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I didn't spoiled it.It also said right their.Dawn's father turned Dawn evil,and told her to kill Pablo.But who knows if she did.

I fixed the last part I wrote,so you can understand it more.
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Chapter 25:"Morning!"

It was soon sunrise,as Dawn was having a nightmare."Dawn,wake up!,"said Pablo."Ahhh!!,"Dawn screamed."It's okay,you had another nightmare,"he said,calmly."Whay is this happening to me?It fells like the future,"she said."Well,let's go and talk to Ignitus,about it.But first can we go and eat?,"he said."Last one their is a spoiled brat!,"she said,running."Hey,come back here!,"he said,trying to catch up with her."Ha,winner!,"she said."Whatever,"he said,annoyed."Hey,what's up?!,"said Starfire,comming in with Comet."I'm okay,you?,"said Dawn."We're fine.So...ready to find out our new powers?,"said Comet."More than ever!,"said both Dawn and Pablo."Hey,you're awake!,"said Cynder."Yup!Are the others-,"said Dawn."-Awake?Yes!,"said Spyro."Great!,"said Pablo."So,young ones...ready?,"said Ignitus."We are,but,can't we eat first?,"said Dawn,hungerily."Yes of course.No need to rush,"said Terrordor."Awsome!,"said everyone."What I missed?,"said Sparx,flying in,tired."Nothing much,mosquito,"said Dawn,laughing."Not again,"he said.So they sat down and started to eat,and excited to find their new powers.

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Chapter 26:"The Trainning Begins"

"Okay,young ones...ready?,"asked Cyril."Yes,yes,YES!!!,"said Dawn,excited."Okay,but first of all,please calm down,"said Ignitus."Sorry,"she said,smiling."Now,let's head to the training room,"said Terrordor."On the way their,I just want to say congrats on finding out the other elements,you two,"said Volteer."Why am I feeling I don't want to train any more,"asked Dawn."Mabye cause' Volteer talks to much,and we can't concentrate,"said Starfire."True,"said Dawn."Here we are,"said Fireflight."Let's sit down everybody,"said Quietfire.As they all settled down,the training was about to begin."Now,let's start off with what you both know,"said Ignitus,backing off."Okay,"said both of them.So they did.Dawn started off with Ice,and Pablo did Fire.They were shooting it straght at each other,making water."C'mon guys,you can do better than that,"said Cynder.*you want it,I've got it*thought Pablo.He then shot out Electricity!"Whoa,Pablo,don't try to kill me,"said Dawn."But,I'd guess I could do something better than you,"she said.She closed her eyes,and shot out Fear!"Awsome,"said Pablo.She then came out with Wind,then Poision,and then Shadow!"Um,uh,"he said,surprised."What?The little dragon can't take strong elements?,"she said,laughing.He ignored her and close his eyes,again."Great,now he's going to shoot out another element,"she said.Then poped out the same elements as Dawn just did.*Hum,this dragon wants a battle now*she thought.She closed her eyes,and then her pendant glowed!

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Chapter 27:"A Monsterous Element?"

She then opened her eyes,it glowed light blue!She flew up,as she opened her wings,a tide of water came out!"Whoa!,"said everyone.Pablo just stood their,watching what Dawn was doing.She then pushed herself back,as the tide was going straght at Pablo!"Pablo,do something!,"yelled Comet.But it was to late,the tide had hit him badly.Then-as Dawn's eyes were still glowing-blowed a frosty wind,that frozed Pablo up!"Dawn,calm yourself!It isn't a really fight!,"yelled Ignitus.Her eyes then stopped glowing,as she turned back to normal."Wha-what was that?,"she said.Dawn then turned to face Pablo."Pablo,are you okay?!,"she said,running up to me."Yeah,I'm cool,"he said,weakly.She used Fire to melt the ice,and then started to heal him."You really do amaze us,young dragons,"said Cyril."Yeah,but I feel something,but what?,"said Dawn."It's maybe The Powermoon,remember?,"said Pablo."No,it's not that,"she said.*Mom?*she thought."It's mom!She gave me powers!,"she said."But how,isn't she dead,"said Pablo."She is,but some how,it must be her,"she said,smiling."Well,I see you need to talk about,right?,"said Ignitus."Sure!Can we have privacy,please?,"she said."Okay,let's go!,"said Comet.As the room got empty,they were about to start talking.

