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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#301 Posted: 00:58:57 06/01/2010
well,that is too bad
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MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#302 Posted: 15:32:38 06/01/2010
Quote: CinderLover
What ya mean? (I'm a very random guy! SORRY!!)
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#303 Posted: 21:49:51 06/01/2010
Quote: MinM20
that... is... kinda... strange... ![]() |
darkfurydragon Emerald Sparx Gems: 3312 |
#304 Posted: 22:26:31 08/01/2010
Been reading the story. And the comments....
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#305 Posted: 00:29:00 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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Samius
Hunter
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#306 Posted: 11:06:46 09/01/2010
When will we have more?!
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#307 Posted: 13:40:47 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Soon, *Gulp* well as soon as i can. Maybe today.
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#308 Posted: 14:13:25 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter24
It's been a few weeks since then, and Keira hasn't had a dream, or nothing. The funiral for Terrador, and Sparx has past. Kiera still felt gulity for it, but one day Keira found a red crystil on the ground, it felt storng to her like she's seen it befor. She didn't tell anyone that she found it but she kept it close to her, night and day, it was with her. But then a few days after she found it she the voices came and were stronger and more tempting. Her and Spyro, was walking out in the dragon city. "It's time Keira. You have the perfect chance to kill him." The voices said. Keira put her paws on her head, trying to keep the voices out. "Get the hell out of my head! Im not going to kill him!" Keira yelled, at the voices. Spyro looked at her. "We can get you to a hospital, calm down!" Spyro yelled. "Dont go, Keira. You know you want to do it now while he's confused." The voices said. "Get out of my freakin head!" Keira yelled louder this time, she ran around dragons crowd around her. Then she was her true self, and turned to Spyro with a smirk.
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Samius
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#309 Posted: 14:18:08 09/01/2010
Again Keira just randomly finds stuff from the ground..
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#310 Posted: 14:20:19 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ya, well thats all i could think of.
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Samius
Hunter
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#311 Posted: 14:21:11 09/01/2010
Why does she even need a red crystal?..
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Night Owl
Yellow Sparx
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#312 Posted: 14:21:54 09/01/2010
Awsome !
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#313 Posted: 14:36:56 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Samius
Well i was thinking about it, and i think im going to make like a lour(Spelling i know) from her parents or something. It doesn't make scense but i needed a reson why the voices came back. Oh and Thanks Night Owl. ![]()
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Night Owl
Yellow Sparx
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#314 Posted: 14:40:33 09/01/2010
No problem.
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#315 Posted: 17:09:31 09/01/2010
really good, and STUPID VOICES, GET OUT OF HER FREAKIN' HEAD!!! wow, this is gettin' existing!
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Solister
Gold Sparx
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#316 Posted: 17:21:18 09/01/2010
Getting tense now
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IsisStormDragon
Platinum Sparx
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#317 Posted: 19:00:39 09/01/2010
Even if the voices in my head aren't real...
They say some pretty freaky things. ![]() |
MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#318 Posted: 19:03:27 09/01/2010
Quote: CinderLover
Mali: 'I only destroy those who walk the Path of Darkness! Which road do u walk; Light, Twilight, Dark, Dawn, or Nightfall?'
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#319 Posted: 22:18:03 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thabnks every one!!!!
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Pinkdesi101
Yellow Sparx
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#320 Posted: 02:35:29 10/01/2010
PLEASE TYPE IT IN! PLZ LET SPYRO LIVE! PLZ LET KEIRA LIVE TOO!
I'M GOING TO GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write it before i go insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#321 Posted: 13:39:09 10/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll write when i can. Ok?
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Pinkdesi101
Yellow Sparx
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#322 Posted: 17:15:18 10/01/2010
ok.
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#323 Posted: 01:07:59 11/01/2010
Quote: MinM20
no idea, WHAT DOES THAT MEAN???? |
StarFyre
Green Sparx
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#324 Posted: 04:09:27 11/01/2010
cool story. I hope keira will find out what her true destiny is. And, i`m on pins and needles as to where Spyro and Cynder are going. Plz write more.
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#325 Posted: 06:14:04 11/01/2010
you need to keep going! the suspence is killing spyro & cynder! get it?
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#326 Posted: 12:05:54 11/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks ppl!
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MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#327 Posted: 15:17:17 11/01/2010
CynderLover, I mean what path do u walk in life...
(Watch KH:358/2 Riku Ending on Youtube! U'll understand!)
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#328 Posted: 00:51:34 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Umm....What?
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MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#329 Posted: 00:52:30 12/01/2010
SPAM, right?
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM |
Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#330 Posted: 00:56:38 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
All asked what because all i see are some random numbers.
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MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#331 Posted: 00:57:48 12/01/2010
Speak the kings english, plze.
Continue on ur story, also.
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#332 Posted: 00:58:40 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Will soon maybe in half an hour.
