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Chapter 39,

In hell,

lucifer was still hanging on the wall, a demon comes into the chamber and sees lucifer hanging upside down.

lucifer: "it's about time someone showed up! Beelzebub get me down from here!"

Beelzebub: "so you've been hanging there for some time and you can't get loose?"

lucifer: "YES!! get me down from here you stupid *******!!"

Beelzebub: "no... since you are not able to lead the demons army anymore maybe i should take charge..."

lucifer: "WHAT THE **** ARE YOU SAYING!!?"

Beelzebub: "what i'm saying is if you can't even escape some little chains then you aren't worthy to be the leader... i mean yes you were the highest angel in Heaven but hell has made you weak. i mean look at you. 15 demons have already betrayed you and went back to Heaven, how long will it be before everyone goes to Heaven? with you as our leader it will be soon, but with me in charge everyone will respect and fear me... including you!"

lucifer: "YOU FILTHY SON OF A B****!!! I"LL KILL YOU!!!"

Beelzebub: "is that a nice way to speak to your new master?... face it lucy you've gone soft, and it's up to me to get MY demon army back into shape... but first i'll have to make you submit to my authority... i'll do exactly what you did to me... i'll -..."

lucifer broke free of the chains and grabbed Beelzebub by the throat and picked him up off the ground.

lucifer: "you'll do what now?"

Beelzebub was chocking because of lucifer's tight grip. lucifer slams him against the wall and keeps a tight grip on Beelzebub's windpipe.

Beelzebub: "...i'm... sorry..."

lucifer: "you're going to regret everything you said to me!!"

Beelzebub: "...i...i was only kidding...you...you are the highest demon... you deserve all the respect... i worship you... you are the highest and i'm just a lowlife... i'm just a worm compared to you..."

lucifer: "that maybe true. but flattering will get you nowhere!... i will punish you severely for what insults you uttered against me!!!"

Beelzebub: "...i think that the pain and regret i feel now is punishment enough... right?"

lucifer: "this is not even close to the pain you'll be feeling!!!"

lucifer slams Beelzebub onto a table and chains him up. lucifer gets out his sword, takes hold of one of Beelzebub's wings and chops it off. Beelzebub shrieks in pain and continues to scream for some time. blood comes out of the wound. lucifer throws the wing in a pit of fire and the wing burns up.

lucifer: "i won't be so generous to your second wing either!"

lucifer put his sword away and takes out a sharp knife, he takes hold of Beelzebub's other wing and begins to cut away at the delicate thin skin on the wing. Beelzebub screams in pain and tries to pull away but lucifer has no trouble keeping the wing in place. he shreds every bit of skin on the wing and even breaks a few bones in the wing.

lucifer: "see if you can use that for flight!"

Beelzebub: "... is... is it over?"

lucifer: "oh no it's not!... i intend to make you suffer!!"

lucifer begins to cut Beelzebub's back with the knife. Beelzebub screams in pain and begs for mercy. lucifer just laughs and contines to cut him. lucifer gets a vile of acid and pours it all over Beelzebub's back, he screams in pain as the acid burns him and goes into his wounds.lucifer unchains him from the table, lucifer grabs him by his broken wing and pulls him off the table. Beelzebub hits the ground as he fell on the ground. lucifer drags him in front of another room.

lucifer: "i'll be sure to come back for you..."

lucifer opened the door to the room and throws Beelzebub in there. lucifer closed the door Beelzebub lays on the ground then a gaint snake appears and wraps itself around Beelzebub slightly crushing him, then many worms appear and the crawl all over him they break through his skin and go into his body and they slowly eat it. Beelzebub screams in pain and struggles but the snake wraps itself around him even tighter.


next chapter coming today or tomorrow...

Lucifer suddenly became a much better villain...

yeah... i think this is the worst I've ever made him be...

Chapter 40,

In Heaven,

Jesus and Vepar walked through the city.

Vepar: "does Angie still remember me?"

Jesus: "yes, she's been praying for you to come back ever since you left."

Vepar: "what about Appoloin? i bet he wants to destroy me."

