This is going to be about Spyro, Cynder, Sparx, Ember, Flame, the Guardians, Malefor, the Chronicler and I might add more to it.
When they are thinking and at the start of each chapter it goes italic. When they are screaming or yelling it goes bold.
Spyro, the rare purple dragon.
Cynder, the black dragon.
Monstrous Cynder, turns into a monster when she gets angry.
Sparx, the annoying yellow dragonfly.
Ember, the pink dragon.
Flame, the red dragon.
Ignitus, the wise fire dragon.
Terrador, the strong earth dragon.
Cyril, the smart ice dragon.
Volteer, the hyper electric dragon.
The Chronicler, the wisest dragon of his time
Malefor/Dark Master, the evil purple dragon.
Part: 1. A Prison in the Dark...
Spyro, Cynder, Ember, Flame & Sparx got trapped while they where asleep by Malefor's evil Dragon. Now they are stuck in a Dark Prison...
Spyro: *snores*
Cynder: Spyro, get up!
Spyro: *yawns* Cynder, what is it?
Cynder: No time to explain!
The place started shaking.
Sparx: We're all going to DIE!!
Spyro: Not if I can do anything about it!
Sparx: What?
Flame: Spyro! This is no time to play around!
Ember: Yeah Spyro, Malefor is coming!
Spyro: What! Cynder didn't tell me this!
Cynder: I said no time to explain!
Malefor's spirit came through the ground.
Malefor: You may have trapped me in prison in Convexity, but soon my dragon will come and free me!
Ember: Who would want to work for you?!
Flame: He uses dark magic to make them work for him, Ember.
Ember: Oh...
Malefor's spirit disapered into the darkness. Then out came a Monstrous Shadow dragon.
Dragon: Prepare to Die!
Spyro: How about you?!
Dragon: So thats how you want to be, ay?!
Cynder: You leave Spyro alone!
The dragon smashed Cynder into the ground with her head.
Cynder:Spyro! Run, Run!
Spyro used earth missile to smash the dragon into the wall.
The cave shook as dust fell from the roof.
Sparx: Go Spyro!!
Dragon: GGAAARRRRR!!!!!
The dragon ran to Spyro & smashed him to the ground.
Spyro was knocked out.
The dragon put a shadow wall around Spyro so that no one could get to him.
Flame and Ember:You want some of this!
Dragon: Ok, I will finish you off aswell!
The Dragon used her claws to knock Flame and Ember out.
Malefor: Come on, we will leave them now.
To be Continued...
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#1 Posted: 09:48:12 21/07/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 13:06:31 21/07/2009
Hey! You stole my title!
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#3 Posted: 08:07:12 22/07/2009 | Topic Creator
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Did I? I didn't know your title was this. Anyway... Part: 2 Out and away The dragons have been trapped in the prison. The mysterious dragon has left and all were knocked out... Cynder wakes up and sees Sparx trying to get Spyro out of the shadow wall. Cynder: Sparx, what are you doing? Sparx: Finally, someone is awake! I'm trying to get Spyro out. Cynder: I can do that! Well with my shadow element. Sparx: Go in and get him! Cynder went through the shadow wall and came out with Spyro. Flame and Ember were waking up. Flame: Hey Cynder, you got Spyro back! Ember: Good gob Cynder! Cynder: Thanks guys! Spyro was also waking up. Sparx: Yay, Spyro is back! Spyro: Where did that dragon go! When I get my paws on her I'll, I'll... Cynder: Spyro, she and Malefor went. Ember: We need to get out of here! Spyro: Yeah, we will need to get to the Temple. Flame: Isn't the Temple still floating in the sky? Cynder and Ember: Yeah... Suddenly a shake went through the cave and a hole appeared. Sparx: Hey, lets go through there! They all flew out of the cave and noticed it was in the place that the Mountain of Malefor used to stand. Cynder: Hey, we were in the underground prisons that Gaul used to use. Flame: Who is Gaul? Ember: Yeah? Spyro: Well, he is, well, was the leader of all the apes. Ember: Was? What happened? Did another ape take his place? Cynder: No. Spyro killed him. Sparx: Aren't we going to go to Warfang to find the Guardians first? Spyro: Yeah, lets just go... Ember: Good, this place is creeping me out! The dragons, and dragonfly, flew off to the Dragon City/Warfang. To be Continued... |
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#4 Posted: 08:35:22 23/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the double post but I got more of my story...
