
“Still…” Spyro muttered, getting up and brushing large clumps of mud off his scales.
“What new arrival?” Elixir asked.
“The new fire guardian of course”
Terrador noticed Spyro was looking sad “Ignites would be proud of you Spyro, and I think you’ll like the new guardian. She’s very nice”
“Do you fancy her?” Cynder asked.
“The new guardian is female?!”
“Well yes, you get female guardians. You didn’t think they were all male did you?”
“Well…yeah…I’ve never seen a female guardian”
“They look like normal dragons Spyro”
“Well, duh”
“Come on then, I’ve got to wash this mud of before she arrives”
As Terrador walked off Cynder came over to Spyro and whispered to him “I think Terrador has a crush on a certain someone”
“I heard that” Terrador responded.


Later, when Spyro and Terrador had washed the mud off, the two guardians and the young dragons stood by the large temple door, the main entrance, waiting for the new fire guardian. Cyril had gone to meet her even though the others said not to; he would probably bore her to death with his family history. Cyril was a bit full of himself.
“There they are” Terrador said once they came into view.
She was quite a pretty dragon, with red scales and pinkish red horns and wings, her crest was yellow and her belly scales were dark red. She had long horns and a long tail, but her wings were quite small and she flew in a rather lopsided way. Spyro realised this way because she had a huge tear in on wing, which made her out of balance.
She landed and as everyone had suspected, Cyril was talking about his ancestors, she didn’t seem to be listening.
“A pleasure to meet you” Volteer greeted the dragoness. She smiled back at him “Volteer?” her voice was polite and kind. He nodded “And your name is..?”
“Fyah”
“Fire?”
“Fyah, with a Y”
“I see”
She turned around to face Terrador
“Terrador” She smiled, they obviously knew each other
“It’s nice to see you again”
Then Fyah turned to the younger dragons, Cynder introduced them.
“I’m Cynder, that’s Shadow and that’s Elixir”
“And you must be Spyro”
Spyro glared at her, taking a instant disliking to her for replacing Ignites.

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Unoriginal name I know, sowwy fro long wait. I thought I'd make a extra long chapter to make up for it.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#23 Posted: 21:28:08 25/09/2009
good chapter.
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#24 Posted: 06:29:33 26/09/2009
Great chapter as always smilie
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smilie
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#25 Posted: 12:11:59 26/09/2009
Wow, nice chapter. I just got this funny feeling about the new guardian... I get funny feelings.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
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#26 Posted: 12:25:49 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Hmm..I know what you mean. *Suspicious*

I don't write this story, Thoran does.
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#27 Posted: 13:04:16 26/09/2009
*Very suspicious look*
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#28 Posted: 16:28:12 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I thought I'd draw a picture of Thoran writing teh story for you.

[User Posted Image]
By fizzy_tango at 2009-09-26

Yes, it's big.

The black thingy is the typwriter, theres a WEIRD lightbulb and the chain around his neck is o stop him escaping? Sorry, did I say chain? Whoops, that was his birthday present...I don't know why he wears a chain with it...honest....

It's pretty crap compared to my other paint pic's but I didn't have the heart to make it better.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#29 Posted: 17:08:16 26/09/2009
Poor Thoran
I say you set him free and train a pet spider to type the story. With more legs at work, the spider might get it done quicker.
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smilie
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#30 Posted: 17:17:34 26/09/2009
yeah... oh and cool picture.
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#31 Posted: 18:44:35 26/09/2009
I feel sorry for Thoran now.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
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#32 Posted: 19:12:08 26/09/2009
I love this story! It's awesomeness!
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#33 Posted: 19:46:49 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Don't worry, Thoarn escaped. Now I need a new story writer.. :(

Oh Cynnnndeeeer....
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#34 Posted: 19:52:31 26/09/2009
wicked story smilie
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#35 Posted: 19:54:19 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Because so many peopel wrote good commonts, I'm writing another chapter.

(That's the thing about me, the more people that read my story, the more I update)
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#36 Posted: 19:55:52 26/09/2009
same here smilie it makes you want to write more smilie i'm just writing the next chapter for my new story now, it is pretty hard to think.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#37 Posted: 20:04:38 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Night time. Spyro slept in one room, Cynder in another and Elixir and Shadow shared a room. Spyro couldn’t sleep, again. He was often awake at night, thinking about Malefor, thinking about his friends, his family…it’s how he was always there when Cynder had a nightmare and woke up. He was always awake, listening to her breathing from the room next to his.
He tossed and turned, this time his mind was on Fyah, the new fire guardian, he was angry at her for replacing Ignitus, he was upset about Ignitus death and wanted to avenge him. But no one had killed Ignitus and Malefor was dead. Spyro decided to avenge him by playing the biggest prank on Fyah he could think off, and that’s why he was awake. Scheming and plotting on what to do, eventually, he fell asleep with a large evil grin on his face.

