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oh thank you.

I agree, good beginning... Keep up.

thank you,

Chapter 51,

lucifer dragged Ben away from the cell in chains, lucifer sat in the throne and made Ben kneel down in front of him.

lucifer: "now to make up for what you did you will worship me!"

Ben: "i'd rather be locked in a cell while my brother is still a satanist!"

lucifer: "worship me before i decide to punish you!"

Ben: "i would never bow the knee to you!"

lucifer: "you're bowing both your knees to me right now."

Ben: "i meant i would never bow the knee to you willingly!"

lucifer: "worship me now!"

Ben: "you know yelling isn't going to help..."

lucifer got out a whip and hit Ben across the back with it, Ben closed his eyes and groaned in pain.

lucifer: "how about now?"

Ben: "NEVER!"

lucifer whips him a few more times, Ben falls to the ground and lays there.

lucifer: "maybe i should try a different approach..."

Ben: "...what do you mean by that?"

lucifer: "if you converted your brother to Christianity then all i have to do is covert him to satanism than i'll make him convert you!" he got up and walks toward the cell.

Ben: "no!... don't do it!... it took me years to convert him!" he struggled to free himself but couldn't "oh come on! don't covert him back to satanism!!"


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i know this chapter was short

KEWL!
Yet, yicks!

thank you

Good chapter

thank you.

Chapter 52,

lucifer walked up to the cell, Ron was standing near the door.

Ron: "what did you do to my brother?"

lucifer: "nevermind him!... remember when you were'nt a Christian... you used to worship me every night... why don't you go back to that?"

Ron: "...no...no i won't... being a Christian saved my soul and i won't go back to you!"

lucifer: "come on Ronald do you really want to spend eternity locked in a cell?"

Ron: "no..."

lucifer: "i can let you out and i can put you above all the other humans. you shall live like a king in comfort if you simply worship me..."

there was a long moment of silence.

lucifer: "if you become a satanist again you'll be second to me... everyone will respect you..."

Ron: "what about my brother?"

lucifer: "you'll have to convert him... if he coverts you can keep him as a servant... what do you say?"

Ron: "can i have a room of my own?"

lucifer: "you can live in a small home next to the Temple."

Ron: "can Ben live with me?"

lucifer: "yes you can keep him as a servant..."

Ron: "ok i'll do it..."

lucifer opened the cell, Ron walks out of the cell and kneels in front of lucifer.

lucifer: "good... now say the words which you used to say everytime you worshiped me."

Ron: "hail satan..."

lucifer: "good Ronald very good..."


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Oh no D8
Good chapter

Chapter 53,

Ben was still laying on the ground chained up, he saw lucifer and Ron walking up to him.

Ben: "Ron why are you walking alongside lucifer?"

lucifer: "he converted with a little persuading..."

Ben: "no...Ronald tell me it's not true..."

Ron: "it's true Ben i am a satanist again."

Ben: "why?"

Ron: "because i didn't want to be locked up i wanted to be free... you can be free too Ben, if you convert like i did...do you want to remain a prisoner or do you want to be free?"

Ben: "i want to be free... but i will never worship the devil to get freedom..."

Ron: "i did... and he made me be above all humans... think of what he can do for you..."

Ben: "never... i will not be like you and bow the knee to that devil!"

Ron: "he can give you freedom, he can give you power if you worship him freely..."

Ben: "no..."

Ron: "come on... he promised me a home and freedom and you can have what i have..."

Ben: "stop tempting me Ron!"

Ron: "give in to the temptation Benedict!... give in!"

Ben: "NEVER!"

Ron: "do you want to rot in a jail cell or do you want to be free!?"

Ben: "i want freedom."

Ron: "then this is how you're going to get freedom... by worshiping lucifer..."

Ben: "alright fine! i give up... i'll convert."

the chains from around Ben disappeared. lucifer sat back in the throne.

lucifer: "prove that you have converted, worship me..."

