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oooh! drama!

Good chapter

Interesting.

Chapter 50,

Dracul was laying in the room thinking about what he has heard. somewhere deep in his heart he wanted to forgive Lumina and be with her, but he didn't want to be with Jesus. he still felt bitter and very unforgiving towards both Lumina and Jesus. Dracul was thinking of ways to get revenge once he got out, or if he got out... he began trying to bite at the chain, but that didn't work because it was too strong. he tried to pull it out of the wall using brute force, but he gave up after it wouldn't budge. he lay there with his head on his paws and his tail wrapped around him feeling the hope of freedom drain out of him. then the door opened, Lumina came in.

Lumina: "Dracul i know you don't trust me anymore, but i care about you and i want to show you that." she walked over to him and placed her paw on the shackle on Dracul's neck. her paw glowed white and the shackle fell off.

Dracul stood up and ran out of the room he ran out of the Temple and bagan to fly away. he stopped in mid air and looked back at the Temple, he saw Lumina standing in front of the Temple looking up at him. Dracul flew away, he went back to hell. Lumina watched him fly away and wondered if she had done the right thing by letting him go. Jesus appeared right beside her.

Jesus: "do you know the type of danger you've just put yourself in?... Dracul's heart is still bitter, angry and unforgiving... he's going to be looking for revenge."

Lumina: "but Master you said that deep down in his heart he cares about me, and maybe even loves me."

Jesus: "true, but we best not take chances. you will not leave the Temple without an escort."

Lumina: "i understand." she walks into the Temple.


In hell,

Dracul walked through hell, he can not believe he escaped so easily. he can't believe he escaped at all. although he couldn't help but wonder why Jesus didn't hurt him, and why did Lumina let him go... he just figured that it might have been some sort of a trick. he walked towards Pandemonium when Hela appears in front of him.

Hela: "do you mind telling me what you were doing in Heaven!?"

Dracul: "i was captured by that tyrant and he locked me up..."

Hela: "i know that. what were you doing in Heaven in the first place!?... did you think you could capture an angle and lure that tyrant here and kill him and be a hero!?"

Dracul: "...yes... how do you know all this?"

Hela: "i used the crystal ball to find you... i was even putting together a rescue party to rescue you."

Dracul: "i'm sorry mother... i just thought that i could do it and prove i had what it took to take father's place..."

Hela: "lucifer was one of a kind... you can't take his place... but you can be a powerful leader one day if you train hard and be smart and skilled... now go and train you must be weak from being chained up for such a long time."

Dracul: "yes mother..." he walked into the training room.


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Good chapter

^i agree. verry good chapter.

good, good,

thanks,

Chapter 51,

Dracul trained with a group of strong demons, these demons were so strong that Dracul was barely able to kill any. he had killed 3 of them but the rest were still fighting strong even though most of them were wounded. Dracul had been slightly injured but he had only flesh wounds and a few cuts on his body.

Dracul: "alright stop!"

the demons stopped trying to attack.

Dracul: "you are quite good fighters... do you think you could go up to Heaven and capture somebody for me?"

demon: "of course we can. who is it you want us to capture?"

Dracul: "a dragoness named Lumina..."

demon: "why her?"

Dracul: "because if we catch her we'll lure Jesus here and we'll get him too."

demon: "alright, we'll do it..."

Dracul: "put armor on and take some heavy chains with you."

the demons walked out of the training room, they got some armor on and walked towards Heaven, Dracul followed them.

Dracul: "hey demons!"

they looked at Dracul, he was holding a crystal ball.

Dracul: "use this to find her." he tossed it towards one of the demons.

a demon caught it. and all the demons went into Heaven. they flew into the air above the clouds.

a demon in the front looked at the demon with the crystal ball. "where is she?"

the demon looks into the crystal ball "she is walking through the forest with an angel. they seem to be deep in the forest."


Lumina and Timothy were walking through the forest. Lumina was still upset that Dracul had left and Timothy knew that.

Timothy: "come on Lumi that dragon wasn't the best for you anyway. he is evil... how can you trust the son of lucifer anyway?"

Lumina: "i don't know... i just see a good side to him and so does the Master... i know there is still good in Dracul..."

they both stopped when they heard some rustling in the trees. they both looked around.

Lumina: "what was that?"

Timothy: "i don't know... who ever it is come out and show yourself!"

all 15 demons jumped out of the trees and surrounded them. Timothy pulled out a sword that he had with him.

