here is the next part! sorry for the latness! here it is!
suddenly, a large brown dragon took shadow by the neck with his sharp white fangs and tossed him to the ground. ''i knew i would find you traitor!!!'' said the peculiar dragon. the dragon's glare gave shadow chills down his spine. the burning yellow eyes made shadow remember the horrible things that he had done in the past. ''demonshadow?'' said blueshadow looking at the dragon. ''it is! that's demonshadow!!!'' said blueshadow to herself. demonshadow continued to glare at shadow. ''i see you live in warfang now. WHY?!? why have you decided to change your path? you were stronger when you were with us. now you have decided to turn against us?'' asked demonshadow showing his razor sharp claws, then placing his claws up againdt shadow's neck. shadow glared at him then said, ''i chose a different path for a reason demonshadow. killing doesn't make you stronger, it makes you feel horrible inside. and besides, i've changed. unlike you! you sick b**tard!!!!'' said shadow raising his voice then leaped at demonshadow. shadow snarled at him, with a puff of smoke flaring from his nostrals. demonshadow looked up at him, then gave him a cold grin. ''well then shadow, if you really think that i am a b**tard then i'll SHOW YOU WHAT ITS LIKE WHEN YOU BETRAYED OUR ARMY!!!!'' cried demonshadow as he sunk his fangs into shadow's neck. ''NO!! SHADOW!!!'' said blueshadow as she raced to help him. tanzanite followed her along with the others.
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#201 Posted: 22:37:14 17/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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#202 Posted: 01:46:14 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will continue! and my next fan-fic is sapphire: son of sapphiren!
''DO NOT INTERFERE!!!'' warned shadow. blueshadow looked at him. with his blood dripping from his neck and his jaw open, and his toungue hanging. blueshadow began to cry. tanzanite held her close. ''you don't need to do this shadow!!'' cried sapphire forcing himsef to the front. "LISTEN!! i am giving my life to you young ones. my spirit will give you strengh. remember me, not as a demon, but as light. i will die as a warrior.'' said shadow with a smile. ''NO!!!!'' cried blueshadow. demonshadow sunk his teeth even deeper into shadow's neck, suffecating him. shadow did not struggle to get a breathe. garnet turned her head towards blueshadow. demonshadow tossed his head up then slammed demonshadow to the hard ground. demonshadow smiled then flew off. ''YOU ****ING B**TARD!!!!'' screamed blueshadow at demonshadow. shadow's body was covered in dust, the blood on his neck was constantly shedding, and his breathing was horrible. the group of allies burst into tears. hunter and meadow were also shedding tears as well. ''what an unbelievible guy.'' said hunter wiping one of his tears. ''shadow please!'' said tanzanite struggeling to get shadow up. shadow looked at them, then smiled. he slowly took his last breath. ''he was a strong warrior.'' said meadow. ''young dragons, when a warrior dies, he dies for the ones who he cares about.'' reminded terron. ''he was so young. i would rather have my life thrown away then his.'' said ro'zan shedding a tear. ''lets take him inside.'' said blueshadow. terron placed shadow on top of his body then slowly began to walk. the allies followed. blueshadow and the others were crying. tanzanite placed his head on top of hers. ''he...he was a good warrior...i wish i were like him.'' said tanzanite.
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#203 Posted: 01:54:59 19/12/2008
you write alot! but thats good, becasue its a great story!
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#204 Posted: 02:20:51 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! and thank you!
finally they had arrived at the entrance as they flew back to the city. meadow and hunter climbed their way back up. terron placed shadow gently on the ground, taking a blanket from the floor then tucking him in. ''is...is he dead?'' asked blueshadow. ''im afraid so.'' said terron trying to stay strong about the situation. ''shadow...'' said garnet running up to sapphire, placing her head underneath his then began to cry. ''we will fight for shadow!!!!'' said blueshdow. ''we shall avenge for him!'' she continued. ''we will fight for our friend and for all the dragons of the realms and the dragons of warfang!!!'' said tanzanite clenching his paw. the group of friends bowed ther heads in respect. ''lets go. we still need to fight this war. may shadow look after us and the ancestors.'' ro'zan. blueshadow turned her head towards shadow, then followed the others. ''YOU D**NED B**TARD!!!!'' cried blueshadow scuffing her paw. ''ME?!? why blame me blueshdow? i didn't do anything to your poor old friend.'' said blackfire teasing her. blueshadow snarled at her. ''well, he was a traitor. not following his orders, and especialy betraying my father!!!!'' said blackfire tossing herself at blueshadow. blackfire used her teeth and aimed for blueshadow's neck. when blueshadow almost hit the ground, she rose back up then grabbed blackfire by her front paw then flipped her over, wth her underbelly showing. blackfire growled at her, for her newly found strengh. ''YOU...! YOU WILL PAAY FOR WHAT YOU HAD DONE TO SHADOW!!!!'' cried blueshdow as she aimed hor blackfire's underbelly. blackfire kicked her quickly before blueshadow could do her attack. ''D**N YOU!!! YOU ALSO HAD BETRAYED US BLUESHADOW!! BUT YOU STILL REMAIN A SERVANT TO MY FATHER LIKE IT OR NOT! YOU CANNOT FIGHT THE DARKNESS! YOU WERE RAISED INTO DARKNESS AND STAY IN THE DARKNESS!!!'' blackfire hissed. ''no. i've changed, all because of tanzanite, and you know what blackfire? I LOVE HIM!!! you cannot change that! i have also found out that i had parents! perrox and gemstone! and i am willing to be your oppenent in this war!!!!'' said blueshadow.
