Quote: cornysNo nothing wround with double posting here...
You should try and think about double spacing rather than single after each time a character talks....
And to be honest you should probably write in story style rather than script but that is all up to you there in your writing style.
You also write too fast for me to ever keep up (I'm only on here when I post a chapter usualy)... lol... Not bad though

Thanks! I do pefure writing in a script-like way. Sorry about that. Yeah so it's back to the first story...
Part: 4 The Celestial Caves...
The dragons, and dragonfly, have gone to the Dragon City and were sent to the Celestial Caves by Ignitus. They need to get advice...
Malefor: They are going to the Celestial Caves,
GO STOP THEM!
Dragon: Yes, Master...
Back at Warfang the dragons, and dragonfly, have taken off.
Flame: So how exactly do we get to the Celestial Caves?
Spyro: Well, we need to go over the Purple Sea.
Cynder: You mean the sea that we got captured by the pirates?
Spyro: Yep!
Ember: Hey the water is getting purple!
Spyro: Here is the Purple Sea!
Sparx: Oh, great...
The dragons quickly flew over the ocean so the pirates couldn't catch them.
Sparx: Good, we didn't get caught!
Ember: You say that now!
Flame: We won't get caught.
Now the sea was turning blue.
Cynder: Now we are at the White Isle!
They landed on the rocks at the Celestial Caves.
The Mysterious Shadow Dragon was waiting on the shore...
Dragon: Well, well, well, why what do we have here?
Spyro: So we meet again, Dragon!
Dragon: We had quite a fun time at the prisons, didn't we?
Cynder: You almost killed us!
Dragon: I did, didn't I?
Flame: I insist you let us through!
Dragon: Why, young one?
Ember: Well, because we need to see the Chronicler!
Spyro:
Oh no, Ember!
Dragon: Chronicler? You young ones won't even see another day once I'm through with you!
Everyone got ready to fight. The Dragon hit Sparx and he smashed on a rock.
Spyro:
SPARX!!!
Then she hit Ember but she used her Crystal Shards element to stab the Dragon.
Dragon:
ROAR!!!
The Dragon hit Flame. Flame used Fire and burnt the Dragon. She runs around to try and get it off. She then hit Flame and Ember with Shadow Fire. Then they fall to the ground.
Dragon: It's only us now!
Cynder: You can't defeat us!
Spyro: Yeah! Stop this nonsense and no dragon gets hurt!
Dragon: Ha! You think that will stop me?!
Spyro & Cynder used a Earth-Fear fury attack. It knocked the Dragon off her feet but didn't knock her out. She got up and used Shadow Fury.
Dragon: Let us now fight Fire with Fire!
It knocked Spyro and Cynder off their feet and got knocked out. Then the Chronicler came out from behind the Elemental Cave and shewed the Dragon off. He then picked up Spyro, Cynder, Flame, Ember and Sparx and flew off to the Celestial Caves.
Spyro: *waking up* Ahh, what happened.
The others were already awake.
Cynder: We were all beaten by the Dragon.
Spyro: What happened to her?
The Chronicler came out from behind the big hour glass.
Chronicler: She flew away just before I saved you guys. So, you young dragons are going to take back the Temple, ay?
Flame: Yeah...
Chronicler: Well then you will need some advice. Spyro will need to take place in the center of the temple. Cynder, Ember, Flame and Sparx will stay around the Floating Islands to let the Temple and part of the Swamp to go down on top of the Burnt Lands and the Belt of Fire. It won't do the swamp and Temple harm because of Spyro's fury.
Spyro: You're saying that I have to use the fury that I used to save the world?
Chronicler: Yes, young dragon. You will now need to go back to tell Ignitus and he will tell you when to go. Bye for now, young dragons!
They flew off to Warfang again.
To be Continued...