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Spyro's kids: Comet [CLOSED]
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#251 Posted: 20:08:26 06/07/2010
soo long but cool smilie
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#252 Posted: 20:55:02 06/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 99 Lancelot's fall and Gawain's rage

Lancelot and Gawain stood there.
Lancelot growled, "You shall not stop our king!"
Gawain nodded and shot fire at Comet.
Comet dodged the blast. He zoomed at Lancelot and slashed him.
Lancelot zapped him with electricity and then knocked him away. He charged at him and slashed Comet.
Comet cried in pain and clutched his wound.
Lancelot jumped backwards and raised his sword into the air. A dark portal formed and Comet and himself were sucked into it, they appeared in the dark dimension from the first fight.
Gawain wasn't there, he must have still been back at the castle.
Lancelot shot a blast of electricity at Comet.
Comet rolled out of the way and shot fronze at Lancelot.
Lancelot blocked it and charged at Comet. He did a mega electricity slam, sending shock waves all over the place. Lightning shot from the sky.
Comet took cover behind a stone wall.
"Prepare to die!!" roared Lancelot as a severe lightning strike started and electricity waves swirled around the place.
Comet took cover even more, his snout touching the ground. He tried to shoot fronze at Lancelot, but he was zapped. He quickly shot fronze at Lancelot as he continued the lightning strike.
Lancelot was hit and sent flying into a wall. The storm stopped.
Comet got up from his crouch, back aching, and ran at Lancelot.
Lancelot did a combo slash at him.
Comet jumped up above Lancelot and powered up all of Excalibur's energy up in the air, then, when he landed, he stabbed Lancelot as hard as he could.
Lancelot growled and clutched the wound. He raised his palms up into the air and energy balls went flying after Comet.
Comet evaded every single one and then slashed Lancelot in the leg.
Lancelot tripped, but go back up. He shot electricity out of his palms and at Comet.
Comet whirled out of the way and attempted to stab Lancelot in the head.
Lancelot quickly blocked the attack and counterattacked Comet. He knocked Comet away.
The dimension disappeared and they were back in the hall, Gawain standing there.
Lancelot zapped Comet and marched up to him. He put his foot on his chest to pin him, then he powered up all the electricity in his palm. Any second, Comet would be killed.
"Any last words?" asked Lancelot.
"I have some." said a voice.
"Who dares speak to me right now?!" shrieked Lancelot.
"This is for killing my brother!" roared the voice.
A sword stuck out of Lancelot's chest.
Lancelot fell over, dead.
The sword was Gawain's. Gawain clutched his sword tight.
"That is what you get when you kill someone close to me." said Gawain. He stared at Comet and then shot fire at him.
Comet rolled out of the way and ran at Gawain and slashed at him.
Gawain blocked the attack and ran down the hall and into a big room. This room was the chapel.
Comet followed him and slashed again.
Gawain blocked the attack and counterattacked Comet. He shot fire all around the chapel.
Comet was surrounding by the fire, no way out. He shot fronze at Gawain.
Gawain blocked it and did a downward fire slash, causing a massive firestorm to start.
Comet's scales burned horribly. He screamed in pain. He ran up to Gawain and slashed him.
Gawain growled and knocked Comet away.
The firestorm stopped and Gawain was now weakened from the power.
Comet did a slashing combo on Gawain.
Gawain growled and raised his sword. Fireballs fell from the ceiling all over the place.
Comet dodged each one and then stabbed Gawain in the leg.
Gawain fell to the floor and then slammed his palms against it. He got back up and charged at Comet. He tried to stab him.
Comet jumped over him and Gawain ended up stabbing the wall. Comet slashed at Gawain several times, weakening him.
Gawain did a fire combo at Comet, sending him flying into the wall.
Comet got up and charged at Gawain. Then he slashed him.
Gawain growled and shot fire at Comet.
Comet was really burning now, he was about to die. He quickly stabbed Gawain in the stomach. Then he backed away as Gawain slashed at him.
"Grahhh!!" growled Gawain.
Comet quickly blocked the attack, throwing Gawain off guard. Then he stabbed him in the chest.
Gawain screamed in pain and then fell over on the floor, dead.
Comet licked his wounds and then he walked into the next room. Bors was waiting for him there.
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#253 Posted: 00:20:02 07/07/2010
That was good, I think you did a great job describing the fighting.
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#254 Posted: 00:43:38 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.