Jesus: "don't worry about him. i took care of him. he won't be bothering you again."

Vepar: "what did you do with the demon children you captured?"

Jesus: "they're all living very happy lives. they are living like the angels."

Vepar: "what about Deumos, Asmoday and Bael?"

Jesus: "i turned them back into angels and they are also living happily."

they reached the Temple.

Vepar: "i'm going to wait out here for Angie."

Jesus went inside the Temple. Vepar waits outside the Temple...

Angie walks outside the school, she walks through the city towards the Temple, she sees Vepar. Vepar sees Angie, they both run towards each other, when they meet they embrace.

Angie: "i knew you'd come back."

Vepar: "yes and i'm here to stay. i'm sorry i was so foolish and left."

Angie: "it's alright, at least you're back."

they let go of each other.

Angie: "let's go for a little flight."

they flew above the clouds staying close to each other.

Angie: "so how was it like in hell?"

Vepar: "very difficult living. very hard training... and it was really hot down there. i'm so glad to be back in Heaven..."

Angie: "how did lucifer treat you?"

Vepar: "he was nice to me at first but as soon as i disappoint him he'll torture me..."

Angie: "are you alright?"

Vepar: "now i am..."

Vepar gently took hold of Angie's hand, Angie looked at him and smiled, he smiled back, the flew through the clouds happy to be together...


In hell,

lucifer walks inside the torture chamber, he walks over to a door and opens it. Beelzebub was still in the snakes grip, worms were crawling in and out of his disfigured body, he was screaming in agony.

lucifer: "had enough?"

Beelzebub: "...yes!.... please let me go!... i'm sorry!"

lucifer: "i'm not sure you're sorry enough..."

Beelzebub: "i am... please have mercy... i'll do whatever you want... have mercy."

the snake and all the worms disappeared. Beelzebub was lying on the floor bloody and with wounds all over his body.

lucifer: "i'll have mercy on you... but if you ever disrespect me again i'll throw you in a pit of fire and lava with worms and i'll leave you there for a week!"

Beelzebub: "...i'll never disrespect you again master..."

lucifer: "good... now get out of here unless you want to stay and be tortured some more..."

Beelzebub tried to get up but he fell back on the floor. he had to resort to crawling out on his hands and knees, lucifer watched this with a grin on his face, Beelzebub fell at the entrance and laid there too weak to get up. lucifer walked out of the torture chamber walking across Beelzebub's body as he went out.


next chapter coming today or Wednesday.

Lucifier is a jerk!

yeah he is.

lucifer seems to have gone way worse than he was before

yes he has,

Chapter 41,

in Heaven in the city in a mansion there were 2 brothers named Ben and Ron. Ben is a catholic priest and Ron was a former satanist, he converted to a christian... Ben was frantically walking through the bedroom as if he was looking for something. Ron was calmly relaxing on his bed.

Ron: "dude you've been wandering through this room for like half an hour. what is wrong?"

Ben: "i can't find my rosary and i want to go to the Temple and pray the rosary but i can't without a rosary and i can't find it."

Ron: "did you check your pocket?"

Ben reached into his pocket and pulled out a rosary.

Ben: "oh... thank you... do you wanna come with me to the Temple?"

Ron: "i already worshiped today."

Ben: "so?... what's the harm of going again?"

Ron: "just go to the Temple already."

Ben: "are you sure you don't want to come?"

Ron: "yes i'm sure..."

Ben: "ok... i'll be back in an hour."

Ben walked out of the room and closed the door, Ben opened the door again and looked at Ron.

Ben: "are you sure you won't come-?"

Ron: "aren't you late already?"

Ben: "you're right...i am late!"

Ben ran down the hallway and out the front door. Ron was still lying on the bed, he starred at the ceiling bored.

Ron: "i'm bored...."

he walks over to a window and looks outside. he walks out of the room and goes out the front door. he walked out of the city and toward the gates of Heaven, he reached the gates and looked through the bars.

Ron: "i wonder what's down there."

he slowly began to open the gates and he walked into hell.

Ron: "wow it's hot down here."

