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I thought they were like 4 or 5 months old though?

no, they're a bit older than that. anyway, i have more.

Inferno sat quietly while he waited for Goldheart to try to help his dad. Goldheart took a deep breath, and looked at his dad. he opened his mouth, took a deep breath, but nothing happened. he tried again, but still nothing happened.
"try it one more time." Inferno said, calmly.
"ok..." Goldheart muttered. Goldheart closed his eyes, and took a deep breath. then he opened his mouth, took yet another deep breath, and then suddenly breathed out a white cone breath. then Goldscale slowly started turning back to normal. Goldheart stared in amazement as his dad was returned to normal. "i did it....." he whispered. "i did it!" he then yelled. then he jumped for joy, and started to run around the room. Inferno sat there and watched him, smiling, and eventually broke out laughing at Goldheart's behavior. Goldscale was now fully restored, and looked down at the young dragons. he first looked at Inferno who continued laughing at Goldheart. then he looked at his son, who continued to run around the room, yelling "i did it!" Goldscale then smiled, proudly.
"Goldheart." he said. Goldheart continued running around. "Goldheart." he spoke louder. "Goldheart." he spoke even louder.
"uh, Goldheart, wake up and pay attention, buddy." Inferno chuckled.
"huh?" Goldheart asked as he stopped beside Inferno. Goldscale cleared his throat, and then Goldheart looked at him. "oh, sorry..." he muttered. Goldscale chuckled lightly.
"don't be. Goldheart, you make me proud. without me teaching you, you learned to use a new ability to free me. you had every right to celebrate." he smiled. Goldheart smiled, and then jumped for joy. then Inferno chuckled. "now, it is time to be serious." he continued.
"yeah, we need to find the girls." Inferno said.
"right. ok. i'm calm now." Goldheart said.
"good. now, if i am no longer needed, i may return to my temple. the two of you will go find the girls. once you do, Goldheart, i want you to try teleporting them to the temple. can you do that?" he asked. Goldheart smiled at this opportunity.
"yeah!" he said, excitedly.
"good. then i will go. if you can't reach the temple, then go to the girls' home. i will meet you there if nessecery."
"don't worry, Dad, we'll be fine." Goldheart assured him.
"very well then. goodbye for now." he said. then witha flash of light, he was gone.
"ok then. now, lets go find the girls." Inferno said.
"right!" Goldheart replied. then they rushed back down the hallway.

wow nice cant wait for more. love the way goldheart tried to free his dad and did. haha he was very excited.

Artica slowly walked down the hallway alone. her eyes were fixed on the ground, and she thought about what Flare had said.
"no, she can't be right.........i don't care about Inferno more than my own family.......that's crazy.........i don't even like him........i mean, he's ok as a friend, but not......no, never..........that wouldn't happen..........and why would she care anyway.........? i mean, just because she met him first doesn't mean shes the only one who can hang out with him.........i mean.......she's just.......crazy.......yeah, that's what it is........Flare's just a little wacko right now..........i'll just wait for her to calm down, and she'll forget all about it.........yeah.......i bet she was joiking the whole time.........i mean, why would she think i like Inferno.......? i mean, isn't that just crazy.........? me.........? like inferno........? it's crazy........why would i like him........?" Artica said to herself as she walked down the hallway. ".......Flare's just wierd.........there's no way i like--"
"Artica?!" a young male voice called. Artica stopped, and looked around.
"is that.........? no..........it can't be...........it's hard to find anyone or anything is this freaking maze.........."
"Artica?! Flare?!" the voice called again. Artica looked around more.
"i don't...........see anyone...........hehe.........it must be a figment of my imagination...........yeah, that's what it is.........all this talk of Inferno is driving me crazy.........there's no one here........."
"Artica?!" the voice called once more.
"but that does sound an awful lot like.............no..........it can't be..........how would he find me here..........?"
"Artica?!" the voice grew louder.
"it sounds..........like it's getting...........closer..........it could..........no.........maybe........no, it can't........it can't be........can it......?" she asked, hopefully. she continued looking around, wondering where the voice was coming from.
"Artica?! Flare?!" the voice called as it grew even louder.
"this is crazy.........i'm going crazy.........this place is messing with me......there's no way it could possibly be......."
"Artica!" the vocie exclaimed. it sounded like it came from behind her. Artica slowly turned around, and then she saw a young, male fire dragon. Artica's eyes widened, and her lips formed into a smile.
"Inferno!" she squeled, happily. then before she knew it, she was racing towards him. she then chuckled lightly, as she leaped into the air, and tackled him playfully. she pinned him to the ground, smiling. Inferno looked somewhat confused, but smiled.
"hey, Artica. uh, why are you......?" he started to say.
"huh?" Artica realized she was sitting on top of him. "oh, uh...sorry...." she said as she got off. he got up, and looked at her.
"hey, were you......happy to see me...?" he asked.
"what? no! of course not." Artica said, quickly. "you see, i w--was, um.......i thought something was behind me.......you know, like one of Anyanca's........m--minons.......so, i ran.....and tackled you......you know, you're lucky i realized it was you, because i would have......attacked......viciously......you know, because i thought......you were something else.......i--i wasn't......happy.......to see you......no, i was......protecting myself......." she lied. Inferno chuckled lightly.
"right." he smiled.
"what are you smiling at? i just told you that i wasn't happy to see you..."
"well, i'm happy to see you. i was worried that you might be in trouble."
"aw, you were worried about me?" Artica asked, cracking a smile. "i mean, uh, i don't care......or anything......i mean, i don't need your help......i can take care of myself........" she said. ".......so, you were really worried about me?" she asked. Inferno chuckled lightly.
"yeah, i was." he smiled. Artica smiled, and then looked away.
"hey, Inferno, try running a little slower, will you.......?" said a tired male voice. then Inferno turned around to see Goldheart collapse on the ground.
"oh, sorry. i was, uh, in a hurry..." Inferno said. Artica looked at Goldheart, and chuckeld lightly.
"you ok?" she asked.
"yeah, i'll be fine......after i rest a bit....." he muttered. Inferno looked at Artica.
"so, uh, where's Flare?" he asked.
"well.....um....." Artica muttered.
"what? where is she? is she ok?"
"well......you see.......we kinda had a fight.......and she kinda ran off without me......."
"then we better find her." he said. he turned to Goldheart. "hey, can you get up? we need to find Flare."
"just give me a moment......" he muttered. then Goldheart got up, and walked over to them. ".......well, i guess i got some energy left.....where'd Flare run off to...?"
"down the hallway, to find my parents. she said she would find them and help them."
"well, we don't have time for that. we need to find her, and get out of here." Inferno said.
"right.......let's go......!" Goldheart muttered.
"alright then, lets hurry." Artica said. then she raced down the hallway with the guys right behind her.

