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Blaze: Fire Dawn [CLOSED]
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#151 Posted: 23:10:35 09/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.smilie I like you're avatar as well. smilie
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When Blaze awoke, he found himself in a small cave, and Sandstorm was there too. "Sandstorm. . .?" Blaze mumbled. Sandstorm whipped her head around too face Blaze. "Blaze! You're awake! Are you alright?" Sandstorm asked, quickly rushing over to him. Ow, my head feels as if it's on fire.
Blaze moaned to himself. "No, I've got the biggest headache. Sandstorm, where am I? Why are you here?" Blaze asked, shifting himself up.
Sandstorm sighed, and handed Blaze some orange berries. "Here, eat these. They'll stop you're headache." Sandstorm said. Blaze slowly picked up the berries, and started to slowly eat them. "You see, I left SunClan too go find you, and so I waited outside ShadowClan terrioty. I waited for many weeks, almost a month. I thought I should go back to SunClan, but then you. . ." Sandstorm stopped and shivered. Blaze was puzzled.
"Then I what?" Blaze asked quietly. Sandstorm glared at Blaze.
"You don't remember anything?" Blaze shook his head. Remember what? Blaze asked himself. I all remeber is killing. . .Blaze gulped . . .Razorclaw and then flying away. Sandstorm quickly explained how Blaze had tried to kill her, but then he stopped and fainted. Sandstorm then managed to drag him into this cave, and look after him.
Blaze was shocked and ashamined. "I. . .I'm a monster!" Blaze cried.
Sandstorm put her paw over Blaze's sholder. "It's alright, you didn't mean too," Sandstorm said. Blaze sighed. It's my power. . .Dawncloud didn't tell me how to control it, "Here, you must be hungry." Sandstorm said, handing Blaze a carrot. Blaze turned away from the carrot. Sandstorm was puzzled. "I thought you like carrots?" Sandstorm asked. Blaze sighed and shook his head. "Not any more, I like. . ." Blaze gulped. ". . .Blood and meat now." Sandstorm gasped, and backed away. No! Please don't hate me! Blaze screamed inside.
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#152 Posted: 03:52:38 10/06/2009
Wow, your on you're 4th page now.

Please write more!
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#153 Posted: 14:28:21 10/06/2009
What Polar said.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#154 Posted: 14:58:17 10/06/2009
PC!!!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#155 Posted: 02:05:35 11/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Sandstorm backed away from him. "That's why you. . .you tried to kill me." Sandstorm muttered, loud enough for Blaze to hear. "Sandstorm, it's not what you think," Blaze said, slowly padding towards her. "No! Now you really are like one of those flithy ShadowClan dragons! I wish I never came for you!" Sandstorm hissed. No! Please, Sandstorm!
"Sandstorm, I love you!" Blaze sobbed. Sandstorm growled, and arched her back. "I don't love you anymore! Now I know what you're true nature is, and I'll never forget it! Now, get out of my way, hybrid!" Sandstorm spat, as she pelted out of the cave. Blaze felt icy claws stab his heart when Sandstrom had said the word, 'hybrid'. "Sandstorm! No!" Blaze yelled, as he tried to run after her. But it was too late, Sandstorm had already flown away. Blaze collasped onto the ground, and started to quietly sob. Sandstorm was my only best friend. . .and I loved her. Now she's gone forever, A crack of thunder startled Blaze, as a rain drop fell on his snout. It was soon followed by another crack of thunder, as rain poured down onto the forest. Blaze gasped. No! Sandstorm is out there! SunClan dragons can't fly when the sun is blocked out! I have to save her! Blaze ignored the pouring rain as he spread his wings, and started to run the way Sandstorm had when she had taken off. Blaze tried to pick up her scent, but the rain washed it away. Still, Blaze didn't care as he flapped his wings and flew into the stormy sky. I promise Sandstorm, I'll save you.
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Edited 2 times - Last edited at 02:08:45 11/06/2009 by Skyqueen
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#156 Posted: 02:56:07 11/06/2009
smilie please write more
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#157 Posted: 08:39:08 11/06/2009
Wright more! smilie
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Please read my story!
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#158 Posted: 15:00:39 11/06/2009
PC!!!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#159 Posted: 07:15:15 12/06/2009
I just figured out something. It is not "Please wright more", it is "Please type more" smilie

TM!!!
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The Doom Song
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Please read my story!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#160 Posted: 02:40:11 13/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Yes, you're quiet right Cindy. (is it alright if I call you Cindy?)
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Lightning clashed, thunder roared as the rain batted Blaze's wings about in the storm. I have to keep on going, for Sandstorm's sake! But Blaze wasn't sure how long he could keep this up. Suddenly, a strike of lightning came thundering down from the clouds. "Ahh!" Blaze yelped as he barrel-rolled out of the way. That was close. . . Blaze gulped as he flew on.
The wind howled in Blaze's ears, pushing him to go back. 'Go back, Sandstorm is dead. . .you'll only end up killing yourself. . .' The wind hissed. Icy claws stabbed Blaze's spine. But. . .but Sandstorm can't be dead! She just can't! 'Oh, yes she is. Look down and you'll see.'
