darkSpyro

I need to add another chapter. i havn't in a while. srry ppl. >.>
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Chapter 29:
I wake up to see Ice Shard and Moon cooking fish. I realize that I only ate once yesterday. I try to walk, the best i can, over to Moon and Ice Shard.
"Hi Star." Moon says.
"Do you want some fish?" Ice Shard asks. She drops the fish near me.
"Thanks." I say. We all eat some fish, and then we see Cynder come in.
"How are you doing?" She asks me.
"My side hurts less than yesterday." I say.
"Starscream said you'll be able to fly to dragon city in about two weeks."
"So, what do we do untill then?" Moon asks.
"We just have to stay here and wait." Cynder answers. She walks toward us and then starts to eat too.
The ground starts to feel strange, like we're sinking into it. I look down. We are sinking into it. I see the ground start to turn purple.
"What's happening?" I ask.
"I think it's a portal." Cynder answes. We fall through the ground and find ourselves in a forest we've never seen before.
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i know this chapter was short. >.> srry about that.
plz comment.
@GM: no, they are not in Starlight's world, if that's what ur thinking.

I better make another chapter for mine soon too

Good chapter

thx Solister. I can't believe how long i took to add another chapter. it went onto the second page. >.> i'll try to not let that happen again.

OMG FINALY U ADDED ... finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yea. and sometime you need to read my story or you'll have to wait a really long time untill you add another chapter to ur story! >.>

srry... omg i forgot to tally my contest votes

lol! guess u better do that now...
oh, i havn't made the art topic yet!
so edit--------------
double post. OMG! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! i am sorry for this, but nobody will notice it if i don't double post, or, i might just edit the last post in.
lol, the deed is done.
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Chapter 30: the tour
"I'll go look around." Cynder says, then flies off.
"So, where are we?" I ask.
"In another dragon world." Ice Shard answers.
"Do you think we'll get back to out own world?"
"We will." Moon says.
We see Cynder flying towards us. There's a green dragon with her
"That was quick." I hear Ice Shard say.
"I found someone. She said she would help us." Cynder tells us.
"Hi. My neame is Emerald." She says. "Follow me. U'll take you to where I live. You'll be safer there."
"Star can't fly." Moon says. "She's hurt."
"It isn't verry far from here." Everald says. "I think she can walk there."
I stand up and we all start to walk towards where Emerald lives. We don't walk too far 'till we come into a place with lots of dragons.
"Here's where I live." She says. "Let me give you a tour." We all walk into the middle. "This is where we train." She says. We walk to a latge cave. "This is where we sleep, and that's where the food is in case you get hungry. Yea, i know there isn't much stuff here."
"What's your elemen?" Moon asks.
"Ice. Everyone's elemebt here is the same." Emerald answers.
"Are there any other dragons besides these ones?" Cynder asks.
"Yea, but we tend to stay away from eachother."
"Why?" I ask.
"We don't really get along."
"That's strange." I say.
A dragon runs up to us. "Earthclan is here!" He says, worried. "We're under attack!"
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you can guess where i'm getting my insperation from. lol. hey, whatever works really well, although, might not be able to turn it into a real book now. unless i change it a little...
oh, i'll add more chapters since i'm WAY overdue. sorry about that.
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Chapter 31: the attack on Iceclan
"Stay here Star." Cynder says. "It's too dangerous when your this hurt." I sit down and watch the others leave. Once I'm sure they're gone, I run out into the battle too, ignoting the pain in my side. A dragon tries to hit me with an earth missle, but misses. I try to burn him with my flame breath. He suddenly looks confused, and i take that as a chance to tailswipe him. He flies away from me quickly.
I look up and see purple in the sky, then see a dragon fall out of it. It's Night! A dragon tries to hit her, but she makes an earth ball to protect herself. The dragon stops attacking, then looks at her.
"Sorry." He says to her. "I didn't know you were an earth dragon." She looks at him strangly, obviously confused. Another dragon comes up behind Night. She spins around and freezes him. The first dragon uells something, then the dragons stop fighting. He walks over to Emerald, and they whisper to eachother. He nods, and Earthclan leaves.
Emerald has Night, Ice Shard, and Moon to meet her into the cave. I try to dash in before they get in. Luckaly, they don't notice me. "I want to know, what are your elements?" She asks.
"Well, all of ours are different." Cynder responds.
"Follow me. We're going to have a meeting with all the dragons. You need to decide where your going to live."
"What do you mean?" I ask.
"You need to choose which clan you want to live with." We walk out to where the other dragons are. "We're going to a meeting in a few minutes." Emerald tells all the dragons, then she turns to me. "I have something that will help your side. Come on."
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here's your extra chapter. plz comment!