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#205 Posted: 02:32:15 19/12/2008
write more!!!
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#206 Posted: 23:29:36 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
okay! what is your favorite part so far? is shadow really dead? hmm...
''you ****!!! are you willing to challenge the kin of the most powerful dragon in the world? do you dare mock me?!? well then...i guess you should maybe DIE!!!!'' said blckfire lunging at her with her claws in the front. blueshadow dodged the attack. ''GRRRR!!!! you are going to pay for damaging my neck!!! you d**ned b**ch!!!'' snarled blackfire pulling herself back up. ''i am no longer on your side blackfire.'' mumbled blueshadow panting. ''you are just as foolish as shadow is! well then...i think you made the wrong choice...blueshadow!! ya see, those who betray my father often die underneath his claws... i learned everything fom killing to corrupting and i became just as strong as him... but you now chose to be weak...'' sniggered blackfire looking at her claws. out of no where blackfire pounced onto blueshadow's back. she dug her claws into her back. ''EEERRR!!!!'' screamed blueshadow in pain, slowly weakening her. the more blueshadow screamed, blackfire would dig her claws even deeper into her. ''TANZANITE...im sorry....'' said blueshadow with sudden tears in her eyes. ''fine.'' said blackfire taking her claws out of blueshadow's back. blueshadow got up. ''but remember blueshadow...the next time we meet....you will have a surprise ready for you... and you will have an opponent which will not be me...by someone you know...'' surrendered blackfire as she flew to the sky. the dark army followed blackfire, returning to the fortress. ''what does she mean by someone i know???'' said blueshadow to herself. meanwhile...shadow still remained in the bed but in his mind...'' shadow!!!'' echoed a strange voice in his vision. ''who...who is there?'' asked shadow nervously. '' i was once the old chronicler after when ignitus took my place...you are a wonderful warrior....'' said the chronicler revealing himself. the chronicler's spirit shined so bright that shadow could merely see him. ''can you show yourself? and im not a warrior...i've done so many things...i killed...im not proud of my past...'' said shadow with a sigh.
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#207 Posted: 23:31:03 19/12/2008
write more!!!
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#208 Posted: 00:08:51 20/12/2008 | Topic Creator
okay! i will. who is your favorite character?
'' i am quite aware of your past. cynder and blueshadow are going through the same thing... but cynder is free, blueshadow is not...but lets focuss on you. when i was still the chronicler i was looking at your book...i have seen the blood being shed by dragons, when you had worked for the dark army...but i've noticed when i turned to the next page that you were leaving the army with all of darkuss's followers were watching you leave..'' the chronicler said fully revealing his gray body. ''but i think they still need my help! but i have alredy giving them my strengh...but the way how they gazed at me... especialy blueshadow...i relized that she is going through the same thing as me..i must help them!!! but im already dead...though my body hasn't decayed yet...chronicler...tell the ancestors..that... i wish to return!!'' asked shadow in a proud, strong voice. '' very well then, shadow. but you have changed...follow the path that you are still following...good bye...'' said the chronicler vanishing into blinding light. shadow sudenly woken up with a jolt. what...what happened? thought shadow slowly getting up. ''the others are outside!! guys!! wait!!'' said shadow racing out of the room. ''do you hear something?'' asked tanzanite. ''SHADOW!!!'' cried blueshadow as she gave tanzanite a hug.
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#209 Posted: 01:11:29 20/12/2008
great story! write more! my fave......hmm........hard to decide.......i guess i would say.........blueshadow.