Blaze didn't know wheather his mind was playing tricks on him, or if the wind was right. But he looked down anyway.
Blaze gasped, and almost stopped flapping his wings. The wind was right. Sandstorm was dead. Down, on the wet damp earth, lay Sandstorm's frail body. "Nooooo!!" Blaze cried, as he swopped down towards Sandstorm's body. Blaze landed next to her, and looked over her body.
"Sandstorm, please, I didn't mean for any of this. I. . .I love you. Please! Just don't be dead!" Blaze sobbed. Blaze noticed that Sandstorm's left wing was shreded. Maybe a strike of lightning hit her. . . Blaze shook away the thought. Blaze pressed his muzzle against her chest, trying to see if there was a pluse. And sure enough, there was a very faint pluse. At least she's not dead. . .but I have to get her out of the rain, or else she will die! Blaze gently picked Sandstorm up by the scruff, and carefully dragged her into a small den. Just enough room for the two of them. Blaze gently laid Sandstorm on the den floor, and licked her face. "No matter what Sandstorm, I will always love you." Blaze whispered.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#161 Posted: 02:54:23 13/06/2009
smilie at least Sandstorm isn't dead. plz WM!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#162 Posted: 03:13:48 13/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, she lives. And Blaze knows how to hunt now, as well.
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Four days had passed, and Sandstorm still hadn't woke up. Blaze would only leave Sandstorm's side to hunt, or quench his thrist. Blaze was getting more worried as each day crept past. Mostly because Sandstorm wasn't waking up, and because sometimes, when he went out hunting, he always felt as if something was watching him. . .just waiting for the time too strike.

That night, Blaze dreamed.

"Blaze! Help me!" Sandstom cried. (has The Lion King cliff scene music) Blaze whipped his head around to see Sandstorm, hanging on a cliff for dear life. "Help me!" Sandstorm yelped, as her claws started to slip.
"Sandstorm! No!" Blaze yelled, as he grabbed onto Sandstorm's paw, and tried to pull her up. Suddenly, Blaze felt sharp thorn-like claws stab his paw, that was holding onto the cliff. Blaze whipped his head around, to face Razorclaw. "Razorclaw!" Blaze gasped. Razorclaw had his claws jabbed tightly into Blaze's paw. Blaze yowled in pain. Razorclaw laughed, that sent an icy shiver down his spine. Blaze's grasp suddenly slipped away from Sandstorm's paw, as she started to slip down.
"Blaze. . .help me!" Sandstorm cried, as her claws slipped off the rock, and she started to fall. "Nooo!" Blaze roared, trying to grab Sandstorm.
Sandstorm tried to flap her wings, but she was falling too fast.
Blaze whipped his head back round to his grandfather. Razorclaw smiled.
"Now, for you." Razorclaw growled as he let go off Blaze.
"NOOOO!!" Blaze yelled as he fell to his death with Sandstorm.
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#163 Posted: 03:29:46 13/06/2009
Thank goodness Sandstorm is OK!

The Lion King cliff scene. Such a classic.

Please write more!
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#164 Posted: 03:35:38 13/06/2009
WM!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#165 Posted: 04:56:55 14/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze woke up in the middle of the night. He was panting, and sweating all over. Blaze whipped his head around to Sandstorm, she was still asleep. Blaze sighed. It was just a bad dream. . .
Blaze tucked his paws under his tail, and fell asleep.

"Blaze! Help me!" Blaze jolted awake, he turned his head towards where Sandstorm slept. She was gone. Blaze started to panic. "Sandstorm! Where are you?" Blaze yelled into the night, his white and red scales glowed in the moonlight. SunClan dragons can't see in the dark! Blaze realized with a icy shiver. Blaze raced out into the night, calling Sandstorm's name over and over again. "Blaze! Help!!" Sandstorm shreiked. I'm coming, Sandstorm! Blaze opened his mouth to see if he could pick up Sandstorm's scent.
Yes, I can smell Sandstorm! Then Blaze smelt something that made his blood turn to ice. Torax! Blaze quickly followed Sandstorm and the Torax's scent. It soon lead Blaze to a wide clearing. And sure enough, a hungry Torax was about to kill Sandstorm. "Blaze you came!" Sandstorm gasped with relief once she saw him. The Torax shreiked with raged, and turned its blood cold stare at Blaze. Blaze was suddenly frozen stiff too the ground, he couldn't move his limbs or head. . . .A Torax's gaze can kill!. . .Blaze realized as his blood turned too ice.
"Blaze! Noo!" Sandstorm yelped. No. . .Oh, Sandstorm, is this the end?
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#166 Posted: 09:34:36 14/06/2009
Quote: Skyqueen
Yes, you're quiet right Cindy. (is it alright if I call you Cindy?)
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Lightning clashed, thunder roared as the rain batted Blaze's wings about in the storm. I have to keep on going, for Sandstorm's sake! But Blaze wasn't sure how long he could keep this up. Suddenly, a strike of lightning came thundering down from the clouds. "Ahh!" Blaze yelped as he barrel-rolled out of the way. That was close. . . Blaze gulped as he flew on.
