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#351 Posted: 17:03:51 19/07/2008
Hey! Where did Chapter 24 go? C_R post it back
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#352 Posted: 17:04:16 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
D_C do you mind if I do Asin's part of the story a bit?
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#353 Posted: 17:04:18 19/07/2008
Thank you!
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#354 Posted: 17:05:04 19/07/2008
Ok, just return Chapter 24 to the topic! Ok?
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#355 Posted: 17:05:15 19/07/2008
:)
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#356 Posted: 17:05:39 19/07/2008
Who's writing next?
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#357 Posted: 17:05:50 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Dark_Cynder
Well for some reason I didn't like it much so I was going to more on but it looks like deleted it but how...@_@ I will just do it over I didn't like it anyways. Can I do Asin's part of the story this time D_C or do you wanna do it? |
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#358 Posted: 17:06:02 19/07/2008
C_R is.
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#359 Posted: 17:06:14 19/07/2008
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#360 Posted: 17:07:16 19/07/2008
then NiOwl? then Me?
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#361 Posted: 17:07:23 19/07/2008
No, it's ok! My character is your chatacter
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#362 Posted: 17:07:35 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok here it goes! Hold on a sec!
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Dark_Cynder
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#363 Posted: 17:08:30 19/07/2008
Chapter 24 (edit)- C_R
Chapter 25- NiOwl Chapter 26- Cyn16 Chapter 27- me ![]() |
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#364 Posted: 17:09:09 19/07/2008
D_C it was most likely because of Cassandra not having her time but she said she did. I don't think it goes that well ether.
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#365 Posted: 17:09:47 19/07/2008
So a pattern. Got It!
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#366 Posted: 17:21:35 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I am working on the Chapter C16.
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#367 Posted: 17:24:20 19/07/2008
Ok. I can't wait!
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#368 Posted: 17:26:01 19/07/2008
Me eather
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#369 Posted: 17:30:50 19/07/2008
D_C Check your profile
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#370 Posted: 17:35:47 19/07/2008
i love the story
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#371 Posted: 17:38:22 19/07/2008
thx 1/4
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#372 Posted: 17:38:33 19/07/2008
We're glad you like it
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#373 Posted: 17:40:59 19/07/2008
2/4
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#374 Posted: 17:43:09 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Light eveloped Asin as the lights power surged through her body. She was slowly lifted up into the sky as Malefor watched in horror. "The legend is true Asin is back!" He screamed as Asin's eyes turned into a fiery white. "Yes Malefor it is me! It is time for some payback!" As the fury grew stronger. Malefor had seen this before there was no way out allhe could do was watch and wait. Soon enough it was let go. Light filled the entire room shunning brighter then the sun! "The fury of my ancestors!" She whispered as the final blow was released and she slowly descended down.
The light stayed there as her eyes retutbed to there notmal color and her body returned it's normal size. She only had half known half not of what had just happened. Eventually the light fadded out and revealed Asin confused in the room that was now loaded with statues of the dragon ancestors all whispering one thing. "Light is restored." There dragon bodies were soon a shadow as it all dissapeared but one. Malefor's statue. She circled the still sheilded stone dragon the only thing about it that seemed life-like now where it's eyes. "I see you have vanquished my brother." A familiar voice said. "Well almost." The voice them revealed the owner of it stepping out of the shadows. "Cassandra!" Asin said rushing towards her. "What have I done?" She asked as they both looked at the large Malefor statue. "Well Asin you nearly destroyed him." "What do you mean? Isn't he dead?" She murmureed sadly. "Nothing can die by the power of light. Afterall what would light be if it destroyed things?" "Darkness." Asin said looking down. "Yes so only pure darkness can perish at the sight of pure light. I myself learned that a long time ago and Maelfor is not pure darkness....It all began." Cassandra started. ~•~•~•~•~•~ Well there it is! Hope you like it! ![]() ![]() |
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#375 Posted: 17:45:54 19/07/2008
wow
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#376 Posted: 17:47:00 19/07/2008
Awesome! thx for remembering!
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#377 Posted: 17:47:54 19/07/2008
NiOwl CAN'T MAKE HER SYORY CAUSE SHE'S NOT ON! What can we do?
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#378 Posted: 17:48:45 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx guys!
