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Spyro's kids: Comet [CLOSED]
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#201 Posted: 21:00:06 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 79 Lamorak

"You shall be killed, dragon! For I am the great and powerful Sir Lamorak!" roared the figure.

Lamorak was the son of King Pellinore and also the brother of Percival. He was known to have defeated thirty knights single handedly. Sir Tristam had fought the exhausted Lamorak. He beat him, but refused to kill him. He was extremely put out from Sir Tristam and even more put out when a messenger of Morgan le Fay's infidelity-seeking drinking horn for King Arthur's court. He forced the page to take the prize to King Mark's court instead, an act which almost resulted in the exposure of Tristram and La Beale Isolde's affair, as well as those of ninety other ladies. Tristram was understandably angry.
The two soon settled their differences, when shipwrecked on the Isle of Servage. Conspiracy seems to have brought them together, as they plotted the downfall of Sir Nabon le Noir, a mutual enemy. Shortly afterward, they attended his tournament and Tristram killed him in battle. However, the truce was forgotten when Tristram was again shipwrecked - this time near the Castle Perilous in North Wales - and the two fought for hours before being reconciled once more.
Further combat followed for Lamorak as he encountered Sir Frol of the Out Isles, Sir Belliance le Orgulus, Sir Launcelot and Sir Gawaine. Some meetings were more friendly than others. His battle with Sir Meleagant concerned an argument over Queen Guinevere was more beautiful than Queen Morgause; and revealed a passion which was to be Lamorak's undoing.
Lamorak became Morgause's lover, despite the fact that his father had killed her husband, King Lot of Orkney. The Queen's sons suspected a liaison and Sir Gaheris eventually discovered the two in bed together. He sliced off his mother's head in a fit of rage, but Lamorak escaped. He complained bitterly to King Arthur concerning his treatment at the Surluse Tournament and the monarch promised to protect him. However, in the end, he was slain by the sons of Lot.
Comet ran at Lamorak and slashed at him.
Lamorak blocked it with his shield and shot a blast of water.
Comet dodged it and flew behind Lamorak.
Lamorak slashed at him.
Comet fell to the ground, he couldn't take much more of this slashing from several enemies. He slowly slashed at Lamorak's leg and made him trip.
Lamorak fell to the ground.
Comet got back up and stabbed Lamorak in the back.
Lamorak growled and shot a blast of water around him. This caused Comet to go flying into a tree.
Comet got up and ran at Lamorak.
Lamorak slashed at him.
Comet evaded the attack and zoomed around him. He slashed his back again.
Lamorak knocked him away. He ran towards his horse which stood near the temple.
Comet flew after him slashed his leg just before he could reach it.
Lamorak tripped again, "You shall pay for that!" He limped towards his horse.
Comet quickly pinned Lamorak and raised his sword to strike him.
"Go on, kill me!" said Lamorak.
Comet struggled to strike Lamorak, should he kill him? He got off of Lamorak and walked back.
"Hahaha... coward!!" laughed Lamorak as he shot Comet with water.
Comet dodged it.
Lamorak jumped onto his horse and rode off, "I hope the next person I fight isn't a coward!"
Comet dropped his blade on the ground. He knelt to the ground and thought about why he didn't just kill Lamorak in the first place. Then he remembered how Zaxus had stolen that dark gem. He got back up and walked off into the distance.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#202 Posted: 00:16:42 30/06/2010
nice.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#203 Posted: 18:42:53 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 80 Incoming Darkness

Comet was in a field of flowers. He slowly walked through them and looked up at the sky.
The clouds were black and it was very windy. Small rain droplets began to fall from the sky.
Comet shivered as the droplets hit his face. He remembered about the eclipse and the night of eternal darkness.
The rain began to poar hard. Thunder was heard and lightning shot from the sky.
Comet ran faster in order to find shelter. He reached a small desserted farm. He walked over to the barn and went inside. Comet sat down on a pile of hay.
A storm soon began. The wind started blowing flowers, leaves, and other earthly things all over the place. A funnel cloud formed in the sky.
Comet waited for the storm to dye down. It never did. The funnel cloud had reached a 120 mph and was blowing animals of all kinds around. It then touched down to the ground and a massive tornado formed right in front of Comet.
If you are waiting for the storm to stop, then I must tell you that it never will. This storm is a great one, it is eternal. If you want to stop the evil then you must go outside in the storm and fight. whispered a voice in Comet's head.
Comet was terrified. He had to go out in the middle if a tornado and continue his quest. He slowly stood up and walked out the barn door.
The tornado went after the farm. It tossed around a farm house.
Comet knew that if he were to survive, then he needed to go outside and escape. He ran across the field as the wind tore at his scales. He raised Excalibur and became faster. He was far ahead of the tornado now. But to his shock the tornado turned and came after him.
Comet ran faster. A forest began to come into sight. Comet ran towards it as the tornado chased after him. He reached the forest and ran through it.
The tornado tossed around the forest trees.
Comet went as fast as he could and reached the other side of the forest. He found the Burning Plains and ran towards it.
The lava from the volcanoes had turned to stone because of the rain.
Comet ran through the Burning Plains as the tornado chased him. He then noticed another temple ahead of him. He ran into hit.
Comet ran deeper into the temple and deeper underground.
The tornado could not get him now. It passed by the temple and flew through the Burning Plains.
Comet lit a light on Excalibur and stared into the darkness. There was a figure in the shadows, and it was a big one.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#204 Posted: 19:10:46 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 81 The Temple of Queiszu

Zaxus roared and slapped Comet with his tail, "You are too late, I've already got the dark orb from here!"
Comet slashed Zaxus.
"GIVE THAT BACK!!!!" roared a voice from down some stairs.
Zaxus ran for the exit, but it collapsed from the storm outside. There was no way out.
The voice came closer. It then stepped into the room. A bloody, green, gigantic monster known as Queiszu came in.
Comet stepped back.
Zaxus knocked Comet towards Queiszu.
Queiszu swiped at him and roared.
Comet dodged it and stabbed him in the gut.
"NO ONE DOES THAT TO THE GREAT QUEISZU!!!!" roared Queiszu as he attacked.
Comet evaded the attacks and shot fronze at him.
Queiszu fell down the flight of stairs.
Zaxus kicked Comet down the stairs. He tried to break open the entrance, but it was too blocked.
Queiszu's arms stretched up the steps and grabbed on to Zaxus. They pulled him down the steps and threw him into a wall inside a chamber.

TO BE CONTINUED
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#205 Posted: 19:46:50 30/06/2010
very good.This is a very long book,but that's okay becuase I like long books.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#206 Posted: 14:05:33 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Well this is going to be a five part book. But trust me, this wait will be worth it once the next book comes out.

