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#2401 Posted: 05:23:33 03/04/2009
Cool
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#2402 Posted: 17:14:52 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. i'll write more today. i'm also online early because theres no school today also, my spring break just started
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#2403 Posted: 17:16:07 03/04/2009
Thats cool, I cant wait hear who is the new leader.....
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#2404 Posted: 17:30:49 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
then why wait?
the wolf walked back outside. he looked at Talon. "enter....but be careful.....no one here likes cats!" he snarled. Talon looked at him. "i sensed that...i shall watch my back..." he said as he was about to go inside. "you should...or someone will be chewing on it!" he growled. "i can take care of myself...by the way, i never got your name..." "do you want in or not?!" "fine...i'll go...." said Talon. then he walked inside. "biggest moron i've ever met..." the wolf said to himself. talon walked into a large room. he looked around. he saw two male grey wolves standing gaurd to a long hallway. Talon walked up to them. "does this hallway lead to your leader?" he asked. they both looked at him, and chuckled. "no cat who meets our leader lives to tell the tale!" one of them laughed. "i see...well i'm just visiting..." Talon said. "fine...if you still want to meet our leader....go down the hall...and take a right, and walk down another hall...it'll be the last room on the left..." "thank you" said Talon. then he walked down the hall.
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#2405 Posted: 17:33:57 03/04/2009
AAARGH!!!!! *ripping hairs*
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#2406 Posted: 17:35:55 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
don't rip your hair out! i'll write more.
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#2407 Posted: 17:39:26 03/04/2009
*Rip more*
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#2408 Posted: 18:08:46 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Talon started walking down the second hallway. wolves stared at him, and snarled at him. Talon ignored them as he walked. he then saw the last room on the left. he walked up to the room, and looked inside. it ws a medium sized, dark room. he looked around the room. he didn't see much. then he thought he saw a figure standing at the other side of the room.
"please....come in..." said a voice. then Talon walked in. he looked at the shadowy wolf figure. "thank you, but may i ask who you are?" "i am the wolf pack leader.....welcome to our home....welcome indeed...." "thank you, but what is your name?" he asked. then the figure walked closer. the wolf walked into the light. he could see it was a black wolf with light blue eyes. the wolf looked muscular, yet it looked like a female wolf. "my name is Neona" "that is a nice name....it means 'new moon' right?" "yes it does...." she said. "and, you must be Talon. i'm sure my wolves don't like you being here..." "they don't, miss Neona" "please, just call me Neona...after all, your not a wolf, you don't have to treat me like i'm your queen" "alright then" "please come in, you may sit down" "thank you, Neona" he said. then he walked in, and sat down. she sat down in front of him. "now, i know you told my wolves that your just visiting...but i know theres another reason why your here..." "you do?" he asked. she nodded her head. "yes. your here because of Nightflight....after all...it is the one thing we all have in common...that we worked for her at one point in time..." "yes, but i worked to help take care of my son. all of you were loyall to her, and i'm sure you'd work for her again if she ever came back" "yes, i admit we were on her side..." "were?" "yes...not only is she dead, but we don't work for anyone now...if she ever found a way to come back, we wouldn't work for her..." "thats good....i wouldn't either...." "then thats something else we have in common..." "i guess so..." he said.
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#2409 Posted: 19:52:16 03/04/2009
*flags*
Yey Neona? Beatifull name
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#2410 Posted: 19:56:56 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. i'll post more soon. i have some wirtten on a word document.
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#2411 Posted: 19:58:15 03/04/2009
She act very calmly
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#2412 Posted: 20:00:06 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
she is. shes not like the other wolves.
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#2413 Posted: 20:07:35 03/04/2009
I like that
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#2414 Posted: 20:09:16 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
good. her personality is diffrent from the others. you'll find out more about her later on in the story.
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#2415 Posted: 20:13:09 03/04/2009
Mysterious, camly, cute wolf Female....Why i am shaking
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#2416 Posted: 20:14:45 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
you'll find out more though later on...
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#2417 Posted: 20:21:12 03/04/2009
*TOUP*
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#2418 Posted: 20:29:04 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
here we go again i'll post more, but it'll be kinda short.
