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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#251 Posted: 09:40:01 30/01/2010
yeah, that's why i said 'that was sort of off topic'
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#252 Posted: 16:02:31 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, I don't mind, but do try to keep the chatter related to the story..

And yes, I have an art topic..
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#253 Posted: 19:49:38 03/02/2010
more more more
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#254 Posted: 16:24:29 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll write more in few days.. Don't worry..
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#255 Posted: 18:12:13 04/02/2010
dont worry bro take your time to relax.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#256 Posted: 09:17:00 05/02/2010
ya i just story hungery *story stomage growls* wait my tummy wait....
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#257 Posted: 02:10:16 12/02/2010
alrite. ill wait.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#258 Posted: 03:57:52 15/02/2010
Alright.We'll all wait.
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Wait, what?
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#259 Posted: 05:05:03 18/02/2010
ngh. i dont like waitin, at least the chapter will be good.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#260 Posted: 14:01:27 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
I've got a fairly good idea about the next chapters.. I think I've taken enough time resting my brains..
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#261 Posted: 18:30:15 18/02/2010
Thats great samius. Can't wait to read what you come up with next.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#262 Posted: 03:30:11 19/02/2010
Yeah,we've waited a long time for the chapters.They must ALL be even greater than the others if it took this long.
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Wait, what?
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#263 Posted: 12:50:22 19/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, I guess you'll see..
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#264 Posted: 00:33:12 20/02/2010
yay! samius's story continues. we all waited a wile 4 this. hope u got a gud rest samius.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#265 Posted: 00:33:48 20/02/2010
hey i havent been here for a while smilie
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#266 Posted: 00:42:22 20/02/2010
the story hadnt continued much in a wile. so u may of missed a little. depends wen u left off. thats gonna change soon.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#267 Posted: 00:45:55 20/02/2010
i left t the top of the page so yeah nothing new.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#268 Posted: 21:30:42 20/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Yah, I don't know if it's going to be any better.. But at least I know what I'm going to write..

I'll try to add more tomorrow. :3
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#269 Posted: 09:31:39 21/02/2010
Today!
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#270 Posted: 18:25:44 22/02/2010 | Topic Creator
*facepalm* Sorry, sorry..

I'll write when I'm not busy with schoolwork.. It won't take long, I promise..
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#271 Posted: 18:49:00 22/02/2010
its ok man, we should know you are busy. I guess they just want to know if your going to finish the story or not lol. take your time school is more important.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
boyfriend spyro Blue Sparx Gems: 911
#272 Posted: 03:27:11 23/02/2010
Lol,we'll wait.Also,I know what you mean about school ugh...I have it too grrr...
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Wait, what?
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#273 Posted: 05:24:34 23/02/2010
schools quite annoying. i can understand what ur going threw. i sometimes forget 2 do my homework wen i get home.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#274 Posted: 07:11:16 23/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Of cource I will finish the story, I wouldn't want to leave it without and ending.. smilie
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#275 Posted: 22:58:51 26/02/2010
thinking of the fans, your a good author Samius. oh, how many fans u got anyway?
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#276 Posted: 08:25:41 27/02/2010 | Topic Creator
I dunno really.. Quite a few..

Lolz, "Samius Fan-Club"
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#277 Posted: 08:27:12 27/02/2010
<- look at that baby pokemon. she wants more story time!
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#278 Posted: 10:01:32 27/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Surprise!!

Chapter 15.

Spyro watched over Ember quietly, as she wahed herself in the pond that lied in the side of the street.. The ash that covered her body flowed away, revealing shimmering pink scales..

"So, about your friend.." Ember said to Spyro..

Spyro shook his head, trying to get out of his thoughts..

"Yeah? What about her?.." He asked.

"Does she live here?.." Ember asked, "If she does, I know her.."

"No.. We both live at the Great Hall.." Spyro answered quickly. He was starting to get worried about Cynder..

"Oh, so you two are close?.." Ember said, she noticed what Spyro was thinking, and approached him..

"Don't worry, your friend is fine.." Ember said, and nuzzled Spyro's cheek..

Spyro felt kind of awkward with how close Ember came to him..