Chapter 81 The Temple of Queiszu Part 2

Comet had landed hard on a rocky floor inside a strange chamber full of all sorts of traps. He got up and stared up the steps.
Zaxus had landed next to a pointy contraption. He got up off the floor and growled at Queiszu.
Queiszu ran down the steps and shot a blast of strange poison at Comet.
Comet dodged the poison and it hit a trap.
Zaxus charged at Queiszu.
Queiszu knocked Zaxus away with one swipe. He walked towards Comet.
Comet backed up and then noticed he was about to back up into a spiky trap. He stopped.
Queiszu charged at Comet, ready to push him into the trap.
Comet jumped out of the way.
"No!!!" roared Queiszu as he ran into the trap. He fell to the floor.
Comet walked over to Queiszu.
Suddenly, Queiszu slashed at Comet and got back up, apparently still alive. He growled and shot poison at Comet.
Comet dodged it and flew up high and landed on a platform. He saw a lever next to him and pulled it.
A crazy contraption started and the strange ooze raised higher.
Zaxus jumped onto a ledge.
Queiszu stretched his arms and grabbed onto a ledge. He pulled himself up. He was standing opposite of Comet.
Comet shot fronze at Queiszu.
Queiszu dodged it and jumped off his platform, attempting to land on Comet's.
Comet quickly shot him with fronze and he fell to his doom into the ooze.
Queiszu's body slowly sank into the ooze.
Comet had to find a way out, so he flew up higher and reached another platform. He found a lever up here and pulled it.
The ooze raised higher.
Zaxus jumped onto a high up platform.
Comet flew up to the next ledge at the very top of the chamber. Several stone walkways were up here and to the right was a door, but it was locked. A final switch was up here.
Comet pulled it and the ooze raised all the way to the very top, directly underneath Comet's platform and the walkways.
Zaxus jumped up there and staid on a platform on the opposite side of Comet.
Comet flew over to a walkway and landed on it. He was just about to go towards the door when he saw something move in the ooze.
That thing was Queiszu, still alive, but his skin was nearly burnt off. He was nearly a skeleton. He got up out of the ooze and jumped onto a walkway.
"So you thought you would escape? Well you thought wrong, now prepare to die!!" growled Queiszu as he shot poison at Comet.
Comet dodged it and nearly fell into the ooze. He had to be careful, or he would land in the ooze and die. He shot fronze at Queiszu, but missed.
Queiszu shot a strange power at the walkway Comet was on.
The power destroyed on part of the walkway.
Comet stepped over to a different part of the walkway. If Queiszu could destroy Comet's walkway, then maybe Comet could also destroy Queiszu's walkway. He shot fronze at Queiszu's platform and destroyed part of it.
"What?! No!!!" roared Queiszu as he destroyed another part of Comet's walkway. Only one part of the walkway remained for him. If Queiszu hit it, then Comet would fall into the ooze and die.
Comet shot another part of Queiszu's walkway. Only one part remained for him as well. Whoever shot the blast first would kill that person.
Queiszu shot a blast at Comet's walkway.
Comet couldn't fly away because the walkways were at the very top of the room, almost touching the ceiling. He jumped over towards Queiszu's walkway. Comet's walkway was destroyed.
Queiszu shot a blast at Comet.
But Comet spiraled. The blast missed. Comet raised his sword as he came closer to Queiszu. He quickly uppercutted Queiszu's head with Excalibur.
"No!!!" roared Queiszu. His head went flying right off of his body. It landed in the ooze and burnt to a crisp. Queiszu's body slowly lost balance and it fell back into the ooze.
Comet landed on the walkway and stood victoriously.
Zaxus shot a blast of black magic and Comet in order to make him lose his balance. It missed.
Comet turned to look at the door. He shot a blast of fronze at it and blew it open. He jumped over to it and ran into it.
Zaxus did the same. He chased after Comet.
Comet saw a dead end and jumped out of Zaxus' way.
Zaxus ran right into the wall and destroyed it. He got dizzy for a second and ran down the path beyond it.
Comet chased after him. Light began to come into focus.
The two stepped out of the top of the temple.
Zaxus jumped off the temple and ran off into the Burning Plains.
Comet flew down to the ground, he was just about to follow Zaxus when he saw a figure at the entrance of the temple.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 15:47:34 01/07/2010 by Fireball
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#207 Posted: 16:24:42 01/07/2010
I like long stories too... they don't end quickly. You don't have to feel the devestating grief of a story's end for ages...
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#208 Posted: 16:44:43 01/07/2010
very good.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#209 Posted: 20:54:36 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 82 Galahad

The figure was on a white horse, "the name's Galahad, Sir Galahad, and you shall face the light!"
Galahad was was the son of Lancelot. He was the one knight that could safely sit on the Siege Perilous , being the hero who gained the Grail. He drew the magical sword out of marble that floated to Camelot. Galahad also received the shield of King Mordrain. He was a pure knight and sometimes referred to as the Good Knight. He healed the Maimed King, and with his companions, Sir Percival and Sir Bors, he brought the Grail out of Britain, at the command of Jesus, and to the city of Sarras.
Galahad spent a year in prison and a year being king of Sarras. He was allowed to see the last secrets of the Grail revealed before he died. He was taken to heaven. With his death, the Holy Grail and the lance vanished from the world.
Comet ran at Galahad.
Galahad quickly shot light out of his palms and at Comet.
Comet dodged the blast and shot a beam of light out of Excalibur and at Galahad.
Galahad absorbed the light and shot it right back at Comet.
Comet dodged the blat and struck Galahad in the shoulder. A gash formed in the spot as blood came out. Suddenly, the gash healed and went back to normal like it never happened.
"Don't waste your time slashing me, I can just heal it with the power of pure light." replied Galahad.
Comet stared at Galahad, he couldn't beat him if he kept healing himself. He was unstoppable.
Galahad shot light at Comet.
Comet was hit and sent flying into the bottom of a volcano. He got up off the ground and ran towards Galahad, there had to be some other way of killing him.
Galahad knocked him back and rode off, "You are not worth fighting!"
Comet hit the ground and got back up. He chased after Galahad, but soon lost him in the huge Burning Plains.
The great storm came back towards the temple and after Comet.
Then Comet raised his sword into the air. Excalibur gleamed with power and light formed around him. A portal of light formed. Comet stepped into it. He was transported all the way to a jungle in the Dinosaur Kingdom on the other side of the world.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#210 Posted: 03:49:44 02/07/2010
nice chapter.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#211 Posted: 19:37:14 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Do you think this is getting good? Just wait until the very end.

