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#251 Posted: 05:55:18 18/11/2010
Oh god Tundra i'd suggest you RUN!!!! and live to fight another day
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#252 Posted: 22:51:26 18/11/2010 | Topic Creator
hehehe. Tundra is in big trouble.
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#253 Posted: 06:41:25 19/11/2010
Yeah and i hope he gets out of it soon.
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#254 Posted: 22:46:23 19/11/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, if he doesn't, something bad may happen.....
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#255 Posted: 23:32:05 19/11/2010
Tundra: what exactly may that be?
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#256 Posted: 23:34:31 19/11/2010 | Topic Creator
you won't know until it happens. or will it....?
i'll try to write more today, but i'm also trying to like create my own aliens, which is fun yet difficult.
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#257 Posted: 00:14:06 20/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 60: Realizing the Cold, Hard Truth
"Mom, i can explian....." Rouge muttered. "silence!" Slean's voice boomed in an angry tone. she showed no signs of having patience. "it is bad enough you failed to kill your target, but then you had to bring him here and tell him things no one else should know!" she growled at her. "but, Mom, he's--" "quiet! i do not want to hear what you have to say! now, i want to immediately go down to the dungeoun and check on our new prisoners." "new prisoners?" "yes. i brought in two young, black dragons, along with a dragonfly. they were foolish enough to trust me. and now they will rot in my dungeoun until i find a use for them. so, Rouge, make yourself useful, and go keep an eye on them." "but--" "now!" she snarled. Rouge glanced at Tundra with a worried expression. she mouthed "run." before quietly leaving the room. Tundra turned to Slean when Rouge left. he knew he was given a warning, and figured why. "so, Tundra, welcome to my lair." Slean said with a sly smile. she took a step forward, and Tundra took a step back. "what is the matter? afraid?" she chuckled lightly. "well, you should be. no one i have faced has even come close to escaping my wrath, let alone defeat me. you mine as well try to run now. although, it will do you no good. i can simply hunt you down like a carniverous beast, seeking it's next victim." her eyes narrowed as she neared him. "you don't scare me....." he muttered, trying to keep a brave face. Slean smirked. "my dear, i scare everyone. certainly i can scare one who is young and powerless against me." "i'm not powerless." "to me, you are. you see, you have no hope of defeating me. not now, not ever. especially not alone." "i can defeat you if i wanted." he said, confidantly. "oh, really? i would like to see you try." she smirked. "be careful what you wish for." he snarled. then he growled as he lunged at her neck, ready to bite her throat. with swift speed, Slean raised her paw, grabbed Tundra by the neck, and slammed his body against the wall. she held him there, and then leaned close. "you certainly are a daring young dragon with a big ego. you think you can stop me?" she sneered. she gripped his neck tighter, her claws digging into his skin. "you have no idea who you are dealing with." she snarled in a dark tone. she then rose up on her back legs, and raised her front paw. "any last words before i cut you open like a bass?" "actually, yeah......... what's it like knowing that you're about to kill your son?" he questioned. then her eyes widened, and she lowered her paw. "yeah, that's right. i'm the kid you abandonned all those years ago. you also abandonned someone else; your mate. remember him? an ice dragon by the name of Glacier? name sound familiar to you? it should. you know, i always wondered how cruel you could be for leaving. and now i know you're a lot worse. because you're about to kill the very son you abandonned all those years ago, without a care in the world!" he raised his voice at the end, showing a bit of anger. Slean growled, and then slammed him agaisnt the wall again. "you have no right to know that information! my past is none of your buisness!" "it is my buisness! you're my mother!" he shouted. then his eyes widened, and he gasped. what he has just said, hit him. he admitted it. then Slean lowered her head, and losened her grip. she then dropped him on the ground, and stepped back. "Murkvenom!" she roared. then a large, black dragon rushed into the room. "yes, my queen? how may i serve you?" he asked, bowing. "get this ice dragon out of my sight." "and do what with him, your majesty?" "i do not care. just get rid of him." "er, yes, my queen." he then walked over to Tundra. "you're coming with me." he said, reaching out a paw. "i don't think so!" Tundra growled. then the room's temperature began to rapidly decrease as ice and snow formed in the room.
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#258 Posted: 00:34:47 20/11/2010
Wow she is letting him go? Weird wonder what happens nxt?
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#259 Posted: 00:43:41 20/11/2010 | Topic Creator
she wasn't just going to let him roam free, but she wasn't sure what to do with him. so, she calls in Murkvenom to do something with him. but of course, Tundra doesn't like that idea.
i'll try to write more tonight, if i don't, i'll have plenty of time to write over the break, since i have the week off for Thanksgiving.