Chapter 100 Bors' demise

"You shall go no further!" exclaimed Bors as he gripped his blade and shot earth.
Comet dodged the blast and ran at Bors. He stabbed him.
Bors knocked him away with an earth slam. He ran at Comet.
Comet dodged to the right.
Bors slid to a stop and pointed his blade at Comet. He stood like that for seconds.
Comet wondered what he was planning to do.
Suddenly, the floor gave way as a massive earthquake began.
Comet stabbed his sword into the wall and hanged from it as a huge hole formed in the castle.
Bors floated up in midair. He shot earth missiles at Comet.
Comet was hit. He slowly lost grip of his blade and fell down the hole, water was at the bottom. So if Comet landed in it, he wouldn't die.
Suddenly, Bors raised his sword and spikes popped out of the water.
Comet gulped. He braced for impact. He got control of his wings and flew to the top of the hole.
"Oh no you don't!" exclaimed Bors as he used his abilities to start closing up the hole with earth.
Comet quickly flew out of the hole right as it closed. He landed softly on the ground. He grabbed his blade and slashed Bors to the max.
Bors counterattacked him. He used earth to rise up high on an earth platform. He looked down at Comet and shot a wall of earth at him.
Comet was knocked into a wall. He hit the ground hard. He slowly got back up and attempted to run at Bors, only to be knocked back by another wall. He couldn't take much more of this.
Bors raised his palm, ready to strike him again when a roar was heard. Bors gasped.
Zaxus crashed through the wall. He entered the room, directly in front of Bors. He glared at him.
"N- nice dinosaur! Nice dinosaur!" coward Bors. He gulped.
Zaxus roared again, "Who do you think I am? I won't harm you! I only harm ones that harm me, like that dragon!"
Bors turned to look at Comet.
"Come to think of it, I haven't had a descent meal in ages. I'm sure that I am starving..." said Zaxus. He stared at Bors.
"No... you don't mean... No!! Get away!!!" screamed Bors as he tried to run away.
Zaxus charged after Bors and swooped down. A loud crunching noise was heard as bones were shattered.
Comet looked away in disgust. He looked back to see Bors gone, a trail of blood in his footsteps.
Zaxus licked his mouth, blood draining out of it. He stared at Comet and shot dark magic at him.
Comet dodged it.
Zaxus ran off into the next room.
Comet tried to follow him, but the ceiling collapsed again. The only other way was through the door on the left. He opened it and walked into the next room.
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#255 Posted: 00:46:14 07/07/2010
Whatever happened to the enemy of my enemy is my friend? lol. Good chapter.
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#256 Posted: 01:29:27 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
This one has a different theme song.

It Has Come To This: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ngaxovw1PPw

Chapter 101 King Arthur's ultimate power.