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Spyro met Cynder at breakfast.
“Morning Cynder”
“Morning Spyro, what we going to do today after training?”
“I had the BEST prank idea…”
“Tell me”
Spyro whispered the plan to Cynder who giggled. “That is the best prank ever, it’s so…EVIL!” A mad laugh escaped from her “Who shall it be? Cyril? I’m annoyed at him for freezing my feet in training, they were so sore afterwards”
“No, I was thinking Fyah”
“Why?” she hasn’t done anything,”
Spyro stopped the conversation briefly to say hello to Shadow and Elixir
“I don’t know, just so she can see who she’s dealing with? We haven’t pranked her yet”
“Well, it seems a bit big for a new comer but ok”
Spyro told Cynder, Elixir and Shadow to meet in the secret base after training.

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Now I've got to think fo a prank....THORAN!
Panpop Blue Sparx Gems: 520
#38 Posted: 16:58:08 02/10/2009
Plz tell me the prank. I'm going to die of impatience!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smilie smilie
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There's no "I" in team, but there is in PIE! And there is in meat pie and meat's an anagram of team so....voila!
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#39 Posted: 20:29:19 02/10/2009
Good part
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smilie
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#40 Posted: 07:53:57 03/10/2009
nice smilie more pls
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
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#41 Posted: 17:35:44 03/10/2009
Yes, keep it coming.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
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#42 Posted: 17:37:04 03/10/2009
more?
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#43 Posted: 13:51:30 04/10/2009 | Topic Creator
“Spyro, concentrate”
“Sorry Volteer”
Spyro was learning how to do homing electricity bulbs but he couldn’t keep his mind to it, to busy thinking about the plan.
“Spyro! Try again”
Spyro tried again but nothing happened. Volteer sighed “It’s nearly the end of training and you still haven’t been able to do it! Why can’t you just concentrate”
Spyro was getting sick of his blabbering. “It’s nearly the end of training! Can’t you let me out early?!”
Volteer glared at him.
Spyro changed his tone of voice “Pleeeeeeeeeease? I really want to see my friends soon!”
“Usually when you want to see your friends urgently it means your up to another prank”
“I’m not, honest”
Volteer sigh “Ok then, off you go. It’s not like you could learn and master that power before training ended, we’ll work on it tomorrow”
Spyro smiled and ran off, by tomorrow, the prank would have been done.

“Hey Cynder, Shadow”
“Hiya”
Shadow nodded slightly.
“Where’s Elixir?”
“Here” Elixir said, walking up.
“Ok, to the secret base? We’ve got a prank to discuss!”
“Not so fast young dragon!”
Spyro tuned to Cyril, hoping he hadn’t heard the last bit. “We’ve got to go to Warfang”
“Why?”
“Business”
Spyro glared at the floor and tried not to scream out, his prank was ruined!
Cynder walked up to him and whispered “Don’t feel bad about the prank, maybe being in Warfang could give us some advantages”
Spyro looked at her and smiled. “It’s ok, I just thought of an even better one!!!”


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Ha ha! You don't get to know what the prank is yet!
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#44 Posted: 14:23:25 04/10/2009
Damn. Ah well, Warfang ho!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
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#45 Posted: 19:07:52 04/10/2009
To Warfang!
Good chapter
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smilie
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#46 Posted: 09:18:59 09/10/2009
Cool! smilie
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
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#47 Posted: 18:53:01 09/10/2009
sweet, i can't wait to find out what the prank is...
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#48 Posted: 20:59:29 09/10/2009 | Topic Creator
The dragons had arrived in Warfang, Cyril, Terrador and Fyah had come but Volteer stayed behind to look after the temple with Thoran.
“So what’s the new prank?” Elixir asked Spyro
“You’ll see”
They stopped by a big building.
“Spyro, Cynder, Elixir and Shadow, wait outside for a minute, Fyah can you look after them until we need you?”
Fyah nodded and waited with the younger dragons while Terrador and Cyril went inside.
“Fyah! I just saw a really big wyvern on that roof!” Spyro shouted, pointing to a tall building.
“Are you sure?”
“Yeah! It was huge!”
Cynder started at Spyro curiously.
“I’ll go check it out”
“I’ll come too” Spyro said
“And me” Cynder butted in

As they flew up to the top of the building, Cynder flew closer to Spyro and talked in a whisper “What do we have to do?”
“Well I was thinking of giving her a shock by pushing her off the building”
Cynder looked shocked “You can’t do that!” She hissed menacingly.
“Oh pfff, she can fly, it won’t harm her”
“I’m not getting involved”
“Fine!”
Spyro flew a little faster and they landed on the roof. Fyah walked to the edge and looked around “I don’t see any wyve-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!”
Spyro barged into her and pushed her off the building, he looked down laughing, expecting her to fly back up and scold him. But she didn’t, she kept falling, then Spyro realised with horror, her torn wing was putting her off balance and she could fly.
Spyro closed his eyes when she hit the ground, opened then curiously and looked down. Expecting the worst.
She lay limp, with dragons from the city crowding around, Terrador had heard the crash and came running out, he looked up and Spyro and shouted “YOU ARE IN BIG TROUBLE YOUNG DRAGON!”


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Poor Fyah, I don't expect it was what you were hoping for.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#49 Posted: 21:04:02 09/10/2009
wow, cool chapter. i wonder what'll happen next.
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#50 Posted: 21:05:35 09/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm not very good at happy stories....smilie
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