darkSpyro

ooc: nope. I'm still here. Not quite on as often, but still here.

Like my Factory, I may open Children a bit later in the year, so we can get some new peeps... Like my friend who just started, BallisticBeats(we tried to get it with a space, but weren't able to get the validation in time, ran out of tries with the email), she has some good OCs, like the dragon she based her profile on. I'm not going to give it away, I'll let her have fun with that.

So yeah, if no one else does, I'll probably start Children later this year...

So dis be the great RP SpyroD told me of, pretty cool. My opinion probably isn't much, but I kinda agree with continuing it, but I see a few things that could be worked on... Like keeping up with one another, and some sudden character changes... Well no offence but Lucien could have at least been weak on that last fight bro. Or unconscious or something, cause by the looks of it his body took a massive blow, clearing out this "Gray"... Idk, but you my friend could use a little work yo-self.

Anywho: a sequel would be interesting, with the whole kid development thing ya got. I could join when and if it were made, bring a bit of my light into the show, cause believe me, I got a lot of light here, no need for it to go to waste.

Uh alright Ballistic... I guess I did put a little much into Lucien's strength... :/ yeah I'll have to work on it, thanks for pointing it out. Hmm.. Yeah, I could have dumbed him down a bit... Then again at the end it was Gray with his quantity of energy build up, but yeah I guess it makes sense then.

Ok, so Children is now in the works, not posted, but will take some time to put an interesting plot and layout.

Yaayyyy!