Timothy: "i have a sword and I've been trained on how to use it!"

a demon came up to him and knocked him into a tree with one swipe of his hand. Timothy laid on the ground. the demons then looked at Lumina, they charged at her and quickly pinned her down to the ground. they chained her up and chained her jaws shut. the demons flew towards hell with Lumina. they got to hell. they landed in front of Dracul, a demon came up to him with Lumina struggling in it's hands.

Dracul: "take her to the torture chamber!"

the demon walked towards the torture chamber with Lumina. she was scared at what was going to happen to her. she was even more shocked at what she had heard Dracul say. she looked back and saw that Dracul was following the demon. Lumina looked forward and saw that they were nearing the chamber.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Lumina!!!

HORRAY something bads gunna happen. I <3 Badness.

Oh No D8

noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! quick lumina, excape, use your awsomeness to get away!!!!!! any way, good chapter

DANG IT!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!!!!!!!*goes crazy*

Chapter 52,

they got to the torture chamber, the demon walks inside the chamber with Lumina, Dracul walks in as well.

Dracul: "chain her onto a table!"

the demon chains Lumina to a table, she struggles for a bit but she can't move. she sees Dracul standing beside her, he raises his paw and got ready to strike, Lumina closed her eyes and braced herself for the blow, Dracul looks at her and sees a tear flowing down her cheek, he still has his paw raised, he slowly lowers it, he looks at Lumina for a while, she is trembling in fear. Dracul looked at the demon that was standing there.

Dracul: "get out of here."

the demon left. Dracul started to pace back and forth thinking about what to do. Lumina opened her eyes and watched him. Dracul stopped pacing and sighed, he looked at Lumina.

Dracul: "i can't harm you. even though i know you lied to me and you betrayed me... i can't harm a scale on you."

Lumina tried to speak but she couldn't because of the chain around her jaws. Dracul removed the chain and dropped it on the ground.

Dracul: "say that again."

Lumina: "i said maybe it's because you have feelings for me."

Dracul: "... feelings?... which ones?"

Lumina: "forgiveness, trust, friendship..."

Dracul: "all i'm feeling right now is confusion and the need for revenge."

Lumina: "that's just your dark side talking... you've got to let your good side out more often."

Dracul: "you may be right... deep down in me i do feel a strange feeling of compassion for you... that's why i couldn't hurt you..." he walked over beside her and loosened up the chains, the chains fell onto the ground and Lumina was free.

Lumina got off the table and looked at Dracul "thank you. i knew you'd do the right thing."

Dracul: "you're welcome... now go back to Heaven."

Lumina: "why don't you come with me?"

Dracul: "i told you my place is here..."

Lumina: "but you're not happy here... i know you won't like Heaven right away... but i know you like me... and i'm sure you'll change your mind about Heaven if you experience it and live with me there for a while."

Dracul: "no!... i don't want to live in Heaven with your tyrant master!"

Lumina: "i don't expect you to love my Master right away... i'm just asking you to spend a little time with me in Heaven..."

Dracul looked away from her "i... i can't..."

Lumina: "would you follow what your father tells you your destiny is or do you want to follow what your heart is telling you?"

Dracul didn't answer, he just kept looking at the ground.

Lumina: "just think about it for a while, i'll be waiting to hear what you choose... i only wish that you'd choose what your heart is saying." she flew away towards Heaven.

Dracul watched her fly away, he took a step forward as if he wanted to follow but he stayed put. he was very confused.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

awww. sad chapter. *cries*

* cries* it was good and sad.

yes, it was.

Good chapter

it's a good story, but since i have just started reading it, i have spent a while reading. a.k.a. 1 hour. Very good story.

thanks.

I think I know whats going to happen *Lurks Away*

yay! she lives!

Chapter 53,

Lumina flew into Heaven, she landed in the soft grass and looked behind her to where the gates are, she then looked forward and saw Jesus and Timothy appear before her.

Timothy: "Lumina thank goodness you're safe. i thought i was going to lose my best friend... how did you escape?"

Lumina: "Dracul just let me go... he took me to the torture chamber but he never laid a claw on me."

Jesus: "he let his good side overcome the dark... this is a good sign."

Lumina smiled and nodded "yes... but i hope he'll let his good side out even more..."

Jesus: "i'm sure he will... i sensed a lot of good in him... it's only a matter of time before he lets it out."

Lumina nodded.

Jesus: "come Lumina let's go back to the Temple, it's getting late. Tim you may go home."

Timothy: "alright, good night." he flew back to the city.

a bright light comes around Jesus and Lumina and they are transported to the Temple, Jesus sits on his throne and Lumina lays beside it.