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Cynder 19000
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#333 Posted: 01:29:08 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter25
She chared at Spyro, with her eye's closed. Spyro looked at her and thought, it's time to fight! He bucked there horns, then Keira pushed Spyro back with her head, he blasted fire at her. She used shadow twister on him. The crowd gsped, and awed in amazment, no one botherd to help knowing that Spyro has betine Malefor and thought he needed no help...But they were wrong. Hours pasted, Spyro was tired and was wounded baldly. He was ready to pass out. Keira only had miner cuts nad brouses, and was ready to fight for many more hours if she had to....But in her mind she new she didn't have to worry about that. She thought, It's time to use my sintiure move. Then smirked, she closed her eyes looking like she was asleep. Spyro moved closer to her about to attack, but then Keira moved her head up as close to his as she ould and opened her eyes, useing her deadly attack blind eye. "What the hell!?!" Spyro yelled, while moveing back whiping his paws aganst his eyes trying to regain sight. Keira meeleed, him high into the air then watched hit the ground hard. He was weak, he was unable to move yet he breath deep. She looked at him. "Pathedick!" Keira yelled, then stabed his heart getting a chunk of it on her tail. His chest red with blood, her tail red with his blood, she felt great. "What happend!?" Cynder yelled, she and Cody ran to the sight of the battle. Keira snapped out of it. "Im so sorry Cynder.." She started to cry.."I..I didn't mean...I" Keira put her paw over her face trying to hide the tears. "You killed him!!!" Cynder yelled, tears pored down her cheaks. She was about to attack. Cody stopped Cynder from, geting at her. "Cynder, stop you not making it better, let me handle it." Cody whisperd."Keira you can change you destiny still! That stupid book can't predick the future! Look deep into your mind and think clearly!" Keira looked down. Cynder pushed Cody into a tree knocking him out, then attacked Keira. Keira grew, to a huge size. Cynder looked up at her, and Kiera down, then bit Cynder's neck. She could tast the blood in her mouth, then slammed Cynder into a building, killing her instantly.
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#334 Posted: 02:43:44 12/01/2010
NOOOOOOO!!! lol.
i must see what happens next... |
Solister
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#335 Posted: 07:46:07 12/01/2010
OH NO! D8
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#336 Posted: 11:50:23 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll type a chapter tonight.
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Samius
Hunter
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#337 Posted: 14:56:58 12/01/2010
"Pathedick" ?
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MinM20
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#338 Posted: 15:36:42 12/01/2010
RANDOMNESS ALERT RANDOMNESS ALERT
Mali: 'Ur future is sealed, young1. Darkness is all u will become!' Keira: "U'll die to!" *she attacks Mali w/everything, but nothing happens* "WTF!" Mali: 'As long has there is Darkness, Light will igzist. I am Light Master!' *Mali grabs Kiera's face* 'See the error of ur ways, servent of the dark!'
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CinderLover
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#339 Posted: 18:06:39 12/01/2010
Quote: Samius
yeah, me too. that is sad. I mean, you are in the middle of a battle, WHY WOULD SHE BE SLEEPING!!?? walk up to her?? that is just moronic. ![]() |
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#340 Posted: 20:00:41 12/01/2010
Pretty much.. And this new "deadly attack" you call blind eye.. What the hell does it even do?..
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#341 Posted: 21:38:45 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Willl you just read? You'll se as the story goes. And the battle was ment to be like a long time, but im not good a battles.(Dont say anything about not being not good at battle sceens i know im terrible at them)
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IsisStormDragon
Platinum Sparx
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#342 Posted: 22:06:20 12/01/2010
No! Spyro and Cynder!!!
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Solister
Gold Sparx
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#343 Posted: 22:10:50 12/01/2010
Look, just read the story and enjoy it, I'm not a critic and I enjoy reading the story even if there are a few mistakes.
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#344 Posted: 22:11:36 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ha!
Mwhahaha!
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#345 Posted: 22:14:07 12/01/2010
Not everyone's a proffessional story writer, so they are going to make a few mistakes, although from those mistakes they learn not to do them in future. Practise makes perfect, and thats not aimed and anyone in particular :3
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#346 Posted: 22:24:04 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thankyou Chloe.
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Solister
Gold Sparx
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#347 Posted: 22:25:02 12/01/2010
Please continue Cynder 19000
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#348 Posted: 22:28:15 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I might write one tonight, but i have to go soon. So there'll most likely be one tomorrow.
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Solister
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#349 Posted: 22:48:11 12/01/2010
OK, I can wait
![]() I like the way you write, and I definitely agree with Chloe, You can learn from your mistakes as you go along
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Pinkdesi101
Yellow Sparx
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#350 Posted: 02:28:56 13/01/2010
AHHH!!!!! Spyro AND Cynder died! noooooooooooo!
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