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#210 Posted: 23:34:12 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you. and merry christmas to those who celebrate it!
shadow stopped then smiled. he had bandages wrapped around his neck where demonshadow had attacked him. blueshadow, tanzanit, and the others all raced up to hug him. terron and ro'zan looked at him. then shook their heads in pride. once they were done hugging him, they all backed away so shadow could move. ''thank...you...all of you..make me feel..good inside.'' said shadow with tears rolling down his eyes. ''shadow, what you did out there proved that your heart isn't cold..but it is pure. you should be proud of yourself. blueshadow, the same thing goes for you too. you both proved yourselves today and should be proud of it.'' said terron taking a step foward. ''terron is right. blueshadow you mean everything to me...i will always stay by your side.'' said tanzanite gazing into her burning-red eyes. blueshadow gazed into his golden colored eyes. ''EVERYONE! YOU CAN COME OUT NOW!!!!!!'' yelled mason, trying to remind them that the army was gone. soon all the dragons left the buildings then looked directly at the group. ''you are all very brave!!!'' said a dragon. ''we are sorry for the way we looked at you. we weren't sure wether or not we could trust you. the both of you.'' said another. ''no need to apoligize.'' replied blueshadow. ''you just didn't know.'' said tanzanite finishing her sentence. all of the dragons smiled. ''we owe you our lives. we were just afraid to die. but you are all couragess. the next time you are in danger, we pomise that we will fight by your side.'' said a dragon bowing his head in respect. ''but guys, we just want to protect you. but im glad you are offering us your help.'' said sapphire. ''very well then.'' said the dragon taking a few steps back. ''LETS ALL CELEBRATE THEIR VICTORY!!!!!'' cried out a dragon. ''follow us! we have something for you.'' said a baby dragon pulling blueshadow's tail. ''come on! come on!!'' it continiued.
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#211 Posted: 00:17:05 22/12/2008
merry x-mas to you too! write more!
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#212 Posted: 02:45:40 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you. i am so excited about witing sapphire: son of sapphiren!
when they had finally arrived to the heart of the city, blueshadow looked up at the strange cloak which was covering their gift from the city. i wonder what it is? thought blueshadow gazing at the pale cloak. ''dragons of warfang!'' said a strange voice. everyone turned their heads. suddenly a light, light gray dragon stepped outta the shadows. he had golden eyes and claws. his wing membranes were torn, and his tail end represented the sun. ''who is he?'' asked garnet with a sudden gulp. could...could he be..possibly the leader of warfang? he looks larger compared to the others. he looks like a light dragon. blueshadow thought as she turned her head towards tanzanite. tanzanite looked at her. ''he looks like he's the leader of warfang. i wonder what's his name!'' said tazanite with a sudden smile. ''yeah!'' replied blueshadow. ''we would likee to honor..the group of warriors who have saved our city from utter destruction...statues of themselves to be placed al over warfang!!'' said the large dragon pulling the cloak off. the cloak soon revealed statues of blueshadow, tanzanite, shadow, terron, rozan, spyro, cynder, storm, ruby, garnet, sapphire, hunter and meadow. blueshadow slowly began to smile. ''blueshadow and shadow. please step foward.'' said the large dragon calling their names.
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#213 Posted: 19:24:00 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will continue anyways. im so excited about writing my next fan-fic!
''lets go blueshadow.'' said shadow in a calm voice. ''cynder is coming too!'' said blueshadow. ''alright. come along cynder!'' said shadow. cynder began to follow them. ''shadow, cynder and blueshadow. though your past might of been dark, you all changed.'' said the large dragon. the sight of him made blueshadow shiver. his eyes burning right through her. ''sa--sir...'' said blueshadow with a shiver. ''yes young dragon.'' said the dragon looking straight at her. ''um...what is..ya--your name?'' asked bueshadow. her legs began to shake rapidly. ''my name is dantite...why?'' he asked, streching his neck out. ''well its just that...'' blueshadow paused. ''are you a light dragon?'' she continued. ''we will talk about this later.'' he replied. ''sapphire, tanzanite and spyro. please step foward.'' he demanded. ''im worried.'' said sapphire. ''why?'' asked tanzanite. ''i don't know what to say to him...'' replied sapphire. ''we are all afraid.'' said spyro.''you are all legendary dragons of two different prophecies. spyro and tanzanite. though malefor was the first of your kind, you brought back light to our world. sapphire. your father sapphiren, was the first of your kind. carry on his strengh, speed, and teeth through many generations, for you are the second of your kind.'' said dantite. ''we will sir.'' said all three of them bowing their heads. ''ro'zan and terron...please step foward.'' he continued.
