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#151 Posted: 07:37:29 05/01/2009
Serisouly though, YotD Died on me..... Please write more!
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#152 Posted: 00:27:30 06/01/2009
this is terorrfing,in a good way!write more!
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#153 Posted: 04:16:55 06/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Ending to adventure 4 is coming. (Next post)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The two dragons procedded into the room to find it in perfect peace, as if the room was unaware of the current event taking place. "Doesn't look like anything could happen here." They where halfway through the room when figures came came out of the dark and started to approach them. They rushed to the door and tried it, to their dismay, it was locked. The figures approached them and they had now where to go.
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#154 Posted: 19:27:47 06/01/2009
*in fear* Come on.....
MORE!!
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#155 Posted: 01:11:54 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Here it comes...(second last post)
may not be alot but is a complete turnabout in the adventure ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ they back up againest the wall and expected the worst. "Spyro..." Cynder chocked out. "Y-yeah?" "I love you..." "I love you too." he replied. The closest figure reached up to its face, tore off its skin and yelled, "GOTHCA!!!!"
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#156 Posted: 01:14:39 07/01/2009
What?!
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#157 Posted: 01:19:17 07/01/2009
what the?!0_0
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#158 Posted: 01:39:02 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Surprise!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Scared you, didn't we?" Volteer said as the lights came on. "W-w-what? Whats going on?!" Spyro asked, baffled at the surprise. The two remaining figures followed volteer and ripped off their skin, revealing the two other elders. "Long story short, we deicided to pull a little prank you kids." Terreador continued, as everyone else came in through the doorway. Volteer: Fine Terrador: Fine Cryil: Fine Leafwind: Fine Aqua: Fine Slushie: Fine Spyro:Fine Cynder:Fine Sparx: Fine Twinkle: Fine Flame: Fine Ember: Fine "You t-think this was funny?!" Cynder fumed, with her fear replaced with anger. "I thought that was pretty awsome." Leafwind commented. "Well, we'll explain how we did it in the morning. Now off to bed with all of you." Cryil said. then everyone." Everyone then started to headed back to their rooms. "Spyro, was that funny?" Cynder asked. "Not really." *End of Adventure 4* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Surprised you didn't I? I had a creepy ending set up, but deicided to use the funny one.
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#159 Posted: 01:40:41 07/01/2009
whats the creepy ending? I wanna know!
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#160 Posted: 01:41:59 07/01/2009
lol!that was awesome!!!
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#161 Posted: 01:42:04 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Would you like it as a summary, or do you want me to type it out?
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#162 Posted: 01:44:05 07/01/2009
Typ it type it!!
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#163 Posted: 01:45:06 07/01/2009
Type it outz!!!!
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#164 Posted: 01:50:28 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay here it is
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (Adventure 4 alt. ending part 1) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ they back up againest the wall and expected the worst, as more figures came out of the ground and approached them too. "Spyro..." Cynder chocked out. "Y-yeah?" "I just wanted to tell you that the movie did scare me." All of the sudden, the figured stopped and started to evaporate.
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#165 Posted: 01:52:22 07/01/2009
MORE!
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#166 Posted: 01:54:19 07/01/2009
yeah,more!!
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#167 Posted: 02:30:34 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
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Adventure 4 Alt. ending part 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As the shadows completely evaporated they each deposited their friends on the floor. Volteer: Fine Terrador: Fine Cryil: Fine Leafwind: Fine Aqua: Fine Slushie: Fine Spyro:Fine Cynder:Fine Sparx: Fine Twinkle: Fine Flame: Fine Ember: Fine The two quickly checked their friends to see if they were alright. "Everyones fine, just unconious." Cynder said breaking the silence. "I think I know what happened." Spyro replied. "What?" "your fear manifested itself through your elements." "wait, so when I admitted my fear, it stopped?" "Guess so." "Well, let's get them back to their rooms. We got a lot of explaining to do in the morning." Then they started to carry their sleeping friends back to their rooms. *End of adventure 4* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There, finished.
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#168 Posted: 02:33:55 07/01/2009
That one was a bit odd, but still! Good work!
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#169 Posted: 02:59:57 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Yay, new adventure!!!
(This one is probably going to be really short) Adventure Upcomings!!! Adventure 6: Curtain Call Adventure 7:Broken... Adventure 8: Uninvited guests Adventure 9: Blast from the Past Saga Finale:??? Don't worry, more sagas to come. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Adventure 5: Late night Gossip ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The late night was filled with talk and laughter coming from Cynder, Aqua, Twinkle from the still lit girls room. "So, who's the first guy you dated?" Twinkle asked. "Only one, and that's Spyro." Cynder replied. "Frost, a guy from a while back, but broke up with him." Aqua replied with enuthisaism.
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#170 Posted: 02:33:17 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
"Well, you girls are lucky, hardly any guys approach me beacuse I'm with Leaf." Twinkle said.