Part: 3 To the dragon city... The dragons have been trapped in the prisons of the Mountain of Malefor. Now they are on their way to the Dragon City... Sparx: Here we are! Flame: So this is the Dragon City? Cynder: Yep, Spyro & I helped some moles here once. Ember: Moles? Spyro: Yes, moles. They were the ones who made Warfang. They fly down to the place where the Guardians were. Terrador: Why hi Spyro, Cynder & Sparx. Who are your companions? Spyro: Well, the pink one is Ember, and the red one is Flame. Ember and Flame wave. Volteer: Hi there young dragons! How was the journey? Cynder: Well, when we were asleep, some wyverns took us to the Mountain of Malefor's prison. They also caught Flame and Ember. And there was a Mysterious Dragon there aswell, she tried to kill us. Cyril: Hey, do you know the news? Flame: What news? Terrador: Oh, I forgot! *smacks head* Ignitus is back! Spyro, Cynder, Sparx, Flame, Ember: IGNITUS! Ignitus walks out. Ignitus: Yes. It is I. Spyro: Aren't you meant to be the Chronicler?! Ignitus: Well, yes. Me and the Chronicler had a little talk and we decided that he will be the Chronicler. Cynder: Why was that? Ignitus: The Guardians and I need to be together. Why, we need to protect batches of eggs that hatch each year. Sparx: Flame & Ember. Spyro & Cynder were protected by the Guardians when they were in their eggs! Flame, Ember: Cool... The dragons head inside. There was a Pool of Visions in the middle. Ignitus: Spyro, I need you to see something! Spyro: What is it? *running over to the Pool of Visions* Ignitus: The evil, it's awakening! Ember: WHAT?! Ignitus: Ok Ember, Malefor was put back in prison in Convexity. Flame: So that explains his spirit coming up from the ground. Terrador: Where was this young dragon?! Flame: It was in the Prisons. Ignitus: Now Malefor will use the Mysterious Shadow Dragon to set him free. Dragons: Oh, no! Ignitus: You five will need to go to the Celestial Caves to find the Chronicler, he will give you advise! The dragons set off to the Celestial Caves. To be Continued... |
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#5 Posted: 18:37:03 23/07/2009
No nothing wround with double posting here...
You should try and think about double spacing rather than single after each time a character talks.... And to be honest you should probably write in story style rather than script but that is all up to you there in your writing style. You also write too fast for me to ever keep up (I'm only on here when I post a chapter usualy)... lol... Not bad though |
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#6 Posted: 09:59:53 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: cornys
Thanks! I do pefure writing in a script-like way. Sorry about that. Yeah so it's back to the first story... Part: 4 The Celestial Caves... The dragons, and dragonfly, have gone to the Dragon City and were sent to the Celestial Caves by Ignitus. They need to get advice... Malefor: They are going to the Celestial Caves, GO STOP THEM! Dragon: Yes, Master... Back at Warfang the dragons, and dragonfly, have taken off. Flame: So how exactly do we get to the Celestial Caves? Spyro: Well, we need to go over the Purple Sea. Cynder: You mean the sea that we got captured by the pirates? Spyro: Yep! Ember: Hey the water is getting purple! Spyro: Here is the Purple Sea! Sparx: Oh, great... The dragons quickly flew over the ocean so the pirates couldn't catch them. Sparx: Good, we didn't get caught! Ember: You say that now! Flame: We won't get caught. Now the sea was turning blue. Cynder: Now we are at the White Isle! They landed on the rocks at the Celestial Caves. The Mysterious Shadow Dragon was waiting on the shore... Dragon: Well, well, well, why what do we have here? Spyro: So we meet again, Dragon! Dragon: We had quite a fun time at the prisons, didn't we? Cynder: You almost killed us! Dragon: I did, didn't I? Flame: I insist you let us through! Dragon: Why, young one? Ember: Well, because we need to see the Chronicler! Spyro: Oh no, Ember! Dragon: Chronicler? You young ones won't even see another day once I'm through with you! Everyone got ready to fight. The Dragon hit Sparx and he smashed on a rock. Spyro: SPARX!!! Then she hit Ember but she used her Crystal Shards element to stab the Dragon. Dragon: ROAR!!! The Dragon hit Flame. Flame used Fire and burnt the Dragon. She runs around to try and get it off. She then hit Flame and Ember with Shadow Fire. Then they fall to the ground. Dragon: It's only us now! Cynder: You can't defeat us! Spyro: Yeah! Stop this nonsense and no dragon gets hurt! Dragon: Ha! You think that will stop me?! Spyro & Cynder used a Earth-Fear fury attack. It knocked the Dragon off her feet but didn't knock her out. She got up and used Shadow Fury. Dragon: Let us now fight Fire with Fire! It knocked Spyro and Cynder off their feet and got knocked out. Then the Chronicler came out from behind the Elemental Cave and shewed the Dragon off. He then picked up Spyro, Cynder, Flame, Ember and Sparx and flew off to the Celestial Caves. Spyro: *waking up* Ahh, what happened. The others were already awake. Cynder: We were all beaten by the Dragon. Spyro: What happened to her? The Chronicler came out from behind the big hour glass. Chronicler: She flew away just before I saved you guys. So, you young dragons are going to take back the Temple, ay? Flame: Yeah... Chronicler: Well then you will need some advice. Spyro will need to take place in the center of the temple. Cynder, Ember, Flame and Sparx will stay around the Floating Islands to let the Temple and part of the Swamp to go down on top of the Burnt Lands and the Belt of Fire. It won't do the swamp and Temple harm because of Spyro's fury. Spyro: You're saying that I have to use the fury that I used to save the world? Chronicler: Yes, young dragon. You will now need to go back to tell Ignitus and he will tell you when to go. Bye for now, young dragons! They flew off to Warfang again. To be Continued... |
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#7 Posted: 23:47:09 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok, more of the story...