Oh Inferno and Artica are so cute! *girly giggle*

the trio ran down the hallway, hoping to find Flare soon.
"Flare?!" they hollered as they ran. "Flare?! where are you?!" they all yelled. they continued to call out her name as they raced down the hallway. then they heard a female screem.
"Flare!" Artica cried out.
"we're coming!" Inferno yelled. then they ran even faster. they then came to a dead end in the hallway. they stopped, and looked around. then they heard more screeming.
"we have to hurry!" Artica said.
"but where? how? we're at a dead end!" Goldheart said. then Inferno faced the wall.
"we won't be for long!" he said. then he took a deep breath, and breathed out scorching hot flames. Artica and Goldheart waited anxiously as the fire started to burn through the wall. then the fire burned all the way through.
"you did it, Inferno!" Artica cheered.
"now, lets go!" he said. then they rushed through the hole. they continued running down the hallway. then they came to a door. "it's locked!" Inferno said.
"what now?" Goldheart asked.
"my turn! move!" Artica said. the guys stepped to the side, and Artica approached the door. she then froze it with ice. then she grunted as she whirled around, and hit it with her tail. the door shattered to a million pieces, and the group continued running. they soon came to another dead end. though this wall appeared to be heavily cracked.
"another dead end! what now?!" Goldheart asked as they ran towards it.
"we ram it!" Artica said.
"what?!"
"we ram the wall with our horns! it'll break!"
"how do you know for sure?!"
"look, there's cracks in the wall. she's right, it will break. i say we do it!" Inferno said.
"ok, ready?" she asked.
"uh, not really..." Goldheart muttered.
"ok, now!" Artica yelled. then they all roared as they ran faster. they lowered their heads, and ramned the wall with thier horns. the wall crumbled to pieces, and they kept going. they then found themselves in a large room. then they haulted to a stop. there in the room, they saw a small red dragoness surrounded by angry dreadwings. "Flare!" Artica yelled. then the dreadwings turned towards them all at once.
"uh oh.....nice going, Artica......you got thier attention......now what...?" Goldheart muttered.
"we fight! get ready!" Artica snarled. Inferno growled at the dreadwings. then they screeched at him. Flare, who was covered in wounds and bleeding badly, collapsed to the ground. "Flare!" Artica yelled. then she glared at the dreadwings, and growled. then her eyes glowed blue.
"uh oh....." Goldheart said when he saw her eyes.
"what "uh oh"?" Inferno asked.
"look!" Goldheart pointed to Artica just as she glowed blue all over.
"oh no....." Inferno said when he saw her. just then, Inferno, Goldheart, Flare, and the dreadwings started to glow. "...oh no.......Goldheart, can't you do something?"
"like what?"
"uh, a shield, or something? i don't want to do this again..."
"i don't either..."
"then do something!"
"ok, i'll...try..." he muttered. then he grabbed Inferno, and went over to Flare. then he used a golden-yellow shield around them. then they stopped glowing. "whew..." Goldheart sighed.
"good job..." Inferno sighed. then the dreadwings glowed blue, and started to attack each other viciously. Artica looked at the others.
"you guys ok?" she asked.
"yeah. we're fine, but Flare isn't." Inferno replied. then he looked at Goldheart. "can you get us out of here?" he asked.
"you mean teleport?" he asked.
"yes. we need to get Flare some help. can you do it?"
"i don't know..." he muttered, unsure of himself.
"come on, you told your dad that you could." he said. then Artica walked over to them.
"Goldheart, we need your help. Flare might not make it if we don't hurry." she said. then Goldheart looked at Flare. her red scales were darker now because they were covered in blood. he then looked at Inferno and Artica.
"ok, i'll do it. Artica, i'll need you to stop glowing so i can lower the shield. i'll need full concentration to teleport all of you." he said. Artica nodded.
"ok, i'll try. just hurry." she said. then she concentrated, and soon stopped glowing. then the dreadwings stopped fighting, and looked at them. they screeched angerly. Goldheart lowered his shield, and concentrated on teleporting.
"uh oh..." Inferno said when he saw the dreadwings.
"Goldheart, could you hurry up?!" Artica said just as the dreadwings started to rush over to them.
"i'm trying........." he grunted as he concentrated.
"well, try harder! try faster!" she said as the dreadwings neared them.
"Goldheart, hurry up before they reach us!" Inferno said. the dreadwings got closer. they screeched angerly as they rushed towards them.
"Goldheart, hurry!" Artica said.
"Goldheart, hurry up!" Inferno said. the dreadwings neared them. they screeched angerly, and then leaped into the air. they hovered right above the young dragons, just about to strike.
"Goldheart!" both Artica and Inferno yelled. they closed thier eyes, and hoped for the best. then just as the dreadwings were about to attack, a blinding flash filled the room. the young dragons disappeared, and the dreadwings hit the ground with a thud. they got up, and looked around with confusion. when Artica and Inferno opened thier eyes, they found themselves standing on lush green grass outside Artica and Flare's home. they looked at each other, and then smiled.
"Goldheart, look!" Artica said.
"open your eyes!" Inferno said. then Goldheart opened his eyes, and saw where they were.
"wha......?" he asked in disbelief.
"you did it, Goldheart!" Artica cheered.
"great job!" Inferno added.
"i did it.........i did it!" Goldheart yelled as he jumped for joy. the three of them celebrated for a moment, until they remember how badly injured Flare was.
"we have to hurry!" Artica said.
"Goldheart, can you......?" Inferno started to asked.
"teleport again? no, not again. not so soon. i'm sorry....." he muttered. Artica and Inferno looked at each other with a sad expression. then they looked at Goldheart.
"contact your dad! we need his help!" Artica said.

I like how keep the action and romance in a good balance! I look forward to more!