Comet walked into the throne room. There in the throne sat King Arthur.
"So, you decided to follow me? Well that was a mistake. Prepare to die, dragon!" growled King Arthur. He jumped out of his throne and into the air. Then he stabbed the ground right in front of Comet, darkness splattered the place.
Comet hopped backwards and counterattacked him.
King Arthur knocked him away. He raised his sword and darkness shot around the place.
Comet dodged it and slashed at King Arthur.
King Arthur blocked the attack and then slashed the ground. It cut right through the castle, for that was how sharp it was.
Darkness swam out of the crack he had just made.
Comet backed up, only to be hit by it. He growled and shot fronze at King Arthur.
King Arthur blocked the attack and slashed Comet.
Comet screamed in pain, he knelt to the floor.
King Arthur whirled up into the air and created a dark shield. Then he shot it out at Comet.
Comet was hit and sent flying into the wall. He got up and ran at King Arthur, then he slashed a combo at him.
King Arthur growled and knocked Comet away with darkness. He then shot 12 dark orbs. They all chased after Comet.
Comet blew them up with fronze and then ran at King Arthur and slashed him.
King Arthur knocked him away. He jumped high up and landed, foot on top of Comet's chest.
Comet knocked him off.
King Arthur charged all his energy and was just about to release it when a dark portal opened. Out stepped Mordred.
"Hello, father." replied Mordred.
"Mordred, you fool, you shall die again!!" growled King Arthur as he charged at him.
Mordred knocked him into a wall and then shot darkness straight into King Arthur's chest, paralyzing him. Then he turned to face Comet, "You shall be destroyed along with this horrid planet!!" He formed a huge black hole that would suck the whole earth into it.
Comet tried to stop him, but was sent flying into the wall, paralyzed for a few minutes.
Any second the earth would plunge into darkness.
Mordred laughed, but suddenly, his eyes widened as he was hit in the back by darkness. He fell over on the floor, dead.
King Arthur had his arm sticking out, he had shot him with darkness. He slowly attempted to get back up.
Comet soon became gained control of his bones and walked over King Arthur. He raised his sword to strike him.
King Arthur put his arm up, attempting to block it.
Comet quickly stabbed him in the chest and walked away, "Rest in piece." He then saw Zaxus' shadow from the window. He must have been on the roof of the castle. Comet went through a door that led to the top of the castle. There stood Zaxus, five dark orbs floating around him.
"You are too late!"
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#257 Posted: 15:06:48 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Wow this story has gone a long way. This is the longest story I've ever written.

Chapter 102 Unlocking the Darkness

"But I thought you needed all six!" replied Comet.
"I do, but 5 will do, it just won't be a big enough portal." replied Zaxus as he shot dark magic at Comet.
Comet attempted to dodge it, but if he did, then he would fall off the roof. He took the blast and Ziac's dark orb went flying out onto the roof.
Zaxus grabbed it. "You! You had that dark orb all along!! You shall pay for that. But now that I have all 6 dark orbs I will be able to complete my destiny!!" roared Zaxus.
"I can't let... you do that!" cried Comet as he fell over. All that fighting back in the castle made him very weak. He forced himself to get up, but then fell back over.
Zaxus put the 6th dark orb with the rest of them and raised the dark scroll, "Now I must say these words on here: O darkness, O darkness, open thou gates. Thou shall not wait any longer. O darkness, O darkness, open the gates to darkness."
As if they were the magic words, a small flash of darkness appeared in the air and it grew bigger, big enough to suck the whole world into it. This portal could be the end for all. The night of eternal darkness was upon them, just like Chaos said.
"No!!" cried Comet. He slowly got back up and raised Excalibur into the air.
All of sudden, light flashed around Comet and Excalibur and lightning struck the tip of Excalibur's blade. Comet closed his eyes and then opened. His whole body was covered with golden armor and his sword was 10 x the size as before, so it was very very big. Comet didn't know how he could hold this gigantic golden sword. Somehow, the lightning strike had refueled all of his energy and made him even stronger and more protective. He gripped his blade and stared at Zaxus.
Zaxus was wide eyed, "How is this possible?!" He tried to cast a spell.
Comet quickly charged into Zaxus, sending them both flying through the air and into the dark portal.
Zaxus growled and knocked Comet away. He got back up and stood up in this dark dimension. He glared at Comet and created the ultimate spell around him. Suddenly, Zaxus grew ten x as large as before and his teeth were even more sharper. Zaxus was very very huge. He roared, "Bring it!!"
Comet glared at Zaxus and clutched his sword tight, "This shall be the end for you!"
"Shall it?" roared Zaxus.
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#258 Posted: 15:24:40 07/07/2010
Whoa, I missed a lot. Good chapters, though. At least the knights are gone. Now Comet can make dinosaurs extinct again.
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#259 Posted: 16:55:51 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
So... you think the knights are gone. There was only one knight that was not listed at all as dead and wasn't in either of those chapters. Remember Galahad?

Get ready for an awesome theme song for this chapter.

