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#201 Posted: 00:18:15 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
! Works for me!
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#202 Posted: 00:19:39 26/08/2008
(more letters...)
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#203 Posted: 00:22:00 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Darn, I have to wait for everything right now!
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#204 Posted: 00:23:12 26/08/2008
I HATE WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!! ._. BTW Nalemor went ot eat, so I can start the chapter now, but 15-20 minutes won't be enough
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#205 Posted: 00:25:05 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
You could post the first half. That is something I usually do...
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#206 Posted: 00:30:59 26/08/2008
Oh ok Sounds good enough ^,^ But then I won't talk to you for a while, coz it'll be interupting my thoughts, if I do...
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#207 Posted: 00:31:41 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Ummm, well I guess this part is up to you...
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#208 Posted: 00:37:31 26/08/2008
Of course ^,^ I'll start in a few minutes
EDIT: But... Interupting our finally happened chat, because of a FanFic? Hmmm... I don't think so EDIT: Started the chapter.... I won't reply for a while.... EDIT: Damn it, I'm too tired.... I'm sorry.... I'll have to take care of the chapter later.... *Yawn* |
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#209 Posted: 01:54:52 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Darn, but that's ok! Sorry I didn't respond earlier I had logged out and I forgot to tell you... I was in a bit of a hurry.
Well, C you tomorrow, D_C! Sweet Dreams! |
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#210 Posted: 11:38:11 26/08/2008
Thx ^,^ I'm back, but right now I need to go to one of my friends, to test her new PS2 with my games That's why, I'll be back in about 1:30 hours to finish the 1st part of the chapter
EDIT: My brother is back, so I can't write the chapter |
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#211 Posted: 19:36:41 26/08/2008
<Chapter 33: The Truth> <Part 1>
“Now then, have you finished fooling around?” Shade asked the three dragons, while stepping out of the shadows. “Yes… I think so…”Luna replied, a bit sadly. “Good! Now, Cassandra, please re-tell everything I said earlier, to Asin. As for me and Luna, we’ll go a head. Make sure to catch up with us.” Shade told, turning away and walking out of the cave, along with the Celestial dragon by her side. “Asin, Shade told me, how we can bring the true Malefor back” Cassandra started, turning to face the Black dragon. Asin looked at the large dragon, and prepared herself to listen to what she has to say. Cassandra continued: “For the whole history of the dragon race, there where born only two dragons, which can live forever. It is the Time and the Life dragons. The Time dragon, as you may already understand, is the Chronicler. As for the Life dragon, it is known as the Life Energy of this world, which gives life to all. But no one is completely sure, where this dragon can be located. Someone says it lives high in the mountains, someone says that its spirit always wanders around the world, without a long usable home. But luckily for us, the Great Asin, before her death, said, that she’ll give her knowledge about the Life dragon, to one of the Light dragons, witch must born in our era, or already did. Since I have no clues about the location of the Life dragon, and Cynder is no longer has the true light within herself, you are the only one who can know something about this.” “Me? But I don’t know anything.” Asin replied. “You’re wrong. It’s just that your current memories are rejecting this information… And all of the other memories…” Cassandra explained. “Other… Memories?!” Asin asked, with her eyes wide from the little fear. “Yes, Asin. Shade and Luna, all your life, where acknowledging your behavior, abilities and your sense of protection of others. And since Shade came from the past and was the closest friend to the Great Asin, she came to the conclusion, that YOU are the Great Asin.” Cassandra continues her explanation. “M-me? But…. How is it possible?” Asin asked, shocked. “The Great Asin, I mean, you are the only dragon, which can reborn over and over again, saving all of your memories deep inside of your soul. Though, it’s not that easy to remember it all…” Cassandra finished her explanation. “Wait… “Deep in my soul”… Now that you mentioned it, I do have strange visions lately.” Asin got a bit serious. To be continued.... ----------------------------------------------------------------- --- -- - Did you like it? I'll continue later, coz right now, my brother is back |
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#212 Posted: 19:44:06 26/08/2008
AAAAWWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE <33333333
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#213 Posted: 11:53:24 27/08/2008
Thanks alot! You have no idea, how long I thought about this, making new ideas, and combaining them all togeather, to make it sound perfect! And sorry... I was interupted by my brother's return, so the first part ended kinda unfinished I just really wanted to show you guys this. Couldn't wait
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#214 Posted: 17:37:55 27/08/2008
Coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllll! *die for about the 5th time today* I am PMing you D_C!
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#215 Posted: 17:48:44 27/08/2008
Thanks! ^,^ And I replied to ypur PM
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#216 Posted: 17:50:06 27/08/2008
NP and thanx! =]
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#217 Posted: 17:57:21 27/08/2008
*looks at Night Owl's signature* Asin is me as a Dragon, too
Me, you and Nalemor- three Dragons in the Human world! Sorry, Off-topic.... |
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#218 Posted: 18:07:30 27/08/2008
Error: Your post system suxx. |
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#219 Posted: 18:10:24 27/08/2008
What? Like it isn't true
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#220 Posted: 18:12:06 27/08/2008
Yeah true!