Ben slowly bows down, Ron does the same.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

OI. Where's Draggy?

Yeah, the problem with sub plots is that we lose the main plot. Where's Draggy!

Draggy is still locked in that small cell. don't worry we'll get back to him after a few more chapters.

Chapter 54,

lucifer: "now to prove that you 2 are converted i'll give you something."

a flash of dark engery engulfed Ben and Ron, they were clothed in black and red robes and a pentagram necklace hung from their necks.

lucifer: "you 2 are now my priests. you will come here early every morning to worship me. you will pray to me every night."

Ron: "we will. thank you for these gifts." he bowed low to the ground.

Ben just stayed in a kneeling position.

lucifer: "you 2 may go to the home i have given you."

Ron and Ben stood up. they walked out of the Temple and into a small house, the walls were black in color, there was a bed also black in color, a large pentagram with red outlines hung on the wall, a red statue of lucifer was at the bedside, there was also a big red couch.

Ben: "oh this room is so unholy looking."

Ron: "on earth if we didn't have to share a room my room would've looked something like this..."

Ben: "so do we share a bed...?"

Ron: "no of course not... i get the bed..."

Ben: "then where am i gonna sleep?"

Ron: "you can sleep on that couch..."

Ben: "why do you get the bed?"

Ron: "becuase lucifer made me above all humans which means i get the better stuff... oh and he also made you my servant..."

Ben: "...what!?... i am not serveing you!"

Ron: "relax... i won't make you do anything... now i guess we should pray since it is night time..."

Ben: "i am not going to pray to lucifer!!!"

Ron: "ok, but if lucifer punishes you don't say i didn't warn you..." he kneeled in front of the statue.

Ben: "i'm not afraid of lucifer..."

lucifer's voice: "oh aren't you?... start praying before i come in there and whip you 1000 times!!!"

Ben ran to Ron's side and kneels in front of the statue too.

lucifer's voice: "that's better... wake up when i tell you to and come to the Temple immediatly after. if you're late you will regret it!"

Ben and Ron got up.

Ron: "guess we better get some rest now..." he layed down in the bed.

Ben layed down on the couch. they both fell asleep.


ok next chapter coming tomorrow.

nice chapter

thank you.

Good chapter

Chapter 55,

early the next morning...

Ben and Ron were still asleep.

lucifer's voice: "wake up both of you!"

Ron quickly sat up startled.

lucifer's voice: "it is time for you 2 to come to the Temple!"

Ron got out of bed, he walked over to Ben and tapped him on the shoulder.

Ron: "wake up... it's time for us to go to the Temple to worship..."

Ben: "what time is it?"

Ron: "like 5:00."

Ben: "i am not getting up at this hour to worship lucifer!!"

Ron: "come on... you have to..."

Ben: "no i don't!"

Ron: "ok... but when lucifer finds out he's gonna be upset..."

Ron walks out of the house and goes to the Temple, he walks up to lucifer.

lucifer: "where's your brother?"

Ron: "he didn't want to come..."

lucifer: "how dare he disobey me like that!?"

Ron: "please forgive him..."

lucifer: "i'll forgive him when he's begging for my mercy when i punish him!!... demons!!"

2 demons walked up to lucifer.

lucifer: "go and bring Ben to me!"

the demons left. lucifer looked at Ron.

lucifer: "well what are you waiting for!? worship me!"

Ron kneels in front of him and starts bowing continuesly


next chapter coming tomorrow... or maybe today...

Good chapter

thank you i hope i'm not boreing you with all these uninteresting chapters.

no not at all,its interesting

thank you.

this may not cheer you up but i actaly look at this story to get inspiration of making my evil dragons even more evil

oh ok i'm glad to be an inspiration.

Chapter 56,

a few minutes later the demons walked in the Temple dragging Ben behind them in chains,

demon: "he tried to escape... but we easily captured him."

they threw Ben in front of lucifer.

lucifer: "it seems that you haven't really converted."