How It Started - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kl1X4sMen-4

Chapter 103 Zaxus' Final Stand

Zaxus charged at Comet.
Comet jumped out of the way and slashed him in the chest.
Zaxus roared and darkness shot out of his mouth and into the air. Lightning shot along with a great big storm.
Comet took cover and zoomed towards Zaxus.
Zaxus swiped at him.
At the right timing, Comet blocked it and did a mega slash attack on him.
Zaxus growled and knocked Comet away. He shot an ultimate blast of darkness at Comet.
Comet blocked it with Excalibur and zoomed at Zaxus again.
Zaxus began to shooting dark energy balls.
Comet dodged them and slashed him. He jumped back.
Zaxus created a dark force field around him that shot energy at Comet.
Comet evaded the attacks and flew at Zaxus, ready to strike him.
Zaxus knocked him away and then charged at him.
Comet dodged it and jumped onto Zaxus head right as he slammed into an invisible barrier. He was soon thrown off because of the force field, "I've got to find a way to lower that force field!"
Zaxus grabbed Comet and tossed him up into the air. He opened his mouth, ready to catch him.
Comet hanged from his teeth with Excalibur, then he thought: If he couldn't attack him from the outside then maybe he could from the inside. He dropped into Zaxus' mouth.
Zaxus knocked him down his throat.
Comet landed in front of one of his guts. He started slashing it.
Suddenly, Zaxus barfed Comet up.
Comet fell to the floor, completely disgusted, slime all over him. He zoomed at Zaxus.
Zaxus knocked him away, "Dinoroars, attack!!"
9 dinoroars appeared in front of Comet and started firing missiles at him.
Comet evaded the attacks and killed 5 of them. The other four shot bullets and energy balls at him. Comet killed them and one big dinoroar jumped out of no where and powered up his energy missiles.
Comet quickly knocked the dinoroar around with fronze.
The dinoroar shot his ultimate energy missiles at Zaxus.
Zaxus' shield disappeared, "No!!"
Comet quickly killed the dinoroar and charged at Zaxus.
Zaxus slashed at Comet.
Comet blocked the attack and counterattacked him.
Zaxus knocked him away. He raised his paws into the air and fireballs shot from the sky along with dark balls and electricity.
Comet dodged them all and slashed Zaxus several times.
Zaxus knocked him away and powered up all of his magic. He then shot an ultimate fury of magic at Comet, it was so big that no one could dodge it.
Comet quickly slashed the fury and sent it flying right back at Zaxus.
Zaxus growled, "How?!!" He shot waves of water all over the place and then shot lava at Comet.
Comet swam towards Zaxus' avoiding the lava, and slashed his foot.
Zaxus growled and knocked him back with wind. He shot electricity at Comet, shocking him.
Comet growled and zoomed at Zaxus as fast as possible and stabbed him.
Zaxus swiped at him.
Comet jumped onto his head and began slashing his skull.
Zaxus roared in pain and knocked Comet away.
Comet raised his sword into the air and powered up all of his strength. Then he shot right at Zaxus and shot straight through his body and out the other side.
Zaxus roared in pain, a huge hole was cut in his stomach, "But, but why?! How could I be defeated by a stupid dragon welpling like you??!!" He clutched his wound.
All of the dark orbs went flying around the place.
Comet grabbed them and crushed them in his palm.
Suddenly, the dark dimension went back to normal and they were back at Castle Camelot. Everything was back to normal.
Zaxus fell to the floor and slowly got back up, "I can not be defeated. I will just come back again and again!!"
"Oh really?" asked Comet, he saw some figures flying towards Zaxus, they included the wizard, Ziac, the Okahoono, and all the other guardians of the temples.
"What are you staring at?!" he turned around to see the 6 guardians standing behind him.
"Oh no! No!!" roared Zaxus.
"You shall repent for the things you have done!" said the wizard.
"No!!!!!" roared Zaxus.
The guardians grabbed him and dragged him deep into the earth, "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Comet wiped his head, it was sweating from all the fighting. Then he remembered that all of the knights were dead and so was Zaxus. The world was saved. But then he looked up at the sky to see that it was still dark. It was still eternal night.
"But how?" asked Comet.
"Comet, we are in grave danger." said a voice.
Comet turned around to see it was Chaos, "I've been studying my books and it appears that this is not Convexity's doing, it is some one else!! They are now preparing to destroy the world at a secret underground lair!"
"Who could it be? I've killed all the knights and Zaxus." replied Comet.
"Oh really." said a voice.
Comet turned around to see Galahad standing there, "But- but..."
"What you thought you killed all of us? Well you thought wrong." replied Galahad.
"Is it you that is planning to destroy the world?" asked Comet.
"Of course not! But I am the one who is about to kill you!!" growled Galahad.
"Bring it!" cried Comet. He knew this would be a hard fight, since he couldn't defeat him last time.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:05:31 07/07/2010 by Fireball
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#260 Posted: 18:31:35 07/07/2010
Oh yeah, Galahad. Still, Comet got Zaxus, Galahad'll be easy enough.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#261 Posted: 18:49:14 07/07/2010
nice i love you story's!!
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#262 Posted: 19:40:16 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, but Galahad has the power of light.

