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#301 Posted: 14:45:26 01/05/2010
Nice detail
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#302 Posted: 00:11:37 02/05/2010
Thanks. :D
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#303 Posted: 01:03:25 02/05/2010
Thanks.
That was awesome!
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#304 Posted: 01:06:25 02/05/2010
I just realized I wrote, "Spyro's eyes were filled with filled horror". xD
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#305 Posted: 05:26:47 04/05/2010
Hehe lol.
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#306 Posted: 04:53:56 05/05/2010
XD
Sorry, I'm in too much pain to wright now. I've had two teeth taken out plus I've got braces put in. AND I've got a sprained foot. >.<
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#307 Posted: 16:14:03 05/05/2010
Two teeth? Sprained Foot? Ouch, that's gotta hurt
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#308 Posted: 06:43:00 06/05/2010
It does. And the braces feel like as if I got alot of stuff in between my teeth. It's horrible. >.<
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#309 Posted: 03:45:15 08/05/2010
Oh noes! I'm goanna get braces soon...DX
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#310 Posted: 00:51:31 09/05/2010
But it might be different for you. Everyone is different. Some people think it's bad. Some people don't give a dam.
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#311 Posted: 06:49:28 10/05/2010
Oh, it doesn't take long to get used to. I'm used to it right now. I don't even know it's there! One minuet I thought it was horrible, the next minuet I'm used to it. ;D
Spyro padded out of the clearing and inside the Temple. It looked warm and cozy, with leafs hanging around the walls. Small round windows surrounded the Temple, and red lights flashed from outside. A large statue of Malefor stood in the middle of the Temple. It's fearsome gaze was blank, and it always sent shivers down Spyro's spine. He padded around the statue until he reached the other end. The door flung open automatically, and Spyro ran through it quickly. A small pool stood right infront of him. It sparkled in the moonlight, and Spyro let out a gental sigh. Ignitus, the fire guardian, can see visions through this pool. He wasn't quite sure if he could see visions. Every time he looked into the pool, it always gave him a blank stare, as if it knew he wasn't Ignitus. Sparx flew away from him, fluttering infront of the door to the right. Spyro followed him, and the door opened right away. Spyro padded slowly through the door. All four guardians were sleeping on the ground. They all snored loudly. "Quiet..... We mustn't wake them." Spyro whispered. "What!? I can't hear you over all this snoring!" Sparx yelled loudly, making Spyro flinch. But the guardians didn't raise their heads. Spyro shock his head and walked gently past Terrador, then Cyril, who was muttering in his sleep, then Volteer, who was also muttering in his sleep, then Ignitus, who snored softly. At last, Spyro reached the other side. As the door opened, Spyro rested his gaze gently on all four guardians for a heartbeat before padding away through the exit. It lead him to a small hall way. Mushrooms grew in the corners of the hall way, and bugs buzzed around the lanterns. It didn't take him that long to reach the end of the hall way. The door wouldn't open automatically, so he smashed it down instead. He was outside at last.
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#312 Posted: 09:30:19 10/05/2010
Spyro padded around the clearing, smashing frogweeds that stood in his way. He jumped onto a high ledge, then glided to the next. Infront of him was a bunch of tangled vines. Spyro smashed down the vines using a frogweed, and to his astonishment, he spotted Cynder in the clearing. Spyro quickly walked up to her, and he didn't speak until he got Cynder's full attention.