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#214 Posted: 21:35:24 22/12/2008
this is great! write more!
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#215 Posted: 00:52:31 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
okayz! you can join inthe sapphire contest/art thread topic!
ro'zan and terron began to move to the front. ''yes dantite.'' said ro'zan. ''ro'zan and terron. though you might of been just villagers you showed all of us that you were different. you showed us that you weren't just some dragons of this city, but dagons of courage and strengh. ro'zan, the wise gray dragon, if anything were to happen to the city and to me...you will take my place. terron the mighty brown earth dragon. you've fought when you were younger and have gotten scars as a reward of your bravery, you will be the one who shall guard this city.'' said dantite. ''the city rests upon you two now.'' said dantite. ''we are honored dantite.'' said ro'zan bowing his head. '' hunter and meadow. you may now step foward.'' said dantite continuing his speech. ''yes sir?'' asked hunter nealing. ''hunter of avalar. you are the omega of your tribe but you have raised your levels. prowlus will be proud. meadow. also a omega of your tribe you have also proven yourself today. and the war before that. keep up the good work future cheifs.'' said dantite. ''garnet and ruby. step foward.'' dantite said swishing his tail around. D**N!! im nervous. thought garnet as her heart began to pump fast. ''the two red dragoness sisters. you two share a bond unlike most siblings. most sblings would kill each other to see who is stronger or to see who is better. i also know another pair if siblings who are just like you two. phoenix and phoenixa. garnet. always protect your youger sister. ruby. if your sister garnet is ever in danger. help her. contnue this bond.'' said dantite with a smile. ''we will dantite sir.'' said garnet giving dantite a wink.
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#216 Posted: 02:42:55 23/12/2008
keep writing!
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#217 Posted: 17:26:21 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
okayz!!!!!!! and dantite used to be white!!
''and finally...storm.'' said dantite calling him up. ''yes dantite?'' asked storm. ''storm, one of sons of darkuss. you are quite different...you do not act like your father and your siblings blackfire, blackuss, kiona and shade will remain your siblings even though blackfire has turned to darkness. though, you were raised in avalar by prowlus and his tribe...you have great skills in weaponry. storm, you and that bow always hit the right targets. hunter will always take care of his friend.'' said dantite finishing his speech. ''i will take care of him dantite, and he and i always stay together.'' replied hunter. ''yeah, we will be fine.'' said storm. ''very well then...all of these allies who helped fought against the dark armies are rewarded with these statues of themselves and will be placed all ove warfang.'' continued dantite. ''mason!!'' called dantite in a loud aged voice. ''yes sir?'' mason asked. ''i want you to take these statues and place them all over warfang. and be careful.'' said dantite. ''can do dantite!'' said masonpulling out a large cart and placing all of them on it. dantite smiled. later... ''dantite!'' said blueshadow racing up to him. ''now about that question that you said i can ask you.'' said blueshadow panting. ''yes.'' said dantite. ''are you a light dragon?'' said blueshadow in a strongbut calm voice. ''why do ask such a thing?'' he said. ''please! i want to know! you look so much different from the others!'' remarked blueshadow, demanding her request. ''there are some things in the world that you don't need to know.'' said dantite walking off. ''you know, when i looked at you i thought you were great! i was wrong! just a dragon who's afraid of sharing one little secret.'' said blueshadow turning her back to go inside where they have been celebrating their victory. ''blueshadow!!'' he demanded. ''yes.'' she said calmly. ''maybe you are right.'' admitted dantite. she smiled.
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#218 Posted: 17:35:55 23/12/2008
cool! write more!
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#219 Posted: 19:27:59 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
here it is! the next part! hope ya like it! 8D yeah im hyper.
''blueshadow...'' he continued with a sigh. ''what? are you?'' she asked again. ''i am a light dragon...and the others of my kind were killed by darkuss and his servants malefor,darknest,and demonshadow. that's why i keep it to myself.'' confirmed dantite. ''but why couldn't you tell me?'' asked blueshadow. ''because i was afraid...'' he paused. ''afraid of what?'' she continued. ''that they wold find me...i wasn't quite sure when i looked at you.'' he admitted. ''but i was taken by malefor and my parents were killed by darkuss.'' said blueshadow. ''im so sorry that had to happen to you.'' dantite said. ''dantite. are you the leader of warfang?'' blueshadow asked. ''yes but im not the one whomade this place.'' he said gazing at her. ''then who was it...or who is it to be exact?'' she said with a confused look on her face. ''that...im not qite sure.'' said dantite. ''and am i a sapphire dragon?'' she asked. dantite's eyes grew wide. ''so many questions young one, but this question...'' he said with a pause then finally said ''this queestion is quite different.'' dantite said. ''what? what do you mean?!?'' said blueshadow. ''what i mean is that you are a special dragon.'' he said finally. blueshadow raced up to himand hugged him with her wings. ''but am i sapphire dragon?'' she asked again. ''you are going to have to figure that one out by yourself young one.'' he said as he turned his back. ''aren't you gonna join us? everyone is inside.'' she said. ''this is your victory. not mine.'' he said. ''come on! you have to join us dantite!'' said blueshadow trying to push him inside. ''alright, i'll join.'' said dantite walking in.