"Neona, it was nice of you to allow me to come in, but i should go back home, and be with my son" "i understand, Talon. you may leave, and you are welcome to come back anytime" "thank you" he said. then he got up to leave. "goodbye" he said. "goodbye, Talon" she replied. then he walked out of the room. once he left, a male grey wolf walked in. "i want you to keep a close eye on him...follow him back home, and find out as much as you can about him..." she said. the wolf nodded in agreement. then he left, and followed talon back to the jungle.
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#2419 Posted: 20:34:21 03/04/2009
......spy.....interesting.......
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#2420 Posted: 20:39:30 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yep.....shes up to something....but i still have more to post.....
morning soon came. everyone at the temple woke up, and got ready for a new day. Goldstar went to Blackpearl's room, and knocked on her door. "Blackpearl! get up! its morning!" she said; but there was no answer. "Blackpearl! wake up!" she said; but there was still no answer. then Goldstar looked around for her. she then ran into Frostbolt in the hall. "morning" he said. "have you seen Blackpearl?" she asked. "not lately, why?" "i can't find her....do you think shes ok?" "i'm sure shes fine..." he said. then he walked away. :meanwhile: Blackpearl was wandering around in the desert. she was looking for Thunderhead. no one had seen him since he was at Hellfire's lair. "Thunderhead?!!" she called, but there was no answer. Blackpearl looked around. "Thunderhead?!!" she called again, but there was only silence. then someone grabbed her from behind, and covered her mouth, so she couldn't call for help. "you should be quiet.....its not safe out in the open....." the person said. then the person disappeared with her.
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#2421 Posted: 20:50:46 03/04/2009
Kidnap
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#2422 Posted: 20:52:22 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
well, not exactly. you'll find out soon enough...
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#2423 Posted: 20:54:47 03/04/2009
Yes it is....
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#2424 Posted: 20:56:17 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Thunderhead woke up in a strange place. he looked around. he was in a large, dark place. he couldn't see very well, because it was so dark. there wasn't any source of light.
"ah...your awake..." said a voice. "who are you?" asked Thunderhead. "well, considering i took you out of the desert...i'd say i'm a friend..." said a voice. "well....the desert is my home.....so, if you ask me, your an enemy..." "was....the desert was your home.....untill you left it to live with a dragoness named Blackpearl...." "how do you know her?" "we met once before.....some time ago when we were younger....." "where did you meet?" "out in the forrest....." "where?" "somewhere outside where we are now...." "where are we exactly?" "my home...." "and were would your home be exactly?" "in an old abandonned city....." "what kind of city?" "one where no one can ever find us....Deathwar city..." "Deathw----wait a second...that means....your a war dragon, arn't you?" "your right....i'm the last of my kind....." "you mind telling me who you are?" he asked. then someone lite up candels all around the room. Thunderhead could see a male, black, teen dragon standing there. "my name....is Warclaw...." he said.
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#2425 Posted: 21:04:58 03/04/2009
YAY!
You revived one character
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#2426 Posted: 21:09:09 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yes, i did. i thought about who could show up in the desert, and get them. and then i thought about Warclaw. i realized that he just sorta disappeared from my story, so i decided to get him back.
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#2427 Posted: 21:13:05 03/04/2009
Yes, what next? More old Characters?
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#2428 Posted: 21:13:57 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
you'll just have to wait and see...
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#2429 Posted: 21:21:58 03/04/2009
*droooooooooooooooools* "Whatch our shoes"
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#2430 Posted: 21:29:56 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
you better not drool on me...
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#2431 Posted: 21:49:59 03/04/2009
I fear that if i drool on you Firefligth going to eat me D:
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#2432 Posted: 22:04:07 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
she might
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#2433 Posted: 22:15:03 03/04/2009
Hopefully Crysdell, Cherry, Sheldi, Pearl, Harmony or Carm going to save me.
Dragons:"I dunno, human meet taste good. Yeah *slurp* D:*gulp*
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#2434 Posted: 22:23:25 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
maybe Fireflight jsut won't eat you....
F: *has a bottle of ketchup* *looks at her* F: what?
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#2435 Posted: 22:28:56 03/04/2009
*hides behind of Crysdell*
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#2436 Posted: 22:32:15 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
whats with the ketchup?
