Quote: FirestarI like your stories!

Read my new one, Tovias: Hidden Power
I will read it.

I don't really get it because the Xay story is not finished....
Oh, and this one is going to be long BTW.
Ruuko stod up. He began to blink sleep out off his eyes. He must off fell asleep without realising. He looked up at the sky, Sunrise was aproching.
I'd better wake Bluefur and Sparrowheart up.... He didn't need to eat any food. He, Bluefur and Sparrowheart had eaten some off the prey until they were bloted. Bluefur berryied the rest so that they will eat the rest when they get hungry again. Ruuko tapped Bluefur on the shoulder with his paw and tapped Sparrowheart on the body with his tail. They both yawned, strech and then they sat up, looking at Ruuko.
"What are we going to do today?" Bluefur asked.
"Since you have learnt how to hunt prey, I will now teach you how to fight" Ruuko grunted. He wanted to do this quick. He needed Cynder to fight with him so he can do his own training. Gaul would also be worried and if Ruuko would worry him, the Gaul would get angry.
Suddently, Ruuko heard a rustle from the bushes. He face towards the bush. It was moving. Ruuko braced himself. Preparing for an ambush. But the bushes stopped moving. Ruuko looked comfused. He was about to turn around when something smashed into him like a canonball. Ruuko was blind for a couple off seconds. Then he could see a little bit. He bagan to panic. All he could see was a black ball on top off him. He kicked as hard as he could but the weight would not let go. Ruuko stuck his claws into it's throat. The creature roared but still pinned Ruuko down. Ruuko finerly got his vision back. He looked at the black ball. It was a black dragon with a blue underbelly, horns, scales, wings and tail blade. He had amber eyes like Ruuko's. He gazed furasly at him. He soon got off of him and faced Bluefur and Sparrowheart. Bluefur hiss, her lips were curled back into a snarl. Sparrowheart just looked into the dragon's eyes, his eyes were filled with forgiveness.
"Don't lay a claw on them!" Ruuko spat. He leaped onto the dragon and pinned him down. The dragon's strength was incredable. He stod up as if he had only the weight off a feather on him. With a horror off dread, Ruuko lost his grip on the black dragon and rolled onto the ground. He stood up. Ruuko had bits off dirt all over him. He snorted and then prepared to leap again. But before he could, Bluefur sprang and then bit down hard on the black dragon's tail. Sparrowheart was too shocked to join in.
"Stay back! Keep away! He will claw you to death!" Ruuko hissed at Bluefur. But Bluefur ignored him. She bit down harder on the dragon. The dragon roared and lifted up his tail. He flicked it, making Bluefur lose her grip and hit a tree, making her get nocked out. Sparrowheart shock his head and sprang onto the black dragon's back. He hissed in range and clawed like crazy at the dragon's back. The black dragon roared and rolled onto his back, sqishing Sparrowheart until he got nocked out too. Ruuko looked at the two dragons, he hissed in shock and range. Using all off his power, he sprang onto the black dragon, bowling him over. He bit down into the dragon's neck. The dragon lifted up his tail, he moved it under Ruuko's body without him relalising and stuck the tail blade into Ruuko's chest. Ruuko bit down deeper into the dragon's neck until he could taste warm blood. But he couldn't hold on much longer. The pain in his stomic weakend him. He new that if the dragon stuck his tail blade deeper into Ruuko's chest, then he would strick his heart and Ruuko would die. He got off of him imidiantly. Blood dropped out off his chest. He was lucky that the tail blade was hardly in him. Ruuko snorted as he realised that the blade only stuck into his chest a tinny bit, but it made him really weak.
That must be my weak point.... Ruuko thought. He bent over to lick it. Ruuko doged the dragon's claws and grabbed his horns. Ruuko pushed them back. The dragon roared and then pushed them ford, flinging Ruuko into a tree. Unfortenly, Ruuko hit a spike that was on a tree, stabbing him in the back. Ruuko fell to the floor and and lost his vision again. He could see agan in a blink off an eye. But before he could make an efort to get up, the dragon pick him up by the muzzel and chucked him into another tree. He then pushed Ruuko's head into the tree until blood poored out off it. Ruuko stabbed the dragon's stomic with his tail but the dragon didn't seem to realise that he was getting hit. Ruuko wanted to talk to him, but he couldn't because the dragon's paws were on his face. He felt pain stabbed him at the back off his head. He manged to scream in pain even though the dragon's paws were on his mouth and head. He thought he was going to die. He began to worry. But before he could worry any more, Bluefur got up and sprang at the black dragon again yowing.
"Let go off him you freak!" She growled.
Sparrowheart got up to and joined his sister, spitting out sand. They both sprang as one and pulled the dragon's paws off of Ruuko's face. Ruuko breathed hard and nealy fainted. He forced himself to get up. He faced the dragon, aiming for his neck so he could kill him. Bluefur and Sparrowheart pushed him down. But before they could bit down into his neck, he got up and bit down onto Sparrowheart's neck. Ruuko looked at the dragon in horror as he realised that he was sucking out Sparrowheart's blood. Sparrowheart fainted again in a couple off seconds. Bluefur screached in ranged and stabbed her tail blade very deep into the dragon's chest. He roared in pain and faced the grey dragon. Ruuko saw his chance. He got up, about to sprang when Bluefur yowled "RETREAT!"
She picked up Sparrowheart and charged into the bushes. Ruuko looked at the black dragon. He was snarling at Ruuko. His eyes filled with hatred and revange. Ruuko began to wounder why he wanted to advange something. He shock his head and padded slowly at the dragon. The dragon roared in lautter and sprang onto Ruuko. Ruuko manige to dogged and quickly stuck his tail blade into the dragon's chest one more time. The black dragon roared. He smashed into a tree and a coconut fell on his head. Blood tricked down from his forhead and onto the ground. He was nocked out. Ruuko saw his chance. He would kill him now. But before he could, Bluefur screamed.
"Please Ruuko. Please don't kill him! H-he is me and my brother's farther!"
Don't you just love cliff hangers?
Oh, and I did not coppy your story Firestar (About the dragon sucking blood). I made up something. It is rare that a
male dragon can get the fear element. And the bad thing is that if a Male dragon gets this element, then he goes a little bit dark and his fangs grow larger over night, giving him the ability to suck other animal's blood. Dragon blood is the best blood. If they don't suck blood for 2 months, then they lose the ability and there fangs grow small again. The worst part is that when they get the element, then they stop growing and they stay at that age forever. They also can't die so they live forever (Unles they get chopped to pices or get burned in a fire). They only suck a little off a dragon's blood because they go full real quick. Then, that dragon gets the same thing. Living forever, can't die, never growing up, being able to suck blood. But it is slitly different. There two fangs do not grow larger over night and they don't lose the ability to suck blood if they don't suck blood for two months. Also, they have to suck some blood out off an animal, if they don't, something happens and it feels like they just got stabbed in the chest. But they do get the fear element. They also don't go evil.