darkSpyro

And there's more coming soon!!!

Yaaay!Plus,fourth page!

That too.........Sure..........

great story. i love it. please write more soon.

Love the story so much that I can't speak when I read it!I'm speechless!

it is an awesome story. i like it better every time i read another chapter. i like the characters more and more as i continue to read.

I agree ith C09!

Nice! You people are getting sucked into the story! Is it painting a picture in your head? Well, prepare your brains. Cause it's nowhere near complete!

Yes!Omg!I can't wait!

Awesome!

GOGO!

Sorry..........none...now. I'm tired. And used just about everything up on my Death Sentance one......Go look at it if you want entertainment.

ok. i'll go check it out.

Thanks.......I still got writers block. Leave this topic alone for a while so the lack of story doesn't show as much, and I can come up with another idea.....

Awwww!I can't wait!

i can't either. please hurry, Goldenfire, if you can.

Okay! This was supposed to be up yesterday, but I had swim, then fell asleep! So! Here we go!

Chapter Fourteen: Stuck Like Glue

Venia sat there for a while in silence. "So how do you suggest we get out of here?" She asked Dentro. He shrugged and grunted. "That's not an answer." Venia said, turning around a bit. Dentro glared at her.
"I don't really care." Dentro snapped. Venia growled at him.
"Suit yourself. Ya know what? I'm going to start digging." She got up and went to the stairs, climbing up them to near the surface. she slid her claws down with a slight shing, then began to carefully slice dirt out of the wall. It piled up on the steps and she shoved it out of the way. Dentro stood there for five whole minutes before he snapped out of his trance and whirled around.
"Hey! why the heck are you cutting up my wall!?" he cried. He dashed over, sending three of his would be arrows to wrap around Venia, stopping her from diggin.
"Digging another exit! What does it look like!?" She snapped, glaring. Her arm muscles strained against the metal, beding it. A lot. "Get this play metal off me. Of you want to hold me, don't use SILVER. Even if it's your silver." she reached up awkwardly and ripped though the strands. Dentro gaped.
"Hey! What's your problem!?" He snapped, reforming his arrow rods.
"Again, digging a tunnel out of here." She snapped.
"But....why on my STAIRS!?"
"Because it's closest to groudn level that's still stable, that's why."
"But-"
"Just shut it." She snapped finally, one set of claws snapping up to his throught as the other hand dug. Dentro gulped, and shut up, backing away. She does NOT like the underground for this long! he thought.
Venia hacked away at the wall for a while, soon going back to both hands. She had gotten to a point where she was actually sitting inside the tunnel and flinging dirt out past her, when her claws scraped another metal. She scraped more dirt away, revealing a solid iron panel. Then another. And another. "Dentrooo!!!" She shouted. he came slidding up the now dirt covered steps.
"What? What happened? Are you hurt?" He asked. Then they both froze, registering what he had said.
"No. I'm fine. But YOU'LL be hurt if you don't tell me what an IRON WALL is doing down here!" She snarled, jabbing a clawed hand in the wall's direction. Dentro blinked.
"Well. That's new." He said. He got look for his troubles. "What? How was I supposed to know that was there!?" He asked Venia. she glared.
"You LIVE here." A nod in response. "You've widened the cave." A nod. "And you never, EVER found an iron wall down here?" Head shaking. Venia groaned. "Why am I always stuck with the idiots?" she asked herself quietly. She clambered out of the....hole, now, and stood there, brushing her shirt and pants off. "Well, we're stuck. Like glue." She said. Dentro stared for a minute, then went back to his wall to stare at it in misery again.

haha, well that was entertaining. i love it. great story. please write more when you can.

Ha ha! Melders can't do anything to Iron, right?

Not without heat they can't! Haha!

well, looks like they're stuck for a little while at least, hehe

Yup. Adorable avi by the way Cynder.

oh, thank you.

Not a post on what I typed other than yours..... I fell unloved.

Awww!I love cynder09s avi,too!It's so CUTE! By the way,GREAT chapter!

Thank you! Thank you! I will be here all week! *bows and vanishes* ............ *appears behind cynder2000 silently* Hello there.

Hey!*Turns around*

yes, my avi is cute, isn't it? it's just such an adorable Gengar
*disappears and reappears behind Goldenfire holding a cute little Gengar* hello!

Awwww!I wanna cuddle it! Except for that creepy shadow....

ok, here. *hands you cute Gengar without creepy shadow*

be right back! *vanishes breifly and comes back holding an adorable Mew* Mew!!!

aw, how cute! hold on.... *vanishes and comes back holding a cute Charmander* Charmander!