I must do this right! "Cynder, what are you doing here? It's dangerous." He could hear Sparx fluttering behind him, but he focused his full attention on Cynder. He needed to know what was going on inside her head all theses months. "You shouldn't have followed me here Spyro." Cynder replied. Spyro blinked. He had to follow her! It's dangerous at night. He was about to open his mouth, but Sparx spoke instead. "That's good enough for me. Let's go. See ya! Huh." Sparx yelled, fluttering back to the temple. He stopped when he realize Spyro wasn't following him. Sorry Sparx, but I must do this. "Please, don't make this harder for me then it already is." Cynder's voice seemed to be begging him to leave. He was surprise at how much Cynder wanted him to leave. "I'm just trying to understand...." Spyro couldn't believe what Cynder was saying. She needed help. And he is more then welcome to give it to her. Cynder paused for a heartbeat, but when she spoke, it came out bold and clear. "I'm leaving Spyro. I don't belong here. After all I've done, all I've put you through... I can't stay." So that's it.... Spyro thought. He new this might be what had been troubling Cynder. Spyro knew he doesn't blame Cynder. No one does! He must make sure Cynder knows that, not just so she won't leave, but so she knows he doesn't hate her, no matter what she might say. "Cynder, nobody blames you for what happened." He was surprise at how promising his voice was. But he flinched when Sparx spoke openly. "Huh. I do. Speak for yourself." "Sparx!" Spyro couldn't believe what Sparx was saying. "No, Sparx is right." Cynder replied. What....? "And every day that goes by, I'm reminded of it." Spyro was about to opened his mouth, but Cynder wasn't finished. "Spyro, your place is here, your destiny is here. But mine is somewhere out there for me to find." Cynder bowed her head at the last words. "Cynder, I don't want you to go..." Spyro couldn't think of anything else to say. Please.... Don't do this.... "Goodbye Spyro." Cynder turned and ran of before Spyro could say anymore. He took a step fordward, ready to give chase, but he thought better of it. I can't believe she is gone.... I might never see her again.... After all these months we spent playing together.... She seemed so happy and full of life... I guess she had been hiding this for a long time. I can't believe I didn't notice it! What kind of a purple dragon am I?! Spyro began to shake his head wildly. Sparx flew around to face Spyro, not realizing he was lost in thought. "Now can we finally get some sleep around here? I've been sort of half-sleeping, with one eye open for weeks now... alternating eyes of course... It lessens the strain, but I tell ya, it's taken a toll. Hey, was this twitch always there?" Sparx yapped, twitching his eyes. Spyro didn't hear a word Sparx said. He felt dizzy.... What was wrong with him? "Spyro... You okay, buddy?" Spyro didn't answer. His legs gave up and he collapsed on the ground, and darkness washed over him.
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#313 Posted: 17:21:40 10/05/2010
Well, you're doing better than me when describing the events in a video game, better than what i'm doing in Half Life 2
Good parts
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#314 Posted: 00:36:19 11/05/2010
Err.... Thanks! xD
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#315 Posted: 07:13:11 14/05/2010
Yes, your very good at describing the events in a video game, Cynder_543!
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#316 Posted: 08:12:17 14/05/2010
Thanks, again!
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#317 Posted: 22:01:33 14/05/2010
ZOMG THATS AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING WHEN U CAN !!!!!!
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#318 Posted: 12:09:19 15/05/2010
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Spyro opened his eyes to find himself lying on a large platform. Large cracks covered the platform, making it look like it will split up into large fragments. Spyro got up to his feet, feeling dazed. It took him a couple of minuets to bring back his memory. A faint roar came from far away, but he had to strain his head to hear it. What am I doing here.... Were is Sparx...? I must be dreaming.... Spyro walked carefully towards the edge of the platform. It seemed very high up, and he couldn't see the bottom. He could only see black clouds, that seemed to want to suck him in. "Hello? Is anyone there?" Spyro yelled. If he was brought here.... in a weird way.... there must be a purpose. He wish Sparx was with him. He couldn't stop his tail from shivering, and his mouth dropped open when he heard a voice, loud and clear. "Don't be frightened young one." The voice sounded like an elder looking after a young dragon, who wants it's mother by it's side. "You are not alone..." "Who are you? What is this place?" Spyro blurted out immediately. He bent his head slightly, looking over the cliff once more. What ever this place is, it doesn't look so bright and happy... "I have summoned you here so that you might be warned." The voice came again, this time more clearer then before. Guessing this will turn into a short story, Spyro sat down, making himself comfortable. "The Celestial Moons are counting down and time is running out." Shocked, Spyro stood up quickly and took a couple of steps backwards. Voices started to creep up on him, calling out his name as if he had done something terrible. "Spyro!" "Spyro!" "Spyro!" The voices came from all directions. Spyro lifted a paw, telling the voices to be quiet, but it didn't work. I can't take this! Stop! Please! The voices blasted up his ear drums, and he could no longer hear the faint roaring in the distance. "Make it stop!" Spyro yelled. Suddenly everything went slightly blurring, and turned more of a crimson colour. The rocks in the distance moved more slower then normal, and and it took a lot of effort just to take one step. Things seemed slower then normal... As if he had slowed down time! I want to get out of this dream!
