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Lumina and Dracul, different sides, same love. [CLOSED]
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#351 Posted: 22:15:04 28/04/2010
it was a good chapter. smilie I love this fanfic.
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#352 Posted: 02:46:34 29/04/2010
exciting chapter! smilie
i was wondering if those three would come back up...smilie
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#353 Posted: 03:18:55 29/04/2010
OH NO! oh no oh no oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#354 Posted: 08:35:39 29/04/2010
HURRAY I love stories like this <3
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#355 Posted: 19:58:59 29/04/2010 | Topic Creator
thank you.

Chapter 57,

Lumina and Dracul were also put into a cell, they were put in the same cell and they were the only ones in that cell. the chains around them were loosened and they stood up, they looked at each other.

Dracul: "Lumina i'm sorry i acted the way i did..."

Lumina: "that's alright, i forgive you..."

Dracul sat down "now what do we do?"

Lumina sits down too "i don't know, we could try to break out of here."

Dracul: "what's the use?... mother has all the power now, she'll just capture us again."

Lumina: "you're right... what do you think is going to happen to us?"

Dracul: "i don't know..." his voice sounded fearful.

Lumina walked closer to him, she sat down and nuzzled him a little "it's going to be alright..."

Dracul: "i hope it will." he nuzzled her as well.

Lumina looked at him "do you think your mother is going to torture us?"

Dracul: "i don't know... she wouldn't torture me unless father commanded her to... usually she'd just strike me if i upset her... but now that i've betrayed my family i don't know what she'll do..."

Lumina: "don't worry... we'll get through this as long as we stay together."


Hela was sitting on her throne, she looked at a few demons standing nearby.

Hela: "demons go to hell and dig out lucifer's casket and bring it to me."

the demons left, a few minutes later they returned carrying the casket and putting it down in front of Hela. Hela stood up and opened the casket, she looked inside and saw the dead and decaying body of lucifer, she placed her hand on lucifer's chest and it glowed. lucifer's entire body was beginning to glow and a change was taking place. the wounds and the decaying flesh disappear and lucifer's heart began to beat, he began to breathe softly and he opened his eyes...


next chapter coming tomorrow...
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#356 Posted: 20:02:11 29/04/2010
Oooh.. major cliffhanger...

I don't post very often on this but good chapter.
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IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#357 Posted: 20:16:07 29/04/2010
smilie Whoa...
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#358 Posted: 21:09:33 29/04/2010
nice, and that cliff hanger sucks everyone right in. I must read more!
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#359 Posted: 22:03:08 29/04/2010
Lucifer and Hela.
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#360 Posted: 23:05:29 29/04/2010
ahhhhh!!!! *runs* awsome
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#361 Posted: 02:43:20 30/04/2010
major cliffhanger!
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#362 Posted: 09:33:00 30/04/2010
I love stories that has something really bad happening. Though I don't like stories that have Christianity involved, this one is very, very good. Keep it up, torok!
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#363 Posted: 15:16:47 30/04/2010
Oh no D8! Lucifers back. He's back and he's bad!
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#364 Posted: 16:42:14 30/04/2010
Repetitive...
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#365 Posted: 20:06:18 30/04/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks for the comments everyone...

Chapter 58,

Hela takes her hand off of lucifer.

lucifer: "... He-... Hela?..."

Hela: "yes lucy it's me."

lucifer sat up and looked around "what happen?... where am i?"

Hela: "you're in Heaven... i have all the power now... i claimed the thrones..."

lucifer: "wait you won the war!?"

Hela: "yes, I've won and and i became the goddess of Heaven. of course what's a goddess without a god?"

lucifer caught sight of the throne of God, he stood up and walked towards it, he sat down in it. he felt great power coming into him and the feeling of satisfaction overcame him. he couldn't believe that he was actually sitting on the throne of God all because of Hela. he looked at Hela.

lucifer: "where's Dracul?"

Hela: "... your son has betrayed us."

lucifer: "what!?"

Hela: "he's fallen in love with Lumina, she was a spy sent by Jesus..."

lucifer quickly stood up "i'll knock some sense into him!... where is he!?"

Hela: "he's inside a cell..." she points towards where the cells are.

lucifer walks in that direction, he walks along a big row of cells full of humans and angels. the humans and angels panic and cower in fear when they see him. he ignores them for the time being and continues to make his way down the hallway full of cells. he stops at the last cell where he sees Dracul and Lumina sleeping. lucifer utters a low angry growl when he saw this.

lucifer: "DRACUL!!!"