Ben: "no... no i have not..."

lucifer: "demons take him and torture him!"

the demons grabbed Ben and started to drag him away.

Ben: "Ron!... help me!...don't just sit there and stare!... help me!... HELP ME!!"

the demons dragged him into another room and closed the door. Ron looked toward the door.

lucifer: "you don't really feel sorry for him do you?... he deserves what he gets!!"

Ron: "yes... he does..." he didn't take his eyes off the door.

Ron heard screaming from beyond the door. he stood up.

lucifer: "don't you go through that door!... your brother deserves the punishment!... continue worshiping me!"

Ron kneels down but doesn't look away from the door. he hears demons laughing as the screams of pain continues...

lucifer: "i said continue worshiping me!"

Ron bows down, though he continues to worry about Ben, a half an hour later lucifer told Ron he can go back to the house. Ron goes back to the house. he sits on the couch wondering what's happening to Ben, a little while later Ben walks in the house. he had scars all over his body, his robe was torn, his back was bleeding and he had burn marks all over. he staggered into the house and looked at Ron.

Ben: "you left me there to be tortured..."

Ron: "what happen to you?" he stood up and looked at him.

Ben: "those demons whipped me, they clawed my body and burned me with hot metal in many places..."

Ron: "here why don't you lay down on the couch..."

Ben layed down on the couch "Ron... we have to escape..."

Ron: "are you crazy... lucifer will see us."

Ben: "we have to try... i can't live like this anymore..."

Ron sat down next to Ben

Ron: "ok... we'll try tonight..."


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Good chapter

thank you

pretty good story

Chapter 57,

when night came Ron and Ben walked out of the house. the sky was dark and the moon and stars did not shine.

Ron: "it's so dark out here..."

Ben: "what did you expect? lucifer turned Heven into hell..."

Ron: "so where should we go?... where can we go?"

Ben: "we could go toward the gates..."

Ron: "isn't hell on the other side of the gates?"

Ben: "yes... but if lucifer changed Heaven there might be a change to hell..."

Ron: "i see a flaw in your plan."

Ben: "what do you mean?"

Ron: "why would we go to hell to get away from lucifer?"

Ben: "well think about it if lucifer is ruler of Heaven he's not in hell anymore so hell is the only safe place to get away from lucifer."

Ron: "i hope you know what you're doing."

Ben: "have i ever gotten us into trouble?"

Ron: "well..."

Ben: "don't answer that..."

they got to the gates. Ben opens the gates, great brightness comes out, they look out of the gates and see what has become of what was once hell. they were now looking at a lush green forest. the sky was bright blue. there were beutiful flowers everywhere, a large clear river, sparkling grass, big fruitful trees, and in the distance they see a large golden city.

Ben: "Ron... do you see what i see?"

Ron: "you mean that hell is now like Heaven?"

Ben: "yeah..."

Ron: "are we going in?"

Ben: "no Ron we're going to go back to lucifer and tell him to punish us for trying to escape!...of course we're going in! come on!"

they walked into the forest and toward the golden city.

Ron: "i almost forgot how it was to feel true peace..."

Ben: "yeah me too..."

they reached the enterace to the city. 2 angels walked up to them.

angel: "stop... you're the priests of satan!"

Ron: "no no no... well i was but i'm not anymore..."

Ben: "i'm a Catholic priest."

angel: "then why are you wearing those satanic robes and that pentagram necklace?"

Ron: "we were forced to..."

Ben: "we escaped from lucifer..."

the angels pinned them to the ground and chained them up.

angel: "you 2 are coming with us."

Ben: "we're telling the truth!... please let us go!"

the angels dragged them toward a large golden building...


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Now there is hope
Good chapter

thanks.

Quote: torok

Ben: "no Ron we're going to go back to lucifer and tell him to punish us for trying to escape!...of course we're going in! come on!"

.....
Love da humor.

thank you.