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#221 Posted: 18:15:27 27/08/2008
It IS true! *Turns in to her Dragon form and says: Ok, this getting off topic, so let's just fly to our PM inboxes and talk there, ok? Flies there*
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#222 Posted: 18:17:10 27/08/2008
DX Error- posting sytems brain is diddy.-
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#223 Posted: 19:25:57 27/08/2008
Sorry for double posting but may i do the next chap? I am ictching to do it!
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#224 Posted: 19:32:25 27/08/2008
NO! I'm doing it! I haven't finished my chapter, yet! I am writing it now, so don't worry! Please?
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#225 Posted: 20:35:46 27/08/2008
I meant after that! =]
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#226 Posted: 20:54:41 27/08/2008
Oh... Of course! ^,^ Sorry
The chapter is almost ready, but I will al-so make the 34th chapter, so you'll make Chapter 35 |
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#227 Posted: 21:36:39 27/08/2008
Finally, I finished it! Pwew... I hope you aren't still tired of reading, coz there is still plenty of writing for me and reading for you! Enjoy! ^,^
------------------------------------------------------------- ---- --- -- - Previously on the Spyro story: YOU are the Great Asin.” “M-me? But…. How is it possible?” “you are the only dragon, which can reborn over and over again, saving all of your memories deep inside of your soul” “Wait… “Deep in my soul”… Now that you mentioned it, I do have strange visions lately.” Asin got a bit serious. <Chapter 33: The Truth> <Part 2> Seeing how Asin got more serious about all of this, Cassandra replied: “Visions? Hmmm…. It seems that your previous memories are returning…. Like the Great Asi… I mean you always said: “What ever happens, happens for the best” so there must have been a good reason, why your current memories accepted your previous memories” “So, what do we do now? If… my memories are returning, that means…” Asin asked, but was interrupted by Cassandra. “That means we’ll know where the Life dragon is!” She smiled. “Yeah, you’re right Cassandra! I guess I just need to look deep in my soul, to find the information we need” Asin answered, cheered up, and closed her eyes. Concentrated. After a while, a vision appeared in her eyes, but all it displayed was an image of a strange looking male dragon. It was all while. Instead of crests, it’s all body was covered in feathers. It had Large Angelic wings and there was a golden Ring bracelet on one of its front legs. It had five horns. Once the image appeared, a mysterious voice said: ”Once just a stone, it matured in to a creature, almost just like all the other dragons… But the dragons where foolish... They rejected this creature, all because they feared of its great power. It started wandering around the world, becoming its spirit, and later on, its Life source. But soon, it was caught and placed in to the stone, it was born from. That stone, is now known as the Spiritual stone. The vision ended, Asin opened her eyes and quickly asked her self: “The Spiritual stone?” “What? What did you see, Asin?” Cassandra asked, looking at the Black dragon. “The Life dragon… Is in the Spiritual stone” Asin announced. “In the Spiritual stone? But…” Before Cassandra could finish, she remembered, that when Nalemor gave her the Spiritual stone, back then, before Infinity opened the portal, Cassandra, while traveling through the portal, accidentally dropped the Stone and it flew away inside the portal. When Cassandra wanted to finish her phrase, she saw that Asin was stunned, as if she was listening to something very carefully. Asin heard: “The Celestial dragon owns the Spiritual stone…. The Celestial dragon owns the Spiritual stone…” When it stopped, Asin replied: “We need to find Luna. She knows where the Spiritual stone is” Cassandra looked at Asin, surprised. She knew that Asin hasn’t remembered all of her memories, yet, but the information they needed, she has found with almost no problem. Cassandra then said: “Luna and Shade have left to the Xaon ruins. Shade is guessing that the Life dragon can be located there, because once, you have mentioned something about the Xaon ruins, and that the Life dragon is there. Luckily, I know where those ruins are, so follow me” “Alright, Let’s go” Asin answered. Both of the dragons left the cave, trying to catch up with Shade and Luna, who have left earlier. --------------------------------------------------- ---- --- -- - Well, atleast this time my brother didn't interrupt me I hope you liked it There wasn't much actions in this chapter, but all of this information is really helpfull, believe me ^,^ And don't worry, the next chapter will have tons of action! |
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#228 Posted: 09:30:04 28/08/2008
ok! I can't wait for the next one!!!!!
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#229 Posted: 15:15:43 28/08/2008
ACTION!
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#230 Posted: 16:02:12 28/08/2008
Quote: Night Owl
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#231 Posted: 16:16:38 28/08/2008
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#232 Posted: 16:35:39 28/08/2008
BTW, I know this may seem Off topic, but since it is one of the Characters from our story, then I think Dark52 wouldn't mind ^,^
Remember Elbereth drew you Infinity in a very beautiful style? Well, I requested her to draw Asin ^,^ And look what is her result I hid it from being viewed by guests |
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#233 Posted: 16:37:04 28/08/2008
WOAH! can you tell her I love it?