Goldheart used telepathy to contact his dad. Goldscale came in a moment's notice once he heard about Flare. after he had healed her, and she was feeling better, Goldscale teleported everyone to the elder temple. he led them inside, and all the gold dragons greeted them as they walked in. Goldrune, Goldheart's mother, came out of the library just as the group was walking down the hall. she then decided to join them, and they continued walking. Goldscale led everyone to the vision pool room, and everyone walked inside. Goldscale and Goldrune sat next to each other on one side, and Goldheart sat next to his mom. Flare sat next to Goldheart, and Artica sat next to her. Inferno sat down on the other side of Artica. once everyone was settled in, Goldscale began speaking.
"i am sure you all are wondering why i have brought you here." he began.
"yeah, Dad, what's this about?" Goldheart asked, curiously.
"you will soon see." Goldrune spoke. "go ahead, dear." she said to Goldscale.
"i have brought you all here to discuss not only your individual powers and abilities, but to discuss your enemy."
"powers?" Artica asked, curiously.
"indeed, Artica, now you will get your answers." he replied. Artica smiled. "now, we will begin with a history lesson."
"history?" Flare asked.
"indeed. Anyanca's history. to defeat your enemy you must learn about them."
"what about our powers?" Artica asked, disappointed.
"that will come later." Goldscale answered. Artica frowned. she had been waiting long enough to learn about her new power. "now, to begin. Anyanca is--" then Goldscale was interupted by a knock at the door. "oh, dear. who could that be?"
"i'll get it. go on without me." Goldrune said. then she got up, and answered the door.
"right. now, Anyanca is--"
"dear, you might want to come here for a moment." Goldrune interupted from the doorway.
"excuse me for a moment." Goldscale said to the young dragons. then he got up, and stepped outside with Goldrune. the two of them looked at the male dragon who now stood before them. he had a worried look on his face. "well, what is it? what's wrong?" Goldscale asked.
"sir, it's about Anyanca. i had just recently layed down for a nap, and........i had a vision........" his voice lowered at the end.
"what about? what did you see?" he asked.
"i saw.......him..........she brought him back...............and.....then.......i saw...........the end........" he whispered. then Goldscale's face was filled with horror. Goldrune's face was the same.
"..........when.........? when.........does this happen........?" Goldscale muttered after a moment of silence.
"the night of the full moon..........the end comes then........." he replied.
"that's within a few weeks........!" Goldscale said in fear.
"i know..........what should we do........?" the dragon asked. Goldscale looked away, and thought for a moment. then he glanced at Goldrune, and then looked at the dragon.
"............the prophecy.........." he whispered.
"what, sir?" the dragon asked, confused.
"uh, you're excused. go warn the others, but do so quietly. i do not want an uproar. keep them calm the best you can, i do not want the children to know that now."
"yes, sir." the dragon replied. then he walked away. Goldrune looked at Goldscale.
"but what about the children? certainly they must know.........especially since........"
"i know, Goldrune.........i know...........go.........tell them i'll be in........in a minute.........tell them nothing........not yet........not now........it's too soon........." he whispered. Goldrune nodded. then she walked into the vision pool room. Goldscale hung his head, and sighed. ".........the end is coming.........lets hope.........the prophecy.........is true............one of those children.........is our only hope..........." he whispered.

So many chapters in such quick succesion! Great work so far.

thanks.

word quickly spread of the vision about Anyanca. the gold dragons tried to remain calm, but the vision struck fear in all of them. Goldrune sat in the vision pool room with the kids, waiting for Goldscale. Goldscale sat outside the door, and listened to fearful whisperings of the gold dragons throughout the temple. he then got up, and walked into the library. it was quiet, and filled with books. Goldscale looked all around him, and then walked to the back of the library. he walked up to a part of the wall that was bare. then he placed his paw on the wall, and a secret door opened up. he walked inside, and walked down a long hallway. he soon reached a door. he opened it, and walked inside a medium-sized room. the room was filled with books, and in the middle was a mini vision pool. Goldscale walked over to the far wall, and stopped in front of a bookshelf. he then grabbed a red book off the shelf. he looked at it for a moment.
"...........the prophecy.........." he whispered. then he walked back down the hallway, carrying the book. he left the library, and then walked into the vision pool room, where the others were waiting. they all looked at him. they noticed the book in his claws, and the worried expression on his face. the worried expression soon turned to a serious one as he layed the book down on the ground between him and the vision pool.
"Dad, what's going on?" Goldheart asked, breaking the ice. Goldscale looked at him, and sighed. then he looked at everyone.
"i was hoping this moment would come later rather than sooner, but fate had a diffrent idea. things have changed for the worse, and i am afraid i have very little time to prepare you all for what is to come. i wanted to keep you in the dark for as long as i can. i did not plan for you to know of this until it was time. but the time has come, and you're still not ready to face it."
"what are you talking about?" Flare asked. Goldscale looked down at the book. he closed his eyes for a moment, and then looked at them.
"the prophecy." he answered. the young dragons looked confused.
"the prophecy?" they all asked at once.
"indeed." Goldscale nodded. then he picked up the book. "this prophecy tells of the one who is to defeat Anyanca."
"and you think it's one of us?" Artica asked.
"not think, know." he answered. "i know for sure it is one of you. no one else fits the prophecy."
"well, what does it say?" Inferno asked.
"it tells of a young dragoness with the power to defeat Anyanca."
"dragoness? then that means it's me or Artica." Flare said.
"yes, that is true. however, i was certain that Inferno and Goldheart would want to help in some way."
"of course." Inferno said.
"we want to help." Goldheart added.
"so, about this power......." Artica started to say.
"this power is unlike any other. and it varies for each dragon that has it." he said.
"what is it?" Flare asked.
"it is called Empathy."
"Empathy?" the girls asked.
"indeed. Empathy is a element that uses emotions to unleash great power."
"emotions?" Artica asked.
"yes. when a dragon with Empathy feels a strong emotion, they begin to glow. they feel a surge of power fill thier body, and then they unleash it in a powerful fury."
"but when i glowed, everyone else glows around me, and they begin to fight each other." Artica said, confused.
"that is because there are diffrent types of Empathy. yours is called Ice Empathy."
"Ice Empathy? what's that?"
"Ice Empathy is when the dragon can not feel the strong emotion, neither can they access it, and use it to unleash a fury. instead, when they glow, everyone else glows around them, feeling this strong emotion, then they unelash it on each other. since the Ice Empath is unable to feel these strong emotions, then they must use others to unleash it's power."
"oh..." Artica said, quietly. she lowered her head, and pondered the fact that she could not feel strong emotions.
"what about me?" Flare asked.
"you have not proven yourself to be an Empath, so i do not know what kind you would be."
"oh, i see..." Flare muttered, dissappointed.
"so, an Empath has the power to defeat Anyanca?" Inferno asked, curiously.
"yes, according to the prophecy." Goldscale answered.
"how? how does that work? i mean, Artica's power won't work if she's alone. will it?" he asked.
"Artica's power will find a way to work, and there are other types of Empathy that may be more effective in a battle against her."
"oh. but how will we know what works the best? and what if Flare isn't an Empath? what do we do then?"
"i am not sure. you see, young dragon, there has not been an Empath dragon before, so i do not know much about them."
"well, what about that book? what does it tell us?" Goldheart asked.
"the book only tells us of the prophecy. nothing else will be written until fate reveals itself."
"then what do we do until then?" Inferno asked.
"we prepare ourselves for the worst. i can train you to control the powers that you have. we will start tomorrow. for now, get some rest." Goldscale said.
"okay. good night, Dad. good night, Mom." Goldheart said.
"good night." Goldrune replied.
"come on, guys, i'll find rooms for you." Goldheart said.
"ok. sounds good." Inferno said. then he and the girls followed Goldheart. the girls looked at each on thier way out. each one wondered about the new power they had just learned about. Goldscale sat down with a sigh. Goldrune looked at him.
"it's been a long night. you should get some rest. you look exhausted." she said. Goldscale looked at her.
"i know, but i must prepare the children for what is to come." he said before yawning.
"first you must rest for the night. then you can worry about the children."
"i suppose you're right." he yawned. then he and Goldrune left the room.

