darkSpyro

yep! wait no longer people, because the twist is here! but it dosen't mean there won't be another one!

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Blackshadow was in his room, he was thinking sbout what had happened
"she right..............i can't kill her! i'm not like my father at all! my father..............Belthazar, the first Source...........i'm nothing like him...........i...i.........i can't kill my wife! i can't kill my daughters!" he said
"yes you can!" whispered a mlae voice, it sounded like a spirit!
"no! not again!" he said
"kill them! kill your family!" the voice whispered
"no! i won't do it! i'm nothing like you!" he yelled
"kill them! you can't ignore your own father!" whispered the voice
"no! go away! i want nothing to do with you!"
"you can't fight me! kill them!"
"no! you made me evil, but i won't kill my family!"
"you have no choice! do as i say! kill your family!"
"NO!!! I WON'T KILL THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he yelled
"you can't fight me!" whispered the voice, then a dragon spirit entered his body, "Hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i control your body now!" said his father's spirit, then he went to the dungeon, and went to Kira's cell
"what are you doing here?!" she asked
"killing a wicth!" he said evily, as he grabbed her and took her to a large room
"you can't kill me Blackshadow!" she said
"i'm not Blackshadow! i'm belthazar!"
"no! it can't be!"
"it is! and now you will die!" he said, as he held her up agaist the wall by her neck, and then he got out a dagger "any last words before you die?"
"i'm not the one that will die!" she said, as she put up her hands to freeze him, then she used telekinies to make the dagger stab him in the chest, then he unfroze, yelling in pain!
"noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you can't kill me!"
"who said i was killing you?" she asked, then his spirit floated away
"Kira?! wh------------------i'm bleeding!" said Blackshadow
"don't worry! you'll be fine!" she said, as she took the dagger out of his chest, then she said a spell, and healed him!
"but, how?"
"it dosen't matter! what dose matter is getting you out of here!" she said, as she used her powers to teleport them to a temple, one that they have seen before!
"our old temple! its in ruins!" he said
"not for long!" she said, as she said a spell, which rebuilt the temple, it looked as if it was never attacked!
"Kira, what happened?!" he asked confused
"i brought us home!" she said

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Blackshadow was confused, "brought us home? Kira, whats going on here?"
"would you calm down! i just saved your life!"
"i didn't need saving! you should have left me there! you should have-----"
"----let you die? i couldn't let you die!"
"well you should have! they'll be comming back for me Kira, did you ever think of that?! i'm the Source's son! its my destiny to be the Source of all evil! you should have left me behind!"
"well, i couldn't! you were my husbend long before you became the Source! as i recall you didn't want to be the Source, thats why you married me! so you could get away from your father!"
"well it didn't work! even as a spirit, i can't get away!"
"i can help you! our duaghters have grown up without parents, don't you care at all about them? don't you want to see them? i know i do!"
"they'll be better off without knowing us, especially me!"
"thats not true! Blackshadow, i don't want them to not know who we are, they need to know who thier parents are!"
"they probally don't want to know about us! they probally think we're dead, and they're happy about it!"
"its not true!"
"how do you know Kira?! how do you know that they're not perfectly happy without us?!" he asked, she didn't respond, "thats what i thought! they're better off without us!"
"so, you won't even try and see if they care?"
"no! because they don't care about us!"
"your wrong! and i'll prove it to you!" she said, as she flew away, leaving him there alone

i think i know what might happen

ur awesome!
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yeah, and the second you think something will happen, something diff. will happen!

that is what i like about twists

yep! just wait to see what happens next!

Kira was flying around, looking for her duaghters, she remembered where the mountain was, and decided to look there first, when she got there, she landed and went inside
"Thorn?! Dusk?! Moon?!" she called, then Dusk and Moon, came out of thier rooms to see who called them, they saw her, they looked at her confused
"who are you?" asked Moon
"how do you know us?" asked Dusk
"you mean you don't know me?! i'm your mother, Kira!"

i knew it!!!!!