Ron saw a demon lying on the ground. the demon had one ripped up wing and wounds all over his body, he was breathing heavily, he slowly looked up at Ron.

demon: "... help me..."

Ron: "... well i can't leave you here to die like this."

Ron walked over to the demon and helps him stand up, Ron is holding him up as they walk into Heaven, they are walking past the river of life.

demon: "...water... water... i need water..."

Ron walks the demon over to the river, the demon crouches down in front of the river and drinks a lot of water. the demon looks at Ron.

demon: "thank you human."

Ron: "my name is Ron... and who are you?"

demon: "my name is Beelzebub."

Ron: "aren't you a really high ranking demon?"

Beelzebub: "well i was..."

Ron: "what happen to you?"

Beelzebub: "lucifer tortured me."

Ron: "why?"

Beelzebub: "for trying to make myself leader of all demons."

Ron: "oh... well what will you do now?"

Beelzebub: "i can't go back to hell... may i stay with you in Heaven?"

Ron: "yes... although i can't exactly show you to Jesus."

Beelzebub: "you're right, since i'm a high ranking demon who knows what'll happen if he finds me."

Ron: "come on i'll take you to my mansion."

Ron helped Beelzebub stand up and walked towards the city and they walked in the front door of the mansion.

Ron: "my younger brother lives with me here... i'll have to find a way to explain you to him."

Beelzebub: "where's your brother now?"

Ron: "he's at the Temple praying..."

Ron takes Beelzebub into the bedroom and helps him lay dwn on the couch.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

It'll be interesting to see his reaction...

Chapter 41,

Ben was walking through the city,

Ben: "i can't believe i messed up the prayers of the rosary... i have never been so embarrassed... oh well, i wonder what Ron is doing."

Ben walked in the front door of the mansion and into the bedroom he stopped in the doorway and saw Beelzebub laying on the couch.

Ben: "RONALD!!"

Ron came running down the hallway and towards the bedroom, he didn't see Ben in the doorway and he ran into him knocking him down.

Ron: "Ben i'm sorry."

Ron helped Ben to his feet. Ben looked at Beelzebub and then to Ron.

Ben: "Ronald can you explain to me why there is a demon laying on our couch!?"

Ron: "yes i can explain... well i went to hell and i found him there all wounded and injured and so i brought him here."

Ben: "you went to hell!... what are you trying to get killed?"

Ron: "no... but the point is that Beelzebub is wounded and he needs help."

Ben: "why not take him to Jesus. i'm sure the Master can help him."

Beelzebub: "no... i'm afraid he might send me to hell..."

Ron: "he's right Ben... we have to keep him away from the Master for a while..."

Ben: "ok so how is Beelzebub going to get the medical attention he needs?"

Ron: "i'll go and get another doctor... you stay here and keep Beelzebub comfortable."

Ben: "but wouldn't it be a good idea if i go and you stay here-"

Ron ignores him and walks out of the mansion.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

This is getting interesting...

yes it sure is.


Chapter 42,

Ben sat down on a smaller couch and looked at Beelzebub

Ben: "so... what happen to you? why are yo wounded?"

Beelzebub: "lucifer tortured me..."

Ben: "why?"

Beelzebub: "i tried to overthrow him."

Ben: "why? were you tiered of living?"

Beelzebub: "i thought i could be a better leader than lucifer."

Ben: "pride got the better of you right?"

Beelzebub: "yeah... i guess..."

Ben: "well if you have pride in Heaven Jesus will send you to hell."

Beelzebub: "pride is what sent me to hell in the first place... i don't intend to have anymore pride..."

Ben: "well good..."

Beelzebub: "can you teach me to be humble?"

Ben: "well... yes i can do that... i'll teach you how tomorrow..."

Beelzebub: "thank you..."

suddenly Ron walks through the door accompanied by a man with a medcine bag.

Ron: "he's right in here doctor."

the doctor looks at Beelzebub and then at Ron.

doctor: "there is a wounded demon on your couch."

Ron: "yeah..."

doctor: "you told me that your brother fell down the stairs again..."