"Why?" "Because there intmmidated." "Makes sense." "Well, I've Sparxs staring at you once in a while." Cynder commented. "really?" twinkle replied in a not surprised tone and thought about it. "Well, that leaves you, Aqua." "Leaves me what?" "Without a guy. Lets see who we have." Cynder said, as she thought of the guys without girls. "W-w-wait a min-" Aqua managed to studder before Cynder continued. "There's Flame and Leafwind, but Flame is taken by Ember, so that means... YOU LIKE LEAF!!!" Cynder taunted. "N-NO I D-DONT!!!" Aqua defended, her face turning a deep red. "Of course you do, you're as red as a burning fire." "N-no I'm, uh." Aqua said as she tried to find an fitting answer to her blushing. "You like him, don't you?" Cynder said, getting to the point. "M-maybe." Aqua replied Turning an even deeper red in the face and then burying it under a pillow.
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#171 Posted: 14:07:05 08/01/2009
Lol
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#172 Posted: 00:26:18 11/01/2009
lol!write more!!
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#173 Posted: 07:02:16 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
"Ha! I knew it!" Twinkle said as she finished thinking.
"Twink, please, don't tell him." Aqua begged, still with her face buried in the pillow. "Fine, but if you like him so much, why don't you ask him out?" "Yeah, why?" Cynder repeated. "Well, I'm kinda scared on how he might answer. I mean, were really close, but what if he says no or something?" "Well we could help you." Cynder offered. "Y-you would?" "Sure, right Twink?" Cynder replied glareing at Twinkle. "Sure, whatever." "Thanks you guys, thanks so much!" Aqua said with euthasim. "Okay, here's what you should do..." *End of adventure 5* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Like I said, Adventure 5, was planned to be short. Adventure 6, however, is gonna be fun.
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#174 Posted: 01:38:35 12/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Yay, Adventure 6!!!
before I get started, I want everyone to to know that Adventure 6 is also... A CONTEST!!! yay! *claps* Heres some stuff to know: 1. entry cannot be super evil (villian, mad genius, etc.). They can be bad, just not super bad. 2. post or pm your dragon and its entry. 4. If you don't have a dragon, make one or just wait and vote for the entries. 5. 1st and second (and maybe third) can win. Finally, the prize your dragon gets is: the winners get to be in the next saga! so enter if you want to!
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#175 Posted: 01:41:43 12/01/2009
Umm, should i just do Silro's life story, or just round up his darkness?
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#176 Posted: 17:34:11 12/01/2009
blueice is often calm and is intelegent,likes helping,has a strange black mark(has been corupted before actualy but isnt any longer)is also gentle but can be aggresive(if attacked or teased),his past is shrouded in mystery and is unknown for almost anyone
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#177 Posted: 17:40:21 12/01/2009
Ok then.
Silro is a black dragon who has a dark and emational past. He hates Spyro and Cynder, and doesnt like Flame or Ember either. He has a son, Nightfire, who he would never let anyone hurt or harm him. He would even die to protect Nightfire. He doesnt follow anyone, but trys to live a nice calm life, but never seems to. He would never help Spyro or Cynder with anything, unless Nightfire was in danger. He has a scar accross his right eye and has red markings. He would happily fight anyone, but if made to angry, he would get a black aura and if he keeps fighting or being threatened or something along the lines, Zenith, his inner darkness, would come out. There's more, but im not posting it yet.
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#178 Posted: 00:30:13 13/01/2009 | Topic Creator
okay, thats two entries. but who's entering, Silro or nightfire?
when I ask for you in the story, you post your dragon and his/her act too. It CAN be anything, just as long its not like blowing up the place. (Eg: singing, making art, etc.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 6:Curtain call ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Why are you girls trying out for this anyway?" Spyro asked Aqua, Cynder, and Ember as they hurried to the Warfang theatre. "Because it's the 4th annual Warfang Talent Festival thats why." Cynder answered.
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#179 Posted: 12:08:22 13/01/2009
I was entering Silro.
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#180 Posted: 17:06:04 13/01/2009
a talent contest,cool
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#181 Posted: 20:59:45 13/01/2009
I'm entering Cyndarkra
Cyndarkra is a dark and used to be evil but not any more Is easly hurt she's acturly a mother of 1 and the dad's Saturn her talent to turn into a most dark form eather Ultra Dark Cyndarkra or Unleashed Darkness Cyndarkra her past Is death she had died but lickily Ignitus made her alive again her brother is Spydarko anther form is light Cyndarkra and Coruppted Cyndarkra a lot of forms huh she is not evil anymore Is the daughter of Spyro and Cynder |
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#182 Posted: 21:12:10 13/01/2009
So......We wait for our cues?
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#183 Posted: 01:38:25 14/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yes, I will tell you when it is your turn.
Also, it might be a little difficult to fit Cyndarkra in, considering she the daughter of Spyro and Cynder, but I think she'll manage. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Spyro and the girls proceeded into the all hall and approached the the dragon in charge of the entries. "Entries?" he asked. "Yes, two singles and one double performance." Cynder said. "Names of the performers?" "Ember and Aqua for the singles and for the double Cynder and Spyro." "What?!?!" Spyro yelled. "Come on, you'll like it." spyro grunted as he was forced againest his will to perform. "Well, you guys are al-" "NO,NO,NO!" The sound came from the stage and out came a french-looking dragon and what appeared to be his assitant. "The last judge will not make it? UNACCEPTABLE!"