Chapter 58,

the angels took Ben and Ron into the building. the angels made them stand up and took them further in. they were taken through a large hallway. toward the end of the hallway they stopped.

Ron: "oh my gosh..."

Ben: "it's Jesus."

Jesus was sitting on a golden throne. the 2 angels took Ben and Ron to Jesus.

Ben: "Master..." he bowed down in front of him

Jesus: "release them..."

the angels unchained them. Ben just stayed in a bowing possition. Ron stood there for a moment.

Ben: "Master i am so happy to see you again."

Ron: "wait a minute... were you here this whole time?"

Jesus: "yes i was."

Ron: "you could have come to save us... why didn't you come?... why did you let us suffer like that!?"

Ben: "Ron shut up... don't raise your voice at the Master..."

Ron: "did you just tell me to shut up?... i have a point... he could have come to save us... and he abandoned us... he didn't abandon just us he abandoned innocent children and countless people and angels!!"

Jesus: "i only allowed all this to happen so that lucifer might use his powers for good..."

Ron: "what!?... you'd allow your children to suffer so that lucifer may be good!?... that makes no sense!"

Jesus: "he was good to you for some time... so he still has a good side."

Ron: "well yes he was good to me... but what does that have to do with anything?"

Jesus: "i want lucifer to repent. but with his pride and hunger for power it is very hard for him to do so... i will remove him from power and maybe then he'll repent."

Ron: "then why did you let him take over for 2 years!?"

Ben: "will you stop raising your voice and show a little respect to the Master."
he grabs Ron's arm and pulls him down in a kneeling posstion.

Jesus disappears...

Ben: "where did the Master go?"


In Heaven,

a great light shines over all of Heaven, lucifer sees the light from inside the Temple, he goes outside and looks at the light. suddenly Heaven begins to restore itself, the grass turns to green again, the flowers grow back, the trees are restored, the river of life turns crystal clear again, all rock buildigs turn into gold again, all holy objects are restored, all unholy objects are gone, the sky turns bright blue again, every prisoner is free. the light shines on the ground lucifer and all demons are magically chained up. Heaven is restored. everyone is inside the golden Temple. angels bring lucifer and the demons inside the Temple in chains, the angels force the demons and lucifer to kneel in front of Jesus who was sitting on his throne.


next chapter coming today or tomorrow

nice chapter

Nice chapter, though we still haven't seen Dragsooth

WOW!
THAT'S KEWL!!

thanks. we'll see Dragsooth in the next chapter.

the story is awsome,you really know how to make a good story

thank you.

Chapter 59,

every human and angel began to shout curses at lucifer. Dragsooth was standing with Malinda near lucifer. Dragsooth was cursing lucifer too. Malinda felt sorry for lucifer, she could see his fear and helplessness. lucifer looked up at Jesus with fear and tears in his eyes. almost everyone in the crowd was chanting in unison.

crowd: "throw him in hell!!... throw him in hell!!... throw him in hell!!..."

Dragsooth: "yeah! throw that beast into hell!!"

Jesus: "everybody be quiet."

most of the crowd continued to chant "throw him in hell!!... throw him in hell!!"

Jesus stood up "QUIET!!"

everyone was now silent.

Jesus: "thank you..." he sat back down in his throne. he looked at lucifer who was kneeling before him scared.

lucifer: "...please... have mercy on me... i didn't know what i was doing... i'm sorry..."

person in the crowd: "there is no forgiveness for you, you sadistic evil creature!"

lucifer: "please... Lord Jesus.... forgive me..." he bowed down before Jesus.

the demons also bowed and they were begging for mercy as well...

some humans and angels started chanting again "throw them in hell... throw them in hell..."

Jesus: "don't start that again."

the crowd kept silent. the only sounds were the scared voices of lucifer and the demons begging for forgiveness.

Jesus: "lucifer... even though you are the most evil creature in the world... i forgive you and your siblings for what you did..."

lucifer: "... you... you're not going to throw me into hell?"