Chapter 83 Dinosaur Kingdom

Comet looked around the place, he couldn't believe how far he had traveled. He walked through the jungle and looked at the strange plants. Suddenly, a huge fly trap plant tried to eat him. Comet quickly cut its head off. He then saw some dinosaur predators running at him.
The dinosaur jumped onto him, only to be chopped in half by Excalibur.
Comet ran through the jungle and reached a weird waterfall. A temple was way up there at the top and this was Comet's chance to snag a dark orb.
Zaxus must have been way back in the Dragon Kingdom, so that meant Comet was ahead of him.
Comet tried to fly up the waterfall, but a strange wind was pushing him down. He would have to climb up the waterfall in order to reach the top. He landed at the bottom of the waterfall and noticed a passage on the other side of the waterfall. He jumped in the water and swam over to the passage. He got out and entered the passage, it lead upwards, so it probably lead to the top of the waterfall.
Comet followed the path and found giant spiders in a chamber. They ran at him. Comet slashed them and ran through the chamber to try to find a way out. He found another path leading up and followed it. He slashed the wall and a cave-in blocked the spiders from following him. He reached the top of the water and emerged out above it. He walked over towards the temple.
Comet looked around to make search no one was following him and slowly walked into the temple. It was quiet, too quiet. Suddenly, he was ambushed by strange creatures.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#212 Posted: 19:52:52 02/07/2010
Me and my wierd lizard minions: *Ambush him*

Good chapters, if you plan an exciting end just don't let us cry our eyes out... is it a tragedy? *Hopes not*
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#213 Posted: 20:59:16 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
You'll see.
Okay I lied, there will be six parts.

Part 5 Halfway There

Chapter 84 The Temple of Kazoo

Comet stared at the dinosaurs. They stared at him. Comet slashed at them, but missed.
The dinosaurs quickly pinned him down and chained him against a totem pole. They snatched his sword out of his paw and threw it.
"Who are you guys?!" asked Comet.
"Me don't talk to prisoner." said one of the dinosaurs.
"All hail Kazoo, all hail Kazoo, all hail Kazoo!" said the others as they bowed down and a dinosaur was carried into the room on a throne.
The dinosaurs set the throne down in front of Comet.
"Who dares enter the Temple of Kazoo?" asked the dinosaur.
"Comet, now why did you chain me up?" asked Comet.
"You are a dragon, we must use you as a sacrifice to the great dinosaur of Dinosaur Kingdom. Plus you may try to steal my treasure!!" growled Kazoo.
"No I won't." lied Comet.
"I don't believe you! Send him to the pit of fire." ordered Kazoo.
The dinosaurs put a muzzle on Comet and took him off the totem pole, still having him chained up. One of the dinosaurs led him into a chamber. Two others picked up Kazoo's throne and brought it into the chamber. A huge boiling pit of lava was in the center of the chamber.
Kazoo was set down in front of the pit.
Comet was laid on a platform dangling above the pit.
"When I pull this switch, you will fall to your doom! Your tribe disgusts me. Now, Comet, you will regret coming into my temple!" cried Kazoo as he pulled the switch.
Comet dropped along with the platform, any second he would hit the lava. He was one centimeter was hit the lava when a black dragon stormed into the chamber and raised Comet out of the pit with darkness. He set him down next to the pit.
This dragon was Chaos.
"What?! How dare thee interrupt the great sacrifice!!" growled Kazoo.
Comet quickly broke the chains and got up off the ground. He quickly killed the dinosaurs before they could do anything. Several more dinosaurs came into the chamber as reinforcements.
Chaos shot darkness at Kazoo.
Kazoo blocked it with his golden scepter, "Get them you stupid fools!"
The dinosaurs growled and started attacking Kazoo.
"How dare you, how dare you! You shall all perish in the pit of fire!!" growled Kazoo as he was attacked.
Comet walked over to Chaos, "Thanks."
"Hey, no problem, before we talk we need to get out of here." replied Chaos as they ran out of the chamber and out of the temple.
"Okay, I'm here to tell you that we don't have much time left until the eternal night. The great storm has already started and the moon is slowly starting to eclipse." explained Chaos.
"Well there is a big problem, King Arthur is back and he is out to destroy me and everyone else. His Knights of Round Table are out here too. Worse than that, there is an evil T-Rex named Zaxus who is trying to find the Dark Scroll and the six Dark Orbs in order to open the door to darkness." explained Comet.
"That is bad. Well just remember, you have to hurry before it is too late." replied Chaos.
"Okay, now I've got to go back in there and get Kazoo's dark orb." said Comet.
"Just be careful in there." replied Chaos.
"I will." said Comet as he walked back into the temple. He walked back into the chamber where the pit was, but Kazoo and the dinosaurs were gone. He walked into the next chamber. There ahead was several treasure chests and the dark orb.
Comet grabbed the dark orb and turned around to leave when he saw Kazoo standing at the entrance, partly destroyed from the dinosaurs, "You are not getting away with that orb!" exclaimed Kazoo as he charged at Comet.
Comet dodged it and shot fronze at Kazoo.
Kazoo growled and drew a sword. He started to slash at Comet.
Comet dodged the attacks, since Excalibur was missing, he couldn't block them.
Kazoo slashed some more.
Comet kept dodging them. He ran out to the fire pit and fought Kazoo there.
Kazoo pointed his sword at Comet and attempted to knock him into the lava.
Comet dodged it and quickly shot fronze at Kazoo.
"No!!!" roared Kazoo as he was knocked into the lava.
Comet searched the temple for Excalibur and found it. He grabbed it and walked out of the temple.
Another knight was waiting for him...
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#214 Posted: 21:24:43 02/07/2010
You LIAR... wait... we want more story. So that means... you've done bad... to do good? Hmm...

PS. I saw you advertise Comet on an advertising topic thingy, just to let you know, I reccomend it.
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#215 Posted: 23:13:27 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Why thank you! I will have another chapter up later.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#216 Posted: 11:49:04 03/07/2010
I reccomend all your stories, you should advertise Icy and Zappy too, then people can read all the stories in order as well.
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#217 Posted: 13:12:03 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, the thing is is that Icy and Zappy's stories are too long and people probably wouldn't want to read all of it (Although I read Tib's Deadlier Than Love 1 and 2 all the way from the very beginning in one day).

Here is a secret that no one else can hear yet. The name for Spyro's next kid will be called Bone.

For not posting another chapter sooner. Here it is:

Chapter 85 Bors

The knight was on his brown horse ready to kill, "No one gets away from Sir Bors!"