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#260 Posted: 01:02:28 20/11/2010
Ok cool take your time cynder plus your making a alien? Lol well ok hmmm something tells me she has a heart otherwise she would have killed him
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#261 Posted: 01:30:03 20/11/2010 | Topic Creator
uh, yeah, actually, i am making an alien. technically, three, plus a planet.
anyway, Slean may just have a good side if she spared Tundra. more on that later though. i don't want to give anything away.
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#262 Posted: 02:10:24 20/11/2010
Hmm I want to see when your done with it if you may.
Ok sounds good.
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#263 Posted: 02:42:13 20/11/2010 | Topic Creator
well, right now, i'm just jotting notes down, and other info. i'll try to draw something, but i'm not very good at art, especially on the computer. but you can see it when i'm done.
i'll probally write more Monday. i'll have all day then, if i don't sleep all day.
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#264 Posted: 02:49:05 20/11/2010
Neither am I cynder I'm not all that good on the computer but i always keep trying to improve. youll do fine.
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#265 Posted: 20:33:11 22/11/2010 | Topic Creator
you're better than i am. i'm not even that good at drawing on paper, and i'm worse on the computer.
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#266 Posted: 05:40:26 23/11/2010
lol im ok im not better than you cynder09. you'll be fine.
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#267 Posted: 19:47:41 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, well, i should probally continue the story, eh?
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#268 Posted: 20:38:33 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ok, i finally wrote more.
Chapter 61: Prisoners a teenage male dragon panted as he raced down a dark hallway. he ran as fast as he could, not looking back. he had to get out before he was caught. but he could barely see in the dark. "oof!" he grunted as he bumped into someone. "hey, watch where you're going!" a young female voice snarled. she then got a good look at the male. "Tundra? is that you? what are you doing here? how'd you escape my mother?" she asked. he shoke his head, and then looked at her. "Rouge. i didn't even see you." "obviously. so, how'd you get past her?" "oddly enough, she like stopped herself from killing me. then she ordered some dragon in to get rid of me. he came towards me, but before he could grab me, i froze the room with an ice fury. they'll be stuck there for a while." "don't count on it. poison can melt ice, Tundra. once they're free, they're coming after you. you better go." "wait, what about you?" "don't worry about me. just get out of here." "and the others? Zanna, Tynan, Flash, and all them? we can't leave them here." "i'll get them, you go on ahead. if they find you, they'll catch you. i'm supposed to be here, they won't catch me." "ok. just hurry." he said. then he ran off. once he was out of sight, Rouge grinned evily. "don't worry, i'll take care of them." she said in a dark tone. :meanwhile: "let us out of here!" a young black dragon yelled. "let me out! let me out! i'm too young to die!" an orange dragonfly screamed while holding onto the bars of a cell. "would you two calm down? they're not letting us out, and they're not going to kill us. at least not yet anyway." a female voice said. they turned away from the bars, and faced her. "how can you be sure?! what if this is part of thier plan?! what if they're waiting for us to go insane?!" the dragonfly shouted, eyes crazed, arms waving about. "then they should already be coming for you, Flash." the female teased. "but he's got a point, Zanna. who knows how long we'll be in here." "oh, Tynan, don't listen to him. he's just a crazy, cowardly dragonfly. what would they want with us?" "your powers." an elderly, female voice said. the trio turned towards the cell bars. across from thier cell was an old, female gold dragon. "who are you?" Tynan asked. "my name is Goldstar. i am an elder." "an elder? so, you're an old dragon?" Flash asked. "i am not old!" she snapped. then she cleared her throat. "please forgive my outburst. i have spent too long in this place." "wait, what did you mean that they wanted our powers?" Zanna asked. "all evil beings want power. they especially want yours." she looked at Zanna. "mine? but i don't have any elements." "and i'm just a dragonfly." Flash added. "you may not have any elements, young one, but you have something that Slean desperately wants. the power of premonition." "my premonitions? why?" "she desires the power to see into the past and the future. with that, she will be able to predict what will happen. you must not let her have that power. with it, she will be harder to stop." "uh, but what about the whole elder thing? what does that mean?" Tynan asked. "it means i an a guide, a mentor and protector to the innocent. i have been the head elder for quite some time. however, the remaining elders have been held captive here for years. we were stripped of our powers and put into a deep sleep. those were Slean's orders. she now has our powers somewhere. possibly within her body." "wait, there are more of you here?" Flash asked. "just look around." Goldstar said. they looked around to see that eleven other cells had a gold dragon in them. some were female, and some were male. each appeared to be old. then one cell had five males in it. the trio gasped. "Delano, Snake, Hashim!" Zanna cried out. "and Titus!" Tynan added. "and little red's dad is here!" Flash added. "that's Icetalon." Zanna reminded him. "why are they here?" she turned to Goldstar. "Slean ordered her minions to get them i suppose. there must be a reason for it. however, she hasn't done anything with them, except put them in a deep sleep." she said. then the trio looked in another cell. "Mom!" Tynan gasped. "Aisha's here too!" Zanna added. "but where's Firefly?" Flash looked around. "she was taken some time ago. i do not know what they've done with her." Goldstar answered. Flash, Tynan, and Zanna looked at each other with a worried expression.