yeah im glad you kept this going great chapters.

the next morning, Goldscale gathered the kids, and led them to the vision pool room. the prohecy book still lay on the floor, and Goldscale sat down in front of it. the kids sat down on the other side, and looked at Goldscale.
"now, we will begin with a history lesson." he spoke. "look into the vision pool..." he said. then the four young dragons peered into the pool, and a clear picture began to form. they saw a great battle. mighty dragon warriors faced each other on a field of green that would soon be turned red with blood. one army consisted of many diffrent colored dragons. at the head of the army was a male gold dragon who looked much like Goldscale. at his right were a black male dragon and a dark red female dragon. at his left were a red female dragon and a blue male dragon. the other army consisted of pure black dragons, each one with an evil grin on thier face. at the head were two jet black dragons. one female, and the other male. the male was very large and muscular. he had six large horns, large wings with long, sharp claws at the end, and his claws were twice as long and sharp as a normal dragon. his tail was long and the tail-end was shaped like a huge blade. he had blood red eyes, horns, belly, and inside wings.
"the female looks like Anyanca!" Flare cried out.
"yeah, except she looks a lot younger." Artica added.
"and the gold dragon looks like you, Goldscale." Inferno said.
"that is my father, Goldhorn." Goldscale said.
"who are the dragons next to him?" Goldheart asked. Goldheart looked at the girls, and smiled.
"those are your grandparents. the ones on the right are Blackrang's parents. their names are Blackfury and Phobia. the ones one the left are Soulwing's parents. thier names are Fireheart and Frostbite. each one only had one element, but they were skilled warriors." he said. the girls looked at the vision, and gazed at thier grandparents. the guys looked back down at the vision just as all the dragons roared a battlecry. then the mass of dragons charged at each other, and the battle began. dragons ripped each other to shreds, tearing at each others' bodies. blood spilled onto the ground, and the grass became stained. as the blood bath raged on, many lives were lost. lifeless bodies collapsed to the ground, covered in blood and wounds. the war leaders moved towards each other, attacking anything that stood in thier way. as they neared each other, thier armies tore at each other. more blood continued to spill, and the body count rose dramatically. blood splattered everywhere, and dead bodies surrounded the war leaders as they faced each other. with a mighty roar, they fought viciously, showing each other no mercy. the battle raged on, more lives were lost as the stench of death filled the air. Anyanca and Xerxes fought with anger in thier eyes and hatred in thier hearts. fueled by desire for destruction, they lashed out against thier foes, attacking them viciously. Goldhorn and the others were mortally wounded. they collapsed to the ground, feeling to weak to continue the fight. then with a loud roar, Xerxes made the finishing blow. he murdered Blackfury, and then quickly did the same to Phobia. Anyanca roared loudly, then made the finishing blows to Fireheart and Frostbite. then they each looked around the battle field. they saw the deaths of many dragons, and smelled the stench of thier corpses. blood of other dragons covered thier bodies. then they each roared before turning to Goldhorn. Anyanca growled, and neared Goldhorn. then many dragons tackled her, and began to attack her viciously. then Xerxes grabbed Goldhorn by the neck. he stared into his eyes, and grinned evily. then his claw clutched Goldhorn's chest.
"this is the end. you have lost." Xerxes spoke in a sly voice. then his claws dug into Goldhorn's chest. Goldhorn groaned in pain, and then using his last bit of strenght he yelled,
"NOW!" then a female gold dragon appeared behind Xerxes, and began to chant. Xerxes glanced behind him, and then glared at Goldhorn.
"your life ends now!" he growled. then he cut open Goldhorn's chest with his claw. then he pulled out his still beating heart, and crushed it in his grasp. then he dropped the liefless body, and watched it collapse to the blood-covered ground. then Xerxes whirled around to face the female who continued to chant. he approached her, and raised his claw to attack. then just before he struck her, she finished chanting. Xerxes suddenly began to glow black. then dark dragon spirits rose up from the ground, and surrounded him. the female backed away as he roared in terror. Anyanca looked up to see her brother's soul stripped of his body. then his soul was carried away by the spirits, leaving his body behind.
"NO!" she yelled in fear.
"destroy the body!" the female gold dragon ordered. then many dragons ran up to the body, and began to tear it shreds. they then burned the body, and nothing remained but a pile of ash. then the dragons surrounded the fearful Anyanca. then knowing she had been defeated, Anyanca dissappeared in cloud of smoke.
the vision then ended, and the young dragons looked at Goldscale. a fearful look appeared on thier faces as they sat in silence.

Very gory! I like it perhaps you could space the chapters out a bit? It is a wall of text in parts and kinda makes it hard to read I think. Either way I still think this Fan fiction is great.

thanks. the thing is though, i write my stories on a Word document, and it looks spaced out there. oh well, i'll space it out.

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thanks. the thing is though, i write my stories on a Word document, and it looks spaced out there. oh well, i'll space it out.

Same here except my stuff is on Notepad.(They are not very different I think). I also have to manually space it all out and watch for spelling errors.

yeah. anyway, i have more.

"that was............gruesome!" Flare muttered.

"yes, indeed. i am sorry you had to see such a thing. however, it was the only way to reveal the dark battle that took place that day." Goldscale said.

"what happened...........i mean..........i don't understand..........." Artica muttered. "............where did she............?"

"Anyanca teleported herself to safety. no one saw or heard from her after that day. though she was still alive we were certain she was beaten, and too cowardly to face us then. however, we were wrong. during that time she had risen an army, hired sentinels, and after years of careful planning, she was able to reincarnate her brother, Xerxes."

"but how? we saw him being taken away by spirits. how did she bring him back?" Inferno asked.

"only through powerful black magic was she able to bring back his soul. however, his body had been destroyed, so he is not fully revived."

"then where is he? what did she do with him?" Goldheart asked.

"we believe she has place in the mountain somewhere with the proper equipment that is able to contain his soul until she can find a body for him. we are not entirely sure where or what, but we know his soul has been freed."

"what happens if she finds a body for him?" Artica asked.

"first, she must find a body that is capable of containing him. then, once he is fully revived, they will go about finishing the plan they started together."

"and what would that be exactly...?" Flare asked.

"the end of the world..." Goldscale muttered. the young dragons then looked at each other with a fearful expression. then they looked back at Goldscale.

"and..........you want us to...........stop them.......?" Flare asked.