Bors was a Grail knight, the son of King Bors of Gaunes and Evainne. He was the brother of Lionel, and he was cousin of Lancelot and Hector. He became the father of a son named Helin le Blank. After this, Bors remained chaste for the rest of his life. This chastity and piety was why Bors was chosen to take on the quest for the Holy Grail. Galahad had restored the Broken Sword that had been used to wound Joseph of Arimathea. King Pelles gave this sword to Bors.
After bring the Grail to Sarras, Bors, Percival, and Galahad until Percival and Galahad both died. Bors then returned to Camelot with news of the completion of the quest.
Bors helped Lancelot save the queen, the battle of Joyous Guard, and the exile of Lancelot.
After the death of King Arthur and the destruction of the Round Table, in the war against Mordred, Mordred's two sons seized powers in the kingdom of Logres (Britain). Bors defeated Mordred's two sons, but Lancelot was missing. After the defeat of Mordred's sons, Hector went to go search for his brother while Bors returned home to Gaunes. Bors eventually returned to Britain and found out that Lancelot had been killed. Instead of returning back home, Bors stayed with the Archbishop of Cantergury to lead the rest of his life in monastery.

Comet ran at Bors and slashed his horse's legs.
Bors' horse jumped back and launched Bors off its back. He landed on the ground hard. He got up and shot a blast of earth out of his palms.
Comet evaded and shot fronze at him.
Bors blocked it and charged at Comet.
Comet jumped over Bors and landed behind him, then he slashed his back.
Bors growled, "I've defeated Mordred's two sons and I can still defeat you!"
Comet qucikly blocked a slash from Bors and did a triple slash and a mega stab at Bors.
Bors was weakened now. He raised a huge earth mountain underneath him until it was 75 feet high. Comet flew up to Bors and knocked him off the mountain.
Bors created an earth slide as he fell. He slid down it to the ground. Bors got on his horse and rode off.
Comet cried, "Coward!!" He looked over across the waterfall and saw a familiar dinosaur coming into focus. It was Zaxus. Comet had to hurry up and find those last two dark orbs before Zaxus did. He ran off into another jungle.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 14:06:48 03/07/2010 by Fireball
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#218 Posted: 16:11:13 03/07/2010
Whoa, cool name. Bone... Can't wait for his story.

Sir Bors. He spent the rest of his life in a monostary, and the rest of his death trying to chop up heroic dragons.

I'm sure they would want to read them. Length doesn't matter. It's how gripping the story is that counts, I reckon.
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#219 Posted: 16:46:58 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm trying to decide if it should be Bone or Bones.

Chapter 86 Thraklor de Quieza

Comet jumped ran through the jungle and found a big stone gateway leading to a beach. He ran down its path and reached the ocean.
Suddenly, a bunch of dinosaurs jumped out of trees and started attacking Comet.
Comet slashed off the dinosaurs' heads. He looked around the shoreline and found a bridge to no where leading out onto the ocean. He walked towards it when a roar was heard.

Meanwhile,

Zaxus charged into the pit of lava chamber back at Kazoo's temple. He ran into the next chamber only to see an empty pedestal and several treasure chests. He said under his breath, "Comet..." Zaxus ran out of the chamber and out of the temple, "Comet!!!!"

Back at the shore,

Comet heard a roar: Comet!!!!
The trees began to shake as Zaxus came closer to the shoreline.
Comet looked around for a hiding spot, then he saw it, a small cavern hidden behind some trees. He ran into it and hid as far away from the entrance as possible.
Zaxus reached the shore and looked around. He then took out the dark scroll and stared at it, "The next temple should be around here somewhere." (The dark scroll also shows where the dark orbs are located)
Comet backed deeper into the cave.
Zaxus walked off.
"Phew." breathed Comet.
"INTRUDER!!"
A dinosaur was in this cave and he was mad. Several other dinosaurs came to his aid and started attacking Comet.
Comet quickly killed them all. He heard footsteps and Zaxus came to look what happened.
Zaxus poked his head in the cavern and stared into it, looking for whoever was the intruder. He looked for two minutes, but all he saw was a bunch of dead dinosaurs. He then decided to leave.
Comet came out of his hiding spot underneath a dead dinosaur. He saw a writing on the wall. It read:

If thou wishes to see the temple, then thou must find it.
This temple is secret and very hard to find.
That is why you must use your mind.
Once the temple is near, you must whisper in the statue's ear:

Thraklor de Quieza
To open the gates to the temple.

Comet looked around and found a few switches in the cave. He pulled them and gears began to turn. A huge bucket was outside and it was underneath was small waterfall, but it was blocked. Suddenly, the blockade was destroyed and water poured into the bucket. The bukcet got so full that it tipped over and hit a balancing machine. The two cups on each side were equal. Then all the way outside, on the bridge to no where, a statue of a dinosaur popped out of the water.
Comet looked to make sure that Zaxus wasn't nearby, then he walked outside. He walked over to the bridge to no where and stood on its tip. The statue was on his right, so he whispered in its ear, "Thraklor de Quieza."
Suddenly, an earthquake began and a strange temple arose from the water right in front of Comet. Now the bridge wasn't a bridge to no where. Comet walked into the temple.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:52:41 03/07/2010 by Fireball
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#220 Posted: 17:10:41 03/07/2010
Personally I think Bone, I don't know. Both sound good. Good chapter too.
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#221 Posted: 17:49:37 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 87 The Temple of Guisha