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#319 Posted: 13:25:58 15/05/2010
Good part
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#320 Posted: 13:53:11 15/05/2010
Thanks. :3
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#321 Posted: 22:56:43 15/05/2010
OMG this story is awsome!! i just read all 7 pages!! Keep on going
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#322 Posted: 00:15:43 16/05/2010
Wow, you read all seven pages, and galbatorix read four pages. xD
For now on, I've decided to have a couple of chapters that have Spyro's point of veiw. Just so you know were Spyro is at and what he is doing so you have a good idea were it all takes place in the game.
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#323 Posted: 00:47:22 16/05/2010
CHAPTER 14:
Spyro stared at the rotating platform infront of him. It span around slowly, reviling it's hard spikes every six heartbeats. He could see other large platforms, however, they were beyond his reach. Maybe if I get over to the other side.... Yes! I need to get over there! Waiting until the platform infront of him showed it's soft side, Spyro double jumped and glided until he reached it. The platform was on it's side now, so he had to be quick. Yanking his wings up, Spyro glided to the next large platform, that was about three wing lengths infront of him. He glided down smoothly, and when he landed, he rested his wings on his body. Suddenly, everything turned back to normal in a flash. Crimson turned to dark purple, and the platform behind him twisted and turned twice it's speed. He could sense someone was here... "How did that happen?" Spyro asked, demanding an answer. "The purple dragon can wield many abilities others can not." The voice came. Yeah, I kind of already know that.... "Including time itself." Time..!? Spyro took a couple of steps forward, he wanted to know more. "Learn to master this ability and you will be able to see things almost before they happen." Being able to see things almost before they happen...? I thought I literally slowed it down... "But... use this gift sparingly, only when circumstances demand." Of course I will. You can count on me. "Manipulation of time is not to be done without the utmost care." Spyro just nodded.
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#324 Posted: 09:54:26 16/05/2010
Good chapter
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#325 Posted: 12:40:56 16/05/2010
WARNING: Big part! xD
The voice disappeared in a flash, and Spyro was alone once more. He padded right up to the edge, and a small platform span around viciously in front of him. I will have to use Dragon time to slow it down..... Then I will use it again when I reach the next platform.... Using all the power in his body, Spyro slowed down time in a flash. Everything turned back to a crimson colour, and he could feel the pressure from his wings rising. I am the legendary purple dragon.... I can do anything! If I've gotten this far without fail, I'm sure I can do this. Letting out a deep breath, Spyro jumped, and flapped his wings viciously for a heartbeat. He landed on the platform in front of him. Okay.... Dragon Time... I can feel it disappearing.... I guess I only have a limited amount of time to use it. As quick as a flash, the platform beneath him span like the speed of light. Spyro had to dig his claws into the ground in order to keep him on the platform. I can feel strength flowing back inside of me. I must be able to use Dragon Time again. Waiting until the two platforms meet, Spyro used Dragon Time and jumped onto the next platform. Bringing time back to normal, Spyro jumped down onto a much larger platform. I'm getting used to this already! Taking a deep breath, Spyro padded over to the other side of the platform. Another small platform span around in front of the larger platform. Sighing, Spyro slowed down time using Dragon Time again and jumped onto the platform. This must be a test.... So I can master Dragon Time.... As soon as the dragon time faded away, Spyro brought it back in a couple of heartbeats. A large stick like platform stood in his way. Spyro felt the Dragon Time energy fading away, so he jumped onto the stick like platform swiftly. The stick tilted until he couldn't hold on, so he had to scramble up and rap his arms around the platform. He spotted a very large platform not that far away, and a yellow glow sparkled in the middle. The Dragon Time faded away, so he had to sink his claws into the platform to stop himself from falling. That must be my next destination. Bringing back Dragon Time, Spyro scrambled up the large stick until he reached the top. Wait! I shouldn't have to use dragon time for this.... Snapping out of Dragon Time, Spyro glided down to the large platform. He walked slowly towards the golden light, that shimmered in the moonlight. He stared into it's amber glow. He could feel someone else close by. It's him... He's back. "You seem to have abandoned your true calling." The voice sounded like it came from the golden pool. Spyro tried to gaze down deep inside it, but he couldn't see anything. "It's your destiny to harness