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#151 Posted: 23:06:57 23/07/2010
I'm guessing it will be bad!
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#152 Posted: 21:24:09 26/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Nizla grabbed Kaitlyn by the collar of her shirt. She dragged her to the window, "Mortal filth." She hissed, ready to throw her out the window. Kaitlyn turned pale. "Please no!" She screamed. "Now!" Nizla yelled. Me leaping up, grabbed Ashlyn and Desi by the arms, running towards the window. "What are you doing?!" Desi screamed, as Nizla pushed Kaitlyn and jumped. I jumped after them, pulling Ashlyn and Desi with me. They screamed, bracing for pain, only to stop as the landed on something which wasn't the ground. Desi opened her eyes, me cheering as Nizla laughed. "Ok, Meaghan, that was awesome, if we hurry we can still make the check point with Diablo!" She said, her voice light as air. I smiled back. Kaitlyn looked up. "I'm not dead?!" "What is going on?" Ashlyn asked. I spoke up. "Well after we got separated I figure I knew who to turn to, the only chick I know who can destroy worlds, Nizla Shadow-Caster." I said, Nizla speaking next. "Well as soon as she Riviera posing as myself I knew something was up, so I spoke the her mentally until we thought up a plan." "This plan. We got Thorn to agree to fly us all." I said. Desi and Ashlyn looked at each other, "Thorn?" They asked. Nizla spoke up. "He is my..." "Dragon, and a handsome black one at that!" Thorn said, lifting his head back to look at the humans who sat upon him. Kaitlyn looked like she was ready to implode in joy. "OMG!!!!" She screamed hugging Thorn. "She's a dragon lover huh?" Thorn asked, Nizla nodded. "Oh joy." He said. "By the way you are all fat! Fat and heavy! I should know, I'm flying." Nizla laughed at this. "He's lying you know?"
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#153 Posted: 02:12:11 27/07/2010
lolicle
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#154 Posted: 05:46:52 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
-- Thorn groaned, "Please Nizla, Don't encourage them." He said Kaitlyn screaming in joy, not letting go of Thorn. "Gah, I thought this couldn't get much worse!" He whined. Nizla glared at him, "Stop you complaining were all stuck here, so don't make it worse for us." "Yes princess." He grumbled. Desi looked at Nizla, "Why didn't you tell us?" "Hello?! My evil Demonic mother!" "Nizla, no need to be rash." I said, both Nizla and Desi glaring at me.
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#155 Posted: 17:41:17 27/07/2010
i like thorn
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#156 Posted: 19:17:42 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, he and Nizla are hysterical.
-- I took a step backwards, knowing Desi could likely kick my butt ( at least with out magical aid. ) Nizla turned back to Desi. "Please if you think Human moms are bad, then you have no Idea what mines like." she said. Desi groaned, "Earth moms can't be far off, they won't let you do anything." Thorn pipped up, "Sounds like Nizla! Mommy, can i have a cookie?" Nizla face/palmed. "Thorn cut it out." I snickered, "Jeez, your funnier in person than in my head!" I said, Thorn replying, "Thank you, oh creator." "Hey! How come she gets thee creator and i get the princess?!" "Uh... Luck of the draw?" Nizla death glared Thorn, him turning his head back in-front of them. Nizla sat down, "This can't get much worse..." Everyone else, already sitting down nodded. I laughed, "Yeah, what could..." I was cut off as a fire ball whizzed past my head. "AW CRAP, FIRE BALLS?!" I screamed, jumping back.
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#157 Posted: 20:05:33 27/07/2010
So, Nizla is on our side now? (sorry i havn't really noticed the past few chapters )
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#158 Posted: 19:54:20 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
lol
-- Thorn shout clearly, "This is going to be a ruff flight girls! There wasn't just one fire ball!" Nizla gasp, ducking the ends of her hair sweep the fire ball that flew over her head. "AH! My hair is on fire!" She screamed, Kaitlyn throw water on her. Desi peered over Thorn's shoulders to see a sea of fire below them, fire balls flying at them. "Oh jeez!" She shouted. "Hang on!!" Thorn shouted, rolling in air to avoid the fire. We all, except Nizla and Thorn, screamed. "Holy fish sticks, Were gonna crash!" Nizla boomed. WE held onto Thorn tightly, bracing our selves for the impact of the dirt. The force of the impact came in seconds, sending us flying off Thorn to the side. Nizla held on, but of course she did these thing more often. The last thing I knew was I was flying in the air, hitting a tree at full force, and falling into darkness.
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#159 Posted: 19:58:19 28/07/2010
Very nice!
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#160 Posted: 20:12:20 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
you read it all that fast?
-- I awoke next to a roaring camp fire, it had to be about ten o'clock in the evening. My head pounded loudly, my back felt as if i were thrown against a tree, then again i was. I knew that i was laying in some kind of cot. My vision was blurry, my glasses must have been shattered in the landing. Just my luck. I not know exactly what was around me. But i could see the fire clear as a bell. A sat there, pain shooting through me, I heard voices from near by, past the ringing of my ears. The scent of smoke and some kind of soup filled my nostrils. The strain of my eyes so alien since I always had my glasses on. I heard some on approach me, yet i didn't jolt up right. Someone tapped m shoulder, "Whose there?" I asked, my head spinning now. "A friend, try to sit up please." The person said. I obeyed, sitting up the best i could. "We found your glasses, your lucky, they are still in one piece.