Jesus: "good night, pleasant dreams."

Lumina: "good night Master." she lays her head down on her paws and falls asleep.


In hell,

Dracul was in his room asleep in his bed, he was having a dream.

*dream*

he was inside the golden Temple, Jesus appears in the distance. Dracul sees him and growls he then runs towards him, but then Lumina steps in between them. she has her wings spread out and she is in a crouching position, Dracul growls at her and jumps at her pinning her to the ground. she looks up at him scared. suddenly lucifer appears next to Dracul, lucifer appeared to be transparent and ghost like.

lucifer: "come on Dracul!... kill her! she is a traitor and must die!"

Dracul raised his paw to strike. Lumina closed her eyes and braced herself.

lucifer: "come on Dracul! slit her throat!!"

Dracul's paw was trembling. his heart was racing.

lucifer: "come on! kill her already!!"

Dracul looked down at Lumina who was trembling with fear, his eyes widened as if he couldn't believe what he was about to do. he slowly lowers his paw and got off of Lumina.

lucifer: "i can't believe you are so weak!!... you let yourself be tricked!.... you'll never be as great as me if you have mercy on the enemy!"

Dracul turned to lucifer "she is not my enemy!... i do not wish to kill her!"

lucifer: "but i know you wish to kill him!" he points at Jesus.

Dracul: "if Lumina cares that much about her Master then i have no desire to hurt him!"

lucifer: "why not?... he's the one who did this to me!!"

Dracul: "because i don't want to hurt Lumina..."

lucifer: "you are weak! i can't believe you're my son!... you have disgraced me!"

Dracul: "if you're going to treat me like this then i'm not going to do anything you say!.... and i won't fulfill my destiny to take your place if it means hurting the one i care about!"

lucifer growled at him "you're dead to me!... you're not my son anymore!" he disappeared.
*end dream*


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Rated: 8/10

Not too bad.

thanks... i think.

good part, i like how this story is going!

Good chapter

aww...... cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think the story is going to be over soon. D:

no it's not, I've got a lot to cover in this one.

oh.
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, good chapter.

I've beeen reading this from the start and so far i'd give it a 9/10
Good chapters

yay! 10/10

i give it 99/10

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that's what i give it...

thanks for the ratings.

Chapter 54,

in the morning Dracul awoke "what a weird dream... would my father disown me if i really feel that way about Lumina?... i need to talk to my mother, she knew father best..." he got out of bed and went to Hela's bedroom door, he knocked on the door with his paw.

Dracul: "mother?... are you there?"

Hela: "yes... come in..."

Dracul opened the door and came into the room, he saw Hela standing in front of him.

Dracul: "Mother i need to ask you something?"

Hela: "what is it?"

Dracul: "would father disown me if... say i fall in love with someone from Heaven...?"

Hela: "you're in love with someone from Heaven!?"

Dracul: "no... no i'm not... i just asked a hypothetical question..."

Hela: "oh... well why would you ask something like that?"

Dracul: "no reason... i just had this dream last night that where father told me he disowns me if i have mercy on those in Heaven."

Hela: "why would you have mercy on them?... just look at what they did to your father... he's dead because of them..."

Dracul: "i know what happen to him... and i want to avenge his death too, but there's something in me that doesn't want revenge..."

Hela: "maybe that tyrant did something to you when you were imprisoned in Heaven."

Dracul: "maybe... but i need time to think things over..." he turned around to walk out but he looked back at Hela "mother?"

Hela: "yes?"

Dracul: "you'd never disown me if i fall in love with someone in Heaven and choose to live with them there, would you?"

Hela: "it would take me a while to forgive you, i would punish you severely for going to Heaven just to be with someone... but no i wouldn't disown you... you're my son and you'll always be..."

Dracul: "thank you..." he walked out of the room and out of Pandemonium, he looked at the grave where lucifer's body was buried. "would he really disown me if i go to Lumina?... no... no that was just a dream... of course even in real life i wouldn't hurt Lumina... and father is really strict sometimes." he looked away from the grave and started walking through hell. he was very confused, it was like part of him was wanting to get revenge and fulfill his destiny and the other part want to forgive and not be vengeful. he didn't know what to do. he kept walking through hell thinking about these things.


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Good part. dracul isn't in a good spot.

Good chapter

Interesting.

i can't wait to read more!

your wait is over...

Chapter 55,

Dracul walked around for a while thinking about what to do. he suddenly saw the gates of Heaven in the distance. he started to walk towards them.

a demon spotted him "Dracul!"