Good chapters

thanks. i'll add on now so i don't forget.
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chapter 32:
We're all walking in the forest. My side is better, but i'm still not strong enough yet to fly. "Why can't we all stay in this clan?" I ask Emerald. The others are a little farther up then us, talking about something else.
"The other clans would get mad if they found out that we have new members and didn't give them the choice to go to a different one. They all want new members to make thier group stronger." Emerald answers.
"I'm still a little confused."
"What is your element?"
"Fire, wind, ice, and electricity."
"You know four?" She asks, astonished.
"Yea."
"Which one is your favorite?"
"I don't know."
"You'll have to choose one of them to be your favorite." She looks at me. "Once you join a clan, you can only use that one element."
"What? That dosn't make any sence!" Before Emerald can say anything else, I hear someone scream. I look in front of me and see Night falling into the ground. Moon tries to help her, but it's no use. Night already fell all the way in, and the portal closed. I run over to where my sister was standing just seconds ago. Emerald walks up to me.
"It's ok, she's most likely back in her normal world." Emerald says, trying to comfort me. Cynder, Ice Shard, Moon, and I stay close together now. If another portal appears, we'll all fall into it together.
Everyone stops, so we do the same. Emerald tells us what to do when we go into the crowd of dragons in front of us. "You four will go into the middle. I'll come with you. Once everyone is here, you'll be able to choose which clan you want to live in." She tells us. Then, we all walk into the giant crowd of dragons.
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not much action. sorry about that. next time, there will be arguing. is a fight going to break out? lol. suspence. dun dun duuuuuuuuun.

nobody has posted yet. *gasp* oh well. i need to give you lots of chapters anyways.
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Chapter 33:
"Shouldn't we stay together?" I ask Moon, Ice Shard, and Cynder. "If another portal comes, we should all be together so we'll all get though together."
"But we don't all have the same elements." Moon says. "Cynder dosn't have ice."
"I'll stay with Cynder. You two go to Iceclan."
"Are you sure?" Ice Shard asks.
"I'm sure. We'll be okay." I say. All the dragons go silent, then split up into their clans. Emerald walks up to us. She says which clans are which, then walks back to Iceclan. We all look at eachother. It's hard to split up, but we kow we have to.
"Come on." Ice Shard says. She and Moon start to walk away frrom me and Cynder. Ice Shard looks back at us. "We'll see you again someime." She says quietly, then walks into IceClan.
"Hey!" Someone from another clan shouts. "That's unfair!"
"How is it unfair?" Emerald says back. "They had a choice. Besides, they were found on our terrirory, we could've just had them stay there if we wanted."
"It looks to me like you did make one of them stay with you!" A green dragon shouts. "What happened to the one that knows earth and fure?!"
A red dragon steps out of Fireclan. "If you have a dragon that knows fire, she belongs in my clan!"
Everyond starts arguing. Cynder and i look at eachother, confused. i look into iceclan. Moon and Ice Shard are close together, prepared for fighting to break out.
"Stop!" I hear Emerald yell out. Everyone looks at her. "We'll meet here in a week. If they don't feel comfortable in the clan they choose, they can switch clans untill they find the one they belong in." Nobody disagrees. Emerald looks up at us. "Star, Cynder, which clan do you choose?"
"I'll go in whichever one you choose." I whisper to Cynder.
"I want to go into Shadowclan, but you don't know that element." She tells me quietly.
"I'll try to learn it." Cynder gives me an uncertain look, but she nods. We both start to walk towards Shadowclan.
"Come on." A blue dragon says to us. "We'll show you where we live." We follow him into the group of Shadowclan dragons. When all the clans are starting to leave, Ice Shard and I look at eachother.
"Goodbye." I whisper, even though she can't hear me. Cynder and I follow Shadowclan into the trees.
"Do you think we'll see them again?" I ask Cynder.
"I hope so." She answers.
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arguments. so fun to write.
you don't know how akward i felt writing this chapter. Shadowclan. the clans.

Very good chapter

Quote: desi

Everald

I shall use this name in my story!

wait, when did i ever say that....oh well.
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Chapter 34:
"I'm Shark." The blue dragon says.
"Hi" I say back.
"Want me to show you the borders?"
"Sure." Cynder says.
"Come on." He turns away from the dirrection the group is going. Cynder and I follow. Soon, we stop. A bush in front of us starts to shake, and we see Ice Shard, Moon, and Emerald come out."
"What are you doing here!" Emerald asks.
"The exact same thing you're doing." Shark answers. "Showing out new group members where our land stops." Emerald just glares at Shark.
"Come on." She says to Moon and Ice Shard. "Let's go back." She quickly turns around and walks back into the bush. I look at Ice Shard, she's looking straight back. Only emerald's voice makes her run back and leave.
"It's okay." Cynder says. I nod, and we all start walking to way we came from. I look back, hoping to see Ice Shard, but all that's there is the bush.
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who liked it?
i'll give you all another chapter...
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Chapter 35:
Cynder and I lay down in the grass and try to sleep. I lay in the grass for a long time, but can't fall to sleep at all. I can tell everyone is sleeping exept me and Cynder. I nudge her, and she gets up. I start to walk in the dirrection that we went today. Cynder follows me. We both silently walk untill we see the bush. It starts to shake, and then we see Ice Shard and Moon come out of it.
"How did you know that they were coming?" Cynder asks.
"I'm not sure." I admit. "I just thought that we should come here.
"Hey!" I hear a voice yell at us. I realize that it's Shark. I close my eyes, waiting for him to pull us back and tell the entire clan, but i just hear a gasp. I open my eyes and see that the ground is turning purple. We all start to fall into it. Soon, we fall all the way in. "Cynder!" I hear Shark yell. I look up, and can just make out the image of him trying to grab Cynder, but before he comes into the portal, it closes. We're going back to our own world again!
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yeah, i was expecting the time spent there to be longer. If it had, you would understand one of the parts better, but i just wanna get back into the spyro world again.

Good chapters

thx solister. i'm out of chapters in my book. i've decided just to write it on the internet now.
i'm trying to get rid of a block, so i might now have a new chapter tommarow...

cool so far

yay. thank you karen.