Comet took one step into the mysterious aqua temple and was all ready shivering. He knew that the temple led down to the bottem of the ocean. He gathered his bravery and walked deeper into the blue temple.
A ghostly moan echoed through the halls.
Comet shivered some more and walked deeper into the temple. He walked into a strange aqua chamber that had glass leading out to the ocean. Comet stared out the glass and found strange animals that he had never heard of before. He tried to think about what this big one with fins and big jaws.
"Wondering what that is?" asked a mysterious voice.
Comet turned right to see a wizard staring out the window. He had to reply, so he said, "Yeah."
"They are sea animal, unlike them, we are land animals. That one that you are staring at is called a shark. Be careful around that one, it can kill you. That one over there is a fish, perfectly harmless. And that one is as an octopus." explained the wizard.
"Octo what?" asked Comet.
"An octopus, a very calm animal related to another one called a squid. But you do not want to be close to a giant octopus or a giant squid, they are very dangerous. And what ever you do, do not get near an electric eel." replied the wizard.
"Why?" asked Comet.
"Because it can kill you in one zap." replied the wizard.
"Who are you anyway?" asked Comet.
"I am Guisha, the owner of this temple. What has brought you here?" asked the wizard.
"I have come to find the dark orb, do you know where it is?" asked Comet.
"Yes, I do, but it is very hard to get." replied Guisha.
"Why? Where is it?" asked Comet.
"Down there." replied Guisha. He pointed out to the glass to the very bottem of the ocean. A pedestal was down there and a small light was shimmering with darkness.
"You mean I have to go down there?" asked Comet.
"Yes." replied Guisha.
"Are you serious? I have to go down to that dark place?" asked Comet.
Guisha nodded.
"But how?" asked Comet.
"You must swim down there, unfortunatly, I don't have any swimming equipment so you will just have to hold your breath. There is the way out there." Guisha pointed at a small door.
"Fine." replied Comet. He walked towards the door and opened it. Immediatly, water began to fill up in the room. Comet quickly went out the door and closed it. He swam towards the bottem of the ocean, holding his breath.
Comet was only 50 feet away when he saw a shark swimming towards him. He quickly slashed it and went down to the bottem of the ocean. An electric eel came by. Comet quickly grabbed the dark orb and swam as fast as he could. He reached the door and tried to open it, but it could only open from the outside. Comet banged on the door.
Comet was running out of breath and the eel was getting closer. He kept banging on the door. Then it opened and Comet swam as fast as he could back into the temple. He quickly closed the door and breathed deep. Comet had nearly drowned. Even worse, if Comet had drowned then he would have been zapped after that.
The wizard was the one who had opened the door, "Are you all right?"
"What do you think?" asked Comet.
Before anyone could say anything a giant tenticle grabbed onto the glass. Then a face appeared, it was the ugliest thing Comet had ever seen: a giant octopus.
"We have to get out of here and fast!" cried Guisha as he ran for the entrance of the temple.
Comet followed him. Suddenly, rocks blockaded the exit.
"The only other way out is this way!" exclaimed Guisha as he opened a door and ran into it.
Comet entered it aswell.
A huge pool of water was here which led out into the ocean. Luckly, it was blocked by glass.
"The exit is over there!" exclaimed Guisha as he pointed at a door at the top of the chamber.
Suddenly, a tenticle hit the glass and the octopus entered the chamber.
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#222 Posted: 17:54:45 03/07/2010
agin nice chapter!
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#223 Posted: 18:02:01 03/07/2010
Octopuses are really intelligent. Yeah, they can't shoot fronze and destroy several dinosaurs at the same time with a legendary sword. But they can open jars, you know. Yeah, genious.

Like the idea of him seeing common sea creatures for the first time. It's Jaws! D:
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#224 Posted: 18:36:35 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.

Chapter 88 Octopus

The octopus roared and swiped its tentacle at Comet.
Comet jumped out of the way and shot a smoke of fronze at the octopus so it couldn't see. He then slashed off one of its tentacles.
The octopus roared and knocked Comet into a wall. It swiped its arms.
Comet go up and shot more fronze smoke. Then he cut two more arms off. Now the octopus had five tentacles remaining. It hit Comet and started hitting the building, destroying it.
Comet quickly shot for fronze smoke and cut three arms off.
The octopus roared in pain and hit a pillar, sending it falling right at Guisha.
Comet jumped over to Guisha and hit the pillar with Excalibur, sending it flying right into the octopus's face.
The octopus roared and swiped its two remaining tentacles.
Comet jumped out of the way and cut them off. Now the octopus was completely defenseless.
The octopus roared in agony and tried to escape into the ocean.
Guisha quickly shot magic at its head and killed it.
The two walked over to the door and escaped from the temple right as it collapsed.
"Thank you." replied Guisha.
"No problem." said Comet.
Guisha then turned around and walked into the ocean. Then he sank into it.
Comet turned to leave, but someone was waiting for him.
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#225 Posted: 19:01:35 03/07/2010
*Waiting at entrance to get Comet's autograph*
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#226 Posted: 19:52:52 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Comet walks up to Cynderfyre, "Hey." Then he gives her his autograph.

Chapter 89 Hector

"You shall die, dragon, for I am the great Hector!" cried the knight as he walked towards Comet.

Hector was the illegitimate son of King Ban. He was also the half-brother of Lancelot. He took part in the quest for the Holy Grail, mostly in the company of Gawain. The didn't have any success in the quest, so Hector returned to Arthur's court after Gawain was badly wounded.
Hector supported his brother when Lancelot came into conflict with King Arthur and Gawain. He took part in the rescue of the queen and the two fights against King Arthur. Hector also took part in the war against Mordred's sons after King Arthur had died. At the end of the Vulgate Cycle, he found Lancelot had taken the monk's habit and Hector died before his brother. (There is not much known about Hector)

Comet dodged the slash from Hector. He quickly stabbed him in the back before he could even do anything.
Hector screamed in pain and clutched his wound. He started to heal it.
"Oh no you don't!" cried Comet as he kicked Hector into a tree.
Hector growled and healed his wounds.
Comet qucikly stabbed Hector in his leg.
Hector fell to the ground and tried to heal his legs with his hands.
Comet quickly cut off his arms.
Hector screamed in pain. He couldn't heal anything without his arms. He got up and ran towards his brown horse. He jumped onto it and rapped the reigns around his back using his teeth. Then he rode off down the beach.
Comet flew after Hector. He reached his horse and kicked him off of it. The horse didn't notice, so it kept riding off.
Hector laid on the ground.
"So much for you being great." replied Comet. He raised his sword to strike him.
Hector cried, "Please, dragon, please don't kill me! Spare my life!"
Comet didn't listen, he stabbed Hector in the chest.
Blood slowly came out of Hector as he died.
Comet walked away, "That was a stupid fight." He saw a volcano nearby. Climbing up it was Zaxus.
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#227 Posted: 02:50:37 04/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 90 Volcano

Comet ran through the jungle towards the volcano.
Several dinosaurs popped out and attacked him.
Comet killed and ran faster. He reached the volcano and climbed up it. Lava dripped from it, so he had to dodge it.
Zaxus was already inside.
Comet reached the top of the volcano. The lava inside was about to erupt. There was no sign of an entrance, Comet did not know how Zaxus had gotten inside. Then he noticed a switch nearby. He pulled it.
The lava inside began to move, then it split, revealing a pathway leading inside.
Comet flew into the volcano. He flew through the hot caverns and landed in a strange lava room. He stared around the chamber.
Suddenly, Zaxus appeared in the chamber, "Give me that dark orb you got!!"
Comet quickly slashed Zaxus.
Zaxus roared and hit Comet with his tail.
Comet dropped the two orbs, but not the one he had gotten from Ziac's temple. He tried to grab them, but Zaxus swiped them.
"Aha! Now I only need two more and then I will be ready.." whispered Zaxus.
Comet slashed Zaxus hard.
Zaxus growled and shot magic at Comet. He pulled a lever and a huge metal door opened. He ran into it.
Comet ran through the door. The door led to long corridor.
Zaxus ran through it.
Comet was just about to follow him when a knight leaped out of nowhere right in front of Comet.
"You shall not get away from the great Mordred!" cried the knight.
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#228 Posted: 05:00:31 04/07/2010
Sorry I missed so much,I didnt expect you to post so many chapters in such a short amount of time.Wow,these knights are endless.
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#229 Posted: 19:03:22 04/07/2010
*Waves Comet's autograph in front of crazyspyrofan's face before running off looking extremely pleased*
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#230 Posted: 21:27:17 04/07/2010
OMG i love you storys!!!smiliesmilie plz red sly,bolt spyro sTORYsmilieplz
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#231 Posted: 03:19:32 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Well there is 25 knights of the round table, but don't worry, I won't make chapters for all of them.