The wind howled in Blaze's ears, pushing him to go back. 'Go back, Sandstorm is dead. . .you'll only end up killing yourself. . .' The wind hissed. Icy claws stabbed Blaze's spine. But. . .but Sandstorm can't be dead! She just can't! 'Oh, yes she is. Look down and you'll see.'
Blaze didn't know wheather his mind was playing tricks on him, or if the wind was right. But he looked down anyway.
Blaze gasped, and almost stopped flapping his wings. The wind was right. Sandstorm was dead. Down, on the wet damp earth, lay Sandstorm's frail body. "Nooooo!!" Blaze cried, as he swopped down towards Sandstorm's body. Blaze landed next to her, and looked over her body.
"Sandstorm, please, I didn't mean for any of this. I. . .I love you. Please! Just don't be dead!" Blaze sobbed. Blaze noticed that Sandstorm's left wing was shreded. Maybe a strike of lightning hit her. . . Blaze shook away the thought. Blaze pressed his muzzle against her chest, trying to see if there was a pluse. And sure enough, there was a very faint pluse. At least she's not dead. . .but I have to get her out of the rain, or else she will die! Blaze gently picked Sandstorm up by the scruff, and carefully dragged her into a small den. Just enough room for the two of them. Blaze gently laid Sandstorm on the den floor, and licked her face. "No matter what Sandstorm, I will always love you." Blaze whispered.


I don't mind. smilie
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#167 Posted: 00:53:18 15/06/2009
WMM!!!!
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#168 Posted: 06:43:50 15/06/2009
TM!!! :D
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The Doom Song
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Please read my story!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#169 Posted: 05:39:45 16/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Sandstorm shreiked with fright, as the Torax fixed its cold stare at her. Sandstorm soon stopped screaming, and couldn't move her limbs or face.
No. . .! Sandstorm!. . .where is my power? Blaze screamed inside.
Why won't my power come!? Dawncloud, help me! Suddenly, a familar voice hissed in his ear. 'Beleive in yourself, I know you can do it Blaze.' Blaze concitrated as hard as he could, thinking all the horrible bloodthristy thoughts he had when he killed Razorclaw.
"Rahhhh!" Blaze roared, as he went completely dark red, with black blazing eyes, and his horns, wings, belly was jet-black, and he had a dark glow around the outline of his body. Blaze sprang too his paws. The Torax roared, and hissed at Blaze, and held its deathly stare at him. "You can't kill me, I have the power of the Shadow Star and the Silver Star! No-one can stop me!" Blaze snarled, as he leaped onto the shocked Torax, and realsed venom and ice at the same time. The Torax shreiked with terror and pain, and started to turn to ice as venom and ice went through its bloodstream. Sandstorm gasped in horror, as she watched Blaze feast on the Torax blood. "No Blaze! Don't kill it!" Sandstorm cried, scrambling too her paws. "No! Blaze must have blood!" Blaze growled.
The Torax gave one more painful roar, then colasped onto the ground, dead. Blaze had killed the Torax.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 05:41:24 16/06/2009 by Skyqueen
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#170 Posted: 22:59:45 16/06/2009
Wow plz write more!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#171 Posted: 04:53:31 17/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Sandstorm shuffled away from Blaze. Blaze could see the fear and shock that swelled in Sandstorm's eyes. "Blaze. . .you killed the Torax. No other dragon has actually killed a Torax before, exspect the Twolegs. But you also saved my life. . ." Sandstorm's voice trailed off.
Blaze's eyes flashed for blood, he stared at Sandstorm with hungry, bloodthristy eyes. I need dragon blood. . .! Blaze was about to lung towards Sandstorm, when something stopped him. No! What. . .what am I thinking!? I love Sandstorm, she is my friend. . .I. . .
Blaze digged his claws into his face, and tried to stop himself from killing Sandstorm. Sandstorm gasped, and stepped back. "Blaze! What's happening to you!?" Sandstorm yelled with fear. "Rrrruuunnnn! Sssssaaaaavvvvvveeeeee yyyooouuursselllfff!" Blaze roared.
Sandstorm glanced at Blaze for the last time, then spread her wings, and flapped them like mad. Soon, she was gone. Part of Blaze screamed for letting fresh dragon blood escape. But the other part of him was relived, and grateful that he hadn't killed Sandstorm. "Noooooo! IIIII NNNNEEEEEEDDDDDDD BBBBBBBBLLLLLLLOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!" Blaze yelled as he flapped his wings, and followed Sandstorm's fear scent.
"IIII'MMMMM COMING, SSSSSAAAAANNNNNDDDDSSSSSTTTTTOOOOORRRRRMMMMM!!!" Blaze yowled into the sky.
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#172 Posted: 06:08:16 17/06/2009
OMG!smilie FLY SANDSTORM, FLY FOR YOU'RE LIFE!!smilie
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#173 Posted: 14:42:42 17/06/2009
FLYY!!!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#174 Posted: 04:40:29 19/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Sandstorm is in a very bad situation. SunClan dragons can't see or fly in the dark. . .and Twoleg monsters are cars or trucks.