Dracul jumps to his feet in fright and he sees lucifer. Lumina woke up and gasped in fright when she saw lucifer, she backs up a few paces.

Dracul: "... father?... you-... you're al-... you're alive!?"

lucifer: "never mind that!!... what i want to know is why you've betrayed me for a dragoness!!?"

Dracul didn't answer, he was shocked to see that lucifer was actually alive.

lucifer looked towards Lumina "YOU!!... you did this to him!!"

Lumina: "...wha-... what do you mean?"

lucifer: "you messed with his mind!!... you encouraged him to betray me!! I'M GOING TO TORTURE YOU TO DEATH FOR THIS!!!"

Dracul got in front of Lumina as if he was protecting her "you're going to have to do the same to me too!"

lucifer: "I'LL MAKE BOTH OF YOU SUFFER GREATLY!!" he looks towards a demon who was standing by watching. "go back to hell with some demons and bring all the torture instruments here and put them in a spare room!!"

the demon walks off. lucifer walks away angrily cursing.

Dracul turns around and sees Lumina trembling in fear.

Dracul: "it's alright... he's gone."

Lumina: "... Dracul i'm scared of what he might do to me..."

Dracul: "it's alright... i won't let him harm you... i'll die before i let that happen." he nuzzled her.

she nuzzled him too feeling safer when she was with him.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#366 Posted: 21:02:34 30/04/2010
Well, lucifer hasn't lost his short temper and desire to make people suffer. To hell with him!
Good chapter
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smilie
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#367 Posted: 22:09:57 30/04/2010
good chapter. lucifer isn't happy, to heck with him.
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#368 Posted: 22:13:55 30/04/2010
Hela happeh. Lucifer not happeh. smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#369 Posted: 00:18:00 01/05/2010
good chapter!
@solister and night: agreed. to heck with him.
@shayminsky: lol! then again, is he ever happy? he needs to take some laughing gas or something...
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#370 Posted: 02:47:24 01/05/2010
To Heck with Lucifer!

Seriously.
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#371 Posted: 05:05:08 01/05/2010
aww... good
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#372 Posted: 07:51:25 01/05/2010
Quote: Pinkdesi101
good chapter!
@solister and night: agreed. to heck with him.
@shayminsky: lol! then again, is he ever happy? he needs to take some laughing gas or something...


Laughing gas makes your lips go numb. I had to have it when I split my head open.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#373 Posted: 07:54:35 01/05/2010
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Quote: Pinkdesi101
good chapter!
@solister and night: agreed. to heck with him.
@shayminsky: lol! then again, is he ever happy? he needs to take some laughing gas or something...


Laughing gas makes your lips go numb. I had to have it when I split my head open.


Ouch, that's gotta hurt
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Medic: NO!
smilie
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#374 Posted: 15:00:30 01/05/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah i agree,

Chapter 59,

a few minutes later lucifer returned to the cell, Dracul and Lumina looked at him and saw that he was holding 2 chains in his hand. lucifer opened the cell door and walked towards them. he grabbed Dracul and pinned him down to the ground, Dracul struggled and bit lucifer's hand.

lucifer: "how dare you bite me!! you're going to pay even worse now!!!" he chained Dracul up. then he turned his attention to Lumina.

Lumina backed away and bared her teeth in a threatening manner.

lucifer laughs "do you think i'm threatened by you!?" he pins her to the ground and chains her up as well. he picks both of them up and walks out of the cell and down the hallway.

Lumina looks at Dracul "i'm scared..."

Dracul: "... i know me too... we'll be alright."

lucifer walks into a large room, the walls had chains hanging from them, there was a row of metal tables with chains on them, there were some tables that had torture instruments on them. lucifer chains both of them onto separate tables. he begins to pace around them.

lucifer: "hmmm so many ways of torture... what should i do first?... should i burn your bodies and pour acid all over you? or should i tear your skin with my claws?... oh wait i know the perfect thing... i'll do all 3!!"

lucifer walked behind Lumina and breathed fire all over her. she screams in pain.

Dracul: "NO! DON'T!... IT'S ME YOU WANT TO PUNISH!!" he struggled to get free of the chains.

lucifer stops and looks and Dracul "you'll get your turn soon enough you traitor!"