F: oh, i got hungry so i decided to eat a cheeseburger...*leaves*
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#2437 Posted: 22:34:00 03/04/2009
I have to watch my back....
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#2438 Posted: 22:39:55 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
i don't think Fireflight wants to eat you....
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#2439 Posted: 23:38:45 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Thunderhead looked at Warclaw.
"i'm Thunderhead...." he said. Warclaw looked at him. "i know...Blackpearl told me...." "shes here?!" "shes around here somewhere....i found her in the desert too....i brought her here, and she might be sleeping....but we talked for a while after i brought her here....she told me everything thats happened....i guess i missed a good bit since the last time i saw her...." he said. Thunderhead got up, and walked over to him. "so....why are we here?" he asked. "well, i need your help" "with what?" "with the battle..." he said. then he walked out of the room, and down the hall. Thunderhead followed him. "what battle?" "the one with, Helldoom, Hellfire, and Sunfire....we all have a job to do...we gotta save the world...." "what again? can't we have a vacation from saving the world? i thought i helped save it back when Nightflight was here..." "no....thats when this whole mess started....thats actually when things got worse..." "so....we screwed up?" "i didn't say that....but now we have to save the world..." "i see....who all is fighting in this battle exactly?" "me, you, and Blackpearl" "thats it?" "what do you mean 'thats it'?" "i mean, its only us? no back up? no reinforcements?" "who said we needed them?" "i do! we're gonna get our buts kicked if we go up agaist them! the last time i faced Hellfire, he killed me! then for some unknown reason, Sunfire revived me! do you know how powerful they are?! we'll get killed a million times over!" "i see you have high hopes for survival..." he said, sarcastically. "i sure do! like, lets get reinforcements! turst me! we need them!" he said. then Warclaw went into a small room. Thunderhead followed him. "i think you just forgot how to fight without dying..." he said. then he saw Blackpearl sleeping in the room. he walked over to her, and woke her up. she looked at them. "hey..." she said, sleepily. "you ready for battle?" Warclaw asked. "now?!" asked Thunderhead. Warclaw looked at him. "do you see anything to fight? no, of coarse not now. when we're ready" "i'm not ready!" said Thunderhead. "i sensed that..." he replied. "well, i am ready" said Blackpearl, getting up. Warclaw looked at her. "thats the spirit! now, lets get ready. we have a battle to fight, and a world to save!" "oh boy....here we go again..." said Thunderhead.
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#2440 Posted: 14:24:17 05/04/2009
fb: *jumps into the story* i want to help!!
me: *grbs his tail and pulls but isn't strong enough to pull him all the way out* ur heavy! and no! it's C09's STORY!!! fb:NOOOO!!! *holds onto a rock in the story*
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#2441 Posted: 16:13:57 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
fb get out. the fb in my story will show up, so you can leave.
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#2442 Posted: 16:49:13 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Warclaw grabbed some weapons, and got ready for battle. Blackpearl grabbed a few weapons herself. Thunderhead also got some weapons. then they heard something.
"what was that?" asked Thunderhead. "it sounds like someones here....i'll go see who it is..." said Warclaw. "stay here..." he continued. then he quietly sneaked out of the room, and looked around for any intruders. Warclaw got a dagger ready, just in case. he walked outside, and looked around. then suddenly someone grabbed him from behind. Warclaw grabbed him, and threw him up over his head, and onto the ground. then he pinned him down. he put the dagger up to his throat. "who are you?!" Warclaw growled. the dragon looked at him. it was an ice dragon. "the names Frostbolt. hey, have you seen my friends? thier names are Thunderhead and Blackpearl" he said. "your not fooling me! i bet your here to kill them!" he snarled. then Thunderhead and Blackpearl walked up to them. "Frostbolt! Warclaw get off of him! hes out friend!" said Blackpearl. "oh....sorry about that...." he said. then Warclaw got up, and put the dagger away. Frostbolt got up, and looked at them. "hey guys" he said. "what are you doing here, frost?" Thunderhead asked. "oh, i....uh....i'm here for the battle!" he said, as he got out a dagger. "please don't tell me hes comming with us..." said Warclaw. "whats wrong with me comming? you worried that i might sneak up on ya again?!" Frost teased. Warclaw put his paw over his face. "its not me i'm worried about..." he said. "you know, your more than welcome to join us, frost. the more the....well the more we have to fight!" said Thunderhead. "yeah, you can help, frost" said Blackpearl. "alright! than lets get going! we got a world to save!" said frost. Warclaw looked down shaking his head. than he mumbled something to himself. "why? why do we have to take dumbo with us? he'll get killed before the fight starts....i don't want to have to watch dumbos back the whole time..." he mumbled. Frostbolt looked at him. "what did you say?" he asked. Warclaw looked at him. "nothing..." he said. "oh..." said Frost. than he looked at the others. "lets go to war!" he said.