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Chapter 28:"Another Visit to The Dream World"

It has been an hour later,as Dawn finished up her childhood story."This is truly remarkable,"said Ignitus."In all my years,I never knew a dragon born after dark,"he said."Yeah,well,here I am,"she said."Yes,yes.I must know more about your side of Light!,"he said."But how,only The Chronicler would
know more about my parents' life,"she said."Well then,I'd guess you have to find out,"he said."What!I'm not going back there,again.Besides,he told me,he's gonna tell me about-,"she ended.Ignitus gave her a look."Fine,I'll go.But only because of my ansestors,"she said."I shall teach you how to transport there,"he said."Now,follow me,"he ended.So they left the room,and walked into another room which had a Pool of Visions."Now,before I'd teach you,is there anything you want to say?,"asked Ignitus."Yeah,can Pablo come with me?,"asked Dawn."Why of coarse,I'll call him,"he said,leaving.*Great,now we can teach each other,and never leave one another,again!*she thought."Here he is,"he said."So,what's up?,"said Pablo."Can you come with me to my Dream World?,"she said."Sure!,"he said."Okay,now,close your eyes-feel the winds taking you to freedom.Move close together and hold hands,"he ended.As they did,Dawn's pendant soon glowed,as they were now going to the Dream World.

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Chapter 29:"Welcome Back"

It was a few seconds after,as Dawn and Pablo soon aproached The Chronicler."Wow,your The Chronicler?,"said Pablo,amazed."Yes,yes I am.You must be Pablo,"he said."Yeah,how'd ya know?,"he asked."I have my books,and every single dragon that is alive has their own,"he said."Am I in it?,"he said."Pablo,I told you already.He has everyone's book,"said Dawn."Yes,I heard,"said The Chronicler."Yeah,I was just a little shoked,
that's all,"said Pablo."A little?,"she said."Young ones please,settle down,"said The Chronicer."Sorry,"they both said."Now,Dawn I've heard that Ignitus wanted to learn more about your mother's side,correct?,"he said."Yes,that's true.So,what were her elements?,"she asked."That's,were
I come in,"said a voice.

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I was about to end chapter 30,but then my stupid com. closed this page!Now I have 2 rewrite it again.

Chapter 30:"A Special Surprise"

"Wha-,"said Dawn."Dawn,it's you!,"said a female."Mom?,said Dawn."Mom!,"she said,running up to her,and gave her a hug."I missed you so much!,"said Midnight."I missed you,too!,"she said,crying joyfully."But,but weren't you dead?,"asked Dawn."Yes I was,but then my elements brought me back to life,"she said."How?,"said Dawn."When you are a master of Lightness and one with Nature,they soon take care of you and love you!,"she said."Really?!Am I aslo one with Nature and Lightness?,"she asked."You are part of Light aren't you?,"she said,giving her a look."You have to teach me it,please!,"said Dawn,excited."I will,I will.Now is this Pablo?The one that you love a lot?,"said Midnight,smiling."Yes,"she said,embarressed."Hello,um,"said Pablo."Please,call me Midnight,"she said."...And Dawn,you can also call me Midnight.Even if I am your mother,"she said."Sure,we will!,"said them both."Now,isn't this a loveable reunion,"said The Chronicler."If we get to what is important,I'm sure that you both will come back home sooner,"he said,giving Dawn and Pablo a look."Yeah,that is true.Look we came here so that I can learn more about your elements,Midnight,"she said."Okay,if you want to go back home,I shall teach you-both,"said Midnight."Both?,"they said together."You sare the same amount of powers,don't you?,"she asked."Uh,um,"they both said,confused."I see,you haven't told them yet,"she said."Tell us what?,"that said.

