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#151 Posted: 20:19:46 22/03/2009
wow i'm so annoyed i forgot this but i'm sorta glad cos i got to read alot, its gotten really good and i'll try and not to forget again.
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#152 Posted: 01:15:49 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
yup...
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#153 Posted: 19:47:49 24/03/2009
oh, please cheer up.
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#154 Posted: 19:50:13 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
...................umm........thank s2008 for that..........
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#155 Posted: 19:57:02 24/03/2009
huh? s2008?
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#156 Posted: 19:58:55 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
spyro2008....
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#157 Posted: 20:03:37 24/03/2009
why are you thanking him?
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#158 Posted: 20:07:53 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
*slaps self* uh...........u know? like..."im leaving,u can thank spyro2008 for causing all of this," and stuff....
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#159 Posted: 01:15:54 26/03/2009 | Topic Creator
ummm new chapter?
chapter 8: ripto??? they walked towards rpto and tried to attack,but he dodged and hit them back. scarlet fell to the floor and silver used fire. ripto fell and didnt get up...."umm......silver?" "yea" "i thought saving the world would be harder than that..." but when the earthquakes stopped and everything grew peacful once again, wing came from behind them....."so...you to finnaly realize it?" silver stared at him,"realize what?" "you havent noticed me here yet?" "uhhhh...nope" wing was getting annoyed and finnaly told them why he followed them here...."well......i guess you to wont be leaving this place to tell anyone-" they both say,"WHAT???" "yes..it was a trap.....ripto never returned....thats moneybags in duisguise,and i followed you here to make it seem like the world was being destroyed....it may look pecful here now but in the other lands outside of avalar its a nightmare.......moneybags did this for gems of course,....and u dont need to worry about them destroying the world.....the one you should be worryin about right now........IS ME!" yup yup! |
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#160 Posted: 18:45:28 26/03/2009
that was unexpected. but cool!
sorry for what i said befor if it got you anoyed.
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#161 Posted: 19:16:56 26/03/2009 | Topic Creator
i wasnt annoyed....
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#162 Posted: 20:27:46 26/03/2009
that's a relife. anyway this story is getting really good, when's the next chapter comeing?
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#163 Posted: 23:12:33 26/03/2009 | Topic Creator
soon.....it seems like uve got hacked.......i saw a few posts that didnt sound like u...,
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#164 Posted: 16:59:05 27/03/2009 | Topic Creator
ok....i have the ideas for the next 5 chapters here is a chapter...i think
chapter 9: wing's escape.... wing doesnt give silver time to answer, he rams into him and silver is down beside a wall.....wing tries to step on silver but silver bites wings foot but lets go when he realizes the taste of blood in his mouth.....he didnt want to have to hurt wing..."Wing! stop!" "stop what?" "y r u trying to destroy us?" "......this world has never done anything good for me......it doesnt deserve to be alive! especially when i know you both are still here!" scarlet got mad "What??? how could u saw that about everything on this planet.......cyril.....volteer.......the other elders......they would give theier lives to stop you!" silver and scarlet look at each other and both say, "and so would we....." scarlet isnt much of a fighter......but she went on a rage and created a tornado of fire.....her eyes started to change from normal.......to glowing white.....she blows him down with fire,as silver charges at wing when he gets up.;..."wing....." he ignores himself and keeps going.....wing groans in pain as he falls down........"well silver...i didnt want it to come to this....." he picks up silver and throws him into a nearby lake.....he gets up with water dripping from his face....scarlet is saved from her rage.........and taken away with wing...."SCARLET!!!!!!!" "SILVER!!!!" they stare at each other a final time........when she is out of sight........silver presses his head against a wall and screams......wondering if he will ever see her again....... ive got some other good ideas too! |
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#165 Posted: 14:24:20 28/03/2009
wow, this is still awsome. and yeah i was hacked and i'm glad you staying.