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#220 Posted: 19:58:33 23/12/2008
like it? i love it! write more!
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#221 Posted: 14:23:39 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
okay. i will write more when i have the time.
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#222 Posted: 19:49:25 26/12/2008
ok. take your time. i get tired of writing sometimes too.
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#223 Posted: 21:40:18 26/12/2008
oh great story wirte more soon plz!
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#224 Posted: 22:08:30 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you everyone! now i am ready!
dantite looked around. ''blueshadow. why are you being so nice?'' asked dantite. ''well, we didn't want to leave you alone.'' she replied. dantite smiled then began to laugh. everyone at the party began to laugh. joy filled the room with laughter and smiles. ''YAY! WE ARE ALL GONNA GET DRUNK!'' said garnet being random. ''garnet.'' said sapphire rolling his eyes then giggled. ''what about prowlus?'' asked hunter placing his drink down onto the table. ''don't worry hunter. i got that all ready covered.'' said meadow. suddenly they heard knocking. ''who's that?'' asked storm. blueshadow opened the door. ''prowlus!'' said blueshadow. ''PROWLUS!!'' said hunter and storm at the same time. ''what?'' asked prowlus raising his arms. ''come on in!'' said garnet as she took another drink of sparkling juice. meadow handed prowlus a drink then said, ''we are happy you are here.'' prowlus's face slowly changed into a grin and said, ''thank you.'' blueshadow started to burst with laughter, along with tanzanite. once again they all started laughing. ''to our victory!'' said hunter raising his glass. ''to our victory!'' said everyone as they raised their glasses as well. ''ha! ha! i love this! if only maleff were here to see this.'' said tanzanite with a sigh. ''he's still alive you know.'' said blueshadow. ''i know, its just that well, he exspects too much out of me.'' replied tanzanite. ''come on tanzanite.'' said blueshadow as she pulled him. everyone began to dance.
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#225 Posted: 00:19:26 27/12/2008
oh i like chapter plz continue!
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#226 Posted: 17:20:43 27/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you. and you are one of my new readers! LOL!
when the dancing was over, they all returned to having chats. ''i wanna get drunk. like them.'' said garnet being sarcastic. ''we can't garnet, we are too young. and we are only 15.'' said sapphire. ''hey sister, i dare you to drink that.'' said ruby as she giggled. ''um garnet..''said blueshadow as she was ready to stop her. garnet snatched the bottle from the counter. she sliced it open with her tail, then used her wings to take a drink. ''thats good stuff!'' garnet said. ''don't worry guys. its just wine.'' said hunter. ''I DON'T CARE IF ITS WINE! hic!'' said garnet. ganet shoved a bottle into sapphire's mouth. later... soon everyone became drunk. but they still continued to laugh, and had a good time. ''WHERES MY BOOSE?!? hic! hic!'' said garnet in a drunk voice. ''i..HIC!...don't-HIC!...know...HIC!'' said blueshadow as she started to laugh again. ''ya'know...HIC!....i think...HIC!...boose..HIC!...is...awesome!!!!! HIC!'' said hunter taking another sip. ''MINE!'' said garnet as she pounced on him. ''GET YOUR DIRTY PAWS AWAY FROM MY BOOSE!!!'' said garnet. ''guys...HIC!...instead of arguing...HIC!....lets..HIC!...all tell jokes...HIC!...about the dark armies..HIC!'' said tanzanite. ''sorry...HIC!...blueshadow...HIC!...you will start.'' said garnet. ''okay. blaackfire...HIC!...is an A**!..HIC!'' said blueshadow. everyone wouldn't stop laughing. ''hunter...HIC!...your turn.'' said blueshadow. ''malefor looks...HIC!..like...HIC!...a purple..HIC!...bull!..HIC!'' said hunter. tanzanite giggled at the joke, along with blueshadow.
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#227 Posted: 17:27:29 28/12/2008
yeah in am the new reader!
its rly good! plz continue!