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#269 Posted: 21:47:00 23/11/2010
Hehehe well this was cool but rouge oh man just like her mom.... you are a great writer cynder09
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#270 Posted: 22:11:51 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
thank you. i do enjoy it.
yes, Rouge is a troublemaker. acts good one minute, then has a smirk on her face the next. but this chapter was mostly about the prisoners, hince the title. the main prisoner being Goldstar. now, you probally have no idea who that is, or why having her here is a big deal. but for those who have read my Fireflight stories, you know exactly who Goldstar is. but if you don't know her, you will eventually.
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#271 Posted: 22:23:40 23/11/2010
ok hmmm sounds good i cant wait. so how has your week been going so far?
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#272 Posted: 22:32:41 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
my week is going great. feels good to be on break. i can sleep late, and do whatever i want. and of course, on Thursday, my mom is cooking a Thanksgiving dinner, while we watch the parade and the dog show.
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#273 Posted: 22:39:33 23/11/2010
Oh thats cool sounds like a nice week if you ask me.
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#274 Posted: 22:49:58 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
it is. i love Thanksgiving. i get a week off school, i watch the parade and the dog show, and i eat as much as i want. the only way it could be better is if i got presents.
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#275 Posted: 22:51:35 23/11/2010
lol thats christmas time cynder with presents. hahaha
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#276 Posted: 23:12:31 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, i know. but there's no parade or dog show. there is food though. there's always food. and there's another diffrence, at least for my family. on Thanksgiving, it's just me and my parents. on Christmas, the family gets together. now, on Christmas eve, we visit my dads side of the family and exchange presents, we usually don't stay very long, we live close to them anyway. and on Christmas day, we visit my mom's side of the family. now, her side is bigger, and it's a lot of fun. we only see each other once a year, so there's always a lot to discuss. me and my parents are usually the first ones there, the others come soon after. normally, the women will prepare the food, while everybody else just hangs out in the living room and chats. after the food is ready and we're all done eating, it's present time. once the presents are handed out, we just hang out and talk. me and my parents are always last to leave, staying until night. the ones with little kids are the last to arrive and the first to leave. once they're gone, everybody else is pretty much ready to go. it's not as fun without the little ones.
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#277 Posted: 23:16:55 23/11/2010
lol sounds like your families are very close, my family meh.. they suck just to be straight out, my only family i consider are my parents, i think im more close to friends than actual family.
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#278 Posted: 23:40:05 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
hmm. well, mine is very close. we all get along very well. we act like a bunch of crazy comedians when we get together. i love spending time with them. i always have. it's always been fun to spend time with my family. i wish i could see them more often.
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#279 Posted: 23:42:05 23/11/2010
hey thats cool im glad you guys have fun together i'd like to enjoy that but i cant oh well.
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#280 Posted: 23:44:22 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, it seems that a normaly family get-together is chaos, and not everybody gets along. my family is nothing like that. it doesn't make sense. a family get-together should be like my family.
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#281 Posted: 23:48:16 23/11/2010
yeah well my family aint exactly the type to do get togethers without trouble.
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#282 Posted: 23:51:35 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
and i've never had any problems with my family. i've had problems with other people, but not anyone i was related to.
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#283 Posted: 00:13:58 24/11/2010
well thats good im glad you get along with your family.
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#284 Posted: 00:35:03 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah. anyway, i wrote more.
