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#301 Posted: 17:03:55 02/03/2010
if you can could you plz make it today
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#302 Posted: 17:06:11 02/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Nah, I don't think so, sorry..
I mean, I have nothing else important to do, but I'd rather not start sracthing my head right now.. |
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#303 Posted: 23:29:49 02/03/2010
oh ok but if you feel like it hurry and do it before you change your mind!!
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Pinkdesi101
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#304 Posted: 01:32:37 03/03/2010
![]() jk. but, plz out more soon. ![]()
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Samius
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#305 Posted: 11:38:26 03/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, as I promised..
Chapter 16. Next day after the attack, things were already returning normal. All the fires had been put out, and only few lives were lost.. Spyro and Cynder wandered around the great hall, with Spyro finally feeling a little better, the two were able to focus on the little things in life. They even left the city at one point, and went on to explore the newly united world. They were both curious to see what had happened after Malefor's death.. Cynder focused on Spyro's oddly bright behavior. He was rarely this positive and open, it felt almost feinged, but she couldn't have known the truth.. Still, she was happy with the change, and wished it would always stay that way.. When they returned it was already dark, and the hall was empty. When Spyro and Cynder made their way to their chambers, they overheard the guardians talking in the back room. "Are you saying it was a trap?.." Terrador's voice said. Spyro and Cynder stopped on their tracks, and sneaked a little closer.. "I just want to express my concern about the fact. Either they're stupid or.." They heard Cyril's voice to say. "Enough. All they wanted was to arouse chaos and fear among the people. In that, they succeeded.." Terrador said. "Then why would they have attacked on the most guarded area of the city? They knew the fires would be stopped. It makes no sense.." Cyril said. Spyro and Cynder looked at each other. In the dark, Cynder noticed that Spyro looked very concerned.. "Maybe they did so in purpose, so we would underestimate them.." Terrador said. "No, it seems too obvious.. Maybe they just wanted to conceal their plans with the attack. To make a hole in our defences, or to spy on us.." Cyril said. Spyro and Cynder didn't see the guardians, but they knew that Terrador turned his back at Cyril at this point.. "Wery well, I trust in your judgement. Keep an eye on Spyro and Cynder.." Terrador said. "What will you do?" Cyril's voice asked. "I must tighten the city defences. In any case, whatever it was that they wanted. We must prepare for another attack.." He answered. Spyro and Cynder heard heavy slumbering steps, and knew Terrador left. They gave each other a last look before running back to their chambers.. That's it! More soon!.. |
Cynder 19000
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#306 Posted: 12:08:48 03/03/2010
Great chapter!
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Solister
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#307 Posted: 16:21:09 03/03/2010
Good chapter
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#308 Posted: 18:29:19 03/03/2010
yes, great job. very cool
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shadowdragon5
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#309 Posted: 22:56:46 03/03/2010
great chapter!
im starting 2 miss Ignitus and Volteer. who else shares the feeling? Speakng of Ignitus. isnt he the new chronicler.
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Cynder 19000
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#310 Posted: 22:59:11 03/03/2010
Yes.
And yes.
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Pinkdesi101
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#311 Posted: 00:29:15 04/03/2010
poor volteer. poor ignitus. poor ma... oh, wait, i don't like him.
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supersonic
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#312 Posted: 01:04:08 04/03/2010
yay more more
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#313 Posted: 02:09:08 04/03/2010
O.O getting exiting...
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#314 Posted: 04:02:06 04/03/2010
*claps* Awesome!
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deaver88
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#315 Posted: 09:33:01 04/03/2010
Nice chapter
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Samius
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#316 Posted: 09:42:27 07/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh lawdy, I got my first fan PM today.
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deaver88
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#317 Posted: 10:00:04 07/03/2010
Sounds good
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torok
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#318 Posted: 16:43:21 07/03/2010
ok, interesting...
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#319 Posted: 22:29:23 07/03/2010
ok samius, just keep going with what you think is good. Cant wait for more bro.
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#320 Posted: 00:00:02 08/03/2010
^neither can i. O.O NEED MORE!!!!!!!!
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shadowdragon5
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#321 Posted: 02:12:02 08/03/2010
yeah, just keep doin wat u do.
*off topic* Yay! no school! its finally spring break!
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supersonic
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#322 Posted: 05:14:55 08/03/2010
more me needs more
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Pinkdesi101
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#323 Posted: 03:03:46 10/03/2010
MORE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU!!!!!!!! *falls over and dies*
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#324 Posted: 14:33:38 10/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, okay.. I bet you're already tired of hearing this, but I had schoolwork to do, as today too..
I can't promise more, than that I'll continue when I can. |
supersonic
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#325 Posted: 21:00:52 10/03/2010
mooooore
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Cynder 19000
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#326 Posted: 21:22:55 10/03/2010
Its fine, Samius. Take your time.
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#327 Posted: 22:20:48 10/03/2010
yeah we should understand you have school and other things to get to. Take your time bro.
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Pinkdesi101
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#328 Posted: 00:45:34 11/03/2010
actually, i've heard you say that a lot before, but it hasn't really stopped me from reading more untill now.