the powers of the elements. Yet, you posses not." I have been following my destiny.... I just can't harness them now.... "I haven't been able to use my abilities for some time now." Spyro rasped, talking to the amber pool. Do you know anything about this? "Yes. Right now, your powers lay dormant within you. Lets see if we might not awaken them." Really? That's great! Spyro happily stepped onto the golden pool. The golden light surrounded him, and he could only see gold, yellow and amber. Spyro closed his eyes, ready for the instructions. "Clear your mind Spyro, and feel the fire that flows through your veins" Feel the fire that flows through my veins.... Before Spyro knew it, he could feel a tinny spark of flame deep down. He could feel it's sparkles of light.... It felt like it's trying to break free.... but it's having difficulty. That must be the fire! It feels so warm... "Allow it's heat to consume you, and breath with it." Spyro put his full attention on the fire. He could feel tiny puffs of smoke blowing every five heartbeats. Concentrating hard, Spyro slowed his breathing down to match the fire's sparkling flames. He tried his best to match it perfectly. He breathed in when he felt the smoke puffing out, and he breath out when it puffed out again. "Now, rise up, and release the true firestorm within you!" I must release this fire! It must break free! Spyro raised up, standing on his hind legs. He bushes the fire up with all his might, he hovered into the air, and he opened his eyes for a split second. It's working! Not wanting the fire to die down, Spyro gathered all his energy, and he exploded the fire right out of him. He could feel it's heat consume him, and he tried his best to ignore it. He could hear a loud roar surrounding him, and he only opened his eyes when the heat had vanished slowly. When the strange voice came, it seemed to be laughing proudly. "Excellent Spyro! You're a natural." I can't believe I did it... I released the true firestorm within me... Is my fire more powerful now, or is it the same? I wounder.... "But now that a primal fire rages inside you, show me you have command of it." I'm ready.
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#326 Posted: 13:24:09 16/05/2010
Some very good detail here
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#327 Posted: 06:30:55 19/05/2010
Anyone else?
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#328 Posted: 05:25:28 23/05/2010
Cool! Keep going!
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#329 Posted: 05:31:16 23/05/2010
The next part is going to be hard for me....
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#330 Posted: 05:36:44 23/05/2010
That's alright, just take your time.
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#331 Posted: 06:03:15 23/05/2010
Thanks. It's hard for me because I have to describe the game-play now.... It's very easy to describe cut scenes, but not game-play.
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#332 Posted: 07:11:58 23/05/2010
Feeling the fire burning around his body, Spyro padded through a large, glowing gate. Three small platforms, like a tiny stair case, stood infront of him. Determination surged through him, and he quickly jumped from platform to platform, landing on a much larger one at the end. Four brown statues surrounded the edges of the platform. As he watched, all four statues started to twitch, moving their body and arms. A voice whispered in his ear drums, giving out instructions to him.
Use your fire to toast your enemys. A quick breath is all what's needed. Remember to use your surroundings to your advantage Spyro nodded. As he padded forwards, one of the statues suddenly ran towards him. It's sword swinging at nothingness. Spyro opened his mouth, and a bright flame spilled out and tumbled all over his enemy. It shattered into tiny sparkles of light. I can breath fire again! Spyro thought, toasting the next enemy with his fire breath. As soon as the live statue fell to the ground, the next statue rose and flung itself towards Spyro. He breathed another bunch of fire onto the enemy, sending it tumbling backwards of the edge. One more to go. Spyro padded over to the next statue quickly. He flamed it of the cliff as soon as it began to twitch. Two tiny platforms floated out of nowhere, and formed a bridge, leading to the next set of demons. Spyro jumped onto the first platform, then glided to the next. Earth began to crumble from the previous platform. Taking a deep breath, Spyro jumped onto the large platform, facing the next lot of demons. He heard a voice whipser in his ear drums once more. Spyro, this time, I want you to do a Commit Dash to defeat your foes. It is a very simple move to learn. Force the fire inside you to gather around your horns. Feel it's flames scorch your scales. After you've mastered the flame to scorch around your horns, pretend you're about to charge at your foe. Lower your horns. However, instead of charging, I want you to jump and spin towards your foe. Let your wings carry you through the air.... Once you've mastered this technique, you've truly mastered the fire element.