Ben got off the couch and walked over to Ron.

Ben: "you told him i fell down the stairs?"

Ron: "well i couldn't tell him we have a wounded demon on our couch."

Ben: "yes you could have!"

doctor: "listen i do not work with demons..."

Ben: "please if you could just try to ease his pain a bit... look at him, he's got wounds all over his body, he's missing a wing, he may have an infection and he may die from it."

doctor: "alright i'll see what i can do..."

he walked over to Beelzebub and looked at him.

doctor: "you've got some internal damage."

Beelzebub: "some?... worms burrowed through my body and chewed on me."

doctor: "can you sit up so i can take a look at what happen to your wing?"

Beelzebub slowly sat up. the doctor looked at his back and saw the wounds, it was getting infected.

doctor: "what happen to your back?"

Beelzebub: "i got cut with a knife and i got acid poured onto my back."

doctor: "well your wing isn't supposed to bend like that..."

he took hold of the wing to see it better but Beelzebub jerks his wing away.

doctor: "does it hurt when i touch it?"

Beelzebub: "well it doesn't feel good!"

the doctor opens up his medicine bag and pulls out a vile.

doctor: "drink this, it will cure you of all of your injuries... the only thing it can't do is regenerate your severed wing."

the doctor gives Beelzebub the vile. he drinks it and his body heals, all the wound are healed and Beelzebub's broken wing was fixed. the doctor walks up to Ben and Ron.

doctor: "if something goes wrong call me..."

Ben: "alright thank you, can you do us a favor and not mention this to Jesus?"

doctor: "sure... have a nice night..."

the doctor walks out of the mansion. Ben and Ron walk over to Beelzebub.

Ron: "are you alright?"

Beelzebub: "i feel great... although we know that Jesus is going to find out about this sooner or later."

Ben: "you're right... but let's not worry about this now... let's get some rest..."

Ben and Ron walked over to their beds, laid down and fell asleep, Beelzebub fell asleep on the couch.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

i doubt jesus is going to be angry, i remember one of the things jesus said: love your enemy as you love your friends(or something like that, i cant remember)

no i think he said "love your enemies as yourself."

Love ur enemys as urslef

One of the most hypocritical statements ever...

Anyway, it will be interesting to see how Jesus will react.

Posters trying to invoke unnecessary arguments should be smoked. This is a story thread, not an argument thread.

Can't I comment on it?

Yeah, you can... I'm not referring to you though on my previous post.

i didnt try to make an argument at all, will be fun to see how jesus reacts

Chapter 43,

in the morning Ben was the first to wake up, he got out of bed and walked over to Ron who was still fast asleep. Ben tapped him on the shoulder.

Ben: "Ron... Ron wake up..."

Ron opened his eyes.

Ben: "hey good morning..."

Ron: "the sun isn't even up yet... let me sleep..."

Ben: "alright but in 5 minutes we leave to go to the Temple..."

Ben walked over to the couch where Beelzebub was sleeping. Beelzebub woke up.

Ben: "hey how are you feeling?"

Beelzebub: "better than i did when i first came here."

Ben: "do you want me to teach you how to be humble?"

Beelzebub: "yes... tell me the first step."

Ben: "well the first step is to know that God is greater than anyone."

Beelzebub: "i already know that he's more powerful than anyone... tell me more."

Ben: "the second step is to surrender yourself to God's power."

Beelzebub: ""how do i do that?"

Ben: "you worship him and you have no pride in you."

Beelzebub: "it'll be difficult to do that after all the years i rebelled."

Ben: "well don't worry. i'll help you... but later because i have to get to the Temple now."

Ben went to Ron.

Ben: "come on Ron you slept long enough...let's go."

Ron got out of bed.

Ron: "i'll come if you stop nagging me."

Ben and Ron walked out of the mansion and into the Temple. they walked up to Jesus.

Jesus: "good morning..."

Ben: "good morning Master... we are here to worship you..."

Jesus: "i know... and i hope you won't mess up the prayers when you pray this time..."

Ben: "i hope i won't either..."

Ron: "wait... you messed up your prayers?"