Another theme song for this chapter.

Endless Possibilities - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ph-GA53sZAo

Chapter 104 Galahad's Rage

Comet charged at Galahad, only to be knocked back by light.
Galahad jumped into the air and shot light missiles out of his fingers.
Comet dodged them and shot at Galahad, he slashed him.
Galahad knocked him away and raised his sword, "Light storm!!"
Light beams shot from the sky at random.
Comet was hit and sent flying off the roof of the castle.
Chaos growled and shot darkness at Galahad, knocking him into a tower.
"Grahhh!! Light vs. Darkness. Now that is a worthy fight!" growled Galahad as he shot light out of his palm and at Chaos.
Chaos dodged the attack and raised Comet back onto the roof with darkness.
Comet sneaked around the roof and got behind Galahad as Chaos shot darkness at him. Comet slashed Galahad 5 times in the back.
Galahad growled and knocked him away. He shot a mega light blast into Comet's heart.
Comet fell over, he didn't know if he could take much more of this. He raised his blade into the air. Suddenly, light formed around him and exploded. Comet had all of his strength back, he was completely healed from every scar and wound he had. He shot at Galahad with his ultimate power. He stabbed him in the gut.
Galahad fell over, clutching his wound. Then he shot light into it, healing it. He charged at Comet and did a mega light attack.
Comet was slashed several times in the air. He fell to the floor and got back up. He looked at Chaos.
Chaos looked at Comet. They both shot all their power at Galahad, sending him flying through the castle ramparts.
Galahad growled and shot right back at Comet and slashed him.
Comet growled and counterattacked him with fronze.
Galahad was mad now, and close to being defeated. He shot his ultimate light ray straight at Comet.
Comet jumped out of the way and charged all of his strength. So did Chaos. Then they both shot it at Galahad.
Galahad was hit and stunned.
"Quick! Stab him why you have the chance!" cried Chaos.
Comet zoomed at Galahad and quickly stabbed him in the chest.
Galahad fell over screaming in pain, "No!!!! Defeated by a welp! I can't stand this!!" Then he lifted up into the air and created a light bomb around him. If he were to die, then so was Comet.
The bomb blew, sending light all over Camelot.

Meanwhile,

The moles at Warfang were gazing up at Camelot in awe. They covered their eyes and looked away as light shot around the dragon kingdom.

Comet and Chaos flew as fast as they could away from the bomb. They flew past Warfang and past Avalar, then they landed all the way in Twilight Falls.
The bomb stopped right there, it had traveled a long distance. No one from Warfang or Avalar were killed, but they were badly injured.
Chaos stared at Comet, "Now that that is over we need to get to the lair and quick! We only have 10 minutes until the world is destroyed!"
Chaos flew towards the Ancient Grove, Comet followed him.
They landed at an entrance to an underground fortress.
"This used to be my original fortress, but someone stole it!" exclaimed Chaos as he rushed into the fortress along with Comet.
They slid to a stop in a giant chamber, at the center of it was a green pool of liquid and next to it was the mysterious black dragon.
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#263 Posted: 02:15:05 08/07/2010
Good chapter. I like this Chaos guy.
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#264 Posted: 02:47:29 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 105 Unmasked