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Blaze grinned to himself. SunClan dragons can't see or fly in dark and Sandstorm has broken wing. . . It didn't take that long after for Blaze to find Sandstorm. Sandstorm couldn't fly that far, mainly because of her shreded wing, and because SunClan dragons can't see or fly in the dark. Sandstorm was whimpering, and was coiled up in a little ball. Blaze laughed. "SSSSAAAANNDDDSSSSSTTTTOOORRRRMMMM WWWIIILLLL BBBEEE MMMMMMMIIINNNNNNEEEEEEEEEE!!!" Blaze yowled, as he landed next to the whimpering Sandstorm. "Blaze. . .how could you. . .?" Sandstorm croaked. Blaze just laughed even louder, then bared his fangs, about to sink his fangs into Sandstorm's flesh. . .
"No. . ." Sandstorm hissed, but she didn't move. Blaze was about to bite her, when there was a sudden pain stabbing itself into Blaze's head.
Blaze yowled in pain, while Sandstorm sat there, releived and puzzled.
"BBBBLLLAAAAAAZZZZZZEEEEE IIISSSS CCCCCHHHHHAAAAAAAANNNNNNNGGGGGGGIIIIINNNGGGG!" Blaze yowled, stabbing his claws into his face. Sandstorm gasped, as Blaze started to turn back to his normal white and red colour, as he colasped onto the ground. Completely knocked out. Sandstorm lifted her head up, her sand-coloured scales shimmered. "Blaze? Are you okay?" Sandstorm asked quietly. No reply. Before Sandstorm could say anything more, she was interupted by the loud roar of a Twoleg monster.
Sandstorm gasped, as she was knocked out cold, too by a Twoleg dart. A giant Twoleg monster appeared, realsing foul unnatural gas. Five young male Twolegs jumped out of the monster, and slowly approached the unconous dragons. . .
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#175 Posted: 05:01:26 19/06/2009
WM!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#176 Posted: 05:17:41 19/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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When Blaze awoke, he was in a strange metallic room, with Twoleg class walls, and floor. Where am I. . .? Blaze growled. My head hurts. . .wait, where's Sandstorm? Blaze peared through the glass, to see that Sandstorm was no-where to be seen. Suddenly, a female Twoleg appeared, and started to push strange buttons on a square screen.
Blaze was puzzled. Blaze suddenly smelt something that turned his blood to ice. This place smells just like the 'Dragon Heaven' back with Jiang and Ogozok! But this place can't be the same place. . .can it?
Blaze shook his head to clear his thoughts. Suddenly, even more Twolegs walked into the room. What are they doing? Blaze didn't need to be answered. Blaze almost fainted when he saw the Twolegs carring Ogozok.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 22:40:31 27/06/2009 by Skyqueen
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#177 Posted: 05:26:18 19/06/2009
OMG BLAZE IS BACK IN DRAGON HEAVEN.
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#178 Posted: 11:04:57 19/06/2009
smilie Please type more! smilie
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The Doom Song
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Please read my story!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#179 Posted: 05:36:13 24/06/2009 | Topic Creator
No, he's not in 'Dragon Heaven', he's in a Dragon Testing Lab, and Ogozok was bought there to have his blood tested.
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Blaze couldn't belevie what he was seeing. But I broke out. . .I flew away. . .how can I be back here! But Blaze soon did belevie what he was seeing, as soon as he saw more Twolegs carry Jiang, Kotshoto, Asmia and even Riko and Talik! The Twolegs put them all in cages excatuly like Blaze's. Blaze's head was spinning. I can't. . .I just can't. . . But Blaze's thoughts were interupted by the loud wailing of Riko and Talik, both of them were seperated from Asmia. Even Asmia was wailing, too.
Ogozok, Jiang and Kotshoto were the only ones beside Blaze that weren't wailing. They all had spotted him, and Ogozok was glaring at Blaze the most. Blaze swallowed hard. Why am I here. . .? Blaze wailed inside.
Suddenly, a giant claw strechted out to Blaze, clearly trying to stab him. Blaze yelped, and shuffled back into a corner.
Why!? Why are you doing this? What have I done to you! Blaze yelled inside, and the giant, unnatural, shiny claw crept closer. Two male Twolegs were controling the claw, and they laughed at how Blaze yelped when the claw tried to stab him. Blaze snarled. So, its just a game, is it? Blaze snarled. Blaze raked his claw over the giant Twoleg claw, it made a loud screeching spound. The male Twolegs jumped back with surprise. The Twoleg claw made weird unnatural fizzy sounds.
A female Twoleg stomped over to the males, and yelled something at them that Blaze couldn't understand. The male Twolegs nodded sadly, and replaced the claw with a new one, but much more larger.
Blaze jumped back, and hissed furriously. I have the power of the Shadow and Silver Star! Blaze hissed even louder. Where is my power? Why won't it come!? But Blaze was too late. The larger Twoleg claw stabbed into Blaze's scales. Blaze yowled in pain.
Its taking my blood away! Blaze thought as panic surged through him.
The Twoleg claw suddenly got out of Blaze's flesh, and retreated.
It took some of my blood. . . Blaze suddenly realized with panic that the Twolegs were also taking blood from the others too.
