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#201 Posted: 20:20:05 22/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx!
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#202 Posted: 20:26:18 22/08/2008
you are gifted with fanfics
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#203 Posted: 20:28:35 22/08/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you! i am reading yours! And liking it!
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#204 Posted: 20:31:22 22/08/2008
Of course she's gifted! Especialy after writing all of those chapters back in the Spyro story. That is a HUGE experiance! ^,^ Well, atleast for me
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#205 Posted: 20:58:44 22/08/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you!
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#206 Posted: 21:06:34 22/08/2008
You're welcome!
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#207 Posted: 21:08:24 22/08/2008 | Topic Creator
OK! is says this post is too short if I try to just say 'OK' thats annoying (the too short post)
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#208 Posted: 00:08:44 23/08/2008
Try always saying not "OK" but "Okay" Let me try it...
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#209 Posted: 07:25:53 23/08/2008
cool story!
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#210 Posted: 09:36:29 23/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx Skyqueen!
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#211 Posted: 15:36:58 24/08/2008
wise signature
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#212 Posted: 19:43:17 25/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you! Next chap tommorow!
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#213 Posted: 22:17:24 25/08/2008
YAY! Can't wait to read it ^,^ As always
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#214 Posted: 15:17:20 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Maybe today maybe tommorow, Sorry! *stars the first bit*
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#215 Posted: 16:01:11 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
<Chapter 18: Where?!>
All the dragons were back at the temple. They couldn't find Volteer and Ignitus in the vision pool room, so they tried the balcony. "Ah, young dargons," Volteer said as he saw them. "Ignitus has completly dissappeard." Before anyone could comment Sparx whoosed into the room and hugged Spyro around the neck so hard Spyro nearly choked. Lava helped and pulled Sparx off. Tornada knew what would happen. she thoght, Going, Going.. "BUDDY! Volteer nearly talked his head off! God, I wish I had come with you! Wait.... Aren't you dead!?" Sparx screamed. "I just hugged a ghost! The good side is that Iggy isn't here to tell me off if i bathe in the pool of 'Visions'....." he said as he flew off screaming for his mum. Gone! "He is as wacko as before and I suspect that burning is someones theasaurs..." Spyro commented. Sparx had already 'bathed' and was buring Volteer's theasuars. "Darn dragon! he talks his head off allll the time can't get a single comment in...." Spyro was evasdraopping anfd thought to himself, Look who's talking! "ahm" Volteer got everyones attention again. "Ignitus has been gone for ages. Just after you left he did too. And wecome back young dragon." "Mm. Yes but we must rescue Ignitus."Terrador chimed in. He and Cyril had escaped. "Yes, but where is he?" Eclipse said. "More than likely at Cynder's new castle in Convexity." Cyril informed them. " oh." "Spyro, I need to talk to you, in private." Terrador asked. "Yes." Spyro answered, puzzled. In the vision room Terrador told Spyro this; "Young dragon. Cynder has been corrupted with more black magic than we thought possible. To save the world you have to make great sacrifice. If you battle her and win, it will not be like ast time. She will be gone, forever. She won't return to her normal size. " Spyro shook his head in disbelief. "No. I can't. I...I can't tell you why. I..I just have something with her!" He said and turned around. "Yes. I know. I know it more then you will ever know. But Spyro you have to be strong!" "I wish i had never come here. Never met you all. My life would be alot eaiser!" Spyro Shouted and run out of the temple to who knows where. ============ Like it? i have nothing against Cynder (you're gonna read this anyway.. She survives! its just to make the story better with more of an exciting story line! ! Dont you dare say post too long!
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#216 Posted: 18:50:32 26/08/2008
Woah! The "Sparx" part kinda confused me, coz I didn't understood, who and what was talking about But the most important, to my luck, I understood Poor Cynder...... ._. Great Chapter, Night Owl! ^,^ You're getting better and better at this ^,^
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#217 Posted: 18:53:48 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
thats ok! Dis ya read the spoiler?
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#218 Posted: 19:33:54 26/08/2008
Yes, but I don't want to get it on bublic, so that guests could read it And NP!
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#219 Posted: 15:04:06 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
OK!
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#220 Posted: 07:53:05 29/08/2008
When are you doing the next chapter?
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#221 Posted: 09:14:08 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Soon, and did you ask Dark52 to have that avatar?
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#222 Posted: 13:45:54 29/08/2008
When I first saw this avatar on you, tye-dye dragon, I thought that Dark52 wrote something
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#223 Posted: 19:34:17 31/08/2008 | Topic Creator
How did u do that smily?!
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#224 Posted: 18:56:07 03/09/2008
I just copied it's URL from dA ^,^ Then posted it here like an Image If you want, I can post all of the URLs (Smilies) I know
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#225 Posted: 19:01:58 03/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Please?!
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#226 Posted: 19:16:31 03/09/2008
Ok ^,^ I PMed you them
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#227 Posted: 19:17:44 03/09/2008 | Topic Creator
ok! 8D (post to short!)