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supersonic
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#329 Posted: 23:04:21 11/03/2010
woot me love dis story
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Pinkdesi101
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#330 Posted: 00:21:37 12/03/2010
who dosn't?
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supersonic
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#331 Posted: 00:08:52 13/03/2010
me likes yogurt
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Pinkdesi101
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#332 Posted: 03:44:05 13/03/2010
uh...ok....good for you...
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Samius
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#333 Posted: 07:45:08 13/03/2010 | Topic Creator
It's hard to think of what will happen next, since the greatest antagonist is already dead..
I'll add more tomorrow, If I don't keep my promise, spam my PM inbox as much as you want.. ![]() |
Cynder 19000
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#334 Posted: 13:13:12 13/03/2010
Sweet!
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Pinkdesi101
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#335 Posted: 18:18:24 13/03/2010
yay! this will be fun!
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shadowdragon5
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#336 Posted: 04:03:15 14/03/2010
how bout creating your own antagonist Samius? that would wor rite
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Samius
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#337 Posted: 09:59:34 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
I don't like putting my own characters into my fics. I know it sounds strange, but some people may want to see a story about "Spyro universe" as it was in the games, not "Samius's Spyro universe"..
Anywah, here's more.. Chapter 17. Cynder and Spyro ran towards their chambers and tried to stay quiet. They knew they shouldn't have heard the guardian's conversation.. Once they reached their the hallway where their chambers were, they heard Terrador's steps in the hallway. "How could he be so fast?.." Cynder whispered, "I can't reach my room without his seeing me, he's too close.." "Here, come on.." Spyro whispered, grabbed Cynder's leg and pulled her into his room, witch was still out of Terrador's line of sight. "Pretend you're asleep.." Spyro whispered, and they both laid down on Spyro's bed. They heard the door squeaking, as Terrador checked Cynder's room. Unable to find Cynder in her own room, he then quickly stepped to Spyro's door.. A familiar squeek, the door opened, and Terrador quickly took a peek inside. Seeing the both dragons asleep next to each other, Terrador sneered quietly, and shut the door.. Only when the sound of his steps got quieter, Spyro and Cynder dared to talk again.. "Whew, that was a close call.." Cynder said. "Yeah, he almost got us.." Spyro said, and looked at Cynder. They both started to laugh, it was a funny situation to be in.. "Let's talk more in the morining, okay? I'm kinda tired already.." Spyro stated suddenly. "Oh, ok.." Cynder said, "Should I sleep here with you, in case they come to check on us again?.." "Yeah, good point.." Spyro said, and tried to get some sleep. So did Cynder. They both slept like little babies, as they had had a long day.. Spyro had a dream about Ember. He was standing in a middle of a path, with Ember on the other end, and Cynder on the other.. Spyro noticed Ember walking towards him, and with every step that she became closer, Cynder backed away from him.. Spyro didn't know if he should stay in his place or not, and begged Ember to stop moving.. But she didn't.. She walked all the way towards Spyro and grabbed his paw softly. Then she reached his ear and whispered... "Who the heck is Ember!?" A loud female-voice startled Spyro and woke him up.. He was looking directly at Cynder, who was looking back at him. He had obvioulsy talked in his sleep, and Cynder had heard him.. "Wh.. What?.." Spyro asked. He was still a bit confused about what had happened. "Ahh, nevermind.." Cynder said, "I'm going to get something to eat. Are you coming?.." "It's morning already?.." Spyro asked. "Yeah, genius." Cynder laughed and smiled, "I asked are you coming?.." "Y.. Yeah.. Just hang on a second.." Spyro said. "You wish." Cynder smiled, and walked off the room waving her tail end widely at the same time.. Spyro buried his head deep in to his pillow. "Oh sweet Ancestors.." More someday.. |
torok
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#338 Posted: 12:16:07 14/03/2010
that was good. i bet it was so embarrassing for Spyro.
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Cynder 19000
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#339 Posted: 14:22:17 14/03/2010
Aww man! I wanted to spam you PM inbox!
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shadowdragon5
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#340 Posted: 15:31:55 14/03/2010
good chapter.
seems like spyro caant get a break from getting busted.
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#341 Posted: 17:31:40 14/03/2010
Wow that was a excellent chapter, i loved it, very good. cynder stepped up her flirt appeal now hahaha.
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Solister
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#342 Posted: 17:47:36 14/03/2010
Oh dear, things are going a bit hairy now
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deaver88
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#343 Posted: 20:12:14 14/03/2010
Cynder busted Spyro again!
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Pinkdesi101
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#344 Posted: 20:26:51 14/03/2010
Quote:
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Cynder 19000
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#345 Posted: 20:29:00 14/03/2010
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supersonic
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#346 Posted: 06:26:59 18/03/2010
awesome me neeeeeeeds mooooooore
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#347 Posted: 20:11:55 18/03/2010
that was a great chapter and how did
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Pinkdesi101
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#348 Posted: 22:47:29 18/03/2010
hey, do you have another day that we can spam your inbox?
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shadowdragon5
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#349 Posted: 04:09:47 20/03/2010
i also wonder how terrador moved that fast?
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#350 Posted: 08:16:12 20/03/2010 | Topic Creator
He obviously used the back-door..
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