No! Their trying to kill us!
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#180 Posted: 07:19:58 24/06/2009
OMG! BLAZE!!!smilie
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#181 Posted: 05:20:16 25/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Before Blaze could do anything more, a normal Twoleg hand strechted out too Blaze. No! I'm not going to let them hurt me again! Blaze snarled, and bared his fangs at the Twoleg arm. The Twoleg back away a bit, but them slowly crept closer to him. Where is my power? Dawncloud help me! Blaze screamed inside. Suddenly, Blaze turned into his dark form, and sank his now razor-sharp fangs into the Twolegs arm flesh. The Twoleg shreiked in pain, and tried to shake Blaze off. But Blaze wouldn't let go. Many more Twolegs rushed over to help the young male Twoleg, but it didn't make any difference. Blood! Blaze need blood! Blaze then started to drain the Twolegs blood. The male Twoleg started to go pale and faint, and muttered something Blaze couldn't understand.
Blaze could smell all the Twolegs fear-scent, and even Ogozok and the others were scared.
Blaze digged his fangs deeper into the Twoleg flesh. Then Blaze's fangs hit something hard. Bones! Crack! Blaze easily sank his fangs in deeper, and then snapped the Twolegs bone. The Twoleg yowled in pain, and suddenly realized what Blaze had done. The other Twolegs screamed in panic, and tried to help the male Twoleg. But nothing could stop Blaze.
Blaze then started to suck away on the Twolegs blood again, but this time much more faster. Blaze kill! Kill! Blaze kill! Kill! Soon, the Twoleg was dead. The other Twolegs screamed, with panic. Their fear-scent stronger than ever. Blaze could also hear Riko and Talik wail with fright.
Asmia was wailing too, she wanted her cubs badley, and she was frigtened to death, along with Jiang, Kotshoto and even Ogozok.
Blaze need more. . .BLAZE KILL! Blaze smashed the glass with his tail, and spat ice spikes at the Twolegs.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 05:22:23 25/06/2009 by Skyqueen
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#182 Posted: 01:03:59 26/06/2009
WM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#183 Posted: 05:05:59 26/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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"Nnnnnnnneeeeeeeeedddddd bbbbbbbbllllooooodddddd!!!" Blaze roared at the screaming Twolegs. Some of the Twolegs were frozen, when Blaze had spat ice spikes on them. Four male Twolegs burst out of the door, with shining silver sticks. Blaze laughed at them.
"NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOTTTTTTHHHHHHIIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGGG CCCCCCCCAAAAAANNNNNNN SSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTOOOPPPPP MMMMEEEE!!" Blaze yowled, as the Twolegs shot small, metal darts at Blaze. But the darts just pounced off Blaze's tough scales, nothing could stop him. Bbbbllllooodd! Fffflllleeessshhh! Mmmmeeeaaattt!
Blaze lunged towards one of the four male Twolegs, and gripped his fangs on the Twolegs silver stick. The Twoleg shreiked with surprise, as Blaze easily snapped the stick with his fangs. The four male Twolegs fled, but Blaze wasn't finished yet. "Yyyyyyoooouuuu ttttooookkkk mmmmyyyyy bbbllloooodddd, sssssoooooo IIIII ttttaaaakkkkeeee yyyyyoooouuurrrrssss!!" Blaze snarled, as he leaped ontop of a female Twoleg. The Twoleg screamed, but Blaze had already sank his fangs into her flesh. Bbbblllooooddd, Blaze grinned as he drained the females blood, and started to suck up the meat, and crack the bones. Soon, there was nothing left of the female Twoleg.
Blaze laughed, as the Twolegs were more scared than ever, racing to the door, and running away. Blaze saw Asmia stare at him, eyes wide with fear. Riko and Talik were just as scared as their mother, and Jiang, Kotshoto and even Ogozok looked scared. Blaze smashed the glass cages, and the dragons were free. But before they could say anything, Blaze charged out of the door, and crashed into Sandstorm.
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#184 Posted: 21:35:59 26/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello?
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#185 Posted: 08:26:27 27/06/2009
nice!!!! write more!!
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#186 Posted: 22:39:58 27/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.smilie Have you read everything?
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Blaze scrambled to his paws, to find Sandstorm lying on the ground. Her wing was still shreaded, and there was a metallic collar around her neck. Sandstorm. . .? Sandstorm! Blaze suddenly felt his darkness slowly drain away, and his limbs grow weak and stiff. Blaze shook himself. I must get Sandstorm out of here! But must have BLOOD! Blaze need blood! No, I must help Sandstorm! Blaze fought with himself, one side of him wanting to drain Sandstorm's blood, while the other part wanted to help her and get out of here. Finally, Blaze's good side won.
"Bl. . .Blaze?" Sandstorm croaked as she lifted her head. "It's all right, Sandstorm. I'm going to-" Blaze stopped, and gasped. "W-wha. . .t?" Sandstorm mumbled. Blaze realized with horror what the Twolegs had done to Sandstorm. They had chopped her hind leg off. No! It's all my fault! If I had never of tried to kill her, maybe the Twolegs wouldn't of found us! Ofiously, Sandstorm hadn't realized that one of her hind legs were missing. Kallik and Darkfang will never forgive me for this. Blaze couldn't worry about them right now, he had to get out of here. Blaze gently picked Sandstorm up, and started to run down the hallway.
