darkSpyro

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do u think i should continue?

Yeah, please do! I love it!

ok

Cynder and spyro arived at the temple. Grindion and deanna waled up to them. Cynder growled and saw she was with another male and relaxed. Spyro looked at her and had a look in his eye that said "remember, there fake." Cynder nodded and whent back inside. Spyro stood out side.
"Spyro?" Deanna said
"yes?" spyro replied.
siddenly, everything around them started to 'melt'. Spyro looked around, worried.
"CYNDER!" he yelled.
he rushed inside and found Cynder talking to the fake sparx. Spyro put a paw on hers. He nodded his head twordes a window. Cynder saw the worry in his eyes and got up. She walked over to the window. Everything was ash. A ashy waistland. As if a fire just came and didnt stop. She looked up at the once blue sky and saw a mix of smoky grey and a fire red. Deanna and Grindion was nowhere to be seen. Spyro looked back and saw sparx 'melt' as well. Cyner turnes and nowtice it to. They both looked around and saw everything melt around them. Ignitus, Volteer, Tardoor, Cyril, and Sparx. Cynder and Spyro rushed to the door. By the time they got there to door was melted to a small hole. Cynder gasp then screemed as the walles started to give in and the cilling melt and coolect at there paws. Spyro charged at the once door and whent right threw.
"CYNDER!!!RUN THREW!!!" Spyro yelled
Cynder looked around, scared. She tryed to avoid the meled clumps of cilling that was comming off. she looked at where spyro ran threw and shuk her head 'no'.
"i....i cant do it...." she wispered.
the walls where closing in, as well as the walls.
"CYNDER!! GET OUT OF THERE!!" he yelled."NOW!!!!!"
Cynder looked around her once more. she closed her eyes, she risen her head, and wellcomed her doom..................................
her Death

aww dang it i was just thinking the exact same thing for my story that i was going to type... exept for the ash part... all well ill think of something else.pleazase continue by the way. by the way can i still use the melting thing and the welcoming doom thing?

if my story sparxed something, pleas give me some creadit, other than that, feel free.

Cynder opened her eyes, she looked around and seen a purple paw comming out the metting wall. The wall began bubbuling and the purple paw disapered as it pulled back. Cynder felt a tear run down her face as the bubbuling walls colsed in at her."so this is how it ends..." she wispered.
She took her claw and began wrighting stuff in the durt.

Out side, spyro yelled for Cynder.
"CYNDER GET OUT!!!!" He yelled, tears running down his face like rivers.
The walls where turnning red and orenge like lava. soon he relised it did turn into lava. "get. out. pleas." he cried.
the lava formed over Cynders figure. Spyro then knew that was her. She whouldnt buge, only stood there, tall, as if she was proud to be devowered but the hot, red water. Cynders figure started to melt as the lava lowered. He heard the faint scream of Cynder as she lowered into the ground. Tears overflowed him. it soon was turning as black as his lost beloved. He walked over to where Cynder once stood and dig with his hornes so he could find her bones and give her a proper funawal. he exposed the ground. He saw her paw prints, unmoved from there posision but no bones. He saw some wrighting in frount of her paw prints.
He turned around to see them.
'no matter what, we will alwas be together.Even in life or death, i will alwas love you.'
Tears hit the ground. He turned away from the wrighing, the prints, the once happy home for him. He looked and saw only black ash for miles. He looked at the paw that he tryed to save Cynder with. It was red and showed mucle, it blistered, and it stung. He spered his wings and took off, leaving the death place of his beloved, and leaving a ash dust cloud where he stood, and leaving the crule harded black lava. He finally came to the Silver river. He stuk his paw in and it felt so cool as it rushed over his exposed, stinging paw. He closed his eyes and remembered only a few miutes ago there was life everywhere, there where friends to keep him compiny, there was Cynder just being the sweet Dragoness she was.
He opened his eyes and saw the dusty wastland. he spered his wings and took off. Splashing the cool water and leaving another ashy cloud. He flew on for hours, and no life in site. he looked at his paw and to his suprise it was healed. He flew for four hours and still nothing to be found. He saw the running river of the Silver river and landed by it. he cried, tears running down his face once again, knowing he is alone in this world.

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hope you like it...

wow your a great typer. just when things look like it came to an ending. (im pretty much speechless when i read this). by the way when spyro swa the river again it couldve been him sleeping and got kidnapped and was placed into a simple chamber made to torture him made to kill him with feelings he couldve been flying in circles. can i use he thing about the everything melting?(im not good at giving credit)

just say that my idea sparx something.......


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Cynder screamed. a paw covered her mouth and huerd a fimlliler voice.
"SHHHHHHHHH!" he wispered.
She pened her eyes and saw the Cromicaler. Her eyes grew with suprise as she nowticed the difrence about him. He relised his paw and CYnder shouted happily"IGNITUS!"
she ran twordes him and hug him.
"i thought you died!" Cynder exclamed
"Same with you and Spyro....is Spyro....Dead?" Ignitus asked her
"i dont know... do you know where i was?" She asked in return.
"In my crystal." He said as he pointed to the Crystal aroud his neck.
Cynder looed at it and said to him
"Its caouse in there.....Spyro is in there....."she said
Ignitus hugged Cynder
"you my stay here young dragon intill Spyro has returned." He said
"You dont know how to get him out!?" Cynder yelled
"no, im afraid not." He said.

~~~~~~~~inside the Crystal~~~~~~~

Spyro cried out. He knew he was alone in the world. noone exested. He sat there, thinking of how his life changed in only a matter of secons.
"Why?" he asked himself "i defeat Malafor and this is how im repaied?Bla! i should have let his dystroyed this ungratfull planet!" Spyro spat. He cralwd into the Silver River and let the water flow over him. it was so cool.
"i will return to you Cynder....i will see the day i get to see you and Ignitus again..." He smiled to himself. "i promes to you i will...." He closed his eyes and layed his head on the bank so it whould drown him.

i knew it!!! spyro was all along inside a sort of chamber. the idea of cynder shouting right after the chronicler said shh and removed his paw is like comedy... im typing a story on the fandom section too its called a made up story of spyros typical day.(its on comedy)

cool cant wait!

ive already had a small part of it typed weeks ago. (trying to think of something good one big hit and everyone will start filling the topic with posts)

ya...i relly thought people whould fill the topic with post but only 5,6 people know it exest

at least you have 5 people that know it exists my story has like 3 people who know it exists plus you

*sighes*

Actually, you may have more readers than you think, because some people like to lurk.

ok...
so i might have more than 5
but theres at least 5 i know of

OMG, that was sad. But it was really great!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
the only way to get out is bye 'dieing'

Dat's kind of cool!

Spyros going insane

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geez, D. but i don't really know EXACTLY what she's gonna look like... hold on. i gotta think... hmm...

@_@ ur saying u dont know ur character?
did u forget?or making new agestments?

i'm making adjustments. and, i need to figure out a personality for her, although i'm probably just going to give her the same personality as me.

Quote: Safira101

Quote: Cynder1

Quote: Safira101

geez, D. but i don't really know EXACTLY what she's gonna look like... hold on. i gotta think... hmm...

@_@ ur saying u dont know ur character?
did u forget?or making new agestments?

i'm making adjustments. and, i need to figure out a personality for her, although i'm probably just going to give her the same personality as me.

RANDOM!!!!!!xD
jk jk
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