Dracul quickly turned around and looked towards the demon "what!?"

demon: "mistress Hela wants everyone to put their armor on and come to the front of Pandemonium."

Dracul: "for what?"

demon: "we're going into battle." he walks towards the armory.

Dracul looked back at the gates for a second but went towards the armory instead. he went inside and saw that most of the armor was gone. he put on some armor and went towards Pandemonium. he saw that there were thousands of demons there, it was the biggest army he had ever seen. he went over to the front of the army and saw Hela standing at the very front looking at the massive army.

Hela: "demons today shall be the glorious day we get our revenge!"

the demon army cheered.

Hela: "let us go forth and fight like we never fought before!... we shall not retreat until we have claimed Heaven as our own!"

the army cheered loudly.

Hela: "let's go forth to war!"

the army of demons went towards Heaven, Hela was flying above them, Dracul soon joined her.

Hela: "Dracul you stay with me at all times."

Dracul nodded. he felt he shouldn't get the revenge that the rest of the demons wanted but he kept flying... they reached Heaven and broke through the gates. the demon army quickly drew their weapons and charged into Heaven. shortly after wards the angelic armies of Heaven came flying towards them and the 2 armies collided. Dracul and Hela just flew over the bloody battle that was going on and they flew towards the Temple. the angels were too occupied fighting the army of demons to notice Dracul and Hela. the angels were being overrun by the larger demon army, they slowly retreated, but most of them kept fighting.

Hela and Dracul landed inside the Temple, they cautiously walked through it. they came across the thrones of God and Jesus. the thrones were emptly. Hela sneered and she got closer to the thrones, suddenly Lumina flew out from behind one of the thrones and landed in front of Hela, Lumina spread out her wings and growled at her.

Hela: "what are you doing!?... GET OUT OF THE WAY!"

Lumina: "you'll never take the thrones!... you're taking them over my dead body!!" she growled at Hela.


cliffhanger again... next chapter coming tomorrow or Wednesday.

yay! exciting chapter!
noooo! cliffhanger!!!

Whoa...

Good chapter

nice... very good chapter. The wait has started again

the wait is over.

Chapter 56,

Hela snarled at Lumina. Hela looks at Dracul.

Hela: "Dracul! kill her!"

Dracul looks at Lumina, Lumina stops growling and looks at Dracul in a nonthreatening way.

Dracul: "no mother..."

Hela: "what!?"

Dracul: "i won't hurt her... not again!"

Hela stuck Lumina with her tail, Lumina got knocked into a wall and she just laid there. Dracul ran to Lumina and nudged her, she didn't move. Hela growled with anger when she saw this but she looked away and proceeded to sit on a throne.

Hela: "...yes... i can feel power coursing through me..."

Dracul nudged Lumina, she opened her eyes and picked her head up, she saw Hela sitting on the throne.

Lumina: "Dracul stop her!"

Dracul looks at Hela then he runs at her. Hela looks at him and chains appear and wrap around Dracul, he falls to the ground.

Hela: "i can't believe my own son would betray me!... you've betrayed your family and for what!?... one of Jesus' slaves!?" she looks at Lumina and chains wrap around her as well "you will suffer dearly for leading my son astray!"

Dracul: "leave her alone mother!"

Hela looks at him "don't ever raise your voice at me! you're going to be severely punished for your betrayal!"

Hela's power was growing and Heaven began to change, all the golden things were turned into stone, the sky was darker, the flowers and trees withered, all the demons were brought back to life and the angels were magically chained up, the temple changed into a stone temple and inside it jail cells appeared along the walls, the chained up angels appeared inside the cells... the demons walked through the city breaking into the mansions and taking humans out of there in chains and toward the temple...

in Ben and Ron's mansion demons were trying to break in but Asmodeus was holding the door closed, Ben and Ron were in the back of the room.

Asmodeus: "guys i don't think i can hold this door closed for much longer!... you're going to have to run!"

Ron opened up a window, he and Ben jumped out of it and ran away from the mansion, but they didn't get far before they were tackled to the ground by demons and chained up.

the door that Asmodeus was holding shut was broken down, Asmodeus fell to the ground and demons came inside the room and looked at him.

demon: "Asmodeus!?... you no good traitor... it was you who was helping those humans escape!"

Asmodeus got up "yes!... but only because they helped me!"

demon: "chain him up!"
the demons jumped on Asmodeus and chained him up. they dragged him out of the mansion and into the temple. they threw him inside a cell, he was in the same cell with Ben and Ron.

the demons had captured hundreds of people and put them all in cells.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Tomorrow?!

yep...

Oh no D8