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#251 Posted: 03:43:51 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Awesome! Chapter 19!!
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#252 Posted: 03:47:10 15/10/2010
Random time
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#253 Posted: 03:50:59 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Almost done?
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#254 Posted: 03:58:41 15/10/2010
Chapter 19 Final countdown to misery
“Come with me” Hunter said quietly he had his raven (hawk?) with him. She followed him though the mist. Had a piece of paper. He wrote something. “Take this to Minius” He told the raven “How the **** is that supposed to make feel better”? She said lip quivering Sparx was happy to see Zoe in the bed ------- Ripto remained silent. The raven came in and dropped the note in Minius’s hand…..It said: “Congrats you’re a father-to-be! NOW APOLGIZE!!!!!! ~Hunter” Minius’s face was pale “What does say Minius” Fergor’e and Ripto said in sync. He handed over to them they read “You’re in deep guano “ Fergor’e said she flipped her hair and left “Well write back”! Ripto said as he left Minius felt alone. He wrote back…. “IM SORRY OK!!!! I DIDN’T MEAN TO GET YOU PREGNANT!!!!!!! NOW I FEEL SO ALONE” ~Minius 4 minutes later: “You’re not alone…” ~Elora
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#255 Posted: 19:37:30 15/10/2010
woah that was great love'd it... wow cant believe that minius is a father!
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#256 Posted: 20:12:52 15/10/2010
Me too. And i can't believe it - i'm Minius's father...
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#257 Posted: 20:44:01 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
What LTU?!
Chapter OMG 20!: Babies to Be Elora sat on the couch, rubbing her stomach, wondering what her baby would like. In Hunter, Sparx, Zoe, Spyro, and Cynder's opinion: 'That will be one ****ed up child!!" "Oh what am I going to dO?!" She cried. ____________ Meanwhile Cynder sat staring at the eggs. Spyro was right by her. "I think I saw one move!" She said happily. "What? No, you're crazy!" Spyro laughed. ____________ While Elora was sitting on the couch Minius walked in. She gasped. "What are you doing here!?" She cried. Minius smiled. "I just want to be with the futue mother of my child," he said and sat down. "I--- I don't," she started but Minius was kissing her full on the mouth. She gasped, surprised, but closed her eyes and enjoyed. Before she knew it, they were kissing like a newly married couple. They broke apart. Elora smiled. "You're a very good kisser," she said. "You are too," he said with a toothy grin. _____________ Spyro was talking to Hunter and the rest when he heard, "SPYRO!! COME QUICK!!" From Cynder. Spyro rushed in to see her pointing at the eggs. There was a crack in one of them. |
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#258 Posted: 21:02:26 15/10/2010
omg its the baby spyro's!!!!!! just remember they cant be purple! this story amazes me every new chapter. and i see you two improving your writting every chapter too!!!
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#259 Posted: 21:11:39 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Hehe hey SF101 have you read any of my Spyro fics on FanFiction?
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#260 Posted: 21:40:31 15/10/2010
not yet but im def gunn checkem out now lol
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#261 Posted: 21:45:01 15/10/2010
Ive read them....RETTY AWESOME
*STARTS 21*
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#262 Posted: 22:23:09 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thnx!
Can't wait lol.. |
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#263 Posted: 22:36:28 15/10/2010
the next chapter is called
Letters to Elora
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#264 Posted: 22:40:02 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Oooohhh!
I think Elora's fallen loooove!! |
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#265 Posted: 22:43:12 15/10/2010
yep i think so 2
okay the highlight of my week is THE KID WHO SITS NEXT TO ME IN CLASS: If anybody askes im 21 on facebook......
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#266 Posted: 22:50:38 15/10/2010
Chapter 21: Letters to Elora
Elora heard someone coming and calling her name “Minius im sorry you have leave” Elora whispered “But I want to be with you” He said “Not right now ill write to you now go….Hurry” She whispered again “Okay ill miss you…” he said as he left -------- Minius got back to his room before Fergor’e noticed he waited for the first letter Here is the conversation: “Sorry you had to leave like that ~Elora” “Its fine” ~ Minius “Spyro and Cynder’s eggs hatched….” ~Elora “Cool….’ ~Minius “Y’know you’re pretty sweet….for a riptoc…” ~Elora “How so? Sweet as in cool or as in nice…” ~Minius “Sweet as in nice” ~Elora “Thank you I never really wanted to be in Ripto’s army anyway…..” ~Minius “Really?” ~Elora “Yea my dad made me….” ~Minius “Oh that’s so sad…..When can I see you again?” ~Elora “Tonight there’s a cliff in that forest of yours meet me there” ~Minius “Okay it’s a date……..Iloveyouthereisaidit” ~Elora “What was the last part again?….see you there” ~Minius “Tell you when I see you tonight” ~Elora “Okay” ~Minius End of letters and chapter ------ I’m surprised no Sparx has shown up yet in the last 2 chapters (Just barley)
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#267 Posted: 23:05:11 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Cool!
Chapter... 22 Holy crap!! -_O : It's a Date! Elora was waiting by the cliff in the forest. The sounds of crickets chirping and owls hooting filled the air. A Great Horned owl flew overhead. 'Come on, where are you?' Elora thought, scared to be alone. She heard a bush nearby rustling. Then a snap of a twig. She turned and gasped. "Don't worry, it's only me," Minius smiled. Elora sighed. "Thank goodness!" She said and hugged him. He sat down on a rock. "So what did you want to tell me?" He asked, staring into her bright green eyes that seemed to glow in the darkness. "Minius.. I LOVE YOU!!!" She cried. He grinned and flung on her, kissing her with the tongue. "I do too!!" He said and continued to kiss her. Elora closed her eyes. Before she knew it, she was pushed on the ground by Minius and he smiled, "C'mon, let's do it!" He said, his sharp teeth baring in a wide smile. Elora gasped. "N-no! I mean, I can't! I'm pregnant!! We can't do it until after I have the child!" She said and pushed him off of her. "Aww man!!" He pouted. Elora smiled and put her arm on his shoulder. "It's okay..." She said and they kissed some more in the moonlight. |
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#268 Posted: 23:11:30 15/10/2010
OMLJB!!!(O MY LADY JUSTIN BIBER) dont ask
*23 on the way*
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#269 Posted: 23:24:09 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Hehe oh hey guess what? I made the design of Elora and Minius's kid, but I want to wait until she actually has the kid to post the pic..