Chapter 91 Mordred

Mordred was the one who killed King Arthur. He was the son of King Lot, but do to an encounter, his real father was his uncle, King Arthur. When the Monarch found this out, he ordered the baby Mordred to be killed. Along with the other children, Mordred was taken to a boat which sank, but Mordred survived. He reached an island shore and was taken in by Lord Nabur the Unruly. Once he grew up, Mordred traveled to King Arthur's court to live with his real parents. He capitalized on the reputation with his brother, Gawain, and was named a knight of the round table.
For some time, he was Lancelot's companion, but the goodly knights influence did not rub off on Mordred. He has been known to murder people, which is against the knight's code, and also to steal wives of others. When Mordred came in conflict with the sons of Pellinore, over the death of his father, he was one of those who killed Sir Lamorak. King Arthur favored Mordred though, he even made him in charge of Camelot when he left for Britain. But Mordred was devious, he made a big lie saying that King Arthur had died in Britain, and then he was crowned king.
Mordred tried to marry the queen, but no one knows if she did or not. News soon reached King Arthur and he set off with his army to go stop Mordred. Mordred's forces were defeated and the two armies met for the final battle at Camlann. Mordred and King Arthur were amongst the last warriors standing in the fight. King Arthur killed him in single combat, but he was wounded very bad. Even though Mordred was dead, his two brothers, Melehan and Melou, continued the rebellion for awhile.
Comet growled and ran at Mordred.
Mordred knocked him backwards and shot darkness at him.
Comet dodged the blast and shot fronze at Mordred.
Mordred blocked it and raised his blade. Lava began to fly around the chamber.
Comet ducked and turned in order to dodge it, he jumped up into the air and tried to slash Mordred, only to be knocked back again. He got back up and growled, "Now this is a worthy fight!"
Mordred ignored him and shot a blast of darkness into the ground.
Suddenly, the darkness shot out from right below Comet, knocking him off his feet.
Mordred laughed and shot darkness.
Comet dodged it and tried to attack him again, only to fail. He though, I can't beat him! He flew past Mordred and continued down the hall.
"You coward!!" roared Mordred.
Comet kept running, he entered a chamber to find Zaxus just about to open a door.
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#232 Posted: 04:23:01 05/07/2010
Good.and Cynderfyre: *pulls out autographs from Spyro,Cynder,and Hunter* Beat that!*starts smiling*
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#233 Posted: 08:24:56 05/07/2010
i can bet it:*teks a atograph of volter, tedorr,cyryl,spyro,cynder,sparx,hunter*
smilie
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#234 Posted: 08:27:55 05/07/2010
*Takes them away from Cynder Fan* Haha, they are mine now!

I am still trying to catch up right now, on page 3 atm. I am realy enjoying this so far.
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#235 Posted: 08:52:40 05/07/2010
*rips of tibis back atographs and the tibis close!*hahaha i bet you tibis
you stupid cat!!!!!!!!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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#236 Posted: 08:54:44 05/07/2010
Did you mean to say you took back the autographs and tore off my clothes?
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#237 Posted: 17:14:47 05/07/2010
*Takes the autographs of crazyspyrofan and cynder fan, then shows off Malefor and old Chronicler autographs, before running to another country and hiding them where nobody can find it, even if you say you can but you're obviously lying*

Beat that.

Nice chapter, Fireball.
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#238 Posted: 17:15:38 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yes! I have four fans now! It's like I'm getting back all of my fans again!

Chapter 92 The temple of Okahoono

Comet ran towards Zaxus.
Zaxus quickly knocked him back with magic. He reached out his paw and pressed a button on the door.
The door flew open, leading into a dark hot temple.
Zaxus ran in.
Comet flew after him. The temple was really big and lava was all over the place. He followed Zaxus out onto a big circular platform way up high above the lava.
Zaxus quickly knocked Comet off the platform.
"Whoa!" cried Comet as he fell towards the lava. He gained control of his flying and flew back up to Zaxus.
Zaxus growled and tried to swipe at him, but missed.
Comet flew past Zaxus and found a switch on the wall, which he pulled.
The lava level rose halfway to the platform they were on.
Zaxus growled, "This is too tricky for you, I only know the way around Okanoono's temple!"
Comet flew at Zaxus and hit him.
Zaxus knocked him away and jumped down onto a platform below. The lava was underneath this platform. A switch was on the wall next to it.
Comet flew towards it and pulled it.
The lava sank back to the bottom.
Zaxus jumped to the very bottom of the chamber and landed on a platform just above the lava. There wasn't a switch here, instead there was a passage to the left of the platform.
Comet flew into it, ahead of Zaxus.
Zaxus growled, "Oh no you don't!" He jumped into the passage and sped right passed Comet. He ran into a ginormous room with a big flight of stairs leading to the very top of the room. He ran up it.
Comet flew to the very top, ahead of Zaxus. He ran into the next room at the top of this room.
The room here was very small and a switch was here right next to a door.
Zaxus quickly caught back up with Comet and then he pulled the switch.
The door flew open, leading out onto a circular platform directly above the one from earlier.
Comet ran out onto it and saw a switch on the wall. He flew towards it and pulled it.
The lava at the very bottom of the chamber raised all the way to the top, underneath the one Zaxus was on.
Comet flew back over to the platform and landed softly on it. He looked across the chamber to see that an iron door had been melted away by the lava. This door was now a passage, now Comet just needed to find a way to lower the lava.
Zaxus knocked Comet into the wall.
Comet quickly stabbed his sword into the wall and hanged from it. He saw another switch nearby and pulled it.
The lava lowered, revealing the destroyed door.
Zaxus jumped into it and Comet flew into it.
The next chamber had a big circular platform, and in the center was a big statue in the center of a drawn clock, and near by was a turning wheel.
Zaxus ran towards it.
Comet stopped to look at a writing on the wall: 10:20. He ran towards the clock and turned the wheel.
Suddenly, the statue's two arm began to turn counterclockwise. One arm was longer than the other.
Comet turned the wheel until the long arm was pointing at 20 and the short arm was pointing at 10. The clock read 10:20.
Suddenly, the chamber began to shake as stairs popped out of the wall leading down to the bottom of the chamber, above the lava.
Zaxus ran down the stairs.
Comet just flew down to the bottom of the chamber and landed on a big circular platform above the lava.
There were no secret doors, or switches, or puzzles down here, it was the end of the line.
Zaxus jumped onto the circular platform, "Oh great Okahoono, arise the and give thou dark orb!"
Suddenly, a huge lava man arose from the lava and stood in front of the two. He roared.
"Kill the fool, but let thou live. Please give thou the dark orb." said Zaxus to Okahoono.
Okahoono roared and shot lava at both of them.
Comet dodged the blasts and shot fronze at the lava man, but it didn't do anything.
Okahoono slammed his fists against the platform and sent a lava wave onto it.
"No!" growled Zaxus as he shot dark magic into Okahoono.
The dark orb went flying out of Okahoono and onto the platform.
Comet jumped for it, but Zaxus grabbed it and ran up the stairs, "So long!!"
Comet tried attacking Okahoono, but he was invincible.
Okahoono shot lava all around the place.
Comet flew to the top of the chamber and ran into the passage at the clock platform and entered the other chamber. He flew down the chamber to the platform below the one he was on and left the chamber. Then he ran out into the room that Zaxus in at the beginning. He then ran down the hallway where he fought Mordred.
The volcano began to shake, ready to erupt any second.
Comet flew into the very first room he had entered and then flew through the caverns. He reached to top of the volcano and flew out of it. He flew as far away as possible.
Just after that, the volcano erupted. Several dinosaurs ran away, only to be killed.
Zaxus was heading across the beach. He kept running, desperate to reach the Dragon Kingdom.
Comet followed him.
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#239 Posted: 18:36:35 05/07/2010
The Legend of Comet: Return of the Fans