Dusk and Moon looked at her, they realized that she was infact thier mom, they ran over to her in excitement, they were happy to see her! then Thorn came home, she saw them there, hugging each other
"whats going on?!" she asked, then they all turned around
"Thorn! its me, your mother!"
"what?!"
"oh, you still look as beautiful as the night you hatched!"
"oh, we're sharing memories! well, i have one of my own, your back flying away from us!"
"Thorn, its not what you think!"
"no, its exactly what i think! i saw what really happened! you still left us!"
"ok..........i did leave, but i had to save your father!"
"hes dead! you can't save a dead dragon!"
"thats not what i had to save him from! i had to save him, from being the new Source!"
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Blackshadow was at the temple
"so, Blackshadow, you maneged to escape our grasp yet again!" said Shadownight, as he and several dragon surrounded him
"you'll never take me alive!" he said
"oh, your right about that!" he said, "GET HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he yelled, then they all attacked him, it was a blood bath! when it was over, the dragons stepped away, there was blood on them, they looked down at Blackshadow, who was laying motionless on the ground, he was covered in blood!

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i knew it!!!!!

don't get too excited! theres always a catch or twist!

keep on writing!!

i'll write more soon, if my dad dosen't want me off!

Thorn looked at her mother confused
"new Source?! what do you mean? dad isn't the Source!"
"he was at one time..................and he is...........the Source's son!"
"WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!" they all said in surprise
"its true...........your father was destined to be the new Source, because his father, Belthzar, was the first Source"
"and you wait untill now to tell us!" yelled Thorn
"Thorn! shes our mom!" said Moon
"no, shes right! i have abandonned you, and left you in the dark about your family! i never should have left you alone, i'm a terrible mother!" she said, then she left
"now look what you did!" yelled Dusk, she was yelling at Thorn, "we finally had a mom again, then you make her leave!"
"its not my fault she abandonned us! when she left do you know who took care of you?! it was me! i took care of you because she left us!" yelled Thorn, then she left
"did you have to make things worse!" said Moon, then she went to her room
"i just wanted to have a family again!" said Dusk, then she left

One of your twists was exactly like what happened to one of my characters on a RP.

which one?! you can tell me through pm

I'd rather put it here. I think it's on Blacknight because on ''Where's the Story?'' Dragonhope(me) had a Spirit enter through her to save herself from Draconis.

i think you mean Blackshadow! and the spirit did enter his body, but it wasn't to save him

Yeah. It looks like though.

well, i'll write more soon!

Okay....*waits*

yes, write more!!

Moon had gone back to bed, Thorn went to see Wildwind, but Dusk had other plans, she was flying around, looking for Kira
"MOM!!!!!!!!!! MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she called, and someone came, but it wasn't who she thought it was!
"who are you kid?" he asked
"my name is Dusk"
"really? then you must be one of the Charmed ones!"
"i am!"
"good! grab her!" he said, then several dragons grabbed her
"let me go! who are you?"
"i am Shadownight! and you, are comming with me!"
"not if i can help it!" said a male dragon, as he flew towards him, then he attacked them, freeing Dusk, and she flew away!
"Blackshadow?! how are you still alive?!" he asked, then he grabbed him by the throat
"it dosen't matter how i lived! what matters is that you had your claws on my duaghter, and you will now pay the price!" he said, then he took Shadownight's dagger, then he stabbed him in the chest, killing him with his own weapon! "let this be a lesson to all of you, anyone who touches my duaghters, will answer directly to me!" he said, as he dropped Shadownight's dead body, letting it fall to the earth, then the other dragons flew away in fear!

violent bunch of dragons

yeah, i'll write more! maybe i can make them, a little less violent, unless you don't mind

i dont care how violent they are. i was just stating that they are violent.

MORE VIOLENT! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

ok! then if no one minds violent dragons, then i will continue!

Oh, we never mind anything, my dear...

Why did all of a sudden I'm talking Evil Lanuguage!?

idk! but i like it! anyway, i'll write more soon!

Lol...

Then you will be hearing more...MUAHAHAHAHA!!!