"You are too late!" cried the dragon.
"Why are you doing this? Who are you?!" shrieked Comet.
"Are you really that clueless?! I am the ultimate darkness!" replied the dragon.
"I meant your name!" growled Comet as he slashed his sword at the air.
"You shall never know, you fool!!" replied the dragon. He shot darkness at Comet.
Chaos growled, "You don't have to do this Bone!"
Comet then knew, his name was Bone, "So, Bone, why are you doing this?!"
"Do you still not know exactly who I am?! I am the seeker of darkness, the soul of the underworld, your very brother!" roared Bone.
Comet became wide eyed, "Your... my b-b-brother???"
"Gees, bro, you'd think you'd know who I was! Anyways, off with you! I have a world to destroy!" roared Bone. He raised his paws into the air.
"I can't let you do that!" cried Comet. He shot at Bone and slashed at him.
A force field appeared around Bone, blocking Comet's every attack. Then it knocked him away. Bone growled, "You can not defeat me! I am finished with you!!" He shot darkness at Comet.
Comet cried in pain as he went flying into the wall. He stared at Bone, breathing hard, "Why?"
"Because of me..." hissed a voice. A spirit flew out of Bone's mouth and floated in front of Comet. It was Convexity.
"You!!" growled Chaos and Comet at the same time.
"You see Comet, I need a body to live on, so I chose Bone's." hissed Convexity's spirit.
"Hold on, Bone, I'll save you!" cried Comet.
Bone said, "No! I... love the darkness!!!"
This was Bone speaking, not Convexity, so he must have really meant it.
"Fine! I shall miss you." said Comet.
Convexity spirit floated back into Bone. Bone raised his paws into the air.
Comet growled and held Excalibur out, ready for battle.
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#265 Posted: 16:37:48 08/07/2010
Wow, that was a surprise. I wasn't expecting Bone to pop up. Please continue! *Runs to get Bone's autograph*
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#266 Posted: 18:06:30 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
I know you will all miss this story. Sorry, but this story is nearly over. I expect to finish it today or tomorrow.

This is the ultimate theme song of this story. You can listen to it whilst reading.
With Me - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2y2I9gUGN0g