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#166 Posted: 14:24:47 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 10: 48 hours...(short)
silver flies back and tells the other dragons the bad news.."they...got....scarlet....." they seemed suprised........one said "but......what about wing?" "he took her" they told him about the year of the dragon festival. "these dragons will gather together in 48 hours to watch the hatching of the dragons........it also the time wings next attack is going to be..................................." "then ill be here waiting for him! " he walks over towards the resting spot.......to gather strenght before he starts to wait for wing.......he cries himself to sleep and wierdest thing was.............he was happy.......thinking of the day he would get his revenge and save scarlet, then go back to dragon island to his homeland to watch the arrival of the year of the dragon festival.....and the hatching of many young dragons.......... yup yup! its good! |
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#167 Posted: 14:30:52 28/03/2009
yeah, this is mint!!! (mint means realy cool, remember?)
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#168 Posted: 14:39:33 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
yup yup! and.....that sucks that u got hacked....so did spyro fan 9...
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#169 Posted: 14:49:19 28/03/2009
mmm, yeah it is frustrating. (very frusteating.)
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#170 Posted: 17:07:01 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
yup.................................
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#171 Posted: 17:30:13 01/04/2009 | Topic Creator
ok...chapter 11..
chapter 11: death?....(shorter...) silver wakes up, smelling smoke....he tries to get out of his house...but someone tied him down onto the floor and he is too injured because of the fire, to get out....he thinks he's been in worse spots...but he hasn't... the fire starts covering him.......he can barely breath.....wing comes through the smoke with scarlet lying down next to him...dead... silver stares at her and starts trying to break free..."silver...you too late...scarlet is dead..." wing smiles....because wing is almost like malefor...a purple dragon.(exept wing's white.) it gives him the ability to breath fire.....greater then ignitus ever could.....he does.....more than anyone could expect to breath...onto silver...as silver is lying there beside scarlet..he thanks the cronichler.........for letting him live.....closes his eyes....and dies.... ... |
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#172 Posted: 19:19:29 01/04/2009
...... so unexpected.....and yet so sad..... I'll never forget you silver!
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#173 Posted: 13:09:00 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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wait and see the next chapter. |
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#174 Posted: 18:24:18 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 12: dreams....
silver wakes up...everything is white...this is how he thought heaven would be like....he gets up...he's still a bit dizzy and its getting harder to see...he accidently falls out a top window....thinking he's already dead...he dosent try to fly and save himslef.....he hits the ground hard.. thinking he cant die more than once........when he gets up, he realizez if this wasnt what it really was...he could have died....he seems confused as he finds out its snow...if not..he surley would have,...from that hieght......he says aloud "snow??? heaven is filled with snow?" a dragon elder hears him.."what?? heaven? Silver...ur still on dragon island.." "what?" "we couldnt stop him......he came in and as you were waking up...he put this over your mouh to try and kill you in your sleep.." he holds out a small heater with tape..............like a cup without a drink..instead it has a heater..set to 600 degrees...."so...thats where i got the idea of dying from?" "yes,silver....if it wasnt for your dad being a fire dragon...your nightmare would have came true...." "so..im alive" "umm...i just said---never mind.." "where did this snow come from then? its supposed to be almost spring..." "wing found this device....he was going to use it to set a bomb on the dragon eggs nest's...but i found him and malfunctioned the device...it went out of control and turned the spring back to winter...if you dont stop him soon...the eggs will freeze....only 15 hours remain until his attack againt the world begins....if you dont stop him then..it will be winter forever....and the fire dragons breath will turn to ice...forver....kill wing,save scarlet....and destroy the main source of this.....before the eggs die.....these eggs are more precious to us than any other eggs...besides yours.....these are the egs for the year of the dragon festival..the hatchlings will someday be like me and cyril when they grow old....the next elders....if there is no new elders....there will be no more eggs...and the worlds will be destroyed...there is one thing i must tell you......if you dont pay attention right now...we will die...its all up to you now,silver....when you get to wing's hideout.....defeat him..before..or after this...the device will have 20 different colored wires....all of them do the same thing...increase this freezing nightmare...one wire...saves us all.....the color of this wire.. is..-" "WHAT???" he stares in suprise..as..through the chest of the dragon elder is a claw...the elder dies...and falls to the ground...wing killed him...silver looks at him.....they stare at each other....silver being mad...wing is smileng like a maniac and laghuing to death..."great job silver...." he smiles eviley...."ill see you at your grave.." wing flies away and all silver can do is watch..... |
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#175 Posted: 19:48:39 02/04/2009
holy cow!!! wing killed an elder before he could say how to stop the device...... that was a great chapter i'm looking forward to more.