Lumina's body was burned, it was charred. she was having trouble breathing, she was sobbing in pain.

lucifer looked at her and smiled at the sound of her sobbing "that's right... SUFFER!... suffer for what you did to Dracul!!"

Dracul: "...just leave her alone... please don't hurt her..." he was crying because he felt sorry for Lumina and there was nothing he could do to help her.


i am now a bit too lazy to continue... next chapter coming tomorrow.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#375 Posted: 17:14:56 01/05/2010
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good chapter!
@solister and night: agreed. to heck with him.
@shayminsky: lol! then again, is he ever happy? he needs to take some laughing gas or something...


Laughing gas makes your lips go numb. I had to have it when I split my head open.


Ouch, that's gotta hurt



owwww! O.O

good chapter torok...although poor lumina. D:
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#376 Posted: 17:29:24 01/05/2010
Oh no D8
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#377 Posted: 19:52:37 01/05/2010
poor lumina. good chapter.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
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Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#378 Posted: 23:46:39 01/05/2010
Poor Lumina...
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#379 Posted: 02:11:27 02/05/2010
ahhh! lumina use ur power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhh! good chapter
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#380 Posted: 12:49:56 02/05/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah even i feel sorry for her...

Chapter 60,

lucifer looks at Dracul and sees him weeping for Lumina.

lucifer: "oh you want me to stop hurting her?... is it hurting you to see her in pain?" he sunk claws into Lumina's back and began to claw at it cutting it.

Lumina screamed and cried in pain.

Dracul: "please stop hurting her!"

lucifer: "no i don't think i will!!" he takes hold of one of her wings and begins to shred the webbing with his sharp claws.

Lumina screams in pain and tries to get her wing out of lucifer's grasp, but he has no trouble keeping hold of it. Lumina bit lucifer's hand. he let go of Lumina's wing.

lucifer: "HOW DARE YOU BITE ME!!?" he walked over to a table and picked up a beaker filled with acid, he came over to Lumina and poured it all over her body.

Lumina struggled to get free of the chains but she couldn't. she screamed in pain. after the beaker was emptied Lumina was sobbing in pain. she then fell unconscious because of the overwhelming pain.


next chapter coming tomorrow... sorry these chapters are so short.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#381 Posted: 12:52:48 02/05/2010
NO!!! Lumina!!! Good chapter, very detailed. That one made me wince.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
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Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#382 Posted: 13:07:38 02/05/2010
Good chapter.
And it seems all lucifer seems to do is fight, train and torture
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#383 Posted: 13:20:44 02/05/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah...
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#384 Posted: 16:09:43 02/05/2010
smilie poor lumina
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#385 Posted: 20:55:43 02/05/2010
@ icedragon333: And be angry at everything smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#386 Posted: 21:42:33 02/05/2010
that seems to be his occupation.
i know what you will say
and you just noticed that now?
lol. smilie
poor lumina. D:
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#387 Posted: 21:53:36 02/05/2010
Oh no D8
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Medic: NO!
smilie
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#388 Posted: 01:33:34 03/05/2010
LUMINA!!!
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#389 Posted: 21:43:23 03/05/2010
MORE!!!
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#390 Posted: 21:55:34 03/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 61,

Lumina woke up, she was inside a cell with a shackle around her neck, there was a chain connected to the shackle. all the wounds that she had recieved were all there, even the acid was still burning her. she felt all the pain, acid still covered most of her body, she couldn't move without causing herself pain, she just laid there on her side slightly groaning in pain. although she was greatly worried about what was happening to Dracul.

meanwhile lucifer was brutally torturing Dracul. Dracul had deep wounds on his back, burn marks everywhere and both of his wings were shredded. Dracul sobbed heavily because of the pain, lucifer was just looking at him, he was enjoying the sound of Dracul's sobs.

lucifer: "you see this is what happens when you betray me... you get punished... is this punishment worth loving a Heavenly dragoness?"

Dracul slowly looked at him "...yes..."

lucifer unchains Dracul from the table and picks him up by the horn, he takes him over to a vat filled with acid and drops Dracul in. lucifer puts a lid over the vat so Dracul can't get out. lucifer hears Dracul thrashing around in the vat and he laughs. a few minutes later lucifer opens the lid, he sees Dracul's horn poking out of the surface, he grabs it and pulls Dracul out, he drops him to the ground. Dracul lays there coughing. he takes a deep breath but it hurts. he lays there unable to move.