"yes." Goldscale answered. "prophecy says that only an Empath can stop them. only back then did they manage to contain them, and keep them from executing thier plan. even then Anyanca escaped, and has now freed her brother. if she fully revives him, then we will be back where we started years ago. we do not want that to happen. we can not afford to have another war with them. Anyanca has risen a new army, and is prepared for battle. however, we have not been preparing for a war. we are not ready to face them. you, however, with proper training, may be able to stop them."

"so, basically, if Anyanca revives her brother, they'll try to end the world, and we're the only ones who can stop them?" Artica asked.

"precisely." Goldscale replied.

"oh boy. no pressure there." Artica muttered. Flare, Inferno, and Goldheart all looked worried and nervous at the thought of them being the only hope of stopping Anyanca and Xerxes.

I think that looks much nicer! Good chapter.

thanks.

Anyanca was in a pitch black room. she stood in the center, looking at the darkness in front of her.
"what now?! roared a male voice.

"Xerces, calm yourself. it is only me."

"Anyanca, you have failed me!" he roared.

"not yet, brother. the plan can still work."

"the kids are still alive!"

"yes, i know. a minor fault in the plan."

"a minor fault?! the kids are alive! the sentinels are dead! you have failed!"

"mistakes have been made, but i have not failed entirely. Totem still lives."

"bah! Totem is a statue! even if we choose to revive him, he alone can not help us now! Anya, if you don't get rid of those kids, and get me a body, then the plan will fail! do you understand?!"

"i understand clearly, brother. the kids will be dealt with, even if i must do it personally."

"good. then what about the body?"

"i have found two. though, one of them you may dispise."

"then bring me the other."

"though, there is a slight problem."

"what did you screw up now?"

"the bodies......the dragons are......alive..."

"WHAT?!" he roared.

"now, Xerxes, calm yourself. i know you wanted them dead, but i just have not found the time to do so. you insisted i deal with the children first."

"and you still failed to kill them! ugh! what good are you, Anya, if all you do is fail!"

"i have not failed entirely. i just may have found the perfect body for our plan."

"hmm.......i'm listening....."

"you see, this dragon is the father of the two girls."

"really......? now this........this could be intresting.........bring him in....."

"i thought you might say that." she said. then she stepped out of them room. she soon returned pushing a large armoured, iron chest. there were chains all over it, and a lock hung on the side. she pushed it to the center of the room. "this......" she chuckled lightly. "...is where i have been keeping him..." she continued.

"hmm.......the chest is locked up tighter than a safe......why lock him up so tight.....?"

"for secrurity, of course. now, would you like to try it out?"

"yes, indeed." he replied. Anyanca smirked. then she unlocked the chest, and opened it up. inside, was the motionless body of a black dragon. there were chains on the inside of the chest to keep the dragon from moving. "hmm....." Xerxes thought as he gazed at the motionless body. "i thought you said he was alive..."

"he is. or at least he was when i locked him up." she chuckled lightly.

"when was this?"

"some time ago. we have not provided any nurishment to him. it is a wonder he would be alive after all this time."

"a slow death.......ah, yes......the chest reeks of death........nicely done, Anyanca........." he chuckled lightly.

"thank you, Xerxes."

"now, you mentioned another body?"

"ah, yes, the girls' mother."

"the mother? you have her here? where?"

"indeed she is here. i locked her up in the dungeoun. she was shackled to the wall, and floor. she was given no nurishment as well. though, she came later, and may still be alive......."

"hmm. yes. well, forget the mother. she is useless to us for now."

"of course. now, do you wish to use this body?"

"yes, indeed. this body will do nicely." he said. then Anyanca stepped inside the chest. she unlocked the chains, and dragged the body out. she pushed the chest aside, and layed the body in front of her. she then sat down, and began to chant. as she chanted, a dark shadoy figure appeared over the body. she continued chanting, and the shadow went into the body. she finished, and looked down at the body. she waited pateintly. the body began to shake, and soon shoke violently. Anyanca took a few steps back, and watched. then the body exploded, and the shadow then went into the darkness. Anyanca followed the shadow, and soon stopped near the far wall. there, attached to the far wall, was a large crystal clear orb that sat on a wooden table. the shadow went into the orb, and then the orb had a black aura around it.

"ugh!" Xerxes groaned. his voice came from the orb. "that is the hundreth body you've brought me! Anya, if you don't bring me a body that can contain me than i will haunt you until your death!" he roared.

"i apoligize, brother, i thought for sure that one would work. do not fret, Xerxes, i will find a body for you. i have the girls' mother, if you wish to try that one."

"bah! a female body for a powerful male? not a chance! bring me a better body!"

"then what do you suggest i do with the mother?"

"just kill her! we have no use for a weak female! which makes me wonder why i keep you around..." he said. Anyanca growled angerly.

"speak like that again, and i will send you back to where you came from. do you understand?" she snarled. Xerxes chuckled lightly.

"relax, Anya. i was merely joking. i'm sure you arn't as weak as she is."

"i suppose that is better." she said, calmly.

"just get another body. and make sure those kids don't interfere with our plans."

"i will see to it that our plan does not fail this time." she said in a sly voice.

Eww evil... I wonder what will happen to Artica and Flare's mother! Good chapter.

thanks. i don't have the next part just yet. i'll have to start writing it.

Roger that! Looking forward to it.

ok, here it is.

Soulwing lay on the floor on the dungeuon cell. there were chains around her ankels that attached to the floor. there were chains around her neck, tail, and wings that attached to the wall. she was unable to move, but it didn't concern her. she was too weak to even lift her head. her eyes were partly closed, and she was breathing heavily. she had been locked up in that cell since her arrival after fighting a dreadwing in the forrest. all she could think about was the safety of her daughters who she had left in a small cave. she wondered if they were still there. she wondered if they were alive. she wondered if they were safe, and if she would ever see them again. then at that moment, a tear ran down her cheek. then there was a loud growl. she groaned as she thought about how nice it would be to sink her teeth into a piece of meat. the more she thought about food, the more her stomach growled. then she tried to get her mind off of eating. she then heard footsteps outside her cell, and wondered who was there. no one had come for her since she was locked up by a male black dragon. the footsteps then stopped outside the door, and soon the door opened. then to Soulwings horror, she saw Anyanca standing in the doorway. with a sly smile on her face, Anyanca approached her. Soulwing would have spoken, or maybe even tried to fight, if she had the strenght to do so. Anyanca walked up to Soulwing, and looked down at her.

