darkSpyro

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Cynder looked around, looking for where the voice came from. She saw nothing at first, then something was coming into her sight. A black dragon was flying straight towards her! She thought it was coming to kill her, so she started to fly away. But as she was taking flight, the dragon yelled, "Do not be frightened! I am not here to harm you!" Cynder was scared, she knew Dark Dragons served her Master, but why did this one say he was not here to kill her? "Who are you?" she asked him as he landed on the rock next to Cynder. "My name is Nalemor, and I am here to stop you from killing Spyro." he replied in a cold, yet gentle voice.

"But Nalemor, Spyro has been corrupted by the Master, he is much stronger than him. He has the power to overrun my Master, with me. But if I do not kill Dark Spyro, he will kill me for trying to overrun the Master!" Nalemor then replied, "Cynder, if you kill Dark Spyro, you are also killing Spyro. There is another way to save him. And I know just where to begin.
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This is really my first time trying to write in a story. I hope you like it.

WOW! that is cool. I think it reads like you have been writing your whole life!

Awesone, Nalemor!
I totaly agree with Owl

I changed it, forgive me. NOwl, so people don't think Owl is a new user.

and here is a pic of infinity

is it really that good?

Well, atleast now I know how Infinity looks like. Thanks

REALLY!

Thanks!

D_C, you go next!

Ok, but I'm warning you, this will take 4ever

we can wait

but i G2G, i'll be back on later tonight

Yep. I WANT IT NOW! that didn't last long....

Ok, good luck, Nalefor!

lol

Awesome Chpater Nalefor!

I'll do the next Chapter!

Cynder looked at Dark Spyro sadly he was weak, hurt, and shivering from being drenched in the cold water. She could also see the Spyro she had once known and cared for. "What have I done?" She sighed she was now weeping. Nalemor just looked at her. "Do you feel different then before?" He asked. Cynder just looked up at him. "I am able to think and feel without someone doing it for me! I am not coruppted anymore! But how?" She said her face brightning. "But that doesn't change things she added sadly.

"Cynder." He began. "Do you know what black dragons are capable of?" "Fear, Shadow, Poisen, and Wind." She answered glumly. "No my friend" Nalemor said as a smile went across his face. "The are capable of Light." "Light?" She said. "How? All I have been capable of is all the darkelements!" "Yes with you it has been most unfortunate. But now Cynder you are able too your affection for your friends have giving you a pure heart that is right about to release the most powerful element of all time! Now come follow me." He smiled. "It is about time Dark Spyro is Spyro again and you learned
your true element."

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There it is hope ya like it!

Awesome Chapter, C_R! Here's mine :

<Chapter 19: The Moon ruins>

Nalemor with a single flap of his wings made a black forcefield around the Dark dragon. It was round, like an orb. The little black dragon shot a shadowy black chain from his right hand, right at the Dark orb. The chain looked more like a cord, then a chain, but it was stronger. It connected. “Now, follow me, Cynder” Nalemor said and flew up in to the sky, still holding the fogged chain. He moved, and the Orb forcefield also flew right after him. Cynder flew up and once she flied near the little dragon, she spoke: “So, where are we going?”; “To a place, where everyone wants to be…” Cynder didn’t answer. She didn’t quite understand, what did he mean, but she decided not to disturb him. Cynder saw that Nalemor is concentrating to hold the Dark forcefield active. In fact, Dark Spyro already tried to get out of his flying cell, there for it was even harder to save it.

After a long flight with Nalemor, Cynder saw something beautiful in the middle of the forest. It was shining with bright light. But that light looked more like a white fug. Nalemor started to glide down slowly, right in to the bright fug. Cynder repeated his moves. Once they entered the white fug, they carefully landed on the completely white grass. “ I can’t go further, or else the energy that surrounds the other side of this forest will kill me. Here, take this Dark chain and lead Spyro right in there” Nalemor said, handing Cynder the chain and pointing in the light fug. “Why can you die?” Cynder asked. “It doesn’t matter now. Go, now…” the black dragon said and left the completely white area. Cynder thought, as she walked deeper in to the light: ”…or else the energy that surrounds the other side of this forest will kill me… Hmmm… Perhaps that energy is…”.
“LIGHT!...” A mysterious voice shouted from somewhere beyond the bright fug. “…Accept the newcomers, and let me see them!” The voice continued.