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#228 Posted: 19:04:43 28/12/2008
cool! write more!
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#229 Posted: 21:55:30 29/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you guys!
soon it became night time. blueshdow and the others were all asleep. garnet was sleeping next to an empty bottle. meanwhile in blueshadow's dream...''MOM! DAD! IS THAT YOU?'' cried blueshadow as she was racing up to the shadows. yes. it is us. perrox and gemstone. said perrox as he gav blueshadow a hug. ''im so sorry dad. its just that--'' paused blueshadow, when her mother interupted her. there is no reason to cry my little sweet. you have tanzanite and your friends. they all forgive you. said gemstone. ''why did darkuss have to kill you guys?!? why!!!?'' said blueshadow as she burst into tears. perrox and gemstone wrapped their wings around blueshadow. ''and i--i-- had this nightmare of me killing tanzanite! i don't want that to happen! why does it have to ME?!?'' said blueshadow. don't cry my little one. everythings is going to be alright. you'll see. said perrox as he faded away. gemstone faded after him. im alone...my parents are gone...maybe they are right...maybe for once...i can change....im glad that i have tanzanite and my friends... thought blueshadow. outside of her dream... blueshadow's face slowly became a smile.
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#230 Posted: 02:00:08 30/12/2008
awwww i like the last part of the chapter! its sweet!
write more plzzzzz!
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#231 Posted: 19:21:12 30/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you! here is the next part!
it soon became the next morning. ''oh. what happened?'' murmured blueshadow as she struggled to get up. she was so drunk that she fell back down again. she sighed. ''GUYS LOOK! I FOUND MORE BOOSE!'' called garnet. ''that was one of the best parties i've ever had.'' said hunter. ''yeah but we are so d**n drunk we can't get up.'' said meadow. hunter giggled. ''blueshadow? are you okay?'' asked tanzanite as he pulled her back up with his tail. ''yeah. that was really awesome. HIC!'' said blueshadow. ''hunter. we need more boose!'' said garnet in a drunk voice. ''yeah we do. HIC!'' he said. ''i call that bottle over there!'' said blueshadow as she raced to get it. ''NOOOOO!!! ITS MINE!!!!!'' said garnet as she tried to push blueshadow out of the way. ''its my boose!'' said blueshadow pushing her. ''no! its mine!'' snarled blueshadow. blueshadow pounced onto the bottle. she opened it. garnet lunged at her but she missed. ''D**N! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO TAKE MY BOOSE?'' asked garnet. ''because i win!'' said blueshadow taking a sip.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
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#232 Posted: 19:35:10 30/12/2008
great story! write more!
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#233 Posted: 02:15:13 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
okay! here it is!
garnet snatched the bottle with her tail. blueshadow snarled at her. storm tried to wake himself up with cold water. sapphire had to go swim in a heated pond. the others felt sick. blueshadow looked around the room. where are you garnet? she thought as she turned her head. garnet lunged at blueshadow. the both of them turned their heads towards meadow. ''uh oh..'' said meadow to himself. still drunk, blueshadow and garnet ran towards meadow. ''I WANT HIM!'' cried garnet as she pulled on his tail. ''guys...whats going on???'' asked meadow nervously. ''they are having a cat fight. literally.'' giggled tanzanite. meadow rolled his eyes. blueshadow began plling on his leg. i have two dragonesses fighting over me....great... thought meadow. sapphire climbed out of the pond. he yawned then went back inside. hunter started to crack up. ''this is just...so sudden.'' said hnter covering his mouth. hunter tried to hide his laughter but he couldn't hold it in any longer. storm giggled a little. garnet pulled on his tail harder. ''D**N!! EASY!!'' he cried. the two dragonesses flinged across the room. ''its on!'' said blueshadow. ''bring it!'' said garnet.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#234 Posted: 02:18:11 01/01/2009
awsome! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
sapphire Emerald Sparx Gems: 4822 |
#235 Posted: 04:23:51 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
okay! and when im done writing this story im gonna write sapphire: son of sapphiren! >8D
garnet found red crystals next to her. she grined at blueshadow. she slashed at the crystals destroying them. she tossed them at blueshadow. blueshadow dodged them by breaking them with her strong horns then shot blue fire balls at garnet. ''oh man.'' said storm. ''a chick fight.'' said tanzanite. ''over meadow?!'' said sapphire as his eyes began to twitch. ''it seems like its more of a cat fight.'' spyro added. suddenly garnet got hit by one of the fire balls. she crashed into the wall. ''YOU SHALL DIE! HIC!'' cried garnet as she shot out her eclispe breath at her. ''MEADOW IS MINE!!! HIC! HIC!'' cried blueshadow as she went over to the empty wine bottles. she used her tail to fling the empty bottles at garnet. meadow slaped his pawm on his face. ''why me?'' he said to himself. ''this is just to good!'' teased hunter. meadow squinted his eyes at him and said, ''SHUT UP!''. hunter wouldn't stop laughing. he laughed so hard that he fell backwards and choked on his breath. meadow's face turned red in embarresment. he slamed his head on the table. ''MINE!'' cried garnet. ''MINE!'' cried blueshadow. the two dragonesses clashed into eachother. ''ouch.'' said blueshadow scratching her head. ''this is just hilarious!!!'' said hunter as he struggled to catch his breath.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
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#236 Posted: 23:44:17 02/01/2009
great chapters!