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#333 Posted: 08:23:24 23/05/2010
Good part
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#334 Posted: 09:03:42 25/05/2010
Anyone else?
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#335 Posted: 12:21:31 31/05/2010
Oh, BTW, I've changed Dawnearth's personality. She is completely different in the remake for the first story. And I think you've already noticed the personality changed from the looks of the prologue...
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#336 Posted: 09:41:41 01/06/2010
Closing his eyes, Spyro forced his energy to run through his horns. It took a while before he could feel the fire burning. Without hesitating, Spyro charged swiftly at the nearest stone demon. He pounced slightly into the air, spreading out his delicate wings. As quick as a flash, he felt his horns pierce hard rock, and the fire around his horns began to fade. Spyro opened his eyes to see his enemy, now specks of dust, swaying in the wind.
I did it! Turning around to face his next weak enemy, Spyro's tiny nostrils flared. Closing his eyes once more, Spyro flapped his orange wings and attacked the stone demon using his powerful Commit Dash. His horns slashed tenderly through the demon's body, turning it into tiny specks of dust. He could feel his body spinning automatically, and he felt a little bit dizzy as soon as he landed. Shaking his head, he faced the next to stone demons, who both came to life at the same time. Once more, he felt a familiar voice whisper slowly in his eardrums. Lets see if you can hit both foes at the same time. Lets try it out, and see what happens, shell we? Oh, I'm sure I can do that. Spyro nodded, facing the two remaining enemies, his nostrils flaring. Controlling his movement, Spyro released the fire through his horns, leaped and span through the air, his wings giving him balance and height. He felt his horns touch a massive amount of weight, and he had to flap his wings to pierce through the hard stone in front of him. Hard stone crumbled violently, and pain hit his horns slowly. But he ignored it. I mastered a new move.... I feel more powerful than before! Head hot with the burning fire, Spyro dash forward towards the edge of the platform. Four platforms raised, forming a bridge to the next large platform further forward. Spyro noticed a flaming portal flickering in the distance. That's were I go next. Spyro jumped and glided onto the platforms, repeating the progress until he reached the next large platform. The burning portal looked fierce, as if it didn't want Spyro to run straight through it. Use your fire to bring life to the torches Spyro heard the voice flicker around him. Nodding, Spyro raised his head and breathed fire on the torch in front of him. He glided to the next torch, burning it with his fire. He charged towards the last torch, flaming it with his fire. A set of platforms roused to a place he least expected. Spyro jumped onto the platforms, reaching the end. He landed inside a tiny bundle of blue light, which teleported him to a different area.
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#337 Posted: 09:54:50 01/06/2010
Good part
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#338 Posted: 10:34:30 01/06/2010
Spyro arrived on a different platform. He was surrounded by nothingness. Red and green crystals suddenly appeared around him. Remembering the purple crystals that gave him strength, Spyro destroyed them both. His tired limbs were brought back to life, and he could feel power surging through him once more. Once more, a set of platforms roused to meet him, leading too a pool filled with sparkling blue light. The determined Spyro flapped his wings, jumping onto one platform after another. At last, he landed into yet another pool of light, which teleported him to a far away platform.
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#339 Posted: 13:50:47 01/06/2010
Good part
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#340 Posted: 03:04:30 05/06/2010
How long do I have to keep this up!? Spyro thought. His nostrils flared as he spotted yet another pair of stone demons surrounding him. He glared at them, waiting for them to strike. He notices a purple crystal standing right in the middle, the moonlight turning its purple shimmer to a dull pink, dappled with a pale silver. He stared questing at it's daring gaze.
