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#251 Posted: 06:08:27 04/07/2009
I feel for u. I think I can wait.
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#252 Posted: 12:02:40 04/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
I will type more as soon as it heals (it might take a couple of days....). |
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#253 Posted: 03:32:27 12/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, I will tell you guys a secret. I haven't already written this on Microsoft Word or something. I make it up on the spot, then I type it. Thats why I haven't been writing more lately. Because I'm out off ideas.
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dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#254 Posted: 04:11:05 12/07/2009
I do that, I'm not out of ideas, I have hit writers block on mine.
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#255 Posted: 00:12:55 13/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Writers block?
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dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#256 Posted: 08:58:22 13/07/2009
you've never heard of writers block?!!
its where you run out of ideas, or get stuck.
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#257 Posted: 07:29:25 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep. Looks like I have writers block.
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#258 Posted: 10:59:32 28/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, I know what to type now. Sorry for not posting for the past 3 weeks..... D:
Ruuko opened his eyes with a jolt. He stared into space, looking at the blue coloured sky above him. He didn't know what to think. He just lost a battle with an elder! Grinning his teeth, Ruuko got up and shock himself. He couldn't remember what happened in his dream, or how he survived, or how he nearly died, but he knew he had to save his sister. Spreading out his wings, he shot up into the skies. Want to know how he died? You will find out in the next story. Yep, this one is almost finished. Just one more chapter to go! EDIT: The next one has more blood and fighting in it. |
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 11:01:39 28/07/2009 by Cynder_543
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#259 Posted: 07:22:58 29/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello!? .__.
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277 |
#260 Posted: 07:48:47 30/07/2009 | Topic Creator
This story isn't popular anymore... What happened to all my readers?! Now there is no one reading my story.... .__.
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#261 Posted: 08:18:20 30/07/2009
i read but i just dont have time to post
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Kiyoteru Hiyama - "You're engulfed in a sorrowful melody, come and sleep now. Hereafter, the beginning of a tragedy must be burned into your eyes." |
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#262 Posted: 08:33:20 30/07/2009
I'm reading!
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#263 Posted: 09:23:40 30/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, I got to have a shower now so I will do the finale chapter after I come out.
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#264 Posted: 12:20:56 30/07/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 21:
Ruuko flapped his wings as hard as he could. His memory started to come back to him. How he nearly died... The story about Firefrost... Sparrowheart... Bluefur.... Everything came back to him as he felt the cold air pressing onto his skin. The wind started to get colder as he flew up higher and higher, up towards convexity. I might make it! I might make it in time! Ruuko smiled, getting ready for a fight. He new he will have to help out his sister to defeat the purple dragon. Before Ruuko new it, he was in the clouds. Things started to get foggy and he couldn't hardly see. The portal should be around here somewhere.... But were is it... Ruuko looked around, but there was no portal to be seen. All he could see was a black castle in the distance, the castle were Cynder keeps the dark crystals. It is her "fortress". Were hope goes to die. Besides the black castle, there was nothing else to bee seen. Just fog everywhere. Ruuko felt a shock off fear run down his spine. He didn't know what do now. If there was no portal, how was he supposed to go to convexity!? When all hope seemed lost for Ruuko, a strange voice whispered in his ear, telling him to open the portal himself. "Okay, but how!? Arn't you going to tell me how!?" Ruuko hissed back at the wind. The voice whispered in his ear again, telling him the same thing. You can open the portal Ruuko... You can do it... "Yeah, but how!? How can I DO IT!?" Ruuko screamed out the last words out off his mouth. They echoed in the wind. As soon as it started to echo, a portal opened up behind him. The portal leading to convexity. "Wow... How did I do that? I just screamed...." Ruuko cut himself off. There is no time for this! I have to help out my sister! Ruuko flew inside off the portal, half thinking that the battle was already over, and half thinking that it has only just begun. Ruuko flapped his wings as fast as he can. He could hear something in the distance, but