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#2443 Posted: 17:42:01 06/04/2009
write more!!!
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#2444 Posted: 17:58:45 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
i'll write more soon. i'm writing on a word documnt right now.
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#2445 Posted: 18:16:48 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
everyone got ready for battle.
"is everyone ready?" asked Warclaw. "yeah, lets do it!" said Frostbolt. "i'm as ready as i'll ever be, lets go" said Thunderhead. "its time to save the world....our world....lets go beat up some bad guys..." said Blackpearl. "alright. than lets go" said Warclaw. then the left Deathwar city, and flew towards Hellfire's lair. :meanwhile: Hellfire was looking at a dark vision pool. Sunfire was reading a book. "they think they're ready to fight us....they're on thier way here....." he said. "good....i was getting bored...." she replied. "then why don't we greet our guests?" "sounds good to me..." she said. "alright then....lets go..." he said. Helldoom was already in a large room, waiting for them. then Hellfire and Sunfire walked up behind him. "they'll be here soon, sire" he said. "good...i was in the mood to kill something..." said Hellfire. "be sure to save me one to kill.." said Sunfire. "don't worry....we'll all kill one of them....but i get to kill two of them since theres four of them nad three of us..." "fine....i want to kill Blackpearl....i'd like to have a one on one female fight with her..." "alright...i'll take Warclaw and Thunderhead....it should be fun killing Thunderhead again..." he said. "then i guess i'll get to kill frosty...." said Helldoom. :meanwhile: Warclaw, Frostbolt, Thunderhead, and Blackpearl were flying towards Hellfire's lair. they could see it in the distance. "alright...this is it....lets go save the world..." said Warclaw.
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#2446 Posted: 19:07:51 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Hellfire, Sunfire, and Helldoom waited for them. then Warclaw and the others walked in the room.
"well, well, well, look what we have here" said Hellfire. "you came to stop us, and save the world...how nice...but you'll be the ones dying today!" "shut up, Hellfire! your no powerful king! your really a teen like us!" Warclaw growled. "well, actually, i'm alot bigger than all of you, so i am older, and more powerful!" he said. "no, your not!" said Frostbolt. "i'm actually older than you are! i'm almost an adult! you had to use magic to become full grown! well, now, we're here to defeat you, and save the world!" he growled. "very well then....lets fight!" he growled. then Helldoom used his weapon to shoot redl lightning at Frostbolt. frost jumped up, and dodged the attack. then he shot ice at Helldoom. Helldoom used his weapon to break the ice before it hit him. Hellfire shot large fire balls at Warclaw and Thunderhead. they both dodged the attacks, and then threw daggers at him. Hellfire put a dark red shield around himself. Sunfire shot fire balls at Blackpearl. Blackpearl used her Dragon Scale Sheild power to keep from getting hurt, and send the fire balls back at her twice as strong. Sunfire dodged the attack. Hellfire shot more fire balls at Thunderhead. then Blackpearl jumped in front of him, and blocked the attack. Hellfire growled. than he rose up, and hit the ground hard with his front paws. the earth shoke, and then walls rose up from the ground. each wall seperated Warclaw and the others. Frostbolt and Helldoom were in one part of the room; Warclaw, Thunderhead, and Hellfire were in another part of the room; and, Blackpearl and Sunfire were in the last part of the room. Hellfire grinned evily. "you can't work together anymore!" he said. "we'll see about that!" Warclaw growled.
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#2447 Posted: 19:32:20 06/04/2009
:/......
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#2448 Posted: 19:33:29 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
the battle has started....i'm still writing on a word document...
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#2449 Posted: 19:40:34 06/04/2009
I expected more.......
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#2450 Posted: 19:47:43 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
there will be more....
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