Dracul: "... i... hate you..."

lucifer: "WHAT DID YOU SAY!!?"

Dracul: "you... heard me..."

lucifer strikes him with his tail. Dracul screams in pain.

lucifer: "oh i'm sorry... did that hurt?... well GOOD!" he strikes him multiple times with his tail.

Dracul screams in pain and covers himself with his wings but they didn't protect him much. he lays there with his eyes shut sobbing in pain.

lucifer: "i have better things to do then to beat you senselessly!" he picks Dracul up and walks out of the room. he walks over to a cell and throws him in, he closes the cell door and walks away.

Dracul just lays there. he can't move much.

Lumina looks outside her cell and sees Dracul inside the cell across from her's.

Lumina: "Dracul!?"

Dracul looks around slowly and sees Lumina. "...Lumina?"

Lumina: "yes it's me... are you alright?"

Dracul: "...not really..." he faints because of the pain.

Lumina: "... what has lucifer done to him?"


next chapter coming tomorrow... again sorry for the shortness of this chapter...
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#391 Posted: 21:58:53 03/05/2010
Man, this doesn't look good for them... good chapter.
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"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#392 Posted: 22:01:56 03/05/2010
Oh no yet again D8
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#393 Posted: 22:26:55 03/05/2010
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LUMINA!!!

now it's
DRACUL!!!
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#394 Posted: 23:48:57 03/05/2010
ahhh!!!!
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#395 Posted: 08:23:10 04/05/2010
Quote: Pinkdesi101
Quote: IsisStormDragon
LUMINA!!!

now it's
DRACUL!!!


No, LUMINA AND DRACUL!!!
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#396 Posted: 20:18:05 04/05/2010
Poor guys...
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#397 Posted: 20:19:04 04/05/2010
i dont know why but i want to....*runs in and stabs lucifer to death*
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#398 Posted: 20:59:44 04/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 62,

lucifer was walking down the hallway, he glanced at the humans and angels inside the cells and thought about what he was going to do with them. the humans and angels coward in fear when he walked by. lucifer stopped at a cell and looked inside, he saw Asmodeus with Ron and Ben.

lucifer: "Asmodeus!... i know you've been living with those 2 this whole time!... you are also going to pay for your betrayal! and as for Ronald you'll get a worse punishment!"

Ron: "why?"

lucifer: "you betrayed me twice!... you think i'm just going to forgive you like your pathetic Master!?"

Ron: "no... but that would be kind of you to do so..."

lucifer: "when a pathetic creature such as yourself betrays me i don't forgive easily... i'm going to make the rest of eternity a living hell for all of you!!" he walks away.

Ben looks at Ron "you see what happens when you worship the devil for most of your earthly life?... bad things happen."

Ron: "yeah, i get it... no need to rub it in..."

Ben: "i wasn't rubbing it in..."

Ron: "well you kinda did."

Ben: "sorry."

Ron: "it's alright... i'm now worried about what lucifer is going to do to us."

Asmodeus: "he'll probably burn us, tear our skin, pour acid on us, pierce us with sharp objects, flog us..."

Ben: "alright we get the point..."

suddenly a few demons came to the cell and opened it, they came in with chains and chained all 3 of them up and dragged them out of the cell. they were taken into the torture chamber and chained to the wall by their wrists. the demons grabbed metal rods and heated them using their magic. the demons came over to them and placed the rods on them. the demons laughed when they heard their cries of pain.

demon: "hey wait... didn't the master say he wanted to test out that new torture room?... oh yes he did... let's put these 3 in there!"

the demons took them down from the wall and dragged them over to another door, a demon opens the door and there was fire inside this room and scorpions were crawling everywhere.

Ben: "no... please don't put us in there!"

Asmodeus, Ron and Ben began to struggle to get out of the chains, the demons threw them inside the room and closed the door. flames burned Asmodeus, Ron and Ben and scorpions crawled all over the stinging them consistently. they screamed in pain. the flames engulfed them.


next chapter coming tomorrow.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#399 Posted: 21:30:58 04/05/2010
smilie oh my gosh. good chapter.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#400 Posted: 22:10:33 04/05/2010
Oh no, the whole situation is getting worse D8
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Medic: NO!
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