The white area suddenly exploded in to millions of small lights, leaving behind normal grass, trees, sky... The Dark chain and the Orb Forcefield al-so disappeared, finally freeing Spyro. Spyro was blind, because of the quick change of the light. He was in a totally dark area, when suddenly thousands of lights shone in to his eyes.
In front of the two dragons stood a large blue dragon, with large Dark blue wings. Behind the dragon, Cynder saw a huge crystal-like rock, wich was located in the middle of some old ruins. It was shining with a bright, blue and white light. “So it is true…” The old dragon spoke. “The two of you really did submit yourselves to the Darkness…Well then, it’s about time the two Legendary dragons to show up and lead the two chosen ones, to this very spot, but to do so, I must first remove the Darkness from your bodies.” The dragon took a short pause and continued: “Cynder, close your eyes, take a deep breath and empty your mind. Find the Light deep within yourself. And once found, unleash it, as a great force.”
Cynder stood for a while, and then risen on her back legs and shone with a marvelous light, unleashing a beautiful, bright light, which shone through the Moon ruins, even brighter then the light from the Spiritual stone.

While the Light fury shined, Cynder returned to her own size, as before. As for Spyro, the Darkness was removed from his body and he al-so returned to his old self.

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I hope you liked it

Ya know, if we'll have to decide, I'm voting for your version of the Chapter 18. I don't know why did I just betrayed myself?
It is strange to make a chapter and admit, that the other's one is way better

Hold on leme read your chapter.

How about we combine the two? Instead of Cynder unleashing the Light element there how about Cynder unleashes it there?

Ok

That sound like a good idea, but who will make the combined Chapter?

It must be me or you. Hmmm....

I edited my Chapter now you edit your chapter so it fits mine. Just don't edit it to much because it is already awesome!

Ok, I'll get on it right now

EDIT: Nice job! Night Owl or Nalefor should do the next Chapter!

Thanks, C_R You did a pretty great job, too.
We did our part, now it's up to our faithful Story-helpers

NP! But what do you mean by Cynder and Spyro had given themselves to the darkness? They didn't have a choice in our story or did they? Am I missing something?

No, you aren't missing anything, it's just that Blue old dragon with large Dark blue wings doesn't know the details, plus, "Submit yourselves to darkness" means making some one corrupt you, and you couden't resist it.

Atleast, that's what I think it means...

Oh thank you! I thought there was Chapter I missed or something!

Believe me, we would never make you miss a single chapter

LOL!

Nalemor said something about him coming at night today, right?

I wonder, when the'll come Online?... I can't wait for the next Chapters!

i could do the next chapter if it's okay with Night Owl
(And it's Nalemor, not Nalefor sounds too much like Malefor)

Woops, sorry about that It really does looks like Malefor, that's why I keep on forgiving

I don't know, NiOwl didn't made a singe chapter for a while, now...

it's okay, a common mistake

well right now i don't have time to write a chapter, so if NiOwl wants to write it he is welcome to do so, i'm just on here for a few more minutes

Will you be online again, today?
(I edited my mistakes about "Nalemor=Nalefor" thing )

okay Yes, i will be on again today, might be late though, possible around 8-9 P.M. central time

Um, I'm not from the USA, so translate "around 8-9 P.M. central time" on the web-site time, please

hmm... 1:00-2:00 where are u from?

What time is it where you live?

5:35 P.M.

Right now is 22:35, that means here is 01:35 (+3 hours)

Thanks but I meant D_C.

BTW I will change it too Nalemor in a sec.

oh okay

What do you mean? Avatar?

Time translation:
Website time: 22:50
Where I live in: 01:50
Nalemor's time: ??:?? (Translate...)