Chapter 106 The Final Battle

Comet shot at Bone. Bone knocked him away with darkness and then flew into the air. He wrapped his wings around himself and then shot a blast of darkness around him.
Comet hit the ground, hard. He got back up and powered up Excalibur. He shot a golden light at Bone, breaking his shield.
Bone growled and charged at Comet. He shot dark orbs into Comet.
Comet flew into the wall. He got back up and flew at Bone.
Bone shot darkness at him.
Comet twirled past the darkness in mid-air and slashed Bone as hard as he could.
Bone knocked him away and raised his paws.
The underground chamber began to collapse along with the floor.
Comet dodged the incoming debris and shot fronze at Bone.
Bone dodged the attack and shot a wave of darkness.
Comet jumped over it and slashed Bone.
Suddenly, the floor collapsed.
The two both went falling into a fire chamber. Comet landed smack on the stone platform in the center of the fire chamber. Bone stopped himself in mid-air and slowly touched down to the floor. He shot darkness at Comet.
Comet rolled out of the way and shot light at Bone.
Bone dodged the attack, he was then hit by another blast of light. He went flying into the wall. He growled and raised his paws into the air.
An ultimate darkness shot out of him and into the air. It landed hard on Comet, sending a shock wave of power all over the chamber.
Comet growled in pain and then flew at Bone and slashed him.
Bone knocked him away and into the fire pit.
Comet screamed in pain as his scales began to burn off. He quickly flew out of the fire and did a comet dash into Bone.
Bone hit the wall. He grabbed Comet's throat and squeezed it.
Comet struggled to escape.
Chaos quickly flew down into the chamber and shot darkness at Bone's back.
Bone growled as he was hit. He still held Comet though. He slammed him right through the fire, causing the floor to collapse again. Bone held onto Comet and then slammed his head into the ground, they were in a volcano-like chamber now full of lava.
Comet screamed in pain and slashed Bone 12 times.
Bone growled and shot darkness into him.
Comet hit the ground, nearly falling into the lava. He got up and shot light out of Excalibur and into Bone.
Bone roared, "Time to die!!!" He created a dark storm around him. It exploded several times, sending shock waves of darkness and dark balls all over the place.
Comet screamed as he was hit by every single one. He glared at Bone knocked him into the air. He charged through him until they flew right through the very top of the underground chamber and outside. Then Comet grabbed Bone and slammed him all the way into the very bottom of the underground fortress. They broke through the floor and landed in the 4th and final chamber. It was full of dark waves of energy and was completely silent.
Bone growled and knocked Comet into a dark wave. He screamed in pain.
Comet shot at Bone and slashed him several times as hard as he could. Light flashed at each strike.
Bone growled and knocked Comet away.
Chaos flew down and hit Bone with darkness.
Bone quickly knocked him out of the chamber and back up to the very first one. He roared, "That is it! I am finished with you!!!" He raised his paws into the air and he suddenly grew huge into a giant black dragon with blood red crests, horns, and eyes. He had torn wings and a red tail spike. He roared.
Comet backed up into another dark wave. He screamed and raised Excalibur into the air. It gleamed with light and shot straight through Bone.
Bone roared and shot an ultimate darkness all around the chamber, nearly killing Comet.
One more hit would kill him. Comet still got up anyways.
Chaos flew down there, "Comet! This isn't your fight! You don't have to do this!!"
"I must, for it is my destiny!!" screamed Comet. He raised his other paw and it gleamed with light. He flew at Bone and threw is arm back. He then stabbed him as hard as he could with Excalibur and then hit him with his glowing paw.
"What?! No!!!!!" roared Bone. The light gleamed and a mega explosion erupted in the fortress.
"Comet, no!!" cried Chaos. He then flew away from the blast and out of the fortress.
Comet roared in agony as he struggled to keep the blast going.
Bone roared, "No!!!!!!!!!! But I, I, AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The blast echoed across the fortress.

Meanwhile,
Chaos was outside hovering above the sight, he watched the blast of light engulf the fortress. He looked away, "He was good. He was the best I've seen..."
The light shot around the Dragon Kingdom, Dinosaur Kingdom, and the Lost Kingdom. The whole earth was engulfed in light. Just then, in the kingdoms, all evil was destroyed, including all of the carnivore dinosaurs and any remaining knights.
The light eventually stopped flashing and it revealed the fortress, ashes around it and smoke coming out of it.
Chaos's eye began to get watery and tears dripped down from his eyes. He flew off away from the fortress and into his own lair. He landed at the portal.
There was no sign of any life in the underground lair. Nothing...
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#267 Posted: 18:31:05 08/07/2010
cool!
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#268 Posted: 18:36:00 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Cool? What do you mean cool? That was supposed to be a sad moment!
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#269 Posted: 18:40:23 08/07/2010
It is on this sad, solemn day that we announce the suspected death of Comet, the brave hero who gave himself to save the world he so truly loved, and his family who he loved even more.
*Wild sobbing from the crowd*
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#270 Posted: 18:56:31 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 107 The Chronicler's Book

Meanwhile,

The Chronicler was looking in his book. He wrote down in it: And so Comet defeated Bone in an amazing battle. He then looked up to see Spyro standing in front of him, "Yes, Spyro?"
"My son, Comet, is he...?" said Spyro.
"That is a very good question. You see, Spyro, this book says all that happened, and these words are the last words." he pointed at the words he had just written.
"So...?" asked Spyro.
"You see, it says nothing about Comet dying, let alone Bone dying. The book knows everything, and it knows that they are still out there somewhere." replied the Chronicler.
"So he is alive then?" asked Spyro.
"Only if you believe he is." replied the Chronicler.
Spyro believed that Comet was still alive, and so was Bone, they were both out there somewhere. He looked out a window and at the stars. They gleamed.
The Chronicler said, "Go, go and find him. Find the one which you love the most."
"I will." replied Spyro. He walked out of the Celestial Caves and flew off, searching for any sign of Comet and/or Bone.
"Oh, Comet. I know you have a great future ahead of you..." said the Chronicler as he stared into his books.
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#271 Posted: 18:59:46 08/07/2010
*Fireworks, paper chains and huge, huge cake with marzipan Comet on the top, in celebration*

Nice idea, Spyro going back to the Chronicler.
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#272 Posted: 19:34:56 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.