Part: 5 The Journey Begins... The dragons have gone to the Celestial Caves and have got some advice from the Chronicler. They have started their journey to the Temple here... The dragons flew over the Purple Sea. Ember: So what is the "fury"? Spyro: That is the fury I use to save the world. Cynder: Or take away dark magic. Spyro: Exactly! Flame: We are approaching Warfang... Sparx: Yay! They landed at the Guardians home in Warfang. They walked in. Ignitus: So, what did the Chronicler have to say? Spyro told Ignitus and the Guardians what the Chronicler said. Terrador: So that is what you must do young warriors. Cyril: Take care. Volteer: Make sure you don't get killed. Yeah, as if that would happen! Sparx: I might! Flame: No you won't, we will protect you! They set off. Mean while, Malefor was waiting for the Shadow Dragon. Malefor: Hurry up! I can't stay here again! Dragon: Yes, Master... She had some of Spyro's power, which was his elements in a crystal. She put it in Malefor's prison and he took it. Then Malefor broke out and set for the dragons. Sparx: are we there yet? Spyro: No. Sparx: Are we there yet? Flame: No! Sparx: Are we there yet? Ember: No!! Sparx: Are we there yet? Cynder: NO!!! Sparx: Are we... Everyone: NO!!!! Sparx: O-K! Cynder: Sparx is getting so annoying! Ember: You said it girl friend! The landed on the top of the Dam Flame: Hey, is that Malefor?! Malefor: Why, yes it is! Spyro: What! You're meant to be in Convexity! Malefor: Well, Eroses helped me out! Flame: EROSES?!!! That is your name?! Eroses: Yes it is! I still didn't destroy them, Master! Malefor: I wouldn't have expected you to. They are powerful for young dragons! Sparx: I'm leaving! Spyro: Sparx! Stay! Sparx: Ok... Ember: We need to destroy them! They started fighting. Malefor took a good hitting from Flame. Malefor fell to the ground. Eroses hit Flame. Flame then fell on Ember and they fell off the Dam and on the land. Eroses: Only two left! Flame, Ember: Just add two more and you've got FOUR! Malefor: Eroses! Lets move! Spyro: Let us move aswell! To be Continued... So, It's Eroses. She is the Mysterious Shadow Dragon! Here she is: - This story is getting COOL!! - I know! - I will get you all! - Hey Bolt, when will I turn monstrous? - Wait and see, Cynder! |
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#8 Posted: 10:11:50 26/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Now for more story!
Part: 6 It's for the Temple and Eroses... The dragons went to the Dam and saw Malefor & Eroses there. Now they flew off to try and get Malefor and Eroses... Spyro: Come on! Eroses: You go on Master. I'll slow them down! Eroses flew to the dragons but they just flew in front. Eroses: GGAAARRRRR!!!!!! Now they caught up with Malefor. Malefor: You won't get to the Temple! I will destroy you and the world! Ember: Oh, no you won't! Ember used her Crystal Shards element to slow Malefor down. Malefor still sped up. Cynder: I'll stop him! *uses poison* Malefor was not affected. Flame: Oh no! Sparx: How about you put all you elements together?! Dragons: Yeah! They use a hydro-element beam and knocks Malefor down. But then he comes up again. Cynder turns into Monstrous Cynder. Cynder: First you almost destroy the world, second you make an innocent dragon evil and then you escape! I HAVE HAD IT!!! Cynder hits Malefor and he falls on Eroses and they fall down. Cynder turns normal again. Flame goes and grabs Eroses. Spyro: Good going Cynder! Cynder: Thanks, Spyro! Ember: We need to get to the Temple! Spyro: Yeah! They reach the Temple. Spyro: We all know what we need to do?! Flame: Yes and you will need to take Eroses with you. You can take the dark magic out of her! They all go to their positions. Spyro uses the fury and the Temple and Swamp goes down. It also takes away the dark magic from Eroses. Eroses: Thank you for freeing me from the Darkness! Spyro: Thats ok! Sparx: Now we need to tell Ignitus! They go to Warfang and tell Ignitus. Then they go to the Temple and they stay for about 2 days. Ignitus: This is bad! *looking in the Pool of Visions*& Terrador: What is it?! Ignitus: It is Malefor! He is coming for us! Spyro: We can stop him! Eroses: I know most of the moves of Malefor! We can stop him like that! Everyone: LET'S DO IT! To be Continued... Yay! I turned into Monstrous Cynder! |
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