I have no idea where I'm going, I just need to get out of here! Blaze bumped into many Twolegs along the way, and they all screamed and fled. Blaze finally came to the exit. Finally! Just a little more. . .
Blaze charged out the door, spread out his wings, and flew away from the Twoleg nest.
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#187 Posted: 23:31:42 27/06/2009
OMG!smilie SANDSTORM! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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#188 Posted: 04:52:02 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze flew across the dark, clammy sky. Oh, Dawncloud. What have I done? Why did I get this horrible power? I've turned into a monster! Blaze hung his head in shame. Sandstorm stirred a little, and twitched slightly. Blaze suddenly realized with horror that the dark, black stormy clouds had covered the sun. "I'm so sorry, Sandstorm. I never ment for this." Blaze whispered to her as he glided towards a small cave. Sandstorm muttered a little, some words that he couldn't make out. Blaze carefully landed, and laid Sandstorm gently on the floor, in the warmest part of the cave. "Sandstorm, I never ment to try and hurt you. I am so, so sorry. I don't want to live anymore. I would do anything too heal your broken soul. Because. . ." Blaze whiped a tear away with his tail.
". . .Because I love you, Sandstorm." As if Sandstorm had heard him, she slowly lifted her head up.
"You r. . .really mean. .it?" Sandstorm croaked. Blaze nodded. "Yes, yes, yes, yes. I will love you forever, Sandstorm. But. . .but I'm afraid that I'm to dangerous for me to be around you. I almost killed you. You've already lost a leg because of me. Sandstorm, I can't be with you any longer." Blaze explained, with a pain in his heart. Sandstorm looked thoughtful. "No, Blaze. I want you to stay. It wasn't your fault, it was your powers fault. Please, Blaze. Stay with me." Sandstorm said, with fear in her eyes. No, I'm just to dangerous. Blaze swallowed hard.
"I'm sorry, Sandstorm. We just can't be together anymore. Anyway, we would be breaking the Dragon Code." Sandstorm snarled.
"Who cares about the Dragon Code! We've left our Clans behind, their just in the past." Blaze sighed. "But the real thing is, my power is becoming more and more dangerous by the second. I can't be around you anymore." Blaze explained, sadly. Sandstorm frowned. "Haven't you forgotten the prophecy?" Sandstorm spat. Blaze was puzzled.
The Prophecy. . .? "Remeber, the prophecy about you! The prophecy said that you will be greater than any other dragon, and bring peace to the world!" Sandstorm cried, panting for breath.
Blaze sighed. "Sandstorm, I've killed other dragons. Even a Torax and a Twoleg! I'm sorry Sandstorm, but I have to go." Sandstorm struggled to get to her paws, her broken wing flopping on the ground.
"No, Blaze! You can't just leave me here!" Sandstorm yelped.
"I'm sorry," Blaze said, as tears poured down his face as he flew into the sky.
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#189 Posted: 20:18:35 30/06/2009
WM! I'll be able to write more of my story tomorrow. And... I was kinda already going to use that thing about being too dangerous.... So when I do, don't think I'm copying
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#190 Posted: 05:51:36 01/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Its OK, Firestar. I don't mind.smilie
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It had been two days since Blaze had left Sandstorm. Now he was starting to regret it. I shouldn't of left her there, Sandstorm might be dead by now, because of me! Blaze thought to himself, as he flapped his wings harder. He still hadn't worked out what the prophecy actually ment, but it certainly wouldn't be good. But Sandstorm said I would bring peace to the world. . .but the only thing my power has done is to kill. I don't want this power anymore! But Blaze couldn't change the past.
Blaze had often wondered why his parents had fallen in love in the first place. Even though they were from different Clans. Blaze realized with a jolt that his parents would probaly be thinking by now that he was dead.
Blaze sighed. I should of never of come here, I should of listened to my parents. I'm such a fool. . .and a killer. Blaze swallowed hard, and kept on flying.

After a few hours, Blaze soon got tried and glided down to rest. There was a small puddle near by, so Blaze had a drink while he could.
Was I right to of left Sandstorm? Blaze couldn't help but to ask that question over and over again. And each time he did, he felt more and more sad. Sandstorm was the love of my life, and I just let her go to die. Blaze started to sob, quietly. Blaze shook his head.
What am I doing? I shouldn't be crying! I'm such a whimp. Father would know what to do. Only if he was here. Blaze sighed. He couldn't go back to the Moon Mountains. ShadowClan and SilverClan will shread him to peieces for what he did. And SunClan will be wondering were Sandstorm would be, thanks to him.
Blaze flopped onto the sotf, dry earth and sleep soon came too him.

"Dawncloud, wait!" Blaze yelled into the fog. Blaze sworn he smelt Dawncloud's scent near by, and hear her sweet voice, too.
"Where are you? Please, Dawncloud! Just come out!" Blaze yowled.