Spyro, these are purple crystals brought down from the ancestors. Destroy one, and feel its power flow through your veins. Harness its elements, and let it give you the power needed for a fire fury. I'm ready. Spyro whispered gently. He destroyed the purple crystal using his horns within a heartbeat, its shattered crystals flowing inside him. He could feel the fire burning within him once more. He knew he needed more power to unleash his fury. Excellent, Spyro. Defeat your foes, harness there power, then strike back with a fury. Suddenly, all four demons came charging upon him at once. Spyro instantly released a bright flame to keep them all back. He charged into the demon closest to him, knocking it off its heavy feet. He turned around in time to see a daunting sword slashing violently towards him. Spyro dodged a death blow to the neck, and fired a Comet Dash into its torso. He breathed fire onto the demon who he previously fought, and it soon shattered into specks of purple gems. Spyro absorbed them all, feeling his power return. He knocked yet another demon to its feet with a swift combo, ending it with a sharp Comet Dash. Purple gems spluttered out of the demon, and it faded away within a heartbeat. I faced more powerful enemies! You make a squirrel look strong! Spyro thought. He sharply head butted into the last demon, knocking its sword and shield right out of its hand and off the cliff. He finished it off with a Comet Dash, then felt the purple gems flow through his body. I feel powerful enough.... I'm ready to do the fury. Bring it on! Very well... If you insist... Don't push yourself Spyro. I'm ready. You have to trust me. Another pair of stone demons appeared onto the platform. They looked taller, and stronger. Their armor looked more well made. Bring it. I'm ready when you are. Spyro thought. The demons charged towards him instantly. His instincts told him to charge away, and release the fury from a far away distance, but he shock his head. He had to do this. He can't turn and run now. Closing his eyes, Spyro flapped his wings and hovered into the air. He could feel the fire in his body, and he burst it out like a lit flame. He could hear the swinging of clubs, the swaying of swords, then a sudden crash. His whole body shock, and he landed onto the ground with a loud thud. He forced himself to stand up boldly, but he couldn't control his shaking limbs. You will get used to it. The voice laughed into his eardrums. I hope so.... That felt.... weird... I felt like I was on fire, then my stomach just.... exploded.... Shacking his head, Spyro forced himself to pad towards the edge of the cliff. Jumping onto the next lot of small platforms, he scrambled onto the last platform in sight, landing clumsily onto it's hard surface. It looked like a cave. There was an entrance in the middle. A large, open gate surrounded the outside, and he could just make out a faint glow inside. Alright, it's time to know who you are. Forgetting about his warn out limbs, Spyro padded slowly towards the entrance of the open cave. He could make out puddles of bright silver water covering up holes, and tiny bugs hovered around the tiny puddles. He shivered. The gate looked daunting, and he was reminded of Cynder's castle. Shaking his head, Spyro padded inside. His eyes brightened when he saw how beautiful it was. Dull crimson plants surrounded the walls, swaying softly with the silent wind. Bright glowing swirls of light creeped up the walls all over the cave. A dark pool sparkled peacefully in the middle, it's bright silver and blue sparkles beckoning him to come forward. Spyro took a step forward. He halted when he gazed around the pool. Bright, beautiful patterns surrounded the pool. The patterns were just swirls, repeated. The same patterns that are on the walls. These are the patterns of light. Remember them, as you may have to use it some day. But not now. The pool is beckoning you forward. Do what it says, then gaze deep into it's bright water. Spyro nodded, not daring to lift his eyes off the pool for a heartbeat. He jumped over the glowing pattern, then padded over to meet the pool. He bent his neck over and glanced into the water. Light from the pool reflected on to him, giving his purple scales a shade of deep blue. "You have done well... and now it's time for you to return. But be careful Spyro, the enemy approaches." What! Now? But I have so much questions to ask! "Wait! You haven't told me who you are!" Spyro didn't want to leave without knowing who had been guiding him through this entire dream. He had to know. "You shell know me as the Chronicler. Seek me out." The voice answered. Suddenly, a tree appeared into the pool. A tree...? You're telling me to find this tree? Is that who you are? But he got no answer. He accidentally blinked, and his eyes opened to reveal a golden dragonfly calling out to him repeatedly.