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#176 Posted: 20:08:05 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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yup... |
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#177 Posted: 20:56:00 02/04/2009
wow! silver isn't dead after all. go silver go!
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#178 Posted: 20:56:23 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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lol... |
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#179 Posted: 20:57:45 02/04/2009
LAMO!
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#180 Posted: 21:06:22 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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#181 Posted: 15:13:38 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
ok....here it is....the final chapter of silver the dragon........im sure if i asked u pplz....u would say this was a good story right? well...here is the final chapter.....this isnt like last time, where i made a new story...this is real....
chapter 13: the forgotten chapter..... silver realizes he learned how to fly....he chases after wing..wing is holding the device silver hits the device as it falls to the ground... he finds it and before he picks it up...he notices a strange rock with words on it...it says. "in the time of darkness, two dragons will be the only ones..our only hope...only the dragon of light, Luna. and the dragon of darkness, Miles. can save us......" ~Ignitus. silver stares at the sig. "dad?" wing catches up to silver and picks him up. "wing! let me go!" he starts kicking. "ok,silver.....if you say so." wing throws silver into a cave. wing picks up the device...and leaves...silver runs after him,but indestructible steel cage walls come over the entrance. silver sees scarlet.."s-s-scarlet?" his voice is shaking. wing sees silver,turns around and says "i see youve found her....well....ill just let you both starve to death in there.." he laughs and flys away....."silver." scarlet sounds weak...."silver...is that you?..." "yes...." she manages to tell him about the device also. "the device will destroy the eggs...im....sure..the elders told you this....but....there is only one way to expand our avalible time....use your fury...." "but...ill be red again...not a purple dragon....." "silver...it doesnt matter now....use everything you have...aim it at the sun......" he looks out of the cave....aims...and uses fury.........the sun glows...and everything seems alright until..."silver, wings hideout is somewhere in this cave..." he seems shocked. "what!!!???" "yes....lets hurry" "wait...what was the point of this? the fury?" "thanks to that...............weve got.............5 days left......." "will we be back for the year of the dragon festival? wing was supposed to be there.." "yotd festival? thats in two weeks." "what?? so...those werent elders?" "no...they were wings minions..." "i read of a dragon...luna...and...miles..." "lets see what happens....and....those minions wanted to distract you....the nightmares.......the deaths....i get it now..." "scarlet? what?" "hes been distracting you...by taking the lives of who you loved......" "that must be it...." "i know...it is the truth....." cave walls open..........barely...grublins come out.."silver..?" "yes scarlet..." "i think there is too many.." "no...not these..." silver uses fire breath..the grublins fall back...they go seperate into 2 groups....each going thrugh a seperate door....."what?" silver is suprised. "wich one do we go through?" "silver...im not sure.." "well....lets wait and see." scarlet lyes down....silver lies down beside her....and they get thier first night of sleep.......since the death of an elder.....scarlets father....... |
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#182 Posted: 16:56:29 05/04/2009
Wow! this is sooooo cool! and if you asked us pplz then yes we would say this story rocked!!!
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#183 Posted: 16:58:55 05/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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well....you see....LATE APRIL FOOLS? there is no more of this story..now its the legend of silver...only 6-7 chapters with wing..then other bad things will start happening...this story is gonna go on 4 years.. |
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#184 Posted: 17:08:28 05/04/2009
oh, ok. LAMO
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#185 Posted: 18:07:33 05/04/2009 | Topic Creator
SIlver....dont go..... dont leave....
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#186 Posted: 18:53:46 05/04/2009
This is a very good story my friend but I'm afraid this is where my map takes me, I don't want to leave but I just can't stay... I'm sorry spyro fan 8 you where a very nice and loyal friend. but this is where I must leave...
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#187 Posted: 21:08:23 05/04/2009 | Topic Creator
y cant u stay? will u ever return?please dont go.....