Nice chapter *pokes lava*
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#240 Posted: 19:22:34 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 93 Back at Warfang

Comet chased Zaxus for several days until he had reached the Dragon Kingdom. His bones began to give out. He slowly walked deeper in the kingdom.
"Ha! You will never stop me!!" cried Zaxus.
Comet collapsed on the ground. He slowly fell asleep as Zaxus disappeared beyond the horizon.
4 small figures came up to Comet and carried him away.

Comet woke up in a building. 4 moles surrounded him, "Are you okay?"
"Yeah." he managed to say.
"Here, drink this." ordered a mole. The mole handed Comet a small glass of purple liquid.
Comet drank it, it tasted horrible, but he knew it would help him.
"You may leave now." replied the moles.
Comet got up and walked out of the building, he appeared to be in Warfang.
The war was nearly over and the only ones remaining were King Arthur himself, sir Gawain, sir Lancelot, sir Percival, sir Galahad, sir Lamorak, and sir Bors.
Comet flew up to the ramparts and looked across the battleground.
The knights of the round table stood there, stepping over dead bodies.
The remaining knights walked like no one was looking.
Suddenly, King Arthur shot a blast of darkness at Comet.
Comet quickly evaded and the the knights drew their swords and ran towards the gates of Warfang.
The knights knocked it down with only one slash. They all ran at Comet.
Lancelot shot electricity at Comet. Percival shot wind. Galahad shot light. Gawain shot fire. Lamorak shot water, and Bors shot earth.
Comet dodged all the blasts and jumped off the ramparts and attempted to slash King Arthur, but he blocked it.
Comet jumped back and made a staff.
"Knights, let this battle be between me and that foolish dragon! Do not bother me or you shall be slain!" growled King Arthur.
The knights backed up.
Comet stared at King Arthur.
"Breathe dragon, for this shall be your last breath!" growled King Arthur. He prepared for battle.
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#241 Posted: 19:37:28 05/07/2010
*Chants* Fight, fight, fight, fight, fight... etc.

More great chapters from the master of the keyboard, or whatever title you wish to be known by... I can't think of anything else about typing cool stories.
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#242 Posted: 20:14:08 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
This next chapter has the same theme song as the first fight.

Chapter 94 The Second Fight

King Arthur charged at Comet on his horse.
Comet jumped out of the way and King Arthur charged into a wall. He shot fronze at King Arthur's back.
King Arthur growled and knocked Comet away, he rode off deeper into the city.
Comet ran after him. He jumped onto the horse's back and started slashing King Arthur.
King Arthur slashed at Comet.
Comet blocked the attacks. He then did a mega strike into King Arthur.
King Arthur roared in pain and knocked Comet off.
Comet hit the ground hard. He got back up and ran after King Arthur again.
King Arthur shot darkness at the tall buildings, causing them to fall. They nearly fell on Comet.
Comet sped up and got past them just in time. He shot darkness at King Arthur's horse's legs.
The horse sent King Arthur flying off and onto the ground. He got up and jumped back on his horse and rode as fast as possible.
Comet raised Excalibur into the air and shot towards King Arthur in supersonic speed. He hopped onto King Arthur's horse.
King Arthur gave several slashes at Comet.
Comet blocked them and then slashed King Arthur hard.
King Arthur growled and knocked Comet off of his horse. He stopped riding and got off his horse. He charged at Comet.
Comet jumped out of the way and slashed him.
King Arthur growled, "This fight will continue!" He got back on his horse and rode off. He reached the area where his knights were at. All together, the knights raised their swords high up into the air.
Suddenly, the earth began to shake. After several earthquakes, a huge crater was in the earth and above it was a floating island.
"Now, if you excuse me, I have a home to return to!" cried King Arthur as his horse and the other knights' horses jumped into the air and sped towards the island.
So that was it right there: Castle Camelot.
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#243 Posted: 20:21:54 05/07/2010
King Arthur: Camelot.
Comet: Camelot.
Zaxus: Camelot.
Fireball: It's only a model.

Sorry, Monty Python moment. smilie

Good chapter, and we've finally reached Camelot, I was wondering if that was going to come in.
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#244 Posted: 20:57:25 05/07/2010
?????
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#245 Posted: 21:10:35 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, a.k.a. Camelot is the Lost Kingdom. Also, this story is about to end.

Now for part 6...

Part 6 The Final Conflicts

Chapter 95 Camelot

Comet flew after them. He flew through the harsh winds. He saw on the horizon the Great Storm heading for him. Comet flew faster and reached the floating island. He landed at the front gates of Camelot.
The gates were already open, so Comet walked into the town.
Camelot was deserted, only dead bodies and skeletons were here.
Comet slowly walked through the town. He stopped at the central plaza. A huge fountain was here.
Comet walked over to it. He looked into the cold sparkling waters. Comet's life flashed before him.
After that, Comet stared deeper into the waters. Then he saw from his own reflection that someone was creeping around the town. He turned around and followed them.
The figure walked into a huge area of grass.
Comet growled, "Hey! Stop!"
The figure turned around and looked at Comet, it was a dragon, the same dragon from the Valley of Avalar.
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#246 Posted: 21:12:41 05/07/2010
...End? Nooo...