"Hello, little one." Blaze sighed with relief as he turned around to find the beautiful she-dragon. "Dawncloud, you have to help me. I almost killed the love of my life, now she's lost a leg thanks to me. What should I do? I can't control my power!" Blaze sobbed. Dawncloud sighed. "Do you even know what the Shadow Star and the Silver Star are?" Dawncloud asked. Blaze shook his head. "The Shadow and Silver Star are rocks that fell from the Poison and Silver Moon. And the power of ShadowClan and SilverClan went with them." Dawncloud explained. "But what about SunClan?" Blaze asked, suddenly curious. "Yes, there is a Star for SunClan. It is called, the Sun Star. The Sun Star too, fell from the real sun and soon became a small star. But all three stars will cloide, and make the Twilight Star. Which will be even more powerful than the Moon themselves." Blaze was still puzzled. "But wait! You still haven't told me about how I can fully control my power!" Blaze cried. But Dawncloud was starting to fade away already. "Do not fear, little one. You will find out soon enough."
"No! Please, tell me now!" Blaze yelled. "Blaze, listen to me." Dawncloud said, in a voice Blaze could not reconize. "Your mother, Crystal, is my daughter. The only reason that I am helping you is because you are my grandson. Now, wake up." Then, Dawncloud vainshed.
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#191 Posted: 07:16:20 01/07/2009
Poor Blaze.smilie I feel so sorry for him. Please write more!
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#192 Posted: 17:28:32 01/07/2009
WM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#193 Posted: 05:55:39 03/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Wow. Nice avatar, Firestar! In case your wondering, Kai has his wings now, just to let you guys now.
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Blaze awoke with a jolt. Dawn was just creeping through the trees, as Blaze stumbled to his paws. No wonder that Dawncloud is my grandmother, she looks so much like Crystal- er, I mean Mother.
He breathed in the fresh, salty air. What? Salt? There isn't sea here!
Blaze thought as he followed the salty scent, which soon lead Blaze to a small, white sand-coloured beach. Blaze had never been to a beach before. He wasn't even sure that any dragon had ever set paw onto a beach.
But now he had. Blaze reached one paw onto the soft, white sand. He slowly then padded along the sandy shore. This place is beautiful. Blaze thought as he watched the waves crash onto the shore.
'BBBbbbbllllaaazzzeee.' "What? Who's there?" Blaze asked, suddenly aware that someone was stalking him.
'BBBBbbbllllaaaazzzeeeeee.' Now he was really scared. No! I shouldn't be scared. I'm the most powerful dragon that has ever exsited. 'BBBbbblllaaaaazzzzeee, cccoooommmmeee tttoooo ttthhheee ssseeeaaa.' Blaze had sworn that he had saw a large, fish-like tail crash over the waves. Now he knew. It, or whatever it was wanted Blaze to come to the water. But why? Why me? But Blaze knew he had to go, this thing knew his name. But how? He would have to find out. Blaze gulped, tasting the salty air, and started to pad towards the green, meerky sea.
'BBBbbbbllllllaaaaaazzzzzzeeeeee, ccccooooommmmmeeeee cccllloooosssseeeer.' He then started to trot, quickly towards the roaring waves. Blaze soon reached the sea. The clear, green-blue water trickled between his claws. Nothing. "Hello? I'm here. What do you want?" Blaze called out to the crashing water. This is stupid! What am I doing here, anyway? This is just a waste of time. Just about when Blaze was about to leave, something hissed into his ear.
"Don't go now, I'm here." Blaze slowly turned his head around to face the most beautiful, and most terrifying thing he had ever seen. It was a sea serpent. Blaze had heard of this creatures. His father once said he had a dream about one once, she was called Seivera. But Shadowclaw never dreamed of the beautiful sea serpent again.
Blaze gulped. "W-w-who are y-you? And w-what d-do you want?" Blaze mumbled. The serpent laughed. "I don't want anything, little one. I came to warn you." Warn me? Of what?
"My name is Blaze, if you d-don't m-mind." Blaze stammered. The sea serpent blinked at him, her turquiose eyes seemed to be looking right through him. "I have heard so much about you, dear Blaze. The dragon with the power of the stars. I see. My name, is Seivera."
Seivera! But that's the same serpent Father dreamed of!
"S-Seivera?" The serpent nodded. "I met your father once. Shadowclaw, yes. That was his name. And now I have met you, Shadowclaw's son."
"What is it you wanted to warn me about?" Blaze asked.
Seivera took a deep breath, and stared at Blaze, her dolphin-like tail moving from side-to-side. "Blaze, your friend is in great danger. She is too weak to take care of herself. She is very close to death. You must hurry, little one. If you wish to save your friend." Seivera said, suddenly very serious. How does she know about Sandstorm? It doesn't matter. What does matter that Sandstorm is in great danger, and that I need to save her! Blaze dipped his head. "Thank-you, so much, Seivera. I'll go find her straight away," Blaze said, egaring to go.