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#270 Posted: 23:25:31 15/10/2010
cool!!
could you make a desing of Minius and Fergor'e (mine failed epicly)
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#271 Posted: 23:28:24 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Ooh sure!
So.. They're dinosaur like, right? Can you describe them to me, cause lol, you're the creator of them.. |
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#272 Posted: 23:34:44 15/10/2010
Minius:
sacles: red and blue eyes Dark blue hair (Blonde).....(DONT ASK) Personality: Well hes minius... Weapon of choice: N/A Fergor'e: Scales: Blue and pink eyes: Purple Hair: Brown personality: grily/tomboy weapon of choice: Frying pan does that help?
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#273 Posted: 23:36:10 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Yes!! Awesome, thanks!!
I'll be done in a few.. |
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#274 Posted: 23:36:35 15/10/2010
kay!!!
Chapter 23: the fairy knows all Zoe was taking a fly around the forest. Elora had told her the results of Minius’s raping….She was a little upset….She even got in to Sparx’s bed just to see what would happen….She heard kissing noises………. “That sounds like…..Oh no…I hope she’s not getting raped again….” She flew behind a tree she saw the whole thing….Elora and Minius’s shape Silhouetted on the moon. The disgusting kissing noises…..the words…..she hadn’t heard the first part but she was 100% percent sure what Elora said……. She gasped Elora heard that gasp open her eyes and looked….She pushed away from Minius “Hello”? she said But by then Zoe was gone…..she had recorded everything on her wand “What ever it is baby its gone” Minius said “I suppose your right….” She said Minius kissed her again…
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#275 Posted: 23:41:39 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Hehe Zoe has some news lol!
Oh hey, do Minius and Fergor'e have ears? Just asking, lol.. |
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#276 Posted: 23:43:24 15/10/2010
Yea they do
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#277 Posted: 23:44:07 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay like pointy ears?
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#278 Posted: 23:44:42 15/10/2010
Yea they have pointed ears....
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#279 Posted: 23:46:22 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Kay great!
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#280 Posted: 23:52:07 15/10/2010
cool...*waits*
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#281 Posted: 00:16:31 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Grrr.. There's something wrong with the site I use, so it might be a while..
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#282 Posted: 00:17:32 16/10/2010
Ok
*waits for next chapter*
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#283 Posted: 01:28:27 16/10/2010
*waits too*
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#284 Posted: 01:51:06 16/10/2010
where is pyro-spyro
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#285 Posted: 02:51:40 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm sorry! lol I was trying to get my pictures to work..
There's something wrong with the site, I'll try tomorrow... Chapter 24: Zoe tells About the Traitor Zoe flew as fast as her little wings could carry her. She found Spyro, Cynder, Hunter, and Sparx. She flew up to them, gasping for air. "What is it, Zoe?" Hunter asked. "Elora!! She's a--- a traitor!" She panted. Everyone gasped. "What?!" Sparx said. "Yeah! Her and that Riptoc.. I saw them kissin' each other like they were made of candy!" She explained. "Wait.. Isn't that the one who got her pregnant?" Spyro asked. Zoe nodded. "So I guess she's joined Ripto's side now! She was probably mad like she was before and decided to get revenge!" She replied, excited. Everyone couldn't believe it. ___________ Elora woke up. Minius was still asleep next to her. She stared at her abdomen. It was a large lump now. She put her hand on it and sighed. Then she got up and shook Minius awake. "Minius! Wake up!" She whispered. He started to come to. "Wha-what?" He said sheepishly. "Don't worry, it's me!" She smiled. "Oh.. Okay," he smiled back and they kissed again. |
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#286 Posted: 03:54:21 16/10/2010
heheh sorry haz a friend over.. ?25? coming 2marrow
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#287 Posted: 04:29:07 16/10/2010
Ok... *waits*. Great chapters btw.
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#288 Posted: 04:58:45 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Awww thnx!
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#289 Posted: 05:07:17 16/10/2010
You welcome! <3
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#290 Posted: 05:27:32 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Hehehe.. <3
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#291 Posted: 05:41:19 16/10/2010
What's so funny? <3
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#292 Posted: 05:42:45 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Nothin'.... <3
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#293 Posted: 05:46:30 16/10/2010
Weird... <3
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#294 Posted: 05:49:51 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm just kiddin with ya lol! <3
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#295 Posted: 05:52:54 16/10/2010
Ooh... Stupid me... <3
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#296 Posted: 06:00:18 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Aww, you're not stupid! <3
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#297 Posted: 17:17:10 16/10/2010
ok im back....*starts *insert chapter here*
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#298 Posted: 17:24:16 16/10/2010
*inserts chapter disk*
PC: LOADING... 1%... 19%... 64%... (23 hours later) 99%... Windows 98 detected a virus, it will reboot and delete all unsaved changes *reboots* Me: ****ING WINDOWS 98!!! *throws PC out* |
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#299 Posted: 17:42:19 16/10/2010
im the one in the pink shirt
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#300 Posted: 17:59:27 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
OMGZ!!
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