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#301 Posted: 13:11:28 19/07/2008
I'm on! They come on later.
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Cynder16
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#302 Posted: 13:15:51 19/07/2008
ok I hope
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Cynder16
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#303 Posted: 13:16:23 19/07/2008
Do you like my Chapter?
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Night Owl
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#304 Posted: 13:44:52 19/07/2008
I love it!
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Cynder16
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#305 Posted: 13:45:11 19/07/2008
Thank you.
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Cynder16
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#306 Posted: 13:45:36 19/07/2008
I need advice. Can you help?
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Night Owl
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#307 Posted: 13:48:26 19/07/2008
about what?
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Cynder16
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#308 Posted: 13:56:29 19/07/2008
nothing we did it in the PM's
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#309 Posted: 13:59:41 19/07/2008
OK.
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Cynder16
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#310 Posted: 14:02:07 19/07/2008
thanks for being a true friend NiOwl
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#311 Posted: 14:02:47 19/07/2008
Thats OK
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Cynder16
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#312 Posted: 14:09:03 19/07/2008
Who's the next Chapter? D_C?
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Dark_Cynder
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#313 Posted: 14:42:51 19/07/2008
Yes, I'll do Chapter 23
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Cynder16
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#314 Posted: 14:52:35 19/07/2008
Thanks! I tried my best and (While sleeping I come up w/ ideas and before sleeping when it's quite) Came up with Cassandra A beautiful large white dragon!
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Dark_Cynder
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#315 Posted: 14:56:38 19/07/2008
Yeah, that seriously was a great idea
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Cynder16
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#316 Posted: 15:01:10 19/07/2008
I did. Check ur's. Are you working on the next Chapter?
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Dark_Cynder
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#317 Posted: 15:03:11 19/07/2008
Yes, but a usual, it will take a while
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Cynder16
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#318 Posted: 15:03:26 19/07/2008
Check your profile
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#319 Posted: 15:04:02 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Sorry I was online I was just looking at the new DotD!8D
The enviorments don't really fit Spyro much but I think this was before the final game development. Anyways great job on the story guys I will do the next Chapter after D_C |
Cynder16
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#320 Posted: 15:05:13 19/07/2008
So did you see mine? oh and HIYA!
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#321 Posted: 15:07:23 19/07/2008
Did I mention I CAME ON AT 6:00 IN THE MORNING TO WORK ON THE STORY! im crazy!
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#322 Posted: 15:10:29 19/07/2008
I remember me and C_R stay up for a whole night, doing chapters, atleast for me it was all night
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#323 Posted: 15:11:32 19/07/2008
Good Luck!!
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Cynder_Rox
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#324 Posted: 15:15:35 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok D_C C ya later!
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Cynder16
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#325 Posted: 15:16:17 19/07/2008
C_R did you read my Chapter?
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#326 Posted: 15:19:06 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh ya I did it is AWESOME!
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Cynder16
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#327 Posted: 15:22:15 19/07/2008
ok Bye!
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Cynder_Rox
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#328 Posted: 16:10:17 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I can't believe how many pages my topic has!
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Cynder16
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#329 Posted: 16:12:23 19/07/2008
I Know isn't it awesome?
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Cynder_Rox
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#330 Posted: 16:24:19 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ya it is!
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#331 Posted: 16:25:10 19/07/2008
Will we all be able to write chapters?
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#332 Posted: 16:27:50 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Sure!
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Dark_Cynder
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#333 Posted: 16:30:57 19/07/2008
Hi guys! I have finished my chapter!