"how are you feeling? or are you unable to answer?" she chuckled lightly. Soulwing gave her a mean look, which was all she was able to do. Anyanca smirked.
"i see that i was correct. you are too weak to even speak. how sad, really." she continued. then Soulwing mustered up some energy, and then quietly growled at Anyanca. Anya chuckled lightly.
"do you really think you can scare me or threaten me with such a pathetic growl? your daughters are more frightening." she said. then Soulwing looked surprised, and hopeful.
"oh, you mean you don't know? yes, your precious children are alive. but not for long. you see, i do plan on killing them. and there is nothing you can do about it." she smilled evily. then Soulwing glared at her again. she mustered up some more energy, and growled quietly. she knew she had to do something. she couldn't allow this cruel creature to harm her daughters, but she didn't have the energy or the strenght to fight her. she then decided to try something. she opened her mouth, took a deep breath, but nothing happened. then Anyanca chuckled.
"do you really think you can fight me? i am all powerful, while you can hardly growl." she said with a sly smile. then Soulwing opened her mouth, took a deep breath, and then spit embers into her eyes. Anya groaned in pain. then Soulwing began to crawl towards the door. Anyanca walked over to her, and then pinned her to the ground.
"do you actually think you can get away? so you managed to spit embers into my eyes. it only hurt for a moment. that is not long enough for you to do anything. you are on the brink of death. nothing you can manage to do will save you now. you should have tried harder to escape while you had the strenght to fight. anything you do now will only be a nusence to us, and possibly convince us torture you until you die. so forge about escaping, or living for that matter. you are never leaving here alive." she snarled. Soulwing knew she was right. however, she couldn't give up. her daughters were in danger. they needed her help. if only she could revive herself. then Soulwing put all her strenght in raising her tail. she then barely lifted it. she groaned as she lifted it higher. then she groaned in pain as she quickly lowered her tail, and struck Anyanca's back. Anya groaned, and stepped away from her. Soulwing then put all her energy into moving, and began crawling towards the door. Anya walked up to her, and pinned her down again.
"you will never make it out of here alive!" she growled. Soulwing knew it would take a miracle to make it out alive. then she thought of something.

".....................Blackfang......................can you hear me..............? Blackfang...............if you can..........please...........help me.............i am............in the dungeuon..............the dragoness............she has me trapped.............she's here............please.........i need help..............our daughters.............she plans to.............kill them.............we can't............let that............happen..............please..................help me.............." she said through telepathy. she hoped help would come, but would help make it in time?

"you are as good as dead!" Anyanca growled. then she clawed at Soulwing. Soul groaned in pain. then using her last bit of strenght, she turned her head around, and shot an ice shard at Anyanca's face. part of her face froze, and she backed away. Soulwing then crawled to the doorway, and barely made it out of the cell. she managed to close the door, and lock it shut before losing conscienceness.

haha Anyanca got owned. Good chapter.

thanks.

"Soulwing, can you hear me? Soul? Soulwing? wake up. can you hear me? Soulwing? are you alright?"

Soulwing's eyes barely opened at the sound of a male's voice. the voice was faint, and sounded disorted. her vision was blurred, and her head hurt. she was still weak, and could hardly move. she tried to figure out where she was, and who was talking to her.

"Soul? Soulwing? are you alright?" the voice asked. Soul looked up to see a large male dragon. because her vision was blurred, and she couldn't see much more than that.

"is she ok? will she be alright?" a young female voice asked.

"Mom? Mom! are you ok?!" asked another female voice. each one sounded really worried, and a bit scared. then she could see two small figures standing next to the male. one was red, and the other was blue.

"is she going to be ok?" asked a young male voice.

"can you heal her?" asked another young male. then more figures

appeared. they looked like a red dragon, and a small gold dragon. they all sounded worried, but Soulwing could hardly tell who they were. they looked at each other, and talked amongst themselves. thier voices were still disorted, but were beginning to clear up. then Soul's vision began to get better. she looked up at the large male.

"how are you feeling?" he asked her. his voice sounding almost normal now.

"........................Black...........................fang....................?" she muttered, weakly.

"no, dear, i'm afraid he isn't here. i am Goldscale." the male said. his voice was clear now.

"...........................Artica..........................Flare..................." she muttered.

"we're here, Mom." Artica said.

"are you ok?" Flare asked, concerned.

"......................weak..................tired................hungry...................." she muttered.

"Goldheart, get her some food. Inferno, get some water." Goldscale said. then they both ran out of the room. "try to hang in there, Soulwing." he said to her. the boys soon returned. Goldheart carried a piece of meat. Inferno carried a bucket of water. they layed them down by Soulwing, and stepped back.

"here's some food." Artica said, picking up the meat, and putting it in front of her mother's face. Soulwing smelled the fresh meat, and took a bite. she began to chew it, and soon swallowed.

"here's some water too." Flare said, placing the bucket by her. Soulwing used the little bit of strenght she had to raise her head. she placed it over the bucket, and began to lap up the water with her tonuge. they continued to feed her, and give her water.

"can you heal her? she's really weak." Goldheart asked, quietly.

"i am afraid not. she needs nurishment." Goldscale replied. after Soulwing finished the meat and water, everyone left the room. Soulwing quickly fell
asleep, and layed there motionless. Goldscale quietly walked to the library, but the young dragons stayed outside the door. the girls sat quietly with worried expressions on thier faces. Goldheart sat next to Flare with the same sad expression. Inferno sat next to Artica, and wrapped a wing around her. with a quiet sigh, Artica leaned on him, and closed her eyes. then Inferno kissed her forehead.

Good god you update this stuff fast! I wonder how Soulwing was rescued?

well, i just keep writing more. your question should be answered in this next part.

"is she alright?" Goldrune asked Goldscale as he entered the library.

"she's resting now." he replied.

"hmm, the poor thing. trapped in thier lair for all this time with no food or water, not knowing what happened to her children. though they left her alone, that was torture." she said.

"yes, i know. her daughters are worried sick too. and we have no idea what happened to Blackfang."

"you didn't see him when you went to rescue her?"

"no, he wasn't there. i didn't see anyone there. i only saw Soulwing, collapsed outside the cell."

"the poor dear. good thing you heard her cry for help."

"yes. and of course i rushed there itmmediately. though i do wonder what happened to Blackfang. if he is still alive."

"i doubt the poor thing is still alive. if he was, he would have stopped at nothing to help her."

"as would she, if she could. she would have escaped sooner if she had the chance."

"yes, she must have been worried sick about Flare and Artica. by the way, where are the girls now?"

"sitting outside the door where thier mother sleeps. i doubt they'll leave that spot until she wakes up."

"the poor dears. i was thinking of helping them with their powers today, but that may not be such a good idea."

"perhaps. or maybe i could work with them while you watch over thier mother. maybe then they can get thier minds off of this, and relax a little. they're too young to have to worry about such problems."

"yes, and far too young to care for thier own mother. i'll check on her, and you can watch the children."

"yes, if i can even get them to leave her." he said. then he and Goldrune walked out of the library, and walked down the hallway. they stoppedo utside the door where the children had fallen asleep. Flare and Goldheart lay beside each other, and Artica was leaning on Inferno with his wing wrapped around her.