Chapter 62: Dark Changes as Tundra made his escape out of the mountain, Rouge was walking into the library. the room was covered in ice. Slean and Murkvenom were frozen. Rouge walked into the library, and began melting all the ice with poison. "where is he....?" Slean growled quietly once she was free from the ice. "he just left. if you hurry, you can catch him." Rouge replied. Slean turned to Murkvenom was also free now. "gather an army of black dragons and go after him. do not return without his body, whether he is dead or alive." "yes, my queen." he bowed. then he left the room. "what do you want with the body?" Rouge asked. "if he is alive, i'll kill him. if he isn't, i want proof of his death. either way, Tundra will not last the night." she said with an evil grin. "why not just send me after him or go after him yourself?" "Rouge, do not waste my time with questions, just go down to the dungeuon and gaurd the prisoners." "waste your time? i don't see you doing anything." then Slean grabbed Rouge by the neck and lifted her up to her eye level. "if you do not leave my sight immediately, you will see me do something no mother should do. do you understand?" she said, coldly. "yes, mame." Rouge muttered. "good." Slean said. then she dropped her on the ground. "now, get out." she snarled. Rouge got up, and ran out of the room. she headed down the hallway towards the dungeuon. once she reached the dungeuon, she slowed to a stop, and grinned evily. then she walked inside. "yikes! it's her! the troublemaker!" a small voice said. Rouge turned her head sharply. she then saw Flash, Tynan, and Zanna. she approached them. "well, well, well, look at what we have here. three new prisoners in my dungeuon." "let us out, Rouge!" Zanna growled. "tsk, tsk, tsk." Rouge shoke her head. "i rather watch you rot." she chuckled. "you can't leave us here to die!" Flash shouted. "can't i? i'm in charge of this dungeoun. you're locked up tight, and you're gonna stay that way." she grinned. "leave them alone, Rouge." a voice snarled from behind. Rouge turned around, facing the other cell. then she saw Goldstar. "and what are you going to do about it, elder? you're helpless to stop me." she grinned, walking up to her. "i'll show you helpless!" she growled. she tried to grab Rouge through the bars, but had no success. Rouge laughed. "look at the once wise and powerful elder, reduced to trying to grab me through bars. you really are pathetic." she chuckled. "let me out, and i'll show you how pathetic i am!" Goldstar growled. "no. it would be sad to kill an elder with such ease. and i'd hate to have your friends see such a blood bath." she chuckled evily. "you could not defeat me!" she growled. she seemed crazed and angry, like a wild animal that had been caged up. Rouge chuckled evily. "being trapped here for so long has changed you, Goldstar. you're not the wise, powerful, kind, helpful dragon you once were. now, you're wild, crazed, angry, and powerless. decades of captivity really changes a dragon, doesn't it?" she grinned evily. "i am not crazed!" "oh, yes you are. you are indeed. even you have lost your kind and gentle personallity." she chuckled. then there was the sound of footsteps as someone approached them. "teasing the prisoners, are we, Rouge?" a female voice asked. "Mom, i didn't expect to see you down here. you rarely visit the prisoners." Rouge replied. "i thought i would stop by." Slean said, turning her gaze to Goldstar, who glared back. "Goldstar. how are you?" "wanting to rip your throat out!" she growled. "is that so? then perhaps you are ready." "i was ready to kill you the moment i first saw you!" "that was not what i meant. Rouge, get the chains and put them on our friend here. it's time she became...... truly vicious." she grinned evily.
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#285 Posted: 02:19:18 24/11/2010
Oh no not another evil transformation. not good and tundra run!!! run like youve never run before!!!!
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#286 Posted: 02:24:27 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ah, yes, the dark forces are rising and increasing. one will be turned evil, while another is being chased.
well, i have to go. i'll write more tomorrow.
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#287 Posted: 02:58:33 24/11/2010
alright have a goodnight then.
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#288 Posted: 18:24:36 26/11/2010 | Topic Creator
i'm back. i'll write more today.
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#289 Posted: 20:12:20 26/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 63: An Ice Dragon's Mistake
Tundra was running through the wasteland. he then heard a loud roar behind him. he glanced back, an army of black dragons were flying after him. then Tundra leaped into the air, and frantically flapped his wings. the black dragons followed in hot pursuit. Tundra flew at full speed, and soon approached the forrest. he then bolted upward, flying high above the trees. the army quickly followed. he then turned around sharply, shooting ice shards at the army. they melted the ice with acid, and then they surrounded Tundra. they growled, and charged at him, all attacking at once. Tundra roared out in pain. then there was a loud, angry roar. the black dragons stopped, and looked up. rushing towards them was a large ice dragon. the dragon shot huge ice shards at the dragons, freezing some of them. the frozen dragons fell to the ground, and were smashed to bits. the others backed off, and then charged at the ice dragon. the ice dragon let out a big gust of freezing wind, slowing the army down. he then knocked them back with his wings and tail. he was about to attack again, but then stopped to cough, and catch his breath. "Dad, are you ok?" Tundra asked worriedly, as he flew up to the dragon. "i'm fine......just out of breath at the moment.......but it's not me i'm worried about...." Glacier huffed. then the black dragons flew towards them. they shot poison balls at Tundra. Glacier pushed his son to the side, taking the hit instead. he then took a deep breath and let out a beam of ice at the black dragons. they all froze and plummeted to the ground. Glacier breathed heavily, tired and weak. Tundra came to his side, using his strenght to