Good for you. Check my other story for post of panic that explains my no more posts here for a while.

Yay!*takes charmander and gengar*huggie!

Can't believe I forgot this...

Pretty good.

Okay, so I'm actually posting anyway...

-.- *whacks Isis with a metal waterbottle* Goldenfire chop! *dusts off waterbottle of blood* I can't believe you forgot that either... v-v+++

And thank you.

cyndy! You no love adorable Mew!? O.O what ARE you!? *hugs Mew, protecting from inhuman cynder2000*

I forgot about the mew. Gengar!!!!*huggles gengar*I luv the mew too,but it's your fav pokemon,so you should hold it.Gengarrrrr!Yayzzz!*cuddles gengar* So cute!Very cute!TOO cute!

glad you like Gengar ^ ^ *cuddles Charmander* i'll just hold my fave ^ ^

OW!

*rubs head*

And that is the power of the Goldenfire Chop. v-v *nods* Don't worry, MORE WILL COME SOON!! NOT NOW!!! BUT SOON!!!!

Yaaaay!Gengar luv your story,too.*cuddles gengar*I love my gengar! So far,my fav pokemon are: Gallade,Glaceon,and Gengar! Have you all noticed that they all start wth Gs?

Creepy in more ways than one? I'd certianly say so. Okay, I'm still to busy... and as usual, I'm stuck in the crucial points of my story... Help? *plaintive cry for help*

Ummm....*thinks*....................................

Cynd! *glomps*

Eyyyy,Gf!And I FINALLY know what that means!

hey, what's going on here? *walks in holding a Charmander*

*holds up cynder2000 in a Pokeball* I cought her! :3 And I gotta Mew! Also, I have another chapter! Chakaze chapter! Then a Dentro/Venia chapter, then a Danny D&V chapter! I got the next threeeeeeeee!!! Just not names for em...


Chapter Fifteen: When life Gives you Lemons... or... Oranges?

Chakaze sighed and sat up as a knock sounded on her door. One and a half hours was NOT enough sleep and she was tempted to shout at the mental case waking her up, but then they nearly knocked the door down. "Gah! Perverts! Why wold you do that!? I'm still a girl!" She shouted at the two guys who walked in, a part of her team.
"Sorry Chak! We got work! Get your mail on dang it! We gotta GO!" The thiner and taller of the two brothers said, and they left. She groaned.
"why me?" She whispered.
"Hm?" The tall, dark, and silent dolt of the pair had heard her. And come back.
"Nothing Doko. Move it so I can get changed." she said, and slammed the half off it's hinges door back into place on his nose. There was a satisfying crunch as his nose was smashed flat as a pancake. And a big loud cry of pain.
"Caka, if you weren't my leader I'd kill you!" Doko shouted. his brother must have come back and drug him away because the threats faded into the distance, echoing back. Chakaze snickered.
"Idiots." She muttered, and changed her mail and the rest of her outfit. She went outside and saw....... trees. Lots and lots of trees. "Uh..... Ronocha?" She asked her second in comand, a light little girl in her high teens, a towering- 4' 8'. But she was strong, fast, and brilliant for her all her few inches in comparison to the towering 5' 9" Chakaze. "Why are there TREES in the training yard?" She asked, staring.
Ronocha glanced up from a clipboard. "Oh. Those are our job. Plant em or we supposedly loos out heads. Like that could happen." she said. Then she mutterd numbers.
"........Where!?" chakaze shouted. Ronocha looked up.
"Orchard. Duh. Don't make me beat it into you with the clipboard Chakaze. You know I will." She threatened. And she would. Clipboards hurt, no matter what people tell you. Especially when you get hit with the edge. On the head. chakaze nodded.
"Why are WE planting trees? Lemon trees! Ugh!" She cried, examining one of the yellowish fruits.
"No. Oranges. Very unripe oranges." Ronocha muttered, and walked off with a vein nearly bursting out of ehr head as she lost count for the fifteenth time.
"Oops..." Chakaze muttered. Then she sighed and shouted at the Nothings and the two other Melders she knew were there. "Okay everybody! Yes those are trees! Yes we're planting them! And I say yes you can eat any ripe oranges you find! they'll be.... Orange!" She shouted, and grabbed a tree-sapling-whatever- and started towards the grounds. A ripe orange dangled next to her head and she pocketed it for later. The others all grabbed trees, sometimes two at once, sometimes two people to a tree, and followed.

Lol, trees?

Eh. I ran out of ideas, and needed something wierd. And a title to work for it, so, yeah, trees.

Lawlz...