oh poor Sapphire, he dosn't seems upset about this fight! plz continue!
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#237 Posted: 23:45:37 02/01/2009
great story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
sapphire Emerald Sparx Gems: 4822 |
#238 Posted: 20:00:59 03/01/2009 | Topic Creator
hunter made meadow embarresst!
later in the morning... when they were no longer drunk, blueshadow and the others decided to explore more of warfang. ''im thirsty.'' she said. ''me too, and after drinking all of that boose i feel sick.'' said garnet covering her mouth with her paw. ''but it seems like well...dantite is hiding something.'' said blueshadow. ''like what?'' asked cynder. ''like well...he told me that he is a light dragon, and when i asked him....what kind of dragon am i he stopped talking then he said 'find out your self'. its just that well...i really want to know...and i breath blue fire like sapphire and i mastered the dark elements like cynder...i just don't know.'' she sighed. ''you will find out. i promise you.'' said tanzanite. ''yeah we are all here for you.'' said sapphire. ''but right now we are going to explore some more.'' said cynder. she smiled. ''really? you guys would do that for me?'' asked blueshadow. ''yes.'' said tanzanite. prowlus and his tribe ran up to them. ''we've decided to look around with you.'' said prowlus. ''and we can't leave storm.'' said hunter. ro'zan, shadow, and terron followed them as well. ''okay guys, what should we do first?'' she asked as she lunged into the air then flew back down. ''lets go see my aunt!'' said sapphire. ''your aunt?'' said spyro. ''yes! aunt aliyah!'' said sapphire as he made a large grin. ''well, what are waiting around for? lets go!'' said blueshadow. ''slow down young dragons!'' said ro'zan. ''you heard ro'zan! wait for us!'' cried prowlus as they chased after them.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
sapphire Emerald Sparx Gems: 4822 |
#239 Posted: 03:57:39 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
hello anyone?
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#240 Posted: 20:07:27 05/01/2009
hi! awsome story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
sapphire Emerald Sparx Gems: 4822 |
#241 Posted: 22:12:26 06/01/2009 | Topic Creator
here ya go! the next part! warning: contains spoilers.
sapphire paused. ''AUNT ALIYAH!'' called sapphire as he ran up to her. ''SAPPHIRE?'' called aliyah, wrapping her wings around him. ''aunt aliyah. im so glad to see you!'' said sapphire. ''im glad to see you too sapphire. who are your friends?'' asked aliyah. ''aunt aliyah, this is blueshadow, garnet, storm,ruby,hunter, meadow, prowlus and i'll tell you the rest later.'' sapphire explained. ''i missed you!'' said sapphire giving her another hug. ''she looks like a sapphire dragon.'' said aliyah, walking up to blueshadow. ''am i?'' she asked. ''aunt aliyah. why are you these colors?'' asked sapphire. ''when i was young i was bred for one purpose. to kill the sapphire dragon. i am the first of my kind. but i refused to do it.'' she said slowly. ''is that true?'' said sapphire. ''yes.'' she said with a sigh. sapphire gave her another hug. ''sapphire, you are just like your father.'' she said with a smile. ''sapphiren also created an army. they were also his friends too. but i've nearly killed him.'' she said slowly. ''its okay.'' said sapphire. ''have you've ment their parents?'' asked sapphire. ''yes. they were my brother's comrades. ro'zan and terron too, were his comrades.'' said aliyah. ''what about fireflight?'' asked tanzanite. ''gei, the leader of the black clan helped raised her. darkuss was my father but sapphiren had a silver dragon named shirox as his father. we both have the same mother azaren.'' said aliyah. ''wow.'' said sapphire. blueshadow's eyes grew wide. she knew my parents?
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
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#242 Posted: 22:01:07 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
hello?