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#341 Posted: 08:02:43 05/06/2010
A very good part, so much detail
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#342 Posted: 01:28:36 06/06/2010
Thanks. :3
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#343 Posted: 04:42:40 06/06/2010
Yeah, that was really good detail. =3
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#344 Posted: 06:44:51 06/06/2010
Shaking his head, Spyro got up. His limbs felt strong again, but his head felt dizzy. He glanced swiftly around the clearing. The strange platforms were gone, all replaced by trees and puddles of fresh water. Sparx was glaring at him questioningly.
I'm back to reality... Something is wrong... I just know it. Facing Sparx, Spyro opened his mouth to say the words. "Something is happening Sparx. I can't explain it." I wish I could... He expected Sparx to not believe him, or stare at him in surprise, or even laugh. But instead, his eyes were full of understanding. "No kidding. While you were all catatonic, this whole place has been hooting and howling. Listen." Sparx answered, hanging his head low a little. Forcing himself not to think, Spyro concentrated on the noises around him. He could hear the swaying of trees.... The gush of wind.... He began to wounder if Sparx was imagining it. But then a loud howl drowned the gushing noises of the forest, followed with a soft whimper. "What is that...?" Spyro whispered softly. But Sparx didn't have enough time to answer him. A large bomb, filled with fire, dropped onto the ground a couple of wing lengths away. It exploded, reviling it's orange and yellow lights. Spyro jumped in surprise, only missing the loud explosion by an inch. Sparx flew into a dragon statue head first before slamming onto the cold ground, but Spyro didn't noticed. "What's happening?" Spyro yelled.
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#345 Posted: 09:13:27 06/06/2010
Good part
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#346 Posted: 11:06:33 09/06/2010
He looked up to see thousands of large beast hovering above, their wings beating hard, yet slowly. The dull moon's shine turned their ragged pelts to a pale brown, with hints of pink. They flung another pare of bombs a wing length and tale length away from Spyro. It exploded into shimmering yellow lights. Spyro blinked as large boulders flew everywhere. The bright light faded away, to reveal the entrance to the temple covered with heavy boulders. Tiny specks of fire popped out from gaps in the boulders, and Spyro knew there was no way of getting back in to the temple that way.
There is only one explanation..... "The Temple is under attack!" Spyro roared. He hope his voice wasn't mixed with panic. "The others are still sleeping, we need to get back!" Sparx just stared at him, as if he couldn't believe a word he was saying. "Are you crazy? You wanna run towards the danger?" Spyro didn't listen. He was too lost in thought to hear the voices around him. Thinking hard, he replied, "We're going to have to find another way in. Come on!" Without waiting for a reply, he padded towards the loud screeches. He heard Sparx mutter a few words under his breath, but he ignored it. There are better things to do than talk his brother into coming with him. He heard Sparx catching up to him, and his fluttering grew louder every heartbeat. Stay close to me Sparx. You don't want a bomb to drop on you, do you? Spyro thought as he jumped over thick vine sticking through the earth. He padded into a large clearing, and he spotted an ape standing on a large ledge in the middle of the clearing. Fire exploded through small piles of wood. Large bats flapped vainly through the air, dropping bombs all over the temple. As Spyro watched, two undersized apes appeared on the high ledge, and death hounds, and more undersized apes, surrounded the ground. The largest ape raised his hand gently above his eyes, spotting the small dragon on the other side of the clearing, and a golden speck with white wings fluttering next to him. "The purple dragon!" The ape growled. It's small green eyes sparkled in the moonlight. Spyro began to wounder if an ape's eye function is just as good as a dragon's. It seems so small.... Spyro was pushed out of his thoughts when Sparx spoke strangely loud. But he wasn't talking to him, he was talking to the largest ape on the ledge. "Hey! Ugly ape guy! Ooh ooh ooh." Turning to Spyro, he added, "Now that we've changed exchanged pleasantries, can we fight?" Spyro didn't answer. He watched as the large ape flung his arms in different directions, an order for attack. The two apes standing next to him threw themselves off the platform and faced Spyro, grunting to each other. Spyro knew they were saying something, but he was too far away to make out the grunting. Sparx spoke again when he least expected. "Or at least you two can fight and I will watch." Not paying attention to him once more, Spyro leaned his head forward and bent his legs a little. He opened his jaws, reviling his white teeth and fangs, showing how fearful he can be. He made sure he showed the anger burning in his eyes, and he felt his shoulders hunching a little, and his wings spread out automatically. He was aware of the apes around him drawing closer, but he didn't care. He was ready to take on every single ape and death hound in the clearing. He did it many times before, and he will do it again.
