darkSpyro

good story.

thank you. the next chapter is coming late tomorrow

Nice chapter, and why are you
IGNORING ME??? WHAT DID I DO TO U?

Your not ignored, he reads your comments. soemtimes you get a reply and sometimes you don't

uh i'm a female... and i'm not ignoring anyone...


Chapter 62,

a few hours later, Dragsooth is still in his room laying on the bed, he hears a knock on the door.

Malinda: "Dragsooth... are you in there?"

Dragsooth: "yes mother."

Malinda: "well lucy and i are going to the Temple to worship God. do you want to come with us?"

Dragsooth: "i don't want to be within 10 feet of lucifer. what makes you think that i want to worship with him!?"

Malinda: "can't you put the past behind you and forgive him for what he did?"

Dragsooth: "i'll never let it go!... what he did to me was unforgivable!"

lucifer walked up to Malinda.

lucifer: "is he coming with us?"

Malinda looks at lucifer and shakes her head.

lucifer: "he'll eventually forgive me..."

Malinda: "i hope you're right..."

lucifer: "come on let's go to the Temple..."

they walk to the Temple together. when they go inside the Temple it was packed with humans and angels prostrating before God and Jesus. lucifer and Malinda made thier way to the front and bowed down before God and Jesus. some angels saw lucifer there and they got up and walked away as did some humans. lucifer saw them beginning to leave.

lucifer: "no need to leave on my account..."

the angels and humans gave him dirty looks and left the Temple.
lucifer kept trying to worship. more and more angels and humans left the Temple. lucifer was bothered by the fact that the reason they had left was because of him.

Ron and Ben were right beside lucifer. Ron got up and turned around beginning to leave. Ben got up and got in front of Ron.

Ben: "come on Ronald can't you just ignore lucifer and worship without leaving?"

Ron: "i'm not leaveing because of lucifer... i'm leaveing because i'm bored..."

Ron walked past Ben.

Ben: "Ronald come back... you haven't even worshiped for an hour..."

Ron: "5 minutes is enough for me Ben..." he walks out of the Temple.

Ben went back in front of God and Jesus.

Ben: "please forgive Ron for leaveing like that. he gets bored easily... not that worshiping you is boreing or anything... he's not used to it..."

God: "he was surely used to worshiping lucifer..."

Ben: "i know and that's terrible... i'll talk to Ron after worship."

Jesus: "would you like to talk to your brother now?"

Ben: "no... i haven't worshiped for even an hour and i want to worship at least an hour everyday... i'll talk to Ron afterwards." he bowed down and continued to worship.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Oh, sorry
Good chapter

that's ok. many people made the same mistake... thanks.

Oh, sorry too. now i get you...
Good Chapter ;3

thank you

Chapter 62,

after an hour Ben walks out of the Temple and into the mansion where he and Ron are living. Ben walks into the mansion and up a flight of stairs into the bedroom that he and Ron share. he sees Ron relaxing on the couch.

Ben: "i can't believe you left the Temple for such a stupid reason!"

Ron sat up and looked at him "and what's your point?"

Ben: "you left for no good reason..."

Ron: "dude i have been a slave to lucifer for over 2 years. i was forced to worship him... and now since we are not slaves anymore i would like to have a little rest without worrying about anything." he layed back down on the couch.

Ben: "all i'm saying is you should show a bit of respect and thank Jesus."

Ron: "i already thanked him... and i even worshiped him."

Ben: "you only worshiped him for 5 minutes and then you were rude enough to just get up and leave!"

Ron: "i worship him for 5 minutes you worship him for an hour... what's the difference?"

Ben: "the time spent worshiping... and while you were a satanist you worshiped for one hour every night!"

Ron: "well you know i'm still getting used to worshiping Jesus..."

Ben: "that's not the point... you are ungrateful to the Master... even when you realize he's real you don't worship him that much."

Ron: "at least i am worshiping him."

Ben: "you have to worship him for more time... because he saved your soul from hell."

Ron: "you're right. he did save me..."

Ben: "so does that mean you're going to go to the Temple and worship for a longer time now?"

Ron: "yes... i'll do it tomorrow though..."

Ben: "why tomorrow?"

Ron: "i've got plans tonight." he put his head down and tryed to fall asleep.

Ben: "oh no you're not taking a nap now... i thought you were going to the Temple now?"

Ron opened his eyes "i never said i'll go now."

Ben: "you're just going to procrastinate until tomorrow and then you won't worship him for a longer time!"

Ron got off the couch "ok fine i'll go now." he walks over to his bed and gets a guitar from underneath the bed.

Ben: "why are you taking your guitar?"

Ron: "i figured if i have to worship i might as well have fun in the process..."

Ben: "but the only songs you've ever written have been satanic songs..."

Ron: "while i was in Heaven i wrote a Christian song..." he pulled a piece of paper out of his pocket and gave it to Ben.

Ben: *reading it* "Jesus loves me this i know for the Bible tells me so... " he looks at Ron "this song was already created! you weren't original."

Ron takes the paper and takes out a pen and writes something down on the paper and gives it back to Ben "read it now..."

Ben: *reading it* "Jesus loves me and you this i know for the Bible tells me so..." he looks back at Ron and says sarcastically "oh yeah now that's being creative."