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#161 Posted: 21:13:25 28/07/2010
i like the new chapters!
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#162 Posted: 23:32:19 29/07/2010 | Topic Creator
I felt the glasses being set on my lap. I put the on, they were crooked, but I could see clearly. I turned my head, seeing some one I thought I'd never see alone. There stood a women, her hair raged and bloodstained. Her skin ghost white. Her eyes Shining Blood red. Her clothing was tattered, her skin torn in cuts, self inflicted ones. Right now, I felt safer with Bioliza than with who i saw. She smiled, seeing my fear. "You seem frightened, I'll go get you a drink." My mind was frozen, fear stricken. The person who had aided me, was the last person i wanted to be with. The demonic sister to Nizla, Kizla, and this time Biolizla wouldn't be back to hold her insanity from peeking. I could hardly breathe, If there was a worse place to be, I couldn't think of it.
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#163 Posted: 23:42:46 29/07/2010
that was really creepy, especially with the music.
i love it!
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#164 Posted: 23:49:50 29/07/2010 | Topic Creator
thank yous!
-- I jolted up, despite the pain, my mind finding you I wanted to change into. Even though I hadn't ever used her in an eternity, now was the time to bring her out. I jumped into a tree, my claws enabling me to climb quick as most would blink. I started jumping through trees. If Kizla saw me, I would be dead, But it let me know that Biolizla was looking for me. Lightning flash, thunder followed only seconds behind. Within a minute rain poured down upon me, I took my glasses off, sliding them in side my pocket.I couldn't see well, but I'd be worse off if I lost my glasses. Eventually the pain made impossible to continue, so i sat in the trees, thinking resting, waiting for a break in the pain to go on.
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#165 Posted: 00:13:17 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
-- Thorn woke, his head pounding, he couldn't make contact with Nizla. But wasn't dead, meaning she had to be alive. He looked around, not seeing any of the humans that were riding him. Then he spotted Ashlyn, she was not awake, but he heard another dragon. He rushed over to Ashlyn, hiding her by Hiding her behind his wings. He layed down in a past out position. He heard the dragon land, he opening his eyes. He saw the dragon land, the dragon was dark blue, a female one, with large wings, and lightning shaped horns. The rider of the dragon was a female, With blond long hair, pulled into pig-tails. Her hair was wavy, her eyes deep Green. Her clothing were light blue, she held a mages staff with a blue crystal. Lizla. "Well, Thorn, where is my traitor visionary sister?" "Nizla, I don't know. She blocked me out..." "At least your honest, a shame such a loyal Dragon would be treated like this by his master... see her again, or the mortals she took and you call for me, ok." Thorn nodded to her making sure his mind was blank. "I'll make sure mother doesn't waste you, Thorn." She said, before taking back into the air.
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#166 Posted: 01:28:09 30/07/2010
scaryness!
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#167 Posted: 01:59:44 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
-- Nizla woke, her vision wavering. She couldn't feel the presence of Thorn, meaning he was in no place to know where she was. She had just forsaken her birth right, and dishonored her mothers rule. She sighed, a single tear slithering down her cheek. She saw Desi near by, Kaitlyn was in a tree. Desi mumbles, her eyes fluttering open. "Does he always land like this?" She asked, half groaning. Nizla laughed, quietly. "He hasn't done that since th war..." "Which one?" "One of the wars from my world... But we need to get Kaitlyn down from that tree..." Nizla said, her voice quivering. Desi nodded, "I think we'll have to wait until after we can stand." She said with a small laugh. Nizla closed her eyes, purple aura circled her, lifting her. Desi gasped. Nizla landed on her feet, "That... that was my power, now... I should do that again for a few days... or weeks..." "How did you know what i was going to ask?" "Please, the question was written on your face." Nizla said, turning pure black, like a shadow. Almost like Biolizla. The shadow grew wings, the recoloring back to regular Nizla, but with wings.
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#168 Posted: 02:01:04 30/07/2010
Awesome! ^.=.^
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#169 Posted: 02:10:47 30/07/2010
the beggining almost made me cry. D:
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#170 Posted: 03:15:21 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
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Nizla jerked around, looking upon the face of her sister, Kizla. "Well, Nizla, mother wants you dead... She always knows best." Nizla turn pale at this. Kizla stood still, smiling, she sang wickedly. "Sister, sister, red and black. Red blood from knives i stabbed into your back, black with ash and soot from burning foes. leading me to your woe. Your death is to be a simple one, full of pain and lots of fun!" She then laughed, nervously and evilly. "Kizla... please... Mother isn't in her right mind right now." "And neither am i!" She said laughing. Nizla jumped to the left as Bloodied Knives flew past her head, Kizla's work. Kizla sprang forward, magically flying at Nizla, Nizla dodging Sending Blue Shards at Kizla. Kizla ducked laughing. She spiraled around, fire shooting a Nizla. Nizla evaded the fires, Casting forth orbs of darkness.