At least it continues with Bones/Bone. Which one was it?
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#247 Posted: 21:13:09 05/07/2010
nice chapter!!!
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#248 Posted: 02:54:40 06/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 96 Confrontation

"Get away from me." said the dragon.
"Why should I?" asked Comet, he was determined to know who this dragon was and what he was doing.
The dragon replied, "Just get away."
"No." replied Comet.
"GET AWAY FROM ME, YOU FOOL!" snapped the dragon. He shot darkness at Comet.
Comet evaded the blast and shot fronze at the dragon.
The dragon took the blast, apparently not affected. He growled, "You don't know who you're messing with!"
"Yes, I don't, because you won't tell me!" replied Comet as he slashed at him.
"You shall not know my name!! Now go away!!" growled the dragon as he dodged the attack.
"Why?" asked Comet, "I wish to know. What are you planning to do?"
"THAT IS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!! NOW GO AWAY!!!!" roared the dragon. The dragon knocked Comet away and flew off.
Comet tried to chase him, but the storm had reached Camelot and it was hard to see. Comet then remembered that he had to stop Zaxus and King Arthur. He flew towards the entrance of Castle Camelot. He blew it open with fronze and walked inside.
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#249 Posted: 14:13:31 06/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 97 Castle Camelot

Castle Camelot was very quiet and spooky. It was also very big.
Comet looked around at his surroundings. He continued down a blue corridor.
Suddenly, a loud roar was heard from down the hall.
Comet ran fast and then saw that it was Zaxus, busting down a door, "Hey, stupid, come and fight me!"
Zaxus growled, "You shall regret those words, you welp! I only need one more dark orb and I have a feeling that it is in here!"
Comet laughed under his breath, he had that dark orb.
"What are you laughing at?!" asked Zaxus.
"Nothing." replied Comet.
Zaxus replied, "You better hope it's nothing!" He knocked Comet away and busted down the door. A huge stretching corridor was beyond this door. Zaxus ran off down the corridor.
Comet got back up and chased after him.
Zaxus reached the end of the hall and the ceiling collapsed behind him, "So long!"
Comet growled and slashed at the debris. Nothing happened. There was no other way. Comet looked around and then knew how he would get in.
A window was nearby, if Comet could get outside the castle, then he could fly into another window and get past the debris. Comet destroyed the window with Excalibur and flew outside. He then turned left to find a window beyond the debris. He crashed into it and entered the end of the hall beyond the debris.
Zaxus was long gone, in his place was giant footprints leading into a chamber, the court.
Comet looked around the courtroom until he noticed that someone was watching him. It was Lamorak.
Lamorak growled, "This court shall be your deathbed!" He shot water all around the court. It began to flood.
Comet swam to the top of the room and shot fronze at Lamorak.
Lamorak blocked it with his shield. He shot water right at Comet's head.
Comet swam to the side and then slashed Lamorak. The water was getting to high for him to breathe, then he saw a window nearby. He shot fronze at it and broke it. The water poured out the window, like a drain.
Lamorak growled, "No!" He shot water at Comet.
Comet jumped out of the way and slashed Lamorak in the shoulder.
Lamorak stopped to clutch his wound.
At this time, Comet slashed Lamorak 5 times.
Lamorak growled and stabbed Comet in the arm.
Comet screamed in pain and fell to the floor.
Lamorak walked up to the hurt Comet and raised his sword to strike him.
Comet slowly raised his sword to block the attack, but his arms gave out. He dropped his blade on the ground and awaited his death.
Lamorak attempted to stab Comet, but a sword stabbed him in the chest from behind.
Lamorak slowly lost all of his blood and fell over, dead.
The stabber was... Mordred.
"But why?" asked Comet.
"Because I wish to finish you once and for all!!" growled Mordred.
Comet got up and backed away, waiting for his arm to get back to normal. It never did, so that gave Comet only one way of surviving: Faking a death.
Mordred uppercutted Comet and knocked him into a wall.
Comet sank to the floor, with his eyes closed and tongue sticking out.
"That was too easy!" said Mordred as he walked off through into another room.
After waiting five minutes, Comet got up, picked up Excalibur, and walked into the room Mordred walked into. This room had a staircase leading to the dungeons.
Comet walked down the steps and entered the dungeons. Another knight was waiting for him.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:58:05 06/07/2010 by Fireball
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#250 Posted: 17:15:59 06/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 98 Percival's Destruction

"You!" exclaimed Comet.
Percival smirked, "So, you though you had escaped did you? Well you were wrong! Now you shall die in this very castle!!" He shot wind at Comet.
Comet dodged it and ran up to Percival and slashed him.
Percival counterattacked Comet, sending him flying into a cell. He slammed the cell door with the power of wind. Then he locked it.
Comet stood in the cell and quickly cut the bars off with Excalibur.
"What? How?!" roared Percival.
"There is nothing Excalibur can't cut through." replied Comet as he charged at Percival.
Percival attempted to slash him.
Comet jumped over Percival and landed behind him, then he racked up a slashing combo to his back.
Percival growled and pushed Comet back with wind.
Comet was blown backwards. He forced himself through the wind and reached Percival. He stabbed him in the gut.
Percival suffered in pain. He clutched his gut and shot wind at Comet, knocking him into the wall.
Comet fell to the floor, but he was not ready to give up. Percival was suffering a lot of pain and was close to dyeing. He got up and ran at Percival and slashed his stomach.
Percival roared in pain and knocked Comet away with wind. Then he started creating a small tornado in the dungeons.
Comet was blown around the place along with the other things down there. He flew as fast as he could towards Percival. He attempted to stab him in the chest, but he missed.
Percival made the tornado even bigger. Now it was destroying the walls. If this kept happening, then the castle would collapse.
Comet tried again, but missed.
Percival made the tornado the worst it could get and debris was flying all over the place. The castle began to shake.
"Percival, stop! If you don't stop then the whole castle will be destroyed and we will all die!!" exclaimed Comet.
Percival didn't listen. He slashed at Comet as the tornado blew harder.
Comet attempted to stab him, but missed again. The castle was going to collapse any minute if Percival wasn't stopped. He tried to stab Percival again, this time he did.
Percival's eyes widened and he fell to the floor. The tornado stopped and the castle was saved.
Comet walked over to Percival's body and saw blood all over the place. Percival wasn't breathing. His heart wasn't beating, Comet knew he was dead.
Comet looked around the dungeons and saw another staircase leading upstairs. He walked up them and entered a big hallway. Two people were waiting for him here.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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