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#188 Posted: 22:51:50 05/04/2009 | Topic Creator
this chapter....is dedicated to silver dragon..i hope you return someday..
the legend of silver: a good day to die.. as silver wakes up, he notices scarlet staring outside at the strange rock.."hey,silver..did u see this rock?" "yes..." "hmmm luna? and miles?" "i know...wierd right?" "not exactly" "what?" "this seems like the time we need them most...." "yea...." as they turn around...a portal opens up...."that couldnt have been here sooner. " a white and black dragon,beside a yellow dragon with a lighning bolt on its side...come out.."hello silver......weve been watching you.." "how do u know my name???" "well...i am luna....and this is miles....we dont think ur worthy of saving this world...we have to destroy you....." "what???" they both stare at luna and miles. "how can you be serious? if you join us...we can do this!" "no.....we cant trust you....." luna tackles scarlet, scarlet uses lightning....luna has a small cut in her forhead. "il get u for that!" she charges again and silver gets in the way of the attack.....he is bleeding on the floor.......scarlet now has to defeat both miles and luna..."silve-" before she can finish. miles shocks her....and she is parylyzed.....before luna tries to kill scarlet....wing comes...."i appluad you all for going through the trouble of seeing who is worthy..but the truth is all of you are weak....especially this one..." he steps on silver...."silver!" scarlet screams. "get off of him!!" "fine" he moves off.... he walks away through the last walkway.. "guys...were sorry." luna says "we didnt know" silver interupts them.."nows not the time.......lets go.... they walk on........a dragon appears..."u shall not pass here..." "wow...that came fast...dont you thi-" before silver can finish, the dragon hits him.."ahhg!" "miles! do something!" says scarlet. "ok....." he unleashes a light burst...suprisingly...having a lightning bolt on him allows him 2 elements....the dark dragon flinches. scarlet flys and avoids his punch...she comes back and knocks him down...silver is back up...he uses flame fury...the darkdragon dodges and luna tackles him....while his is down, silver uses flame fury again and it hits....."fine job young dragons.......i never expected you to be this strong.....but.....'tis me.....wing!!!" he changes back to his normal forme.."how can he-" "do that?" silver finishes lunas sentence..... he doesnt answer..h uses a portal to send miles back to dragon island....unharmed... "miles?" "yes....i sent him there...i couldnt let my son get hurt....as for my daughter.." "what!? lunas ur daughter?" "tell them my offspring...tell them how u planned to kill them..." "what? luna...you lied to us?..." "yes silver...im sorry..." "well..as long as ur with us now..." "NO!" wing screams. "NO! tell them daughter......your going to help me destroy this puny planet and everything on it..." "no...not today dad...not never....im with silver now! im tired of the torture you caused them! they said they would give thier lives for this world and the creatures living on it! and so would i!" "luna! dont!" ....."im sorry silver....i have to do this....and im taking wing with me!" she glows....her body is disapering..........and so is wings........."GOOD BYE SILVER! ill never forget you........" she vanishes......"shes gone...." wing returns..."well...what foolish kids..." "what!" hes back.....he leaves.."come back here when you think ur ready to stop being little kids and accept ur fate..." hes gone into his lair..........silver hears his dads voice.."silver...everything leaves this world sometime.......even when its one of your closest partners....in memeory of them....carry on...dont get caught up in the past...........carry on.....and fufill your dreams and never forget them..." in memeroy on luna...they get ready for wing.... silver dragon...come back... |
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#189 Posted: 22:54:30 05/04/2009
That is so amazing , and so sad .
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#190 Posted: 22:56:40 05/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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its for silver....for her leaving... |
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#191 Posted: 08:37:15 06/04/2009
I-I.... I don't.... I don't know what to do or say.
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#192 Posted: 17:58:31 06/04/2009
well, I now understand... look at my guestbook.
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#193 Posted: 21:18:22 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
ok...i saw it.....
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#194 Posted: 21:56:02 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yup yup good ur stayin'
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#195 Posted: 22:10:44 06/04/2009
wow! what a great story! i cant wait until the next one!
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#196 Posted: 22:43:45 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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thanks.... |
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#197 Posted: 08:10:41 07/04/2009
god why do i forget so much, anyway nice chapters sorry i forgot again.
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#198 Posted: 17:46:48 07/04/2009
is there going to be another story?
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#199 Posted: 19:18:47 07/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yes.....soon..... tell ur friends.
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#200 Posted: 19:56:42 07/04/2009 | Topic Creator
umm......ok...?
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