he didn't know what it was. He thought he could see a strange light in the distance. Ruuko blinked as the light caught his eye. He landed quickly onto the plat form. Just when he was about to take flight again, something purple flew right past him, nearly bumping into him. Ruuko shock his head in fear, not knowing what it was. "Wha.... What was that....!?" Ruuko looked at the direction were the purple thing was flying towards too. It is flying towards a portal, and it was carrying something... Something black. Ruuko squinted his eyes and saw that that purple dot was a dragon. The purple dragon! And the black thing it was carrying was a black dragon. And it looked allot like Cynder... "Wait a minuet...." Ruuko grunted. He turned around, the "light" that he saw before was none other then Malefor's prison. The beam was darker now, and the dark crystals that he and his sister collected was dancing around it. At first, he thought Cynder had succeeded, and the little purple dragon was flying away out off fear. But he new he was wrong as soon as he saw the 4 crystals break up in little specks off purple dust and everything started to get sucked in into the portal. "No..... It can't be.... Cynder had failed.... Then that means.... That black dragon that purple dragon was carrying.... It was Cynder! Cynder had lost! I was too late! And the dark crystals didn't work... The purple dragon defeated her before she could use some off her energy to break open the prison!" Ruuko slammed his tail onto the platform real hard. "I have failed...." Ruuko couldn't keep his thoughts about Cynder inside him anymore. "NO!! CYNDER!! COME BACK!!! YOU PURPLE DRAGON! I WILL GET YOU SOME DAY!!" Ruuko began to smack his front left paw onto the ground until it began to bleed. "She's gone..... She is gone.... NOOOO!!" YES THE STORY ENDED (sorry, caps lock was one...) on a cliff hanger.... |
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#265 Posted: 05:41:55 31/07/2009
WOW! Awesome story!
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#266 Posted: 06:14:08 31/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#267 Posted: 10:59:24 31/07/2009
OMG!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
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#268 Posted: 10:45:27 03/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I will start the next one soon. But I might have to play TEN again.... Remember, the next one is TEN but from someone else's point off view, not Spyro's. Just like how this one was ANB, but from someone else's point off view.
Oh, and anyone who has been reading this, but just don't post (or don't get the time), then nows the time! I would like to know how many people who have read my story. |
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#269 Posted: 10:53:15 04/08/2009
I really liked the way you tied in the events from ANB into it.
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#270 Posted: 12:04:52 04/08/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks. ^O^
Actually, I was going to do it about Cynder. But then I disided to make up a character and make it Cynder's brother. It took me about two days to realize that Cynder_fan's character is also Cynder's brother.... Sorry about that Cynder_fan. Off course, Dark Revenge is based on TEN and Chasing Spirits is based on DOTD. :3 |
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#271 Posted: 00:27:14 05/08/2009
wen are u starting dark revenge?
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#272 Posted: 06:25:39 05/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Soon. First, I got to play TEN night again.....
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dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#273 Posted: 08:17:58 05/08/2009
I haven't played TEN in a long while.
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#274 Posted: 08:56:15 05/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Same here. I don't like TEN, but if I want to do the next story, then I will have to play it....
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#275 Posted: 20:55:51 20/09/2009
I know this is bumping an old topic, but this tory was great
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Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
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#276 Posted: 06:22:05 21/09/2009 | Topic Creator
That was quick... O.O
Oh, and thanks! ^.^ |
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#277 Posted: 18:04:39 21/09/2009
well, in the middle of reading it, I was struck down by quite a nasty cold. But I kept on reading.
I'll start to read the first part of Dark Revenge
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277 |
#278 Posted: 06:21:15 22/09/2009 | Topic Creator
If you had a cold then you didn't need to keep on reading. But I'm glad you did. Thanks.
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#279 Posted: 07:43:36 20/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Anyone else?
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#280 Posted: 18:11:17 20/10/2009
Hey Cynder_543!:-) This story was bit cool.
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#281 Posted: 05:19:13 21/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello. And thanks. =]
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