hold him up. "come on, you need to get back to the castle." Tundra said. then they started flying back to the ice kingdom together. it took them some time to reach the castle. they landed on a rocky platform covered in ice. it led to a large room. they walked into the large room, which was filled with weapons and armor. Glacier collapsed on the ground, weak. Tundra stayed by his side. "come on, get up. you can make it." he said. Glacier coughed as he lay there. then they heard footsteps, and the double doors opened. "what happened?" a female voice as worriedly as a figure rushed over to them. Tundra turned his head to see the figure. "he's weak from battle. he saved me from a bunch of black dragons. Polaris, take him to his bedroom, and get one of the healers." "and what will you do?" she asked Tundra. he looked at her. "i'm going back to the mountain where the others are locked up." he said. then he started to leave. Polaris quickly put her tail in front of him. "i don't think so. not only are you young and not fully trained to do such a task on your own, but your father and i will be worried sick about you. it's you they want. you should stay here, and i will go." "no." he turned to her. "they won't kill me." "and how do you know? they were after you, correct?" "but they won't kill me. thier evil queen....... is my mother...." he muttered, turning to his dad. Glacier raised his head, as if shocked he knew that. "yeah, Dad, i know." "Polaris.......will you leave us, please....?" Glacier muttered. then Polaris left the room. Glacier sighed. "....what all do you know.....?" he asked. "the truth. Rouge showed it to me in a book. my mother's book. the one that tells of her life story. Slean's life story." he said. then he looked away, and sighed. "why.......?" he muttered. then he looked at his dad. "...why didn't you tell me the truth.....?" "how could i.....?" Glacier muttered. ".....how could i tell my son......that his mother is evil.....and that your little sister......is just like her......how could i do that.....? i knew it would hurt you.......and that you wouldn't believe it.......you would want to believe it....." "so you lied......? you just flat-out lied.....? was any of it true......?" "yes, some of it was........how it started.......how it all began.......that part is true........" "what do you mean.....? you can't honestly expect me to believe.........that.......you loved her........" "but i did love her.......she was the most.......beautiful dragoness i had ever met........and.........a part of me.........still loves her......that was why i sent you to find her.......i couldn't do it.......i was afraid that.......the same thing would happen again......" "what do you mean......?" he asked. Glacier sighed. "the first time we met.......we were only together for a day.........and we wern't young when it happened........we met early that morning.......i had gone out for a morning fly, just myself........i got thirsty, and landed at a stream, which flowed down from a waterfall in the forrest.......it was a beautiful place......as i approached the water.......i saw her........the most beautiful green dragoness i had even laid eyes on........she was across the stream from me, her long slender swan-like neck bending down towards the water as she drank.......i stared in awe, unable to move, because i was enraptured by her beauty and grace..........she then raised her head, and noticed me.......her shining emerald eyes staring right at me........she smiled in a pleasant and gentle manner......then she spread magnificent green wings, and gracefully leaped across the stream to me..........i only turned my head and continued to stare as she slowly turned to face me........with a sweet smile, she told me her name in a soothing voice.........how i managed to utter my name, i still am not sure.......she giggled at my nervousness, and inched closer to me...........she then whispered in my ear.......she asked for me to spend the day with her......i foolishly agreed.......we did everything together that day......walking through the forrest, flying through the air, swimming in the lake, walking along the beach.......and by nightfall........we rested outside a cave, gazing up at the stars.........i was so.......happy......that i couldn't stop myself......from......spending the night with her........the next morning, i awoke, and she was gone.........i was devastated........i returned to that spot every day for a couple of months.......and then.......one day.......i found something......in our cave........laying in a nest of leaves.......was.......a light blue egg.......your egg.......i knew it had to be mine.......so i took it to the ice kingdom.........and sure enough, you are my son.........and though i didn't see her for a long time, it didn't stop me from going to that same spot every day.......then a few laters later, when you were eight years old........i found her there........though she seemed diffrent........she didn't move as graceful as she did the first time i saw her........she had a gleam in her eye.......and a sly smile........she almost appeared......dark.......but that didn't change how i felt.......i was enraptured by her........she came to me again.......and the same thing happened.......we spent the day......and night.......together.........i awoke to her absence again.......and i returned every day for months without seeing her.......and i never did see her again.......i kept going back for a couple of years.........until i met Polaris......she came to the ice kingdom one day......she said she came from the sea.....she said she was sent to help the ice kingdom.......and she could sense something about me.....she knew something was up.......so i told her my story.........she said i shouldn't see Slean again.......and that she was trouble.......i didn't want to believe it......i loved Slean........but then.......Polaris showed me a vision........she showed me.......Slean's true self.......her dark side........and that she had a daughter.......Rouge........she trained her......to be like her........i was devastated........i was furious......a part of me wanted her dead, wanted her to suffer.......but Polaris stopped me from going after her.......she said it would only get worse if i saw her again..." he explained.
