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#301 Posted: 00:08:06 18/11/2008
Yeah, i could probably stay up till that long (remember, im in UK) but i wouldnt stay on very long afterwards.
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#302 Posted: 02:32:54 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
After they all had a quiet breakfast after Rougestone’s announcement, they all went into the training room again to talk…
“So what is on your mind?” asked Blackfire “Well… I have been really honest with you guys, but there is one thing that I haven’t told you, or shown you.” “O, I know!” said Bluefire The other three just looked at him. “And how do you know?” asked Blackfire “He told me yesterday night.” “I was planning on telling you today.” “Well what is it? Is it serious?” asked Crystal “No, it is not serious. It’s just something that you don’t know about me.” “Well what is it?” asked Sapphire Rougestone said nothing; he turned his back to them and shot a fire ball into the open. |
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#303 Posted: 02:34:27 18/11/2008
intresting! thats cool!
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#304 Posted: 02:35:59 18/11/2008
woah man!unnexpected!i love it!
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#305 Posted: 02:36:52 18/11/2008
Ohh, wants me to read more!!
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#306 Posted: 02:43:19 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“I guess I knew one thing about my parents; one was earth and the other fire.”
“Well that is different.” said Blackfire “Yay! That means that you can show me some new things with fire!” said Bluefire “Why didn’t you tell us before? It is not that serious. It is fine that you have two different elements.” said Sapphire “I just didn’t. There is no reason that I didn’t. I just didn’t” “Well you started to scare me. I thought that it was something serious.” said Crystal “I was also going to talk to you about something this morning, Rougestone.” said Blackfire “Talk to me? What’s up?” “I’d rather that we talk in private.” “O…k… is it serious?” “It could be.” Blackfire whispered into his ear. |
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#307 Posted: 02:45:01 18/11/2008
intrsting! this is getting better and better!
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#308 Posted: 02:47:30 18/11/2008
More pleaseQQQQ
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#309 Posted: 03:59:58 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“Come with me.”
“Alright.” Both Rougestone and Bluefire started to follow Blackfire “Son, I just need Rougestone to come with me.” “Aw, why can’t I come?” “We’ll talk about it later, but as for now, I need you to stay with mom, ok?” “Fine. I never get to come.” “Rougestone, let’s go” “Right.” Rougestone followed Blackfire down the hallway and up a set of stairs that never knew were there… “Up here is a special room that only I am allowed in. I feel that you too should be allowed to see what is up here.” “Why me?” Rougestone asked “Everyone in our family has shown some kind of thanks towards you, I thought that you should get some form of it from me.” “Your entire family is set on thanking me. I still don’t know why.” “You will eventually, just accept it for now. We are here.” Blackfire opened a somewhat large door that opened up into a wide open room with almost no windows. There were some candles lit to keep the room from being pitch black and there were some in a complete circle in the center of the room… “What is this room?” “The vision room.” “Why don’t the others know about this?” “Well, Crystal knows but prefers to not come in here and I don’t want the kids to know about.” “But why me?” “Yes it is true that I wanted you to see this as a thank you, but I also wanted you to see something.” “What?” “Come here.” Blackfire walked towards the circle and Rougestone followed. Rougestone noticed that the candles were surrounding a small pool of liquid… “Look in the pool and tell me what you see.” “Another dragon.” “Yes, and he seems to be of great concern.” |
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#310 Posted: 04:46:37 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“Why? What has he done?”
“He hasn’t done anything previously, but I think that he is planning something.” “Like what?” “I don’t know. That is why I wanted you to see the room and pool. I wanted your opinion on this.” “I am not sure either. If he is up to something, we are going to want to know what it is right away.” “I agree. We should keep an eye on him.” There was then a crash and the both of them could hear Crystal yelling for them. |
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#311 Posted: 13:45:29 18/11/2008
Cool, anymore coming?
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#312 Posted: 21:20:26 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
As soon as they heard her yell, they both ran out of the room and flew down the stairs. They burst through the doors of the training room and didn’t see any of them…
“Where are they?” asked Rougestone “I don’t know! I can’t see anything!” There was smoke and dust all over the place which made it difficult to see. The dust started to settle… “I think I see someone!” exclaimed Rougestone “Me too!” said Blackfire They both ran over to a dragon lying on the ground… “Crystal!!” shouted Blackfire “I’m……fine……” she said “they……took……” “Who took what?” asked Rougestone “……the kids……” she answered |
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#313 Posted: 21:20:36 18/11/2008
i'm here! cool story! i wonder whats going on!
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#314 Posted: 21:25:10 18/11/2008
AHHHHHH!!!