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#234 Posted: 16:40:08 28/08/2008
Ok, I will! ^,^ BTW this is the True Asin... The way she must be. After seeing this drawing, I was completely sure in one thing, and that's why I now call her- The Angel of Darkness
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#235 Posted: 16:41:05 28/08/2008
Yeah! And thanx!
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#236 Posted: 16:45:53 28/08/2008
NP! ^,^
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#237 Posted: 16:47:29 28/08/2008
8D ERROR! postingsystems brains So tiny you need a microscope too see it!
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#238 Posted: 16:53:04 28/08/2008
(Error: Your Brain is to small!)
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#239 Posted: 16:55:26 28/08/2008
ERROR! postingsystems brains So tiny you need a microscope too see it!
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#240 Posted: 18:41:42 28/08/2008
<Chapter 34: The Xaon ruins>
After Shade and the Celestial dragon left the Cave, Shade said to Luna: “Right now we’ll go to the Xaon ruins, Asin told me about, years ago. I think it will take some time for Cassandra to explain everything to Asin, so we won’t wait for them” “But you told them, that they need to catch up with us!” Luna replied. “I said that, so that they would know, that they mustn’t waste any time and need to hurry to the Ruins.” Shade answered on the dragon’s question. “Ok, then let’s get going” Luna suggested. “Can you keep up with me? I’ll run pretty fast, so prepare yourself for a fast flight.” Shade warned the dragon. “Ok, I’m ready when you are!” Luna shouted, preparing to jump and fly. “Good!” As soon as Shade said that, she tuned and in a blink of an eye, she was running at top speed, leaving only an Orange trace behind her. Luna quickly jumped in to the air and gathered some energy around her winds. Then, in a flash, like a bullet from a Pistol, was shot at high speed, following the Black creature. Soon Luna caught up with Shade. It seems that not Shade, not Luna were running or flying…. Shade was actually using her boots to slide right on the ground or above water. As for Luna, she flew in the air, but yet, not making a single move with her wings. As if the energy, she gathered around them, is used like a Turbo. Even if Shade and Luna where going very fast, it took them some time to get to the place, they headed to. The forest was huge, and in it there were many yet unknown creatures, and anything could happen… Just when Shade was sure, that the Xaon ruins were near, a sudden “attack” fell right on the her and Luna. They were running, when suddenly they were stopped, by an invisible trap. When they noticed what happened, they were already caught in a net. And a weird voice sounded from the tree branches: “Where do you think you’re going, Hedgehog?” Shade was trying to listen, from witch tree did the voice was coming. But she didn’t have to wonder for long, as the owner of the voice showed himself. From behind of one of the trees, a green dragon look-alike creature stepped out. It was standing on its back legs, just like Shade. It was all like a dragon, only it didn’t have wings. It had goat’s horns, only yellow. It was covered in green and grey fur. Shade was impressed, to see a creature that strange looking. “I’m afraid I can’t let you pass, hedgehog.” The creature said. “Hey! Let u out! We’re a serious mission here! We need to get to the Xaon ruins!” Luna yelled. “No” The creature replied. “And why not!?” Luna continued yelling. The creature closed his eyes and made an evil smile. Then quickly jumped of the branch and landed right in from of it’s hostages. To be continued..... ------------------------------------------------------------ ---- --- -- - My brother is back, again So I'll continue later |
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#241 Posted: 18:45:55 28/08/2008
OK It was gREAT!
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#242 Posted: 20:00:19 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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Good, D_C! That was excellent! Sorry, I didn't respond before got a little sytracted! |
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#243 Posted: 20:04:49 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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Oh, wow! That is gorgeous! If you could, please tell her she did a good job! (Darn, I am missing everything!) BTW, I read your other chapters; they were fantastic! |
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#244 Posted: 20:15:03 28/08/2008
Hi C_R!
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#245 Posted: 23:19:56 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey, NiOwl!
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#246 Posted: 00:21:36 29/08/2008
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Thank you, C_R ^,^ I'm really trying on this And it's OK ^,^ Though it was getting a little too lonely without you, but Luna was here with me all this time Quote: Cynder_Rox
Thanks! ^,^ And ok, I'll tell her A mean, I'll copy your words and quote them to Elbereth Same thing for Luna's words ^,^ |
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#247 Posted: 00:27:19 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Np! (More Letters)
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#248 Posted: 00:32:21 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
BTW, check out by fan-fic page! It is called, "A Fan-Fic, coming soon."
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#249 Posted: 00:35:32 29/08/2008
Ok, I will! *goes to Forum list*
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#250 Posted: 00:37:33 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh, it is in "Fandom!"
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