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#184 Posted: 05:03:14 15/01/2009
keep writing
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#185 Posted: 06:32:44 15/01/2009
I got an idea for Cyndarkra cut the bit of the &daughter thing or make her come from the future
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#186 Posted: 13:19:51 15/01/2009
KEEP WRIGHTING!!
(oh good gosh i have to go to school )
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#187 Posted: 00:37:42 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
Well, you chose which one you want and I'll try to fit it in. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "OHMYGOSH!!! THAT'S FRANK THE TALENT PROUDCER!!!" Ember exclaimed. The three girls started to get over excited as Frank continued with his problem. "I-I'm sorry sir, but the last judge got food posioning." his assistant explained. "Well, wher am I supposed to get another judge on shor noticez!" As by luck, one of the stage hands fell screaming from the overhanging catwalks into a plie of cloth next to them. "YOU!!! YOU WILL BE My LAST JUDGE!!!" Frank yelled. The person in the pile got out and his identity was known. "I'm guessing thats a good thing." Leafwind replied. "WHAT!?!?" All three girls screamed at the the three on three on the stage, as Frank and his assistant left and spyro climbed onto the stage. "Leaf, what are you doing here?" Spyro asked. "Eh, I was bored, so I came here to help set up for the festival."
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#188 Posted: 00:40:20 16/01/2009
Lol
I really want Silro to be in this, but you cant have everything.
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#189 Posted: 00:43:30 16/01/2009
Ok Make her come from the future If you want.
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#190 Posted: 00:49:25 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Actually, I think I can get him in, but he has to control himself, because he later he might- ops, that's a spoiler.
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#191 Posted: 00:51:01 16/01/2009
He's goona hate her, and will easily snap, but he can control himself..........hopefully.
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#192 Posted: 06:14:53 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
"Come on, Spyro we gotta rehease, and Leaf, feel free to vote as you chose. *Cough*Spyro and Me*cough*" Cynder said as she and Spyro left.
Ember walked up to Leafwind and wispered, "Hey Leaf, vote me up plz." With that, she left too. Aqua followed Ember up to talk to Leafwind. "Hey, Aqua." Leafwind greeted as he swiped his paw down her nose, a special greeting they came up with, as she did the same. "Come to beg for at a chance for the finals?" "Um, no actually, I wanted to ask you something." she said nervously. "Well, what is it?" 'Okay, just ask him out, and everything should go smoothly.' Aqua thought. "Hello?" "Oh, uh, well, I was wondering if..." "Yeah?" "What was your favorite color again?" Aqua detoured. "Green, kinda hard to forget." refering to his scale color. "o-oh, yeah. Sorry." 'NO! ASK HIM OUT!!!' Aqua screamed to herself in her head. "No problem, anyway, I got get back to setting this place up. Bye." He said as he gave her a hug and left to continue setting up the festival. Aqua sighed and as she headed to practice her act she thought, 'That could have gone better. Well, I just hope my next try I'll get to asking him." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The show starts next, but I'll let someone go first to show everyone how it works.
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#193 Posted: 06:19:43 16/01/2009
Who'll go first DK565
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#194 Posted: 06:24:37 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
I don't know yet, I only got spyro's and Cynder's act right now, still thinking about Ember's and Aqua's.
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#195 Posted: 08:46:33 16/01/2009
Its good though
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#196 Posted: 19:16:19 16/01/2009
blueice:i know what mine is going to be
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#197 Posted: 23:20:53 16/01/2009
Cyndarkra: Same here BlueIce
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#198 Posted: 05:44:30 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
okay, time for the festival. Important: Even if the festival starts, people can still enter before it finishes, so feel free to join.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Night of the Festival* "Welcome everyone to the fourth annual talent festival!!! Hope everyone came for a good show, because we got a lot in store for tonight!" As the host continued to get the opening speech, all the contestants prepared for their acts backstage. "Nervious?" Cynder asked Spyro as the finish prepared for their act. "Yeah." "Well, we been through worse things before. We should be fine." "You're right." Spyro said, cheering up at her words. "Also, I like to introduce our last mintue sub-judge, who kindly offered his help, Mr. Leafwind." Leafwind recieved a small appualise for his help. "Well, without further ado, let us begin! First up we have a familiar pair new to the show, give up for Spyro and Cynder!" The Audience roared as the two came on stage. "Well here we go." Spyro said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (Okayz people this is how you perform) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Entry: Spyro and Cynder Catgory/Genre:Music Performance(Your act, for muisc/singing acts, send in the link or post video): ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As soon the as Spyro and Cynder finished their song, the crowed went as wild as the had when the two came on.
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#199 Posted: 14:56:24 17/01/2009
no one told me we had to make videos!!???
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#200 Posted: 17:22:57 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
no, you don't have to make videos, I used a video from youtube for the music/singing act(Video is not mine), you write out the act then post it, and if you want music or a song, you just post it with your act.
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