"children, wake up now." Goldrune said, softly. they all opened thier eyes, and looked at the elders.

"is she awake?" Flare asked, raising her head.

"no, not yet. come. you should get your minds off this." Goldscale said.

"where are we going?" Artica asked.

"well, i can start your training, if you like."

"what about Mom?" Flare asked.

"i'll look after her. you all go do something else." Goldrune said. then the young dragons got up, and followed Goldscale down the hallway. Goldrune opened the door, and walked inside the room.

Wow awesome job cynder09 can't wait to see more and I'm glad their mom still lives

I like what I am reading!

cant wait for more.

thanks guys.

"ugh! i can not believe i was locked inside my own dungeuon!" Anyanca snarled as she paced back and forth in a dark room.

"well, i can. and i don't see why you have to complain to me at your own stupidity." Xerxes said, bluntly.

"it was not ignorance that got me locked up!" she growled at him.

"well, if it wasn't that, than what was it? clumsiness?"

"that weak little brat had determination!"

"and your blaming this hilarious failure on that?"

"this is not funny!"

"no, not at all, not to you. though i'm sure that weak little brat got a kick out of locking you up." he chuckled lightly.

"oh, go ahead and laugh, Xerxes! and i will make sure you never get fully revived!"

"well, there's no reason to take this out on me. i'm not the one that got you locked up. remember who the enemy is, Anya."

"i know very well who the enemy is! and she will surely perish for this!"

"ah, sweet revenge. but over this? seems quite childish, don't you think?"

"i did not ask for your opinion!" she snapped.

"calm yourself, Anyanca. there's no need to get so upset over this. we will get back at her later. for right now we need to focus on the plan, and getting rid of the children."

"yes. right. of course. i am calm." she said.

"good. now get me a body. and make it a good one."

"the last one was good until you destoryed it."

"well, it isn't my fault that the body couldn't contain me. i'm not the one who got it."

"well, neither am i. as you recall, it was your idea to send the dreadwings and dragons to the temple."

"to kill the children. i didn't say anything about prisoners."

"well, you are the one who wanted a body."

"well, i can't exactly go out in an orb, now can i?"

"would you rather be spending all eternity in torment?"

"no. i never said that. look, just get me a body. kill the kids. it's not hard. they're just kids."

"well, if it is so easy, then you do it."

"i'd love to. oh, i would just love to tear them to shreds, but i'm sort of lacking a body here!"

"then i will do it for you. i will personally make sure the job is done." she grinned evily.

Yeah more chapters. Glad your back cynder09.

About time we get new chapters! I love your work and the wait is torture.

I liked that chapter and I also found some of it rather funny.

thanks. yeah, sorry that it sometimes takes a while for me to post more. i get busy with other things.

we understand same here.

ok, time for more.

"Goldscale, what are we doing out here?" Artica asked. her voice was softer than usual. where her voice usually sounded sarcastic and a bit bored, it now sounded a bit sad. Inferno looked at her, and he could tell that her eyes were softer. he figured that having Soulwing back and seeing how weak she was, really effected Artica.

"today, young dragons, i will train you in the ancient ways." Goldscale replied as he faced them. they stood outside the temple in what looked like a plaza. it didn't seem like the place for training. it looked more like a place for relaxation.

"we're training today?" Artica asked. she sounded a bit unhappy about it, as if she would rather be doing something else.

"can't we do this another time?" Flare asked, her voice sounding the same as Artica's. Inferno and Goldheart shared a glance, and then looked at the girls. at first, they were surprised. even Goldscale looked surprised. then they realized that the girls had rather be inside caring for thier mother then outside training. they didn't look surprised then.

"Artica, Flare, your mother will be fine." Goldscale said in a soft, sweet voice. "you do not have to worry. Goldrune will take good care of her. now, surely you must be even a tad intrested in training?" he asked them. the girls shared a glance, and then looked back at him.

"what if she wakes up, and wants to see us?" Artica asked.

"yeah, what if she wants us by her side while she heals?" Flare added.

"then you are free to visit her, but while she is resting, i think we could do some training." Goldscale replied. though the girls would have wanted to train before, and were a bit intrested now, they were not in the mood for it.

"may i make a sugestion?" Inferno asked. everyone turned to look at him.

"what is it you had in mind, young dragon?" Goldscale asked, curiously.

"well, if Soulwing is up to it, maybe she could come out here with us. she could rest, the girls could be near her, and she could watch us train for entertainment. everyone wins." he said.

"hmmm......." Goldscale thought. "what a fine idea." he smiled. then he turned to Goldheart. "son, go to your mother, and tell her to bring Soulwing out here." he said.

"yes, sir!" Goldheart replied with a smile. then he ran inside.

"that's a great idea." Flare said, smiling.

"yes, it is." Artica smiled. then she went over to Inferno, and kissed him gently on the cheek. "thank you." she said, softly. Inferno smiled as his cheeks began getting redder.

Aww that is cute!

thats very nice of inferno. hehe getting some attention from artica lol

yeah. ok, next part coming up.

Goldheart soon returned to the plaza with his mother and Soulwing, who was now able to walk. she walked slowly and carefully, and her legs shoke as she walked. she had a determined look on her face, and she held her head high. though she appeared weak, the look on her face made you believe otherwise. Soulwing felt stronger than she was, and she showed it. Artica and Flare gasped, and then smiled when they saw thier mother. then out of shear joy they ran up and hugged her. then Soulwing's look of determination quickly faded, and was replaced by a smile, followed by a tear of joy. she bent down, and hugged her daughters, and they stayed that way for a moment. everyone else around them smiled as they looked at the heartwarming scene. the world seemed to stop for a moment, and a hug that only lasted a few minutes felt like it lasted forever. a gentle breeze brushed up against thier bodies, and everyone felt happy, calm, and at peace. however, the peaceful moment would not last long as the gentle breeze soon changed to a harsh wind. Artica and Flare took a step back from thier mother, and looked up at the sky. Soulwing looked up as well just as the sky began to turn dark. the harsh winds became harsher as a mighty roar could be heard in the distance. everyone looked up, wondering where this roar came from. then a figure appeared in the distant sky. as it drew closer, it became clear that it was a female dragon.

"Anyanca!" Soulwing growled with anger in her voice. the female flew closer, and has she neared the temple, she let out a mighty roar. then millons of figures appeared around her. as the crowd looked closer, they could see that the many figures around the female were dragons and dreadwings. then with an evil laugh, the female spoke.