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#379 Posted: 17:49:25 19/07/2008
Cyn16, Cassandra was made by you, that's why YOU should do Chapter 25
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#380 Posted: 17:49:39 19/07/2008
your welcome
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#381 Posted: 17:49:47 19/07/2008
NP But what about Niowl.
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#382 Posted: 17:49:59 19/07/2008
C_R, that was awesome!
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#383 Posted: 17:50:51 19/07/2008
Hmmm... No metter will she be Online, or not, she will do Chapter 16
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#384 Posted: 17:51:59 19/07/2008
Ok!
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#385 Posted: 17:55:31 19/07/2008
i sent you a pm cynder16
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#386 Posted: 18:03:05 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
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#387 Posted: 18:04:13 19/07/2008
NP, C_R
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#388 Posted: 18:07:19 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Is Night Owl going to do the next chapter?
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#389 Posted: 18:08:30 19/07/2008
You did Chapter 24;
Cyn16 is now working on Chapter 25; NiOwl will do Chapter 26, once she'll be Online |
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#390 Posted: 18:11:36 19/07/2008
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#391 Posted: 18:33:22 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh that is sooo cool!
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#392 Posted: 18:33:50 19/07/2008
"My grandfather, Maleforen is actual Darkness." "But How?I thought Malefor was darkness"asked Asin. "No"Replied Cassandra. "Long ago. Maleforen was in charge of the kingdom. He made it Darkness. But My Grandmother, Casadie, Hated it. She is Light. So she battled her own husband to save the land. But she needed an Ally. That's were you come in. Asin was her best friend. She said she could be the Ally. And she was. Asin fought valiantly but alas, defeat was her fate. So the Casadie Used every inch of power to unleash that only Light can handle. Maleforen was defeated. Asin was slowly and painfully dyeing. Casadie couldn't see her friend die, not like that. So she used the ability of Health and brought Asin back to her original state.""Wow does that mean that I am like Asin?" "Young Dragon. You are Asin. Now let me finish. 15 years later, I was young, a hatchling. My Uncle mimicd Maleforen, My mom taking place of Casadie. Asin yet again almost died. Mom saved her. Now Young Dragon, I am taking place of my mom and Malefor of Malefoe, shall you take place of Asin?" "Yes. But what about Infinity?" "Yes. Infinity I believe is the one dragon that can open the portal other then Malefor." So, Cassandra and Asin got out of the building and told the others what happened.
"So you know health to?" asked Cynder. Cassandra didn't answer. She was trying to find where Malefor opened the portal."Sacred Freashold,Hollow Ground, Pathways Unfold, Lost is Found,Prove your worth with quick desire, Ice and Earth, Electric, Fire."a mysterious voice said. "Spyro. On those trees use the breathe in this order Ice Earth Electric Fire." said Cassandra.Spyro did. The loction of the portal is Tall Plains. Now at Tall Plains, Cassandra looked for where to summon the portal."Expose your heart to summon ghost then face alone what you fear most"the voice said again. "Cynder. What are you scared of?" asked Cassandra. "The Stone Sentiment Attacking us." Cynder replied. Suddenly the stones attacked Cynder! "Fight them Cynder!" said Cassandra. Cynder defeated the stones."Whoa. That was close!"Cynder relived. Out of nowhere, Infinity started glowing! "Infinity, Create the Portal." Said Cassandra. A huge portal opened in the sky! "There's your stop. Good Luck."said Nalemor handing Cassandra the Spirtual Stone. "Come Asin. We have lives to save." Asin and Cassandra flew into the Portal. ---------------------------------------- I didn't write that down! Is it good?
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#393 Posted: 18:35:47 19/07/2008
I Love that poster D_C!
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#394 Posted: 18:39:43 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ya but you know what would be cooler? Making Cynder defeat Dark Cynder!!!
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#395 Posted: 18:40:13 19/07/2008
Thanks!
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#396 Posted: 18:40:44 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
NP
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#397 Posted: 18:45:55 19/07/2008
cool
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#398 Posted: 18:47:19 19/07/2008
thanks
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#399 Posted: 18:47:45 19/07/2008
i am so tired
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#400 Posted: 18:49:56 19/07/2008
Perfectly awesome chapter, Cynder16!!!
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