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#290 Posted: 09:24:51 27/11/2010
Hey cynder09 thanks for this chapter you wrote. I just came from work seriously. Dang black friday.... this made my day. But I'm still kinda iffy on something. It seems slean was a different dragoness at first but then sounds like something happened to her to make her change wonder what happened? Well very nice reading this made my day, so thank you cynder tomorrow another long shift and its gonna be rough. Thanks cynder hope you had a awesome thanksgiving.
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#291 Posted: 22:10:56 29/11/2010 | Topic Creator
well, your welcome. glad my story was there to cheer you up.
you'll find out more about Slean in a moment. i had a great Thanksgiving. i ate a lot, slept late, and was online when i wasn't eating or sleeping. i love breaks. well, here's more of my story: Chapter 64: A Poison Dragon's Plan "let me go!" a dragoness roared. she was trapped in a cage which was chained to the ceiling of a dark room. the cage hovered over a pool of jet black liquid. "you will not be relashed until your transformation is complete, Goldstar." a female chuckled. "i will kill you once i am free, Slean!" "do not count on it." she said with a sly smile. "now, Rouge, lower the cage into the liquid." she said. Rouge was standing off to the side next to a large crank. a chain was connected to it which went up to the ceiling where it went through a loop to hold it in place. the end was connected to the cage Goldstar was in. Rouge placed both front paws on a handle, and began to turn it clockwise. as it turned, the cage lowered. within a few moments, Goldstar's cage was submerged in liquid. "now, come. we will leave here." "for how long?" Rouge asked, walking over to her mother. "however long it takes for the transformation to take place. now, come. follow me." she said. then Slean opened the door and stepped out of the room. Rouge followed. she followed her down a long, dark hallway. Slean opened to double doors, and walked inside a messy library. Rouge followed her inside. "what are we doing in here, Mom?" she asked. Slean walked over to a table, picked up a book, and turned around. "i figured you might want answers." she said, holding up the book. it was dark green. "your book....." Rouge muttered. she looked at her mother, who sat down at a table. "come. sit." she said. Rouge walked over, and sat down beside her. Slean opened the book to the first page. there was a picture of her with some writing underneath. "read." she continued. "i already saw this page." Rouge said, looking at it. "it's you. when you were younger." "indeed." she said. then Slean sighed. "Rouge, how much do you know?" "i know what you told me." she said, not looking up at her. "Rouge. i know you read the book. every time i come in here, it's been moved, and i have not touched it." "well, i'm sorry, but you wern't telling me everything." she said, looking up at her. "and for a good reason. i couldn't let you find out about your father." "you mean Glacier." "yes, that would be his name." "why? why try to hide it?" "and let you find out the truth? that your father is a good ice king, and your older brother is just like him." "why not? we could turn them." "no, we couldn't." Slean shoke her head. "how do you know?" "because i've already tried. see, you don't know everything because the book doesn't say everything." "wait, when did you try?" "it was eight years ago, when i met your father for the second time, he didn't know it, but i had a plan. i knew he would leave the castle for his morning fly. since we met, i had watched him go to our spot every day. he was looking for me, but i never showed. not until Tundra was eight years old. i was there, waiting for him. while he was with me, i sent my minions to the ice kingdom. they were to get Tundra, so i could turn him, and they were to kill anyone who got in thier way. they made it to him, and they did take him. they took him to my lair, and threw him into the black liquid, but when he came out, he was the same. he wasn't evil. he was immune to it." "immune? how?" she asked, curiously. "Rouge, do you remember, back when you were four, that a good dragon sorceror tried to turn you good?" she asked. Rouge nodded. "and you remember that it didn't work, right?" "yeah, i always wondered why. you never told me." "well, that is because i am immune to such magic. no one can turn me agaisnt my will. you and Tundra must have inherited that from me." "so, what did you do?" she asked. Slean sighed. "i let him go. there was nothing i could do. he was immune to the liquid, and none of my minions could turn him. and i couldn't turn him, i was with his father." "and what were you and him doing?" "well, i used illousions, much like you do. while he was with a copy of myself, i was casting magic, trying to turn him. nothing worked. somehow, he is also immune to it. i haven't figured out how. so, by nightfall, i gave up. i got rid of the copy. but i made the same....... choice as before. and then i had you. but i kept you." "why? why get rid of Tundra and not me?" "well, Tundra's egg was light blue. i figured he would be an ice dragon, like his father. i couldn't accept that. but your egg was forrest green. i figured you would be like me. so i kept you." "but why were you with Glacier the first time?" she asked. Slean sighed. "i was simply out to wreak some havoc that morning. i stopped for a drink. i had no real plan, actually. i was just out to cause trouble, have some fun. much like you do a lot. then i saw him. you should have seen him. he was frozen in place." "wait, how do you freeze an ice dragon?" "no, dear, not like that. he couldn't move because of my beauty. i noticed him, and couldn't help but feel like i could have some fun with him. so, i introduced myself. or rather, a clone introduced myself. i was off in the bushes, plotting my devious tricks. but no matter what i had planned, it didn't phase him. either he didn't notice, or he just dismissed it.he ignored or forgot about my tricks. all he could focus on was me. i finally got tired of being bored, and got rid of my clone and my plan. but when i tried to fly away, he flew after me. i zigzaged, did loops, i did anything i could think of to avoid him. but he just smiled and did the same. he was enjoying myself. i finaly landed on the beach. he landed beside me. i walked off to get away from him, be he followed. i headed towards a cave, but again, he followed. i finally stopped to rest under the stars. he laid down beside me. i realize i didn't try very hard to get away, but it was almost like......some part of me......didn't want to.....so, we spent the night together.....and while he was asleep, i left.....and some time later, i laid an egg.....but since i didn't want it, i left it in that cave, knowing he would check there for me..." she explained.
