the story of brooke
cp1:a white egg
cp2:deoxiss ded
cp3:death wounded and ded
cp4:dead n gone
cp5:world saved
chapter 1
once in a small grotto a white egg was born only every 200 genarations her name was brooke and i am the mother of this egg and i will protect it from every gool and feend out there.my name is sandrra i am a teel dragon of the north.and so brooke hatched and grew and grew until she was a teenager she had a boyfriend named death he is a black dragon.
chapter 2
as brooke and death walked death could scence something he turend around and saw deoxiss with his and her perents as slaves death told brooke two go and hide for he knew deoxiss was after brooke.death flew up two deoxiss and bit her paw deoxiss smaked him right out of the air and down rolling on the hill brooke saw everyting she flew up and bit deoxiss on the wing so she could not fly and catch her brooke swooped down and bit deoxiss on the neck killing her.
chapter 3
as brooke killed deoxiss death came two a stop at the bottom of the hill brooke swooped down and looked at death and death said*im gonna go brooke you be strong and dont worrie about me think of the good times and bad that we have shared you have been my life now its time for me two go.............good bye brooke*death nooooooooo
chapter 4
death was ded but his spirit lives on in all of us for brooke nor will you forget him for he was a good young dragon he has passed but nor will his lifetime he will live in all of us for he was the favorite of our choice i will not forget him nor will all of you he loved all of us ecpecally his perends and brooke
capter 5
the world was saved from deoxiss but now what will come for brooke and what will come for the world
THE END
hoped u guyz liked it
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#1 Posted: 14:06:49 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 14:07:27 03/08/2009
theres a fandom section for a reson
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#3 Posted: 14:07:32 03/08/2009
tl;dr
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#4 Posted: 14:07:35 03/08/2009
Um, this goes in fandom, dude.
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#5 Posted: 14:08:18 03/08/2009
dont quit your day job is all i can say
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#6 Posted: 14:09:12 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
oh well i dont wanna have 2 wright it all over again so im gonna keep it here ill make one on fandome 2
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#7 Posted: 14:09:29 03/08/2009
For the love of Ad- God... This stuff goes in fandom.
It doesn't matter if you think the fandom sucks in fandom, death horn. That's where stuff like this belongs. Quote: death horn
Magic words: Copy & Paste |
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#8 Posted: 14:09:37 03/08/2009
just move the topic
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#9 Posted: 14:10:04 03/08/2009
death horn
Do not type it all over again Copy and paste Nuff said
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#10 Posted: 14:10:34 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
how???
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#11 Posted: 14:11:09 03/08/2009
ask dark52 also its dead not ded
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#12 Posted: 14:12:22 03/08/2009
If you were asking how to Copy and paste, then you are dum
Highlight all of the text in your post Control + Copy New topic in Fandom Control + Paste Insert title ??? Profit!! EDIT: I said this because I though you was talking about my post, don't be offended
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#13 Posted: 14:12:33 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
oh sorry
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#14 Posted: 14:13:28 03/08/2009
Quote: Kyo Tanaka
i knew that when i was 8 |
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#15 Posted: 14:15:33 03/08/2009
PROFIT! AWESOME.
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#16 Posted: 14:15:48 03/08/2009
Quote: DARK CINDER
But you did not make this topic now did you?
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#17 Posted: 14:16:21 03/08/2009
its awfull im sorry but the diolog is just crapp the death is to rushed its to short its just rushed and the spelling is AWFULL
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#18 Posted: 14:37:30 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
aufull ur face is..........................never mind>>
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#19 Posted: 14:39:48 03/08/2009
you cant spell, the story line is WTH, your trying to make brook look like spyro its AWFULL
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#20 Posted: 14:42:49 03/08/2009
Dear god that was piss
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#21 Posted: 14:43:51 03/08/2009
You could use with a spell-checking program...
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#22 Posted: 14:44:07 03/08/2009
seriosly death horn you cant write good storys..just do somthing else
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#23 Posted: 14:44:37 03/08/2009
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100 buck says that spell checking program can't fix half of his misspellings
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#24 Posted: 14:45:08 03/08/2009
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100? ill be dammed if it sorts out 1 |
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#25 Posted: 14:45:53 03/08/2009
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#26 Posted: 14:46:51 03/08/2009
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#27 Posted: 14:47:53 03/08/2009
i read bits i was loling so much its flippin AWFULL seriosly death horn stop thinking you have a gift at writing
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#28 Posted: 14:48:49 03/08/2009
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#29 Posted: 14:49:53 03/08/2009
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I barley read the first line. xD ...YES |
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#30 Posted: 14:50:10 03/08/2009
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poops to good a word its...just...words...my god..its just...WHAT IS IT!!! |
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#31 Posted: 14:50:12 03/08/2009
Quote: Blackholes_Wolf
And I got excited for nothing
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#32 Posted: 14:51:43 03/08/2009
i'll try to read it all
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#33 Posted: 14:52:16 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
what do u mean
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#34 Posted: 14:53:45 03/08/2009
i read it all....just AWFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EDIT: @ death horn its unread able i got up to the 2nd chapter was lol'ing so much i stoped |
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#35 Posted: 14:54:37 03/08/2009
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#36 Posted: 14:55:25 03/08/2009
It's almost incomprehensible.
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#37 Posted: 14:57:39 03/08/2009
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i bet all the good writers of there time or rolling in there graves |
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#38 Posted: 14:58:26 03/08/2009
This story makes rock look smart
4srs
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#39 Posted: 14:59:06 03/08/2009
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