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#315 Posted: 21:30:54 18/11/2008
*Prays* Our god who arent in heaven, help these kids get home, unharmed and well.
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#316 Posted: 21:33:53 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“Blackfire, stay here and take care of Crystal. I’ll go find out more about where Sapphire and Bluefire are.”
“Right!” he replied Rougestone ran out of the training room and back into the vision room. “Where are you guys?” he asked himself Then he saw them in the pool, they were struggling in cages made from the sides of a cave. “I have to find them.” Rougestone ran back into the training room and explained what he saw to Blackfire… “I am going after them!” “Yes, I know that you are. Just don’t do anything rash.” Rougestone nodded and flew out of the room. Rougestone had seen a small glimpse of where the two of them were being held and he started in that direction. |
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#317 Posted: 21:35:02 18/11/2008
Woo-hoo! Plz continue! *starts singing*
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#318 Posted: 21:35:26 18/11/2008
Cool. I thought vision pools were made up on DS until my friend showed me ANB.
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#319 Posted: 21:41:05 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“Sapphire?”
“Yeah, I’m here.” she replied “Where are we?” “I don’t know, Bluefire, but you are always asking for something to happen.” “Yeah, but I didn’t want to be kid napped.” “It doesn’t look like we have much of a choice on that.” “Can you break out?” “Now why would you want to do that?” asked an unfamiliar voice. |
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#320 Posted: 21:42:26 18/11/2008
AHHHH!!!! It's....it's....MONEYBAGS!!! Lol!
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#321 Posted: 21:43:45 18/11/2008
LOLOLOLOLOL
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#322 Posted: 21:44:10 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
that was funny ^ lol
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#323 Posted: 21:44:42 18/11/2008
Oh! Speaking of Moneybags, that gave me an idea for my newest fanfic.....
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#324 Posted: 21:53:06 18/11/2008
great story! write more!
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#325 Posted: 22:02:16 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“Who are you?” asked Sapphire. She couldn’t see anything since there was no light at all in the cave.
“You may call me Oblivion.” As he said this, the room lit up faintly, just enough that Sapphire could see a fairly large dragon standing on the other side of the bars that kept her captive. “Ah, and let me guess; you are Sapphire, and the little one is Bluefire.” he said “Yeah, so what? What do you want?” “Like all ‘good’ bad guys, I’m not going to tell you until you need to know. It’s not like you have to know anyway, it is none of your concern about what I plan on doing.” “It kind of is our concern seeing that we are being held captive here.” “That may be true, but I am still not going to tell you anything.” Once he said that, the room go dark once again and Sapphire lost sight of Oblivion. |
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#326 Posted: 22:04:07 18/11/2008
a 'good' bad guy, this will get interesting.
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#327 Posted: 22:05:40 18/11/2008
Hm. Keep going!
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#328 Posted: 22:16:23 18/11/2008
dude!this storys awsome!so interesting!
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#329 Posted: 22:18:59 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
he was making fun of them, he is a bad guy
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#330 Posted: 22:19:34 18/11/2008
I know, it's not nice to be made fun of.
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#331 Posted: 22:19:45 18/11/2008
Please continue!!
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#332 Posted: 22:26:22 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Rougestone knew that he couldn’t fly as fast as he could because he knew that he was going to have to save his energy for anything that might be waiting for him. He saw what appeared to be a small entrance to a cave on a small island, in the pool before he left. So he decided to try the coast before looking anywhere else. He landed on the beach and started to look around for any signs of an island off in the ocean. He was then hit hard on his head and he blacked out.
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#333 Posted: 22:27:23 18/11/2008
Ohh, a bit like my story that!!
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#334 Posted: 22:28:13 18/11/2008
Roughstone was hit....that's not nice, you bad guys!
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#335 Posted: 22:33:02 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“You didn’t have to hit him that hard.”
“He doesn’t look like one of them.” “He could be.” “No, his is not the same color as them.” “Yeah, aren’t they all the same color?” Rougestone thought that he was hearing voices. He started coming around and heard more voices… “He’s moving!” “He’s waking up!” Rougestone tried to sit up but he couldn’t, so he just opened his eyes. When he did, about a dozen pairs of eyes were staring at him. |
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#336 Posted: 22:35:52 18/11/2008
'Who are you and what have you done with them!!' Im waiting to hear
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#337 Posted: 22:36:02 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
i will be back in a little bit. i am going to get dinner
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#338 Posted: 22:42:42 18/11/2008
Ahhh!!!!Monybags is disguised as a dragon!!
Dawn & Pablo:RUN!!!!