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#292 Posted: 08:14:14 30/11/2010
Im glad you had fun then.
Well this is abit weird i see slean was always bad but then why didnt she kill him or just leave? She stayed with him wierd. nice chapter cynder09 hope for more soon.
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#293 Posted: 22:05:55 30/11/2010 | Topic Creator
well, Slean said herself that she could have tried harder to get away, but she said that it was almost like some part of it didn't want to. hmm, sounds like evil has gone soft. or perhaps not. you'll find out soon enough.
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#294 Posted: 00:58:02 01/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 65: A Sudden Transformation
Firefly lay motionless in a small cage. her tail twitched, and she moaned. she then opened her eyes to the sound of footsteps approaching. she got up, and looked around. she could see nothing but darkness all around her. then she saw two glowing yellow eyes approach her from the darkness. they were high up, giving her the idea that it must have been an adult dragon that had come for her, but she could not see it's figure. then there was a clang as something sharp hit the top of the cage. she looked up, seeing a large black claw grasping the cage. then the cage lifted into the air. the figure turned, and she could no longer see it's eyes. then she felt movement as the figure carried the cage off into the darkness. then the figure paused momentarily. Firefly heard the creaking sound of a door opening, yet saw no source of light. then the figure proceded, stopping only for a moment to close the door. Firefly got the impression it was walking down a hallway as the sound of it's footsteps echoed. "who are you? where you taking me?" she cried out, demanding answers. the figure didn't respond, or even acknowledge the fact that she spoke. then the figure stopped. the sound of a creaking door was heard again. then the figure walked into a lagre room, dimly lit up by candels on the walls. the door closed. Firefly looked around. there was nothing but a pool of black liquid. she turned to the figure, seeing now that it was indeed a black dragon. he stepped forward, placing the cage on the ground. then he stepped back. he turned his head slightly, glancing over at another black dragon who sat by a large crank. the first dragon nodded to the other. the one by the crank nodded back before he began to turn it. he turned it counterclockwise. soon, a large cage began to emerge from the pool of black liquid. inside the cage was a crazed dragoness. Firefly gazed at the dragoness, gasping in shock and fear. bashing against the bars of the cage and roaring ferociously was Goldstar. however, she was diffrent. her golden-yellow scales had turned to a dark, rusted copper color. her belly and inside wings were a deep bronze. her once slender, grey horns were now twisted and demented. her tail-end grew in size, becoming a large, sharp blade. her claws grew also, and became sharper. her finely pointed teeth were now visible when her mouth was closed. her eyes, her once gentle yellow eyes were now dark as night, and filled with anger and hatred. this was no longer the once sweet dragoness who was the head elder. now, she was a vicious monster. her cold gaze quickly narrowed on Firefly. she shoke the cage violently, roaring loudly. "kill! kill! must kill!" she screamed in a twisted, demonic voice. she hissed and growled, her dark gaze never leaving Firefly's red scales. "you want to kill?" the first dragon asked her. "kill! must kill! thirsty! want blood!" she screeched, evily. the dragon chuckled. "good. here's your first victim." he grinned evil, pointing to Firefly. suddenly, the other dragon chuckled as he quickly shot acid at the cage. the acid melted through the bars. with a look of evil, Goldstar jumped down from the cage, and eyed Firefly closely. Firefly looked at her from inside her cage, whimpering like a cowardly dog. Goldstar slowly turned her gaze to the first dragon. "victim in cage! no fun! want chase!" she hissed. the first dragon chuckled. "one fun chase coming right up." he grinned evily. then he spat acid at the small cage, and watched as it melted. "you better run." he smirked at Firefly. with a scream, and fearful expression, Firefly bolted out of the room. "have fun." the dragon chuckled evily just before Goldstar raced out of the room after Firefly. :meanwhile: Flash, Tynan, and Zanna watched in fear as every gold dragon in the dungeuon suddenly woke up, and began to glow with a black aura. each one roared, growled, and hissed evily as they bashed about in thier cells. "what's going on?!" Tynan cried out. "ahhh! they've all gone nuts!" Flash hollered. Zanna thought back to a previous conversation. "My name is Goldstar. I am an elder." the words rang through her mind. an elder. a gold dragoness. she gazed at each gold dragon there. they thrashed about violently, as if suddenly turned evil somehow. though frightened by the sudden change, a little plan was forming in the young dragon's mind.