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#347 Posted: 14:08:19 09/06/2010
Good part
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#348 Posted: 01:59:20 11/06/2010
Next chapter will go back to Ruuko's POV.
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#349 Posted: 05:45:38 12/06/2010
Please continue.
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#350 Posted: 11:33:15 12/06/2010
Ruuko spotted a black dragon, yapping to a purple dragon in the clearing before him, and he couldn’t stop himself from panting. He had ran all the way to the temple, following Bark’s raiding party. He knew he shouldn’t just leave the mountain without anyone but Forest knowing, but he had to do this. He found his sister, and he had to get her back, this could be his only chance. He was about to pad out into the clearing, but he stopped himself. This was the wrong time to reveal himself. He would rather give up his tail blade than fight with the purple dragon now.
He just heard Cynder say her final speech to Spyro before she padded away quickly. He wanted to go out there and confront Cynder, but he knew it was too risky. If the purple dragon found out he is working for Gaul, he could get killed. Shoving a roar down his throat, he quietly followed Cynder. She padded through fern trees, flew over mushrooms, and then at last, she sat down, panting. Ruuko knew they were too far away from Spyro. He wouldn’t hear them talking. "Cynder! Cynder!" Ruuko called out to her softly. The black dragon didn't hear him. She just kept on walking. Biting back a growl, Ruuko called out to her again, this time more loudly. "CYNDER!" This time, the black dragon shock her head. She gazed around the clearing as if she expected a random ape to ambush her any minuet. "I'm over here! Behind the fern tree!" Ruuko growled. He couldn't stop himself from flinching when his sister stared towards him. He knew she couldn't see him, only the fern tree. He wondered how she would react when she spotted him, hiding amongst the ferns. Cynder padded over to the fern tree. She rested her gaze on its branches for a couple of heartbeats before she summoned her courage and padded around it. Ruuko took in a deep breath, ready to face her sister. He lifted his tail, bracing himself in case she attacked. He spotted her head poking out from behind the tree. She gazed at him, locking her eyes with his, then she padded around the fern tree, her tail waving slowly. The moonlight turned her black scales to a light grey. Her teal eyes glittered, but he wasn't sure if they glittered with excitement or fear. Taking in a deep breath, he opened his mouth to speak. But his sister clearly wanted to speak before him. "You.... who are you? And how do you know my name?" She asked. Surprise stabbed Ruuko, and he felt his stomach begin to ache, as if he had swallowed a thorn. She doesn't know me...? "Don't you remember me?" Ruuko asked. Cynder stared at him for a couple of heartbeats before she shook her head swiftly. Ruuko's eyes widened in astonishment. How could she not remember me! "Why? Am I supposed to?" Cynder asked, shuffling her paws in the dirt. Ruuko was too hurt deep down to speak. Instead, he gave her the tiniest nod. Cynder gazed down at her paws. "I-I'm sorry.... I just don't remember you.... Look, I really should be going." What? You can't leave now! "Where? Where are you going to go?" Ruuko challenge her. Cynder gazed at him in surprise. "That.... That's none of your business...." Ruuko stood up and rested his tail blade on her shoulder. She backed away, dipping her head. "That's impossible. You have nowhere to go. You have all the time in the world to chat with me, yet you want to go already?" He felt her sister gazing at him in surprise. He knew this was his chance. He searched her eyes for understanding. If he could find just one hint.... She had to remember him somehow.... "You were listening in... When I was talking to Spyro!" Cynder growled. Spyro... So that's the purple dragon's name. "Look, I didn't mean to listen in. I was just walking... trying to find you, then I spotted you." Cynder stood up on her hind legs, her lips drew back into the beginning of a snarl, and her tail slashed vainly. Ruuko just stared at her in surprise. "What do you want with me?! Just tell me the answer!" Ruuko let out a heavy sigh. He knew he had to tell her the truth. If he didn't, then he would never see his sister again, and if he did... She wouldn't give him a friendly welcome again. He gave his right shoulder a quick lick before he spoke.
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