Ben: "yeah..."

Ron: "how?"

Ben: "i said a hail Mary when i was supposed to say the Our Father..."

Ron: "oh well that's a common mistake..."

Ben: "well we are going to pray the rosary now..."

Ron: "wait that won't work..."

Ben: "why not?"

Ron: "i forgot my rosary..."

Ben: "well don't worry i have a spare."

Ben pulls a rosary out of his pocket and gives it to Ron and then he pulls another rosary out. they both kneel in front of Jesus and pray... a few minutes later they finish...

Jesus: "i have a question for you both..."

Ben: "yes Master?"

Jesus: "are you hiding something from me?"

Ron: "no no we're not... why do you ask?"

Jesus: "just asking... do you guys have somebody else living with you?"

Ron: "...no..."

Jesus: "maybe your brother will provide a different answer... Benedict is there someone else in your mansion?"

Ben: "yes Master there is. Ron brought home a demon and he's been hiding it from you for fear of you sending it to hell."

Ron looked at Ben.

Ben: "i'm sorry Ronald but i can't lie to the Master and plus he already knew about Beelzebub..."

Jesus: "come on let's go and see this demon..."

Ben and Ron followed Jesus out of the Temple and through the city. Ben and Ron were behind Jesus.


next chapter coming today or tomorrow.

im wondering what jesus is going to do, althoug i doubt he sends him back to hell

Chapter 44,

Ron walks beside Jesus.

Ron: "Master may i ask a question?"

Jesus: "of course. what is it?"

Ron: "you won't send Beelzebub to hell will you?"

Jesus: "no i won't... and i know that's been troubling you. don't worry..."

they got to the mansion, Jesus walks inside the bedroom and sees Beelzebub on the couch.

Jesus: "Beelzebub."

Beelzebub looks over and sees Jesus. Beelzebub gets off the couch and bows down in front of Jesus.

Beelzebub: "please take me back... i'm sorry for everything i've done... please forgive me."

Jesus: "of course i forgive you."

Beelzebub: "thank you, you truly are merciful and good."

Jesus touched the place where Beelzebub's wing had been and Beelzebub's wing grew back.

Beelzebub: "thank you Master thank you..."


In hell,

lucifer was sitting on his throne.

lucifer: "let me see what that tyrant is up to..."

he picked up the crystal ball and looked into it. an image was forming and lucifer saw Beelzebub bowing down before Jesus.

lucifer: "WHY THAT SON OF A B****! HOW DARE HE!!?"

lucifer roars in anger and throws the crystal ball to the ground. he walks to the door and opens it, he sees a demon standing down the hall.

lucifer: "demon!"

the demon looks at lucifer.

demon: "yes master?"

lucifer: "go and tell everyone to prepare for battle!"

the demon walks off. lucifer goes back into his room., he picks up the crystal ball. an image of all of Heaven appears.

lucifer: "they will all pay!"


next chapter coming tomorrow.

lucifer isnt exactly effective at keeping the demons loyal

no he is not.

Chapter 45,

lucifer walks out of his lair to see all the demons standing in front of the lair. the demons were ready for battle.

lucifer: "today is the day where we will crush our enemies and the traitors that joined them! we will have our revenge!"

the demon army cheered.

lucifer: "forward demons!!"

the demon army marched towards Heaven. they broke through the gates and stormed into Heaven with weapons drawn... the angel army was flying towards the demons, the demons flew into the air towards the angels. the two armies collided and fought. lucifer flew towards the Temple, some angels tried to attack him. lucifer killed some of them with his sword and he wounded the rest. some angels were able to stab him but that didn't slow him down. lucifer killed the rest of the angels who were trying to attack him and he continued to fly to the Temple. lucifer broke down the doors to the Temple. a ran inside, he saw Angie cowering in a corner of the Temple. lucifer went to her and grabbed her by the throat and put his sword towards her.

lucifer: "where is your Master!!?"

Angie: "i... i don't know..."

lucifer: "yes you do! WHERE IS HE!!?"