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#171 Posted: 03:33:48 30/07/2010
SUSPENSE! D:
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#172 Posted: 03:47:07 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
The orbs hit Kizla, who flew back ward, only to spring back. She laughed evilly. Nizla Flipped back wards as lazors near struck her. Kizla laughed. "Silly sister, I will win this match, mother will deal with you once you reform." Nizla smiled, her eye twitching. "Oh, I see... This is all about mother, huh? Well My cause isn't to please her any more, it's to save the creator before he arrives!" She shout, Kizla screamed as Nizla dash forward, shooting forth lightning, Kizla ran back ward, springing off a tree. She struck Nizla, Nizla sending acid at Kizla, who dodged. Kizla spotted Desi, "Whose your mortal friend, Nizieyula Shadiutyoniuw?" Nizla turned beat red. "We never speak that language out of the hells of the demonic world." Nizla hissed, send rock waves at Kizla, who jumped over them. "Aw, sis, i never knew who cared!" She said wickedly, darting towards Desi. Desi screamed, turning into sky to fight. Nizla head rammed Kizla who yelped. "Oh, does my sister want to protect the mortal? How touching." She said, Laughing.
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#173 Posted: 16:55:24 30/07/2010
I like it!
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#174 Posted: 21:10:14 07/08/2010 | Topic Creator
sorry, guys, i got a small case of writers block.
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#175 Posted: 20:20:18 09/08/2010
its okay. i know how you feel.
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#176 Posted: 20:51:00 09/08/2010 | Topic Creator
i like your avi!
and i could do your wajas since i pmed you that i needed to user name and stuff and there was no pm back. *slams head on table*
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#177 Posted: 01:33:45 10/08/2010
thx
oh, i never saw the pm. >.> oh well, i was able to get on every day, so everything's fine.
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#178 Posted: 02:58:23 10/08/2010 | Topic Creator
*deep breath* that's a relief... put more of being one of fantasy!
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#179 Posted: 16:14:38 10/08/2010
??? being one of fantasy is your fanfiction, Night.
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#180 Posted: 14:44:54 12/08/2010 | Topic Creator
** *?!!?!!!?* Oh yeah.... that was a typo.... I hopwe you knew what i meant...
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#181 Posted: 17:10:02 12/08/2010
put more of Finding Spyro and Cynder?
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#182 Posted: 08:50:52 13/08/2010 | Topic Creator
yep!
-- Kizla dashed at Nizla, Desi lunging at her. Kizla flew back wards. She turned towards desi, ready to cast a spell, as pointed cards pinned her to a nearby tree. Kizla screeched, breaking free, sending daggers flying from where the cards came from. I stood there, shaped as Remeiu from touhuo. I threw cards wildly at Kizla, she dashing forward towards me. Desi Jumped at her, her own teeth lashing out at Kizla. She was in sink with star, her eyes focused upon Kizla. Nizla gasped as she saw Lizla landing, "Lizla?!" "Honestly sister, you can not escape mother's vigilance!" Kaitlyn sprang up, quickly taking the shape of diablo. A small silence took the field, then utter chaos broke out. Kizla darted at me, I screamed blackness over whelming me. ( just leave it to the shape shifter of insanity to keep things interesting. ) Kaitlyn screamed in anger, darting forward, cutting through Lizla as if she were softened butter. Lizla screamed, bursting into spirit, and fleeing. Desi snarled, flailing he claws at Kizla, cutting deep into her side. Kizla falling and bursting into spirit, the spirit fleeing. Thorn came running, ash on his back, awake and alive. Kaitlyn ran over to me, I lay unmoving. "Meaghan?! Meaghan?!" She screamed, Nizla gasped. She fading and disappearing. "She's not going to last long... man Kizla is such a banshee! We need to hurry and get her to a hospital!" Thorn nodded, Kaitlyn in tears. Desi hurried over, slinging me over her back. "Thorn how long can you fly?" "I don't know... I too am fading... What ever i manage it won't be long..."
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#183 Posted: 19:05:03 13/08/2010
oh, great, Nizla just died. oh well, i hope she comes back to life soon. and, i hope you don't die. ._.
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#184 Posted: 20:56:59 13/08/2010
Nizla just died. how is that awesome? >.>
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#185 Posted: 23:16:09 13/08/2010 | Topic Creator
* ?!?!*
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#186 Posted: 23:17:27 13/08/2010
O.=.o
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#187 Posted: 22:23:15 15/08/2010
shorty dosn't care that nizla died! D:
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#188 Posted: 22:25:00 15/08/2010
._. a thousand years. ._.
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#189 Posted: 22:36:03 15/08/2010 | Topic Creator
no, nizla didn't die, she is fading from view, and weakening, not dying.
and i'm working on the next bit.
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#190 Posted: 22:45:31 15/08/2010
you know, it would've been better not to tell us that. lol.
and yayz!
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