Epilogue

The fortress was quiet. Fire was all over the place, ashes burning. Down in the 4th chamber, the dark chamber, there were tons of rocks all over the place, most likely from a cave-in.
Suddenly, a red paw stuck out from underneath it, it was burnt badly. The paw pushed away the rocks and out came the legendary Starlight Prince, Comet. He stood up, painfully, then he began to limp. All of his scales were burnt off and pink skin with blood all over it was all Comet had. His wings were torn, he was missing both his horns, he was real beat.
Comet limped his way up the rocky walls, climbing out of the chamber and into the next one. He climbed out of that and into the next chamber. He eventually got to the very top of the fortress, where he and Bone first fought. A big stone was in the center of the chamber.
Comet looked at his golden sword, Excalibur, then at the stone, "Bless the next wielder of thou sword." He clutched his sword and limped towards the stone. He raised Excalibur with both paws and stabbed it into the stone. It began to glow and a mythical voice spoke out of it, "Thank you, young one. Your time using me is done and you shall become king of the Dragon Kingdom just as I said. Thank you." said the sword.
Comet nodded and limped out of the fortress and into the Ancient Grove. He kept limping until he reached the swamp.

Comet continued limping until he reached the temple. He limped inside it and then out the other side. He limped through a forest. He gazed down the pathway to see his parents' village. He limped into it.
Several dragons stared at him, surprised.
Comet limped through the village until he reached his parents' cave. He went inside to see Cynder laying on the ground, nursing a green baby dragon.
Cynder was in shock, "Your... alive!"
"Mother, who are you talking to?" asked a voice.
Zappy walked into the cave, mouth dropped.
"I'm back." smiled Comet.
"Your home." replied Zappy.

Spyro returned months later to find Comet, full grown, in the cave. He breathed deep, "Your alive..."
Comet hugged his father.
The green dragon was now one year old.
Then Spyro saw Comet's wounds, "Your... hurt."
"But it was worth it." replied Comet.
And so the the family lived together.

One day, the king of the Dragon Kingdom came to the dragon village to look for an heir. He found Comet and crowned him king of the Dragon Kingdom and Zappy Queen of the Dragon Kingdom. Excalibur's promise staid that way.
Comet was now 20 and so was Zappy. They both moved the castle close to their village and lived happily in it.

"And so Comet reigned King along with Zappy as Queen. They both lived happily, and they visited their parents often. Unfortunately, Comet's wounds never grew back. Bone was not dead, but he was somewhere out there. Spyro and Cynder lived a life with their new child, Crush. The Chronicler continued writing his books, forever searching for any sign of Bone. Beauty lived her life as Comet's and Zappy's maid. And I, Chaos, continued to search for any sign of the darkness. And everyone all lived happily ever after... until that day came."
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#273 Posted: 19:50:10 08/07/2010
Aw... end...

But will Crush be a future story then, being Spyro and Cynder's kid? When does Bone start?
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#274 Posted: 19:52:10 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yes, that will be after Bone's story. As for Bone's story, it will start tomorrow morning. Info will now be said on the other topic.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:53:19 08/07/2010 by Fireball
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#275 Posted: 10:09:05 10/07/2010
soo cute and when i men cool!i men i love this chapter!!
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#276 Posted: 10:12:17 10/07/2010
Awesome ending.
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#277 Posted: 15:57:14 10/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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#278 Posted: 10:49:56 11/07/2010
awwwwwwwww its over.That was very good,also Spyro and Cynder are up to 5 children now.I wonder just how many there will be.
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