Seivera's eyes narrowed. "No, you must eat first." No! I don't have time! As if Seivera read Blaze's thoughts, she said;
"You will have pleanty of time, if you eat this. It will give you enough strength to fly back to your missing friend." Before he could refuse, Seivera held out a bright, shinning silver fish. "Eat it, please." Seivera begged. Blaze politely grabbed the silver fish, and sank his fangs and venom into the wriggling fish. "Thanks, for everything, Seivera." Blaze said once he had finished. But the sea serpent had already gone.
I. . .I feel so strong, Seivera was right. The fish did help. Now, I need to find Sandstorm, before it is too late.
Blaze raced away from the calling sea, and onto the white sand. Blaze's paws thumped loudly as he pelting across the sand. As he did this, Blaze spread out his wings and started to flap them, harder and harder as he ran. Soon, Blaze was soaring into the blue sky.
I'm coming, Sandstorm!
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#194 Posted: 06:07:48 03/07/2009
Go Blaze go! Plz WM! Lol my avi iz a pink zebra wearing sunglasses smilie
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#195 Posted: 03:19:23 04/07/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze flapped his wings wildily, not quite sure where he was going. Blaze tasted the air, trying his best to catch just a trace of Sandstorm's sweet scent. Sandstorm is like this because of me, its all my fault. I could of killed her in the end. Darkfang would kill me if he knew. Blaze sighed, as he kept on flying. A pack of griffins screeched past, staring at Blaze with their amber eyes, trying to study him. Blaze had never seen a griffin before. Although, Shadowclaw and Kai had once, when they were flying to the Golden River. But only Kai needed to go to the Golden River, while Shadowclaw had to get to the Poison Moon.
The griffins screeched loudly, their sharp beaks making clicking sounds. Griffins are part lion, and part egale. Maybe their hybrids too. No, griffins were meant to be that way, they have been for thousands of years, anyway. The griffins soon glided away, and Blaze carried on.

Four hours later. . .
The fish that Seivera had given Blaze really helped, because he didn't feel that tried when he landed. Blaze was sure this was the place where he last saw Sandstorm, in the cave. But she wasn't there. Her scent was stale, and his own scent was still there too.
"Sandstorm?" Blaze called softly. Nothing. Blaze padded out of the cave, and tried to pick up her scent. What if a Torax got her? Or another Twoleg? Blaze shivered at the thought. I should of never of left her, it was cruel of me to leave her here to die. Dawncloud, if you can see Sandstorm now, please tell me where she is.
As if Dawncloud read Blaze's mind, the wind blowed towards Blaze, and imdentily Blaze picked up her scent. It was stale, but Blaze followed it anyway, it was better than nothing.
He kept on trudging across the grass, following Sandstorm's scent.
'Kkkkeeeppp ooonnn ggggooiinnngg.' Hissed the wind in Blaze's ear.

Blaze stopped in his tracks. Lying on the ground, dead, was Sandstorm.
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#196 Posted: 03:56:18 04/07/2009
NOOOO!! SANDSTORM!smilie WRITE MORE!
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#197 Posted: 04:02:20 04/07/2009
NOO!! WM!
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#198 Posted: 12:33:10 04/07/2009
NOT SANDSTORM! smilie
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Please read my story!
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#199 Posted: 03:12:16 05/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yes, poor Sandstorm.smilie But she's not dead.smilie
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Blaze couldn't believe what he was seeing for a moment, but when he saw the pool of purple blood beside Sandstorm, he wanted to kill himself.
Why? Sandstorm, why? I didn't mean for this! Blaze charged over to the beautiful SunClan she-dragon, fighting with himself not to drink her blood. "Oh, Sandstorm. I'm so, so, so sorry. I never meant for this. I shouldn't of ever of left you alone. Please, forgive me." Blaze sobbed, as he bent over Sandstorm's muzzle. Nothing. She didn't say anything. There was a deep cut on her shoulder, and another cut on her only hind leg.
"Sandstorm? Please. . .I need you," Blaze whispered, softly.
She can't be dead! Its all my fault! Sandstorm is dead because of me!
Blaze yelled inside. He fought back the tears, and the thirst for dragon blood.
What are you waiting for, Blaze? Hissed a voice in Blaze's head.
Sandstorm is weak and ill, that fish wasn't enough. You need fresh, dragon blood. Are you just going to let go a free meal? Blaze growled, and stabbed his claws into his head. "No!" Blaze yowled aloud. "No! I would never kill Sandstorm!" Oh, but you do, Star Dragon.
Blaze was puzzled. Star Dragon? Blaze thought to himself.
Yes, you have the power of the stars, don't you? Come on, your part ShadowClan. ShadowClan is your true Clan. Don't you see? When you killed Razorclaw you could of became ShadowClan's next leader. But you would also have to kill the deputy, Rayheart to do so. . .
"Stop!" Blaze yowled. "Get out of my head!"
Go on, what are you waiting for? Kill her. Kill. . .kill. . .kill. . .blood. . .flesh. . .kill. . .KILL! Blaze fought as hard as he could, trying his best not to let his dark side control him.
Sandstorm twitched, but said nothing. She was very close to death, and Blaze could easily kill her. No! I c-can't! But it was too late, his dark side finally won.
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#200 Posted: 05:36:45 05/07/2009
I knew it! Plz write more!
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