"Yeah, I'm sure.." He said, and quietly nuzzled Ember back. After realizing what he just did, he pulled his head out of Ember's reach. Like he was afraid that someone had seen them..

"What's wrong?.." Ember asked suddely..

"I really shouldn't.." Spyro said, "I told Cynder I'll meet her here and.."

"Cynder?.. Is that her name?.." Ember asked..

"Yeah, why?.." Spyro answered..

"Oh, nothing.." Ember said, "Have I heard that name before?.."

"Ember you should go, really.." Spyro said, suddenly..

"Bu.. Wh.. Will we meet again?.." Ember asked with a sad look in her face..

"Uh.. Yeah, I'm sure we will.." Spyro said, "Now go."

"Uh.. Okay.." Ember said, and left running with the other citizens, peeking back at Spyro like she had had something she had wanted to say..

Spyro looked at her, and turned his head. He had felt really comfortable with Ember, and he was scared how easily it happened..
So, he sat down, and waited for Cynder..

After a brief wait, Spyro heard Cynder's voice yelling for his name. He ran towards the voice, and saw her jogging to him happily..

"What happened? you look really happy.." Spyro asked her..

"I just had a new friend, he helped me to evacuate people back to the caves." Cynder said.

"Oh, okay.." Spyro answered, and tried not to look quilty. He didn't want Cynder to know about Ember..

"So, I think we're done here.." Cynder said, and smiled.

"Yeah, let's get back to the hall.." Spyro said..

They both got on their wings and headed back to Cyril, Spyro was happy to finally get to do something, but was worried it would eventually get him into deeper trouble..
Cynder, on the other hand, was at the top of the world. She felt good to be able to help, and the fact that she had made a new friend made her even happier..
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#279 Posted: 10:10:40 27/02/2010
*hands Samius a packet of fruit skittles*
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#280 Posted: 11:40:08 27/02/2010
*claps*
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#281 Posted: 12:27:35 27/02/2010
*Claps* Bravo! You postsed a chapter!smilie

Great chapter a ussal.smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#282 Posted: 13:00:09 27/02/2010
great chapter. very awkward for Spyro too.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#283 Posted: 15:47:15 27/02/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#284 Posted: 17:53:12 27/02/2010
great chapter.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#285 Posted: 00:48:26 28/02/2010
plz make more ill die withou your story pleeeeeeeaaaaasssseee!!!!!!
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#286 Posted: 02:57:51 28/02/2010
*applauds* good chapter, its been a while for this.

it kinda sounds a bit wierd wen u say they got on their wings.

and thats a little dramatic wat u said supersonic.
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#287 Posted: 03:28:45 28/02/2010
i'm trying to get through the second beginning. smilie good story. smilie
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supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#288 Posted: 04:57:40 28/02/2010
plz make more
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#289 Posted: 05:02:22 28/02/2010
bwavo!
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supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#290 Posted: 05:04:20 28/02/2010
cute baby latias me luvs latias
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#291 Posted: 05:05:41 28/02/2010
i'm on the fourth page in this story now. smilie finally! i'm getting closer to the newest chapter! smilie
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...is this supposed to be my signature?
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#292 Posted: 07:30:19 28/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Way to go. I'll post another chapter soon.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#293 Posted: 10:04:39 28/02/2010
Hopefully soon
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
shadowdragon5 Blue Sparx Gems: 820
#294 Posted: 17:17:17 28/02/2010
awsome
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Aww, I wanted to explode.
supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#295 Posted: 21:15:21 28/02/2010
plz make more
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#296 Posted: 21:18:56 28/02/2010
me need more! smilie please?
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...is this supposed to be my signature?
supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#297 Posted: 16:43:16 02/03/2010
plz rite more im a huge fan of this story pleaase i need it
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#298 Posted: 16:46:51 02/03/2010 | Topic Creator
BWAHAAHAA! I have a fan-club! I surely am the highest being in the world!

Or whatever..

I'll promise to write more tommorrow, Is that okay with you guys?..
supersonic Blue Sparx Gems: 560
#299 Posted: 16:47:50 02/03/2010
ahh but okay this is like watchin tv but reading it me loves it
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#300 Posted: 16:50:39 02/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, nice to know you like it. smilie
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