darkSpyro

Thank you!

WOW!! FOUR pages! cool!

Oh, ya! First time that happend on one of my story topics. Hehehe!

Good ones.

Samius yes someone important is going to die, but not ight now he might get hurt in the next chapter that leads on to it, but you can't have the clymax(i know spelling) right at the beggining. I'm trying to make this story long so the clymax has to be around the middle to the end, and if you don't think so (i wish you could) just ask my teacher. You can't have the exciting bit right at the beggining you have to build up to it. Is that ok with you?

I agree and I learned about this last year in school, so I totally know what she is talking about! and I think "clymax"is spelled climax I THINK.

omg is sparx gona die?

Im not telling! You have to wait and see.

Okay. I will wait. *sits and waits*

Chapter16

Keira slept good that night, no dreams no nothing. But she felt differnt, stronger, like in her dreams. She ran to the training grounds ware Spyro and Terrdor was waiting.
"It's about time, i can't wait to see how strong it is!" Spyro said, in exsitemnt.
"Spyro, don't get your hopes to high. She might of just been lucky the last time." Terrador said, then nodded at Keira. She didn't say a word, just attacked. The ground shook, bits of rock and soil came flying at Keira but stoped a foot away, she smiled, grunted, and noded then shot them all at the dummies. Spyro and Terrador was amazed they never seen anything like it. Terrador couldn't even master the suff she was doing. Then she used fury, Spyro hid behind a rock, Terrador stood ware he was but then saw the danger...he was too late, the fury got him. It knocked him back, the wounds made a puttle of blood. Keira smiled, Spyro saw a little of it but wasn't sure if he really seen one. The Keira snaped out of it, and relized what she has done.
"Terrador!" Spyro yelled running towards him. Keira also ran, she couldn't talk she was to frightend, that what she had feared most has happend.
"Go get help! He's still breathing!" Spyro yelled.

ooo. Poor Terrador. D: More please.

Soon, i might have another today.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! TERRADOR!!!!!! AWESOME!!!

Yay! D: But what about Terrador?! Oh noez.

Thanks!

No problem.

HOORAY!!

What?

New chapter! YAY!

I will soon, ok?

Yup. [more letters]

I'll start typing in half an hour.

M'kay. I may have logged off then though. D:

Oh then i'll start soon.

Thankies!

okay, soon another chapter, good for me.

Chapter17

Keira was shocked she couldn't move. Then a voice came into her head,the ruby dragon has striked! Are you still sure your not what you are destined too?It was her dad voice.
"Go get help! Now! We can save him if you go!" Spyro yelled at her.
Keira then ran looking for any one that could help. The bad thought sticked in her head,what if she wasn't what she thought she was? She took flight hopeing that would be faster. Volteer saw the young dragon fly right past his face, she then landed.
"Whats for thr rush?" Volteer asked.
"Terredor!" Keira gasped for air "He..he just come!" She started to run for the training grounds, Volteer ran after her. When they got thare Volteer gasped of the horrid sight, the blood puddle got bigger, it coverd Spyro's paws.
"Ok, you two stay here and wait for Cyril! I will get some villagers to bring red crystles!" Volteer yelled, then took flight, Keira walked into the puddle ware Spyro was.
"When he said your fury was strong....I didn't know it would kill him." Spyro said, his face wet from tears.
"Don't say that! He's not dead yet, he may live!" Keira yelled a tear went down her cheak. The word 'may' ecohed in her head.

KEIRA! HOW COULD YOU!!?? That will be Spyro's reaction.

How do you know?

I don't It is just a pretty high Hypothesis.

Ya, i geuss.

yeah, I like to guess things a lot!

Terrador!!

I mean, why didn't he duck or use Earth Sphere or something!? 'Cause he IS Terrador!!!! So that does not compute for me...

Ya, but i did that becuase he's a togh guy and in Cyril didn't get hurt from her fury befor, so he saw no danger...Untill it was too late.

oh, DUMB TERRADOR! sometimes I fell like that about him. it is kinda sad.

Ya, i geuss so.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT TERRADOR!! HE'S MY FAVE GUARDIAN!!! HOW COULD YOU KEIRA!?? YOU ARE THE RUBY DRAGON!! YOUR EEEEEEEEEEEVIIIIILL!!! I HATE YOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!! NOOO NOT TERRADOR¬!!!! *tries to kill keira*

*SHE KILLS YOU* Bad Keira! Got o your room! *Keira walks to her room* Sorry about that...why am i talking to a dead body?

Chapter18

The day pasted, Terrador was still alive....but not in good shape. He couldn't move, speak, grunt for that matter, all he did was lay thare scarly breathing. The bleeading has stoped, but the wounds were deep. Keira stayed in her chamber for the day, to ashamed to come out, she thought about her dreams and how they might be true. Nobody came to see her, and she never came out to see them. She felt so guilty for what she has done, not knowing if she should leave right now. As the day pasted she fell asleep. "There is nothing that will help you young one. I'm....i'm terible sorry. I wish i could help, only if i could." The chronical siad, a tear went down his cheak.
"But i didn't mean too. I dont know wh..." Keira was cut off by the chronical.
"I know you didn't.... but thats how it starts." He shook his head, then faded away. Keira woke up, laying there tears went down her cheaks, she regreted it so much. What would happen if she strikes again? If so, who would it be? She walked around her chamber then saw something she didn't see befor, there was a hidden door at the far coner of the room. She walked up to it, and pushed hard it opend and there lay a book.

oh brother, a cursed book maybe..?

*shrugs*

Awsome.

NO idea what this "book" is, not me anyway!

im not dead i am immortal!! bad keira!!! *walks to keira's room and knocks her door* mawhahahahahhaha its me im alive!!!! *kills keira*

Quote: ravenouscynder

im not dead i am immortal!! bad keira!!! *walks to keira's room and knocks her door* mawhahahahahhaha its me im alive!!!! *kills keira*

If you kill her we no longer have a topic do we?

Dont kill keira!

oh fine i wont but if she attacks me its go time baby!

Ok...