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#228 Posted: 01:47:02 06/09/2008
cool.. (besides the love part) do more!
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#229 Posted: 10:15:21 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, but ya have ta have one of those bits in a story!
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#230 Posted: 10:47:06 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
<Chapter 19: Queen of darkness>
Ignitus flew and flew and flew. Convexity seemed years away. suddenly the blue portal that signaled that Convexity was in habited emergered and sooner than he thought the old dragon would be facing Cynder. She roared when she realized what he was doing. She lunged. Ignitus dodged but she bit his tail spike. "You won't survive this, dragon!" and flew at him again. He wasn't so quick and got sctratched by her longer-and-sharper-than-natural claws. Spyro ran and ran untill he thought he would collapse. He sat and started to think. "This can't happen. It doesn't!" Then he looked up and saw to disturbingly fimilar figures. "No..." Ignitus looked down and knew she was coming for her last bite. He closed his eyes and pleaded to the ansestors that they would look after Spyro and Cynder. Suddenly a huge bang crackled and Cynder was trapped in an electricity orb. "Go! Ignitus, go, NOW!" Spyro shouted. Ignitus flew and landed. He could go quicker on land. and he couldn't really fly, Cynder had bit his left wing so it hurt when he moved it. Cynder grunted. "You again!" She said as she chraged and hit Spyro. One of her horns punctured his wing, preventing flight. And since they were fighting in the air Spyro dropped out of the sky like a stone into water. He hit hard. He was ingered but not defeated. She breathed on him. "Don't you remember anything? Not even us? Not even..me?" Cynder hesitated as if she was thinking. "No. But I do remember my master telling me to kill you!" "WAIT!" he shouted as she lunged. She stopped. "who is this master?" "The dark one. He rules all." "the dark master..." he wispered to himself. even he can't be pure evil, so Cynder should still have her memories, but ids deninying them to enter her brain... " Do you remember when we stared out on to that starry night? when you said you felt and evil was on the horizon? Do you remember it? Do you?" She shook her beastly head. She knew about that how? Suddenly she blacked out. Spyro watched as she collapsed. "I did it. I killed her!" He started crying. Crying was very weird for a dragon since they cry only once in their lifetimes. He watched through his tears as she shrunk. "How?..." She was back to her normal size. He walked up to her. he smiled. She was alive, just blacked out. He smiled and picked her up and flew to the temple. -------------------------------------------- Like it? I am sorry its late. And thanx very much to all those who are reading it, it means a lot to me!
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#231 Posted: 16:47:37 10/09/2008
No offence or anything, but didn't you say that Cynder hurt spyro's wing?
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#232 Posted: 16:50:04 10/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yar. BUT. In the chap is says she breathed on him by acciedent then it healed coz in this fanfic she has healing powers!
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#233 Posted: 13:03:35 13/09/2008
Oh. Ok. Alright, then. Love the story so far!
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#234 Posted: 13:55:18 13/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much! I will write the next chap in the next few days, when I am orgasnized!
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#235 Posted: 03:37:32 17/09/2008
This is amazing
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#236 Posted: 15:18:08 17/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks very much! next chap on friday. sorry for the long wait. Yin-Yang has me ocuppied.
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#237 Posted: 17:23:22 21/09/2008
You have inspired me Night Owl dude
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#238 Posted: 14:57:38 22/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Im a girl! And are you making a fanfic? I will be there to read it if you are!
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#239 Posted: 16:38:55 01/12/2008 | Topic Creator
WOOOT! I'm goona get around to doing another chap soon. Yes, i know some of you have been waiting a year. sorry.
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#240 Posted: 11:01:10 02/12/2008
one of the best spyro stories I've ever read!
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#241 Posted: 16:10:42 02/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you so uch! *hug* First post in years! (JK)
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#242 Posted: 08:38:05 03/12/2008
No problem!
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#243 Posted: 19:02:35 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter when I get time.
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#244 Posted: 07:42:45 04/12/2008
well, hurry up, it's awesome! i want to hear more!
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#245 Posted: 16:15:58 04/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok. Want me to Pm you when its done (today.)
Well, the first part. Spyro remembered what had happened last time, he braced himself for a hard landing. Suddenly, Cynder opened her eyes and took control. She grabbbed him noticing that his eyelids were slowly closing. She started flying hard, to get out of the poisonus gas cloud of the portal. "Come on..." "Cyn..." Spyro passed out. "Humph. Its always the girls left standing." Cynder moaned. WHOOSH. And they were at the door of the dragon temple. "Ignitus?" Cynder called. Evif opened the door. "Cynder? Spyro? Is that really you?! You've been gone weeks!" "Weeks?" Cynder asked as Spyro revived. "Yes, time goes faster in Convexity." he said weakly. "Come in, quickly. Xis is sick, very sick." Spyro and Cynder dashed in. They soon came to the sleeping quarters. Xis was on her bed. "Xis! Whats wrong?" "She was attacked by an elite ape."
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