Fireflight: ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WANT EVIL?! THEN HEAR ME ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh great! now Fireflight is acting up!
Fireflight: WHO SAYS I'M ACTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uh oh! RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Run! Cynder09, did Fireflight ever turned evil!?

in my story? no! she was always good!
Fireflight: Hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should have seen the looks on your faces! priceless! that was the best joke ever!
Fireflight! your in trouble when i catch you!
Fireflight: just try and catch me! *runs away*
get back here! *chases after her!*

FIREFLIGHT! And I mean real. COME BACK HERE YOU FLABBERBLASTED....*squeaks*

Fireflight: *starts flying!* can't catch me now!
oh yeah! *gets Quietfire!* after her!
Quietfire: hop on! we'll get her now!
Fireflight: i'd like to see you try!

Hehe...a game of tag

Fireflight: you can't catch me! *glows a firey red color, she is covered in fire, she looks like a phoenix!*
we'll see about that! faster Quietfire! *flys faster!*
Fireflight: *flys faster!*
Quietfire: i'll stop her! *breathes ice, freezes her!*
Fireflight: *the fire melts the ice, quickly!* you'll have to do better then that!
Starfire: *comes out of nowhere and tackles Fireflight!* Ha! i got you!
Fireflight: not fair! you came up from behind!
Starfire: fair's fair in love and war!
Fireflight: then let the war begin! ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Starfire: ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can you guys stop fooling around and write more?

Relax, gamer900.

sorry, i just want to read more of the story.

There, there, Rougestone.

Blackshadow flew away, he was trying to find Dusk, he finally found her in a cave, far from home, he went insdie to find her
"who are you? what do you want?" she asked, she was worried he might hurt her
"don't worry i won't hurt you! i wouldn't hurt my own daughter!" he said, she looked up surprised
"your............................my dad?!"
"yes! my name is Blackshadow! and you don't have to worry about those other dragons, they're long gone by now!"
"its because you killed the, didn't you?"
"well................i.........i had to do what had to be done, they would have hurt you!" he said, she came out of hiding, and walked up to him
"you don't scare me, you saved my life, you were just-----------"
"----------violent, i know! its because of my past, i can't change who i am!"
"but, your good"
"yes, for now, it dosen't mean i'll stay this way long!" he said, then they heard a noise outside!
"what was that?" she asked worridly
"i think i know! i'll go and see what it was, but you must stay here!"
"but dad---------"
"no! promise me you'll stay here!"
"i promise!"
"good! be safe!" he said, then he left, when he flew out, he was immediatly attacked by a dragon, who tackled him!
"let me go or you'll pay the price!" he said
"try and fight me and you'll never see your family again!" he said
"its you who won't see another living soul!" he said, grabbing a dagger and stabbing him with it, he stabbed his leg, the dragon roared with pain
"you'll pay for that Blackshadow!" he said grabbing a dagger, then he stabbed him in his arm, but Blackshadow didn't show pain, insted he took his dagger and stabbed him in the chest,
"i'm getting sick and tired of killing weak dragons!" he said, as the dragon died, then he dropped him, letting fall to the ground, then he flew back inside, Dusk saw him, she saw he was hurt!
"dad! your bleeding!" she said worriedly
"i'll be ok! Dusk, dragons will keep comming after me, you need to go home!"
"no! i want to stay with you!"
"you can't! its not safe here with me! they'll keep comming untill they either have me back with them, evil, or i'm dead!"
"dad-------"
"no Dusk! leave! go home! you'll be safe there!" he said, then he heard more dragons show up, "Dusk, you need to leave now!"
"ok, i'll go!" she said, she left through a back exit, while Blackshadow went out the front to fight the dragons
"well, well, well, if it isn't our old pal Blackshadow! good again i see!" said a male dragon
"i'm not your friend! i never was or will be!" he said, as he took out his dagger and threw it at his chest, then he used his tail, to stabb two dragons in the chest (not at the same time!) then he grabbed another dragon by the neck, he looked into his frightened eyes, then he stabbed him in the chest with another dagger
"i can't keep killing dragon after dragon, but i can't run away either" he said to himself, then he started to fly away "if i can't run, and they'll keep comming after me, then i'll go to them, and end this once and for all!"

you can relax now! i wrote more!

Thorn and Moon were killed?

where did you get that idea? they're alive!