"you escaped us once, but not again! this time, i will make sure that you all die by my claws! cries of terror will be heard for miles, bodies will be torn to shreds, blood will be spilled, lives will be lost, and the stench of death will fill the air. today you all will take your last breath, and i will enjoy every second that someone's life slipped through my claws. prepare to die!" Anyanca roared in a demonic voice. then she charged at the temple with the army of dragons and dreadwings behind her. the army roared and screeched as they neared the temple, ready to begin the blood bath. the crowd only had a moment before the army reached them, claws and talons ready to rip them to shreds. within that moment, Soulwing felt a surge of power and anger course through her body. she spread her wings, and with a mighty roar, she took off towards the army, heading straight for Anyanca.

"Mom, no!" Flare cried out in fear. but her voice sounded like a whisper as Soulwing neared the massive army.

"Goldrune, get the children out of here!" Goldscale yelled at the top of his lungs. without hesitation, Goldrune grabbed her son, Inferno, and the girls as quickly as possible. then with a flap of her wings, she was in the air, flying as far as she could. then Goldscale threw his head back, and let out a mighty roar that filled the skies, and could be heard for miles. then he began to glow a bright golden-yellow as battle armor began to magically appear on his body. glod-platted armor covered his body from head to tail. there was a large, sharp horn on the helmet that pointed forwards. then Goldscale held out his paw, and a large broad sword appeared. the handle was pure gold, and the blade was sharp enough to cut through steel. then he raised his sword, and roared again. then at that moment, hundreds of gold dragons appeared by his side, each one with armor much like his, and holding a sword like his own. then Goldscale roared as he pointed his sword towards Anyanca's army. then the gold dragons roared as they took the the skies, and charged at the enemy. the enemy roared angerly, and flew faster. Anyanca glared at them, and roared.

"forget about them! the children must die!" though her army refused to listen. they charged at the gold dragons, ready for battle. the two armies clashed, and a great battle broke out. Anyanca growled, and then turned her gaze towards the fleeing Goldrune with the children in her clutches. Anyanca growled, and then raced towards them, leaving the sounds of the battle behind her. Soulwing was ripping a dreading to shreds when her attention was directed at Anyanca. she saw her fly towards Goldrune, and she could she the look of hatred on her face. Soulwing glanced at the dreadwing in her clutches, and then slit it's throat, ending it's life. she then dropped the lifeless body to the ground before racing after Anyanca.

Those dragons liked to roar dont they? Also where did all those golddragons come from?

Good chapter nonetheless.

yeah, they like to roar. the gold dragons can be found in numerous places throughout the temple. when they heard thier elder roar, they came to join the fight.

nice chapter this is going to get good.

Goldrune flew at top speed to protect the children. Anyanca was close behind her, and getting closer. she flew at top speed, and was now directly above Goldrune. she was just about to strike, when someone grabbed her by the tail, and swung her around. they let og of her tail, sending Anyanca flying off in the distance. Anya flapped her wings to stop herself, and looked at who had grabbed her. her eyes widened in surprise.
"Soulwing!" she snarled. Soul growled angerly, and then lowered her head. then she charged at Anyanca. Anya growled, and did the same. thier horns hit with a loud clash. they growled angerly as they struggled to push the other back. then Anya reached out a claw, and slashed at Soulwing' neck. she groaned in pain, and backed away. then Anyanca spit acid in her eyes. Soul roared in pain. she opened her eyes to look at Anyanca, but couldn't see anything. then Anya grabbed her by the neck. "you think you can defeat me? you may have been able to escape from me once, but that will not happen again. at first, i believed you were too pathetic to kill, but, alas, you proved me wrong. you will be happy to know that i have decided to kill you. just like i killed your beloved." she said in a cold, sly voice. Soulwing felt her heart sink as Anyanca mentioned the death of Blackfang.
"no..." she said so soft that her voice was nearly inaudible.
"yes." Anyanca chuckled lightly. "he suffered a slow death. but you will be happy to know that he muttered your name with his last breath. now, what female does not want to hear that her beloved thought of her on his deathbed? now, i wonder, will you think of him as i kill you? will it be his name that you mutter with your last breath? or will you be thinking of your daughters? the ones i will brutally slauter once i get my claws on them. well, there is only one way to find out." she said with an evil grin. then Soulwing could feel a sharp claw touch her neck. "any last words before i end your life?" she asked.
"just......one........" Soulwing muttered.
"yes? what is it? i am dying to know." Anyanca chuckled lightly. then Soulwing grabbed Anyanca's claw, and then placed it on her neck.
"die!" Soulwing growled in anger. then she slashed Anyanca's neck with her own claw. Anyanca groaned, and then backed away. then she chuckled lightly.
"clever." she said. then her wound healed. Soul gasped. "there are many things you do not know about me." she said. then she pulled out a dagger. "say hello to Blackfang for me." she smirked. then she threw dagger, and hit Soulwing in the chest. Soulwing let out a painful cry just as the dagger sliced through her body, and pierced her heart. Anyanca grinned evily as Soulwing's body plummeted to the ground.

nice chapter!!

thanks. but, cynder fan, how come you like my story, but you think Tibs's story is boring?

oh no... im shocked thats all wow great chapter. Poor artica and flare.

thanks. yeah, it's sad. i'll post more soon.

cool and its very sad.

"did you hear that?" Flare asked, looking around.

"hear what?" Artica asked.

"a cry. a painful cry. it sounded awful." she said, sadly.

"a cry? where? who?" Inferno asked.

"i don't know, but it sounded.....it sounded like it came from back there."
she replied, pointing back towards the temple.

"well, that makes sense, but what can we do about it?" Artica asked.

"we can go back and help." Goldheart said.

"no. Goldscale gave me strict orders to keep you children away from there. i'm not risking your lives by going back." Goldrune told them.

"but what about the others? they need our help!" Flare insisted.

"yeah. Mom is back there! what if she needs our help?!" Artica added.

"then Goldscale and the others will help her. we must keep moving. if we are caught, then we'll be in as much trouble as they are, and you all are too young to be involved in such a battle."

"then you leave me no choice!" Artica said, boldly.

"Artica, what are you--" Flare started to ask, but was then interupted. Artica had bit Goldrune's paw, causing her to drop the children. then Artica began rapidly flapping her wings, and took off towards the temple. "Artica! stop!" Flare called, but she kept going. then with a look of determination, Inferno flew after her.

"don't try to stop me!" Artica told him. then he flew beside her.

"i'm not. i'm going with you." he said. Artica looked at him.

"then come on!" she said as she flew faster. Inferno flew beside her as they raced to the temple.

"come on, Flare!" Goldheart said. then he grabbed her paw, and they flew after the others. Goldrune sighed as she watched them fly off into the distance.

"they have guts, and bravery. they have determination. together.......they may just have what it takes.........to make the prophecy come true........" she said, softly. then she flew after them.

Well im not sure how they especially artica is gonna take her mom being killed.

Ohh those were good chapters! Oh and about Cynder Fan. She dislikes me because I told her that her fan fiction named "My Story" was hard to read. You cant understand 10 year olds..