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Chapter 31:"So Many Surprises"

"Well,it's a long story,but I'll make it short,"said Midnight."We're listening,"said Dawn.
..."Well,I met this female dragon,she had a darkblue body,and her chest was a mustard color.Sound familiar,Pablo?,"asked Midnight."It was my mom,wasn't it?,"he asked."Yes.Her name was Twilight.She had a silver star on her left eye,and had one on her chest.We soon became best of friends,and when we were in high school,we met these two cute male dragons.One was Darkshadow,your father,and the other was Darknight,"she said."Darknight?He's my father!,"said Pablo."Years pasted and we soon had to go our separate ways,I married your father,and Twilight married Darknight.We have never heard about each other,and then it happened,"she ended."What happened?,"asked them both."I have been told that Twilight was killed by Darknight,in which he was corrupted by darkness.He had soon died,too.By the war that was going about,"she said."But before she died,she had an egg,in which she hid it from your father,who was trying to make it evil.Twilight wrote a small note,and you were called Pablo,"she ended."...and then that's when I was born,right?,"asked Dawn."Yes,you were born the same day as Pablo,only he was born at the evening,and you were born after dark,"she replied."Pablo,I feel so sorry for you,really,"she said,sadly.Dawn then gave him a hug,and he said,"get off,of me,"in a low voice."What?,"said Dawn,confused."Go away!,"he said,then he turned into darkness."Pablo!,"she said."Midnight,you mean that we share both Light and Dark?!,"she said."I'm afraid,so,"said Midnight."Pablo,don't do this!I was upset just like you,when I had rough times back then,but now I'm getting over them!You have to do the same!,"said Dawn,worried."I'll never listen to you!,"said Pablo.*No!*thought Dawn."When the Moon is high,a Dragon is nigh.Forget this fright,as we make it through this endless night!,"chanted Midnight.Then all of a sudden,Pablo turned back to normal!"How did you do that?!,"said Dawn."This is a spell,in which to get rid of evil.But sometimes it doesn't work well with more darker enemies,"she said."Can you teach me?,"asked Dawn."No,I am not aloud to do that.This spell works differently with others,and you have to figure it out,"she said."Ok,I will,"said Dawn."Are we going to learn how to use Light and Nature?,"asked Pablo."Yes,we will.Now,I'm going to take you two,to a special place,where no one knows where it is at.Ready?,"she said."More than ever!,"they both said.

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i sometimes also donut know where my brain is! maybe i thought it was a donut and ate it!

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Is that a Donut?!*eats it*It has jelly!

*sees 100 donuts* mmmmmmmm donuts!!!!!!!!!! *eats all of them. and unfortunatle, gains alot of wieght* how the heck did that happen?!

I donut know...*eats 1 donut,and then explopes*XP

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Chapter 32:"Learning About the Dragons of the Past"

So they left,as Midnight teleported them to a cave with a sunset near by."I have a special place,where I would always train and hid here!,"said Midnight."It's like the beach,where you stayed,but I come here at sunsets,"she said."Why sunsets?,"asked Pablo."Because,my parents,Nightsky-your grandma and Leafstone-your grandpa,told me that dragons like me would always turn very powerful at sunsets,and said to find a good hiding place where no one woud find,"she said."...And that's how you found this place,right?,"asked Dawn."Correct,"she said."Now,since you are part Light,Nature,and Darkness,you are mostly a dragon who is very powerful,with out any limits,"she said."I'm limitless?what about Pablo?,"asked Dawn."For Pablo,he too has the same magnificant powers you have,"she said."He,too had a grandpa with the powers of Nature?,"she aasked."No,but his ancestors do,"she said."They are in our blood?,"he asked."Yes,that is why The Chronicler will show you your ancestors,"she said."So,are you ready?,"she said."Yes,you told us that a lot,we are so ready!,"said Dawn and Pablo,feeling ready to fight."That's good,you need to feel your powers flow in your blood!,"she said.*Bring It!*thought them both.

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