----------------------------------------------------------- --- -- - <Chapter 23: The savior’s return> “Where did Malefor take Asin?” Cynder asked the White dragon, worriedly. “Malefor now knows, that every one who he ever corrupted, freed themselves… That’s why he’s going to the heart of the Darkness, to make sure that the Great Asin will stay under his trance, forever” Cassandra answered, while making some strange moves with her hands, above the Spiritual stone, witch lied on the ground. “Is there a way to save Asin?” Infinity asked, looking on the large dragon. “No…” Short pause. “Only she, Great Asin, can save herself, now.” Then suddenly Sparx cut in to the talk: “Hey, what’s with all the “Great Asin” thing?” “You don’t know?!” Cassandra looked at the little bug, with wide eyes. “Know what?” Spyro continued the questions. “Ehh, we don’t have time for telling stories, now… But the only thing I can say right now is that this planet was once saved by a great Black dragon, Asin. My mother used to know her, and before she died, my mother told me, that the Great Asin will reborn in the next Year of the Dragon, that’s why I asked Soulrion to steal the egg from the vault, before the night of the raid, to save it till this day. Great Asin and you, Infinity, are the two chosen ones, who’s destiny is to save this world once again… Just as the Great Asin did long ago….” As Malefor entered the portal, with Asin in his hand, Darkness surrounded the area. Soon he flew above a graveyard. There was a building there, too. Malefor landed right in front of the building. As he entered, still holding the weakened dragon, he came in to a room. The walls and the floor were covered in blood, as if someone had a terrifying fight, not for life, but for death. Bones and skulls were everywhere, al-so in blood. In the middle of the room, there were six purple crystals; they formatted a circle. The crystals looked more like knifes, that were placed in to the ground. Malefor approached the crystals and placed Asin in the circle. “Finaly, a servant that will forever stay on my side! HAAHAHAA!!” the dragon yelled. Purple thunders with black smoke came from the crystals, as they glowed. Asin felt horrible pain. It was impossible to describe, what that pain looked like. ”Hail the great Light dragon, Asin! She alone destroyed the evil, which the Dragon realms feared!” “Congratulations, Asin! You did it!” “I was just doing my job..” “I will return, my friend, to once again save this world from evil, but I won’t be alone…” Asin heard familiar voices, running trough her mind. It looked like memories… She saw a few scenes, too; and they were to familiar to her… Malefor looked at the suffering dragon in much joy, when suddenly… Asin, in a blink of an eye, unleashed a bright light... ”I am back…” --------------------------------------------------------- --- -- - Do you like it? But please, make sure that Asin gets back to her old self again! Ok? |
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#334 Posted: 16:37:30 19/07/2008
That was AWESOME!! Not only is Cassandra wise but Powerful to do't forget! and being Malefor's sister, She to can help destroy her twin Brother!
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Cynder16
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#335 Posted: 16:38:57 19/07/2008
Cool!
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Cynder_Rox
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#336 Posted: 16:41:09 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh Awesome!
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Dark_Cynder
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#337 Posted: 16:41:51 19/07/2008
Thanks, guys
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#338 Posted: 16:43:17 19/07/2008
The most powerfull? Hmmm... They all must save the world, because Malefor is NOT the only evil that this world contains
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Dark_Cynder
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#339 Posted: 16:43:38 19/07/2008
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Cynder16
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#340 Posted: 16:46:02 19/07/2008
Cassandra was the only dragon that can silence Malefore for good! it was Asin who had weaked Malefore but Then couldn't defeat him then Cassandra's Mom(whom she was named after) Attacked Malefore(Malefor's Uncle)And he was vanquised. Now Malefor wishes to mimic his uncle and Cassandra is the only one that can win!
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#341 Posted: 16:46:50 19/07/2008
awesome chapter
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Cynder16
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#342 Posted: 16:47:57 19/07/2008
did you read the 1 I made on the last page?
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#343 Posted: 16:53:35 19/07/2008
Thanks Nalemor
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#344 Posted: 16:55:03 19/07/2008
Asin was Cassandra's(mom) Friend and wanted to help and that how it happened
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#345 Posted: 16:57:12 19/07/2008
I think, I understand
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Cynder16
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#346 Posted: 16:58:34 19/07/2008
Can you tell C_R when she get's back to look at that?
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Cynder_Rox
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#347 Posted: 17:01:21 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok I will do the next chapter!!!
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Cynder16
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#348 Posted: 17:01:24 19/07/2008
Don't worry it happens Can you check the info about Cassandra on here? Thanks. Who's the next chapter?
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Dark_Cynder
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#349 Posted: 17:02:36 19/07/2008
Night Owl should do chapter 24, but she is Offline...
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Cynder_Rox
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#350 Posted: 17:02:54 19/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder16
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