Jesus: "no..."

the crowd began to protest agaist this loudly.

Jesus: "all of you humans have sinned! and what did i do?... i forgave you... even when you didn't deserve it... should the same concept apply to lucifer?"

the crowd began to get quiet and gradually was silent.

Malinda: "i knew lucifer would be forgiven..."

Dragsooth: "i wish he gotten sent to hell..."

Malinda: "you can't possibly mean that."

Dragsooth: "he made me suffer in ways i can't discribe... you don't understand the pain that monster caused me... you can't understand the pain he caused all of us!" he walked out of the Temple.

most of the crowd walked out of the Temple...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Better than the alternative...

sure it is...

hmm, I'm not trusting Lucifer right now on his begging, it could lead to more trouble
Good chapter anyway

thank you...

Hey, nice story!

Chapter 60,

lucifer: "thank you for your mercy Master... can me and my siblings get our original bodies back?"

Jesus: "of course you can."

lucifer and the demons were turned into angels again.

Jesus: "feeling better?"

lucifer: "yes it feels weird to be back in my old body again."

Jesus: "you'll get used to it."

lucifer: "thank you Master... can i also be highest ranking angel again?"

Jesus: "no... you might get prideful again so i'm not taking any chances... but you may have your room back."

lucifer: "thank you Master..."

Malinda walked up to him "i'm so glad ou chose to repent..."

lucifer stood up "yeah so am i... i want to make up for all the horrible things i did... i'm sorry for putting you though so much."

Malinda: "i have already forgiven you... but it'll take some time to get the others to accept you."

lucifer: "i know... but i know they'll eventually forgive me... where's Dragsooth?"

Malinda: "he walked out of the Temple. he's probably in his room in our mansion... let's go there now."

they walked out of the Temple.

lucifer: "i had forgotten how nice Heaven was... i now can't believe i did all those horrible things i did."

Malinda: "it's ok you have been forgiven."

they walked through Heaven...


next chapter coming today.

Still not trustting lucifer yet
Good chapter

Me: "He is the Father of All Liers,
Lives to Destroy & Kill,
Satan Deseves-"

Jesus: "I saved u when u didn't deserve it.
Why can't u give Lucifier a second chance?"

*kneeling* : "Sorry, Master!"

that's exactly what i would do...

Awesome story! i gtg soon.

ok, the next chapter is coming tomorrow.

kay. ;3

Chapter 61,

lucifer and Malinda got to the mansion. they walked inside.

lucifer: "this is just like i remembered it."

Malinda: "it hasn't changed at all, exept for that extra bedroom that we have is now Dragsooth's room."

lucifer: "may i speak to Dragsooth?"

Malinda: "yes, let me see if he's in his room."

they walked over to the door of Dragsooth's room, Malinda knocks on the door

Malinda: "Draggy are you in there?"

Dragsooth: "yes mother i'm here."

Malinda: "lucifer wants to talk to you..."

Dragsooth: "is he with you?"

Malinda: "yes he's right beside me..."

Dragsooth: "tell him to go away! i don't want to be anywhere near him!... every time i get near him he hurts me..."

lucifer: "let me talk to him."

Malinda steps aside letting lucifer close to the door.

lucifer: "Draggy it's me..."

Dragsooth: "GO AWAY!"

lucifer: "come on... let's talk about this..."

Dragsooth: "we have nothing to talk about!!... GO AWAY!!!"

lucifer looks at Malinda.

Malinda: "maybe we should let him come out of there on his own..."

lucifer: "yes... can i see my room?"

Malinda: "yes..."

they walked toward lucifer's room.

in Dragsooth's room...

Dragsooth was sitting on his bed.

Dragsooth: "i don't believe that evil monster... he's just waiting for an oppertunity to get revenge..."


next chapter coming today i guess

Hmm, I don't know...
Good chapter