Vepar suddenly came up behind lucifer and stabbed him in the back with his sword. lucifer released Angie. Vepar takes his sword out of lucifer's back. lucifer turns around.

lucifer: "you little traitor!! this time you die!!"

lucifer knocks Vepar's sword out of his hand and pins him to the ground with one hand. lucifer points the tip of his sword at Vepar's neck. suddenly Appoloin comes up behind lucifer and stabs him in the back with his sword. lucifer let go of Vepar and hit Appoloin with the side of his sword. Appoloin got knocked back and hit a wall. Vepar got up and grabbed his sword and tried to stab lucifer, lucifer stabbed Vepar in the side, Vepar fell to the ground. then Asmoday, Deumos and Bael attacked lucifer with their swords, they managed to wound him, but lucifer got the upper hand and disarmed them all and then he stabbed them and they fell to the ground,

lucifer: "Jesus!... where are you!?"

there was no answer.

lucifer: "show yourself!!"

lucifer went towards Angie and grabbed her.he put his sword to her neck.

lucifer: "Jesus show yourself or your angel dies!!"

Jesus' voice: "must you always resort to violence? why don't you just put her down?"

lucifer: "show yourself first!"

Jesus appears in front of lucifer.

Jesus: "now put her down."

lucifer drops Angie to the ground. Angie runs to Jesus and hides behind him. lucifer looks at Jesus.

lucifer: "prepare to die!"

lucifer raised his sword. then Jesus looked right into lucifer's eyes. lucifer drops his sword and collapsed to the ground. chains came all around lucifer's body.


next chapter coming today.

seems liek lucifer tried to do more than it was possible

yeah,

Chapter 46,

everyone was healed and all the angels were brought back to life. the demons were all chained up and brought to the Temple. every angel and human were in the Temple looking at all the demons who were chained up before Jesus. lucifer was chained up directly in front of Jesus.

Jesus: "well lucy look where your rebellions ways lead you."

lucifer: "what are you going to do?"

Jesus: "you know where you're heading."

the ground opened up and there was a large pit of fire at the bottom.

lucifer: "you-... you're not going to put me in there.... are you?"

Jesus: "you know i am..."

lucifer: "please... forgive me.... i didn't mean to do the things i did."

Jesus: "do you think i'd believe you after you threatened to kill my children?"

lucifer: "...please forgive me.... i'm sorry."

Jesus: "you've ruined countless lives... you caused sin... this is what you deserve."

lucifer: "no... NO... PLEASE HAVE MERCY!"

lucifer bowed down before Jesus.

Jesus: "not all the grovelling in the world can help you now... throw them in."

angels dragged demons towards the pit and threw them all in, the demons fell into the pit of fire, they screamed for mercy but the flames got bigger and covered their whole bodies, all lucifer could see was the flames and he heard the screams of the demons, he looked at Jesus with tears in his eyes.

lucifer: "PLEASE DON"T THROW ME IN!.... forgive me!!.... PLEASE!!"

Jesus: "it's too late for forgiveness now... throw him in."

Angel stepped forward and grabbed lucifer and dragged him towards the pit. lucifer cries out for mercy but Angelo throws him in the pit. lucifer falls into the fire. he screams and begs for mercy but the flames cover his entire body. the ground closes up, lucifer and the demons were left in darkness and fire...


In Heaven,

everyone left the Temple,

Jesus: "Vepar, i've got something to show you..."

there was a big flash of light and two demons appeared.

Jesus: "Vepar this is Lilith and Aym... your parents."

Vepar: "mom?... dad?"

Lilith: "son?"

Aym: "Lilith, it is our son!"

all three demons embraced.

Lilith and Aym looked at Jesus.

Lilith: "thank you Master."

Aym: "thank you for you mercy."


epilogue:

Lilith and Aym kept their demon form. Vepar was very happy to finally see his perants. Lilith and Aym got used to living in Heaven and they were very happy to be with their son again. Vepar and Angie were still the best of friends. all the demons that have repented were all living good lives in Heaven. everyone lived happily ever after...

THE END.

Everyone?

well not everyone... i meant everyone in Heaven...