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#243 Posted: 02:23:14 09/01/2009
hi! great story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
sapphire Emerald Sparx Gems: 4822 |
#244 Posted: 22:07:11 09/01/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you! im gonna get started on fireflight and nalemor!
aliyah turned her head slowly. ''so your the daughter of perrox and gemstone?'' she said slowly. ''ya-yes.'' she said nervously. ''they've never told me that they had a daughter.'' said aliyah. ''well...i am...well i used to be.'' she sighed. aliyah smiled at her. ''there is nothing wrong young one, im sure you miss them.'' she said softly. blueshadow looked up at her. ''yes,'' she said, ''but...they are gone now. i don't know what happened to them. i really do miss them.'' said blueshadow as she began to cry. ''darkuss, my father killed my brother's father shirox. we are both siblings...just different fathers. im pretty sure it was darkuss who killed them after when they...'' she paused. ''they what?'' asked blueshadow. ''after when they stole your egg.'' aliyah finally said. blueshadow's heart sank. ''what were they like?'' she asked slowly. storm's eyes grew wide. ''you mean my father killed her parents?'' asked storm. ''yes. and blueshadow, perrox was a firey black and blue dragon. he was always ready for danger. and your mother gemstone was a calm but a tough fighter. she always helped us find the right locations.'' she said. ''why did darkuss do this to me?'' asked blueshadow. tanzanite wiped the tears off her eyes with his tail. she smiled. ''he killed my parents too. maleff adopted me and raised me as one of his own.'' said tanzanite. ''yes, maleff was the leader of warfang was he was young.'' she said with a smile. sapphire smiled.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#245 Posted: 22:16:26 09/01/2009
cool. write more!
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#246 Posted: 12:23:08 10/01/2009
yeah more!
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#247 Posted: 21:16:12 10/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yay! im almost done with my fan-fic! can't wait to write my next one!
''did my parents suffer the same fate?'' asked tanzanite. ''yes.'' she sighed. ''maleff expects too much out of me.'' admitted tanzanite. ''tanzanite, sapphiren felt the same way.'' aliyah said softly. ''he did?'' asked tanzanite. ''yes.'' replied aliyah. ''but aren't i a sapphire dragon?'' asked blueshadow. ''you look like one.'' said aliyah. shadow, terron and ro'zan all looked at eachother. then they loked at blueshadow. ''what?'' asked blueshadow. ''we have a feeling that dantite knows about it.'' said ro'zan. ''where is he?'' she said slowly. ''he'd left after the party. shadow noticed him walking out while we were all inside.'' said terron. ''lets go find him!'' said blueshadow. ''but how? he could be anywhere and--'' said ruby as blushadow interupted her. ''we will find him! he knows who i am. thank you aliyah.'' said blueshadow. ''your welcome young one.'' she said softly. blueshadow smiled then bolted away. ''follow her!'' said tanzanite. prowlus looked at them then shrugged. ''come on guys!'' said sapphire. ''DANTITE!'' called blueshadow as she was panting. ''DANTITE! YOU BETTER COME OUT HERE!'' she demanded. there was no responce. ''DANTITE!!!'' she called again. tanzanite and the others manage to catch up to her.
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Trust your instincts. ~Caithe |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#248 Posted: 21:55:42 10/01/2009
awsome! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#249 Posted: 05:32:30 11/01/2009
Quote: sapphire
So cute |
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#250 Posted: 05:45:25 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
thank you! who is your favorite character?
tanzanite and the others started to loose their breath in a short amount of time. ''she's fast!'' said storm. ''yes...but...we need to...find her...'' said tanzanite as he began to race after her. ''DANTITE! SHOW YOURSELF!!!!'' demanded blueshadow. she began to charge. her blood-red eyes burning, while she was running. ''i have eclispe breath like garnet and ruby!'' said blueshadow as she began to spat out dark red sheres from her mouth. when she reached to a corner, she noticed dantite standing there. ''DANTITE!!!!'' cried blueshadow. dantite turned his head. ''what are you doing here blueshadow?" asked dantite. ''I KNOW WHAT YOUR HIDING!'' said blueshadow as she pushed him into the wall. ''what do you mean?'' he asked calmly. ''DON'T GIVE ME THAT! YOU KNOW WHAT KIND OF DRAGON I AM!'' she cried. ''what?'' he asked nervously. ''I DO NOT WANT TO BE LEFT WITH WONDER FOR THE REST OF MY D**N LIFE! NOW TELL ME WHO I AM!'' she demanded. ''maybe your right.'' admitted dantite. blueshadow released him, then landed onto the ground. tanzanite found her at the corner. ''there she is!'' he said.
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