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#339 Posted: 22:42:55 18/11/2008
OK! I'll wait...
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#340 Posted: 22:43:46 18/11/2008
great story! i can't wait for more!
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#341 Posted: 23:02:48 18/11/2008
oohh!
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#342 Posted: 23:56:44 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Sapphire and Bluefire just tried to pass the time in their cages. Sapphire’s attempts to break out were fruitless. Bluefire just laid down and closed his eyes in thought. Sapphire paced back and forth as much as she could in her cramped cell.
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#343 Posted: 00:00:48 19/11/2008
i wonder what will happen next
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#344 Posted: 00:43:52 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Rougestone’s vision came into focus and he looked to see that he was tied up. He then turned to the pairs of eyes that were watching him. He first thought that his eye sight hadn’t returned to normal, but he then realized that the bodies to which they were attached to were glowing…
“Dragonflies?” he asked “What are dragonflies doing here?” They were all silent as he started realizing who his attackers were. “Why am I tied up? What do you guys want? How did you knock me out?” “He sure asks a lot of questions.” one of the dragonflies said to another. “Well, I think that I am entitled to know some things, like why you attacked me!” he started getting annoyed. The dragonfly that had spoke before was a little taken back because he thought that Rougestone didn’t hear him. “I think that he deserves some type of explanation.” Rougestone heard from behind the crowd that had started to accumulate. “And what is your name, dragon?” an adult dragonfly asked as he approached Rougestone. “If you must know, it is Rougestone. O and by the way, I love the way you guys say hello.” he said in a sarcastic tone. “Yes, well, we thought that it was necessary.” “Why the heck would you think that?!” “I don’t know if I should be telling you this, but if you must know, we have been having trouble with dragons lately.” “I wasn’t even looking for you guys. What I was looking for is an island with a small entrance.” “I told you he was one of them!” Rougestone heard one of the members of the crowd shout. “And why were you looking for this island of yours?” asked the dragonfly. To Rougestone, he seemed to be the one in charge and spoke for the rest of them. “I was looking for it so that I could save my two friends that were taken there, but you guys jumped me while I was looking for it.” “I don’t believe him.” Rougestone heard from the crowd. Another dragonfly came forward; he looked like the one that was yelling from the safety of the group. “He is probably a spy.” “First off I am not a spy, secondly, why would anyone send a spy here? You are all just dragonflies.” “He doesn’t seem to know much about us.” said the leader “He couldn’t be a spy, he knows too little.” “Are you seriously going to buy this?” asked the dragonfly that came forward accusing him of being a spy “I’m not buying it.” “I am not saying you had to. I don’t think that this dragon is of any threat to us. I think that we miss took him for one of them. Cut ‘em loose.” “NO! That is the biggest mistake you could make.” “You are out of line. I was chosen to lead this hive and I was chosen because I know what is right for it. Cut him loose.” A small group of dragonflies inched their way closer to Rougestone and cut his bindings. “Sorry about the inconvenience.” the leader said “My name is Daryl, and I am the leader of these dragonflies.” |
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#345 Posted: 00:48:46 19/11/2008
cool! write more!
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#346 Posted: 01:06:35 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
“That is great and all, but I need to find that island. Can you help me with that?”
“As long as you can help us.” “What do you mean?” “There are dragons that live in that cave that terrorize my people to death. It would be a burden off of our shoulders if you could do something about them.” “Sure, I guess I can do that.” “Fantastic! I will send for one of these dragonflies to accompany you and show you where the island is.” “Um, thanks.” Daryl went off and came back with another dragonfly. He was glowing green and looked a lot like him. “This is my son, Traverse. He knows the way to the island.” “I don’t want to go with him.” he said pointing to Rougestone. “Hey, be nicer to him. If he does what he says that he is going to do, then we don’t have to worry about them.” “Fine, but just so you know, I still don’t want to go.” “Whatever, just go.” Daryl flew over to Rougestone “If he gives you any trouble, feel free to…” “I got ’cha. Don’t worry, he should be fine.” Rougestone shot a glance over at his new traveling partner. “You better get going; it is about a day’s walk from here.” “Are you serious?! Let’s go, Traverse, we’re flying! Move it!” Rougestone said; now in a rush. |
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#347 Posted: 01:11:52 19/11/2008
cool! Rougestone has a dragonfly with him!
Fireflight: i remember my dragonfly partner!
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#348 Posted: 01:12:05 19/11/2008
I thought that was Oblivion
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#349 Posted: 01:13:21 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Nope, i thought that i would throw some more twists in my story.
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#350 Posted: 01:14:07 19/11/2008
Nice...
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