Ron takes the paper from him "i know the Master is going to love it..." he walks out of the room.


next chapter is coming tomorrow.

Saved you from something that he created himself... Hardly worth worship...

Good chapter

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Saved you from something that he created himself... Hardly worth worship...

i worship Jesus because he saved me from hell and because he saved my life a bunch of times...


Chapter 63,

Ben suddenly heard a loud crash, Ron walked in the room with the guitar broken in half.

Ron: "i accidentally broke my guitar. looks like now i can't worship..."

Ben: "you know you always do things like this. you always want to do what you want to do and you never want to do what's best for you."

Ron: "worshiping is best for me is that what you're trying to say?"

Ben: "yes at least worship for a little while..."

Ron: "i do worship for a little while."

Ben: "5 minutes isn't really that long..."

Ron: "it is long for me..."

Ben: "5 minutes isn't long Ron."

Ron: "let's just agree to disagree..."

Ben: "ok fine but in the morning you're coming with me to worship..."

Ron: "ok fine... but it better not start at 5:00 in the morning."

Ben: "it won't..."

Ron: "good... i'm gonna go to sleep." he went over to his bed and layed down "good night..." he fell asleep.

Ben sat own on the couch, he picked up a Bible that was sitting on the table in front of the couch, he began to read the Bible.


in another part of Heaven...

lucifer and Malinda got back to their mansion...

lucifer: "i'm gonna go to sleep now..."

Malinda: "alright good night."

lucifer walked to his room.

Malinda walked up to Dragsooth's bedroom door, she knocked on it.

Malinda: "Draggy it's me... may i come in?"

Dragsooth: "yes mother..."

Malinda opens the door and walks in, she sees Dragsooth still laying on the bed, she sits down on the bed next to him.

Malinda: "Draggy why can't you put the past behind you and forgive lucifer for the horrible things he did?"

Dragsooth: "what he did was unforgivable!"

Malinda: "Jesus forgave lucifer... why can't you?"

Dragsooth: "because i can never forgive him for what he did... he's evil and he will always be evil in my eyes..."

Malinda got up "come with me... i want to show you something..."

Dragsooth follows her and they get to lucifer's bedroom door. Malinda opens the door slightly.

Malinda: "look."

Dragsooth looks into the room and sees lucifer kneeling in front of his bed praying... Malinda slowly closes the door.

Malinda: "see Draggy.... lucifer has repented from his evil ways... can't you give him a chance to prove himself?"

Dragsooth: "alright i'll give him a chance..."

Malinda smiled warmly "thank you Draggy..."

Dragsooth: "you're welcome mother."

they then went into their own rooms.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Wow the last chapter is, well what I expected.
But err, Good chapter

Good chapter

thank you,

Chapter 64,

in the morning in Ben and Ron's mansion,

Ben get's up off of his bed and goes across the room to Ron who was still asleep, he tapped Ron on the shoulder.

Ben: "wake up..."

Ron opened his eyes "what time is it?... i told you not to wake me at 5:00."

Ben: "it's not 5:00 it's 6:00..."

Ron: "i see no difference between the times, it's still too early to be waking up and going to the Temple."

Ben: "come on... you promised you'd come with me... do you really want to sin in Heaven?"

Ron: "what sin would i commit if i don't come with you?"

Ben: "lying..."

Ron: "ok i'm coming..." he got out of bed.

Ben: "ok let's go... he walked toward the door.

Ron: "wait..."

Ben stops and looks back at him "what?"

Ron: "can i have breakfast first?"

Ben: "we'll eat after worship... now come on."

they both walked outside and toward the Temple.


in another part of Heaven,

lucifer met up with Malinda.

Malinda: "good morning. how did you sleep?"

lucifer: "i slept better than i could have slept in hell that's for sure."

Malinda: "Dragsooth has decided to forgive you..."

lucifer: "at least someone has forgiven me..."

Malinda: "don't worry no one can hate you forever. the others will forgive you..."

lucifer: "i know... i'm going to go talk to Dragsooth..."

lucifer walks up to Dragsooth's bedroom door, he knocks on it.

Dragsooth: "who is it?"

lucifer: "it's me... may i come in?"

Dragsooth: "sure..."

lucifer opens the door and walks in the room, he looks at Dragsooth.

lucifer: "look i know i was cruel to you throughout your entire life but i just want to make everything alright... i want to make everything up..."

Dragsooth: "you can never take away the emotional scars you caused me... but we can try to make this work... we can try to put the past behind us..."

lucifer: "why don't we start by going to the Temple..."

Dragsooth: "ok, since i refused to go yesterday i'll come..."

they walked to the Temple...

epilogue...
lucifer and Dragsooth's friendship strengthened and they put the past behind them, everyone in Heaven had forgave lucifer, the former demons were treated as normal angels now, and everyone lived happily ever after...


THE END.


i know it was a bad ending but i just wanted to finish it...

nice ending, and its quite impressive to have writen 65 chapters(you wrote 62 two times)

Great story

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nice ending, and its quite impressive to have writen 65 chapters(you wrote 62 two times)

oh yeah the same thing happen in my first fanfic... oh and thanks for the compliment... i'm gonna write another fanfic sometime soon...

Didn't see that comin'!