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#295 Posted: 08:05:47 01/12/2010
Poor firefly i hope goldstar donest catch her and i hope she turns back to normal..... hmmm now that i think about it what ever happened to frost? the ice dragon?
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#296 Posted: 23:16:49 01/12/2010 | Topic Creator
ah, Frostbolt. he will make an appearance shortly.
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#297 Posted: 01:52:30 02/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 66: A Dark Reunion
"ahhhhhh! help me!" Firefly screamed as she raced down a dark hallway. "kill! kill! no help! you die!" Goldstar hissed as she chased after her. Firefly, desperate to get away, rushes through double doors. they lead her to a large room. it was lite by candels along the walls, and appeared empty except for one thing... "who dares disturb me?!" growled a male voice. a figure turned around to face the intruder. Firefly turned to run, but then saw Goldstar standing in the doorway. "you die now!" she snarled at Firefly. "you're the one that'll die if you do not leave here at once!" the male growled. the two dragons inched towards the cowering young dragon, only to step into the light, and glare right into each other's eyes. in that moment, they stopped, looking at each other. there was something about the other one...... something..... familiar. they continued to gaze at each other. "Goldstar?" the male asked, surprised. "Frostbolt?" she gasped. Firefly looked up, confused. they wern't fighting, or trying to attack her. they just stood and stared at each other. "what happened to you?" they both said at once. a light chuckle was shared. "turned evil by the little mistress, the queen's daughter." Frost said. "same, except both were there." she said, sounding less crazed and angry. "really? i only saw the young one and an adult male." "a male? i saw two who raised me up out of the liquid." "i was referring to Murkvenom, i believe his name was. you?" "didn't catch any names. random dragons, i suppose." she replied. Firefly was shocked. two evil beings, having a casual conversation as if they were friends. she then slowly and quietly started to crawl away, hoping to make it through the door before they noticed. "and where do you think you're going?" Frost asked the young dragon. then Goldstar jumped in front of her, blocking her path. "it's not nice to leave without announcing it first." she grinned evily. Firefly sat up, gasping in horror. things had just gotten worse. not only were they not fighting and had noticed her, but they seemed to be working together. how would she escape now? :meanwhile: ".....ugh..............ugh........oh, my acheing head........" an elderly male voice groaned. "Icetalon? sir? are you ok?" a young female voice asked. the old white dragon raised his head and looked around, only to find himself locked up in a cell with other dragons, ot to mention other cells around his. his eyes fized on a young, black dragoness in a cell across from his. "........Zanna.......?" he asked, surprised, his eyes widening to get a better look. "yes, sir, it's me. Tynan and Flash are here too." "hey, nice to see you finally woke." Tynan smiled at him. "hey, big guy. man, you sure took a long nap." Flash said, jokingly. ".....ugh......" Icetalon groaned as he stood. "what's going on? where am i?" "Slean's dungeuon. she's an evil dragoness who has us locked up here." Zanna answered. "and what of my daughter? where is Firefly?" "we don't know. she was taken some time ago." Tynan replied. "you mean she's here?!" the old dragon gasped in horror. "afraid so, big fella..." Flash frowned. "i must escape!" he cried out. he growled ferociously as he bashed against the cell. he hadn't noticed that he wasn't the only one doing that. the young ones watched as Icetalon and the other gold dragons bashed against their cells, anxious to escape.
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#298 Posted: 02:53:12 02/12/2010
What the that's weird frostbolt and goldstar are talking like whatever? And hmmm poor firefly she can't get a break huh?
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#299 Posted: 22:14:57 02/12/2010 | Topic Creator
nope, no break for Firefly. but if you had read my Fireflight stories, Frostbolt and Goldstar talking wouldn't seem all that wierd. but i will explain things soon since you don't know...
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#300 Posted: 23:34:22 02/12/2010
Hmm ok maybe I did read it but I skimmed half of it. Ok well sounds good can't wait for the next chapter like always great job
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