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#151 Posted: 17:59:58 31/10/2008
"your not taking him! you took my daughter! your not taking silro! *her eyes glowed red!* you can't stop me now! no one can!" she said as her whole body glowed red! she was ready to fight! everyone else saw what was happening! they letf hoping it would end well! Fireflight ose up on her back legs, she was about to use her empath rage fury! but before she did she used her shadow powers to send silro away to the shadow relms, where he would be safe! when he was gone she rose up once more, her whole body glowing a bright red! it almost blinded them! then she used her empath rage fury! the strongest attack she has! one from which no dragon can survive! when she used not only did she defeat them but she destroyed the temple! leaving anyone who was in it buried alive! with no hope of escape! or was there.........................................
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#152 Posted: 18:35:28 31/10/2008
silro ran over to the pile of rocks, trying to dig out Fireflight and see if she was ok! he kept looking but didn't find her! he was sure she was dead!
"are you looking for me?!" asked a female voice bhind him! he turned around, he couldn't believe what he saw! "Fireflight?!" he asked "yep! its me! i bet you wanna know how i lived! well i used my shadow powers and got out before the temple fell apart! then came back here, knowing that someone would be worried sick about me! so is everyone ok?!" she asked concerned with silro, Quietfire, and Starfire
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#153 Posted: 18:50:21 31/10/2008
'I like your attacks, Fireflight, but you cant kill a legendary group with just one attack!! And even if you could, you couldnt get the young dragons back!! Isn't that right Starfire?' Big boss appeared holding Starfire in his arms! The five scouts had also survived. Fireflight would have attacked him, but couldnt when he had starfire.
'You want her back? Try to find us then!' The six then turned invisible and jammed they're signals, making it impossible to trace them.
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#154 Posted: 19:01:39 31/10/2008
"you won't get away that easily! you obviously don't know the bond between mother and daughter!" she said as she closed her eyes and concentrated on Starfire, then used her wheather powers to fill the room with water! she knew that she and Starfire could swim! and Starfire was also as powerful as her mom! "do you really think you can seperate a mother from her child?! *she chuckled* then guess again! i don't even have to use powers to find her! its mother instinct! Starfire didn't want to be with the boss any longer! she decided to use her electricity breath on the water filled room! making everyone other then the two of them attacked by electricity!
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#155 Posted: 19:14:54 31/10/2008
'I never give my job up that easily!!' Big boss then used a black shockwave fury, which either killed or knocked anyone out unless they had a speticular armour on, which big boss and his five only wore. Silro thought he would be knocked out too, but he wasnt affected. Fireflight and Starfire had been knocked out. The effect of the blast normally lasted one to six days. Silro was going to run and grab starfire, but when he tried to run, he collapsed. His leg was broken in the blast. Big Boss was rigt next to Starfire just about to pick her up.
'Dont touch her!!' Silro shouted, unable to do anything. 'Or you'll do what silro? I am ten times as strong as you in everything! now im going to take Starfire and leave you alone!' Silro tried to fly, but his wing was damaged as well. He let a cry of pain when he tried. 'Me and Fireflight will get her back! You know that!' Big Boss looked and smiled. 'Oh really now? I fail to see how you will when you leg and wing are damaged! And dont think fireflight can get her back!' He then picked Starfire up and transported her to the cell that the others were in. He then picked Fireflight up. 'Because how can she, if she cant even breave!!' He then jabbed his claw into her neck, then dissapearing back to the base.
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#156 Posted: 19:21:35 31/10/2008
Quietfire ran in when he heard a noise! "what happened?! silro?! what are you doing here?! wheres the kids?! don't make me hurt you! when Fireflight finds out your here, your gonna regret being here!!!" he said, he was angry! he also didn't know what had happened, and niether did the others!
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#157 Posted: 19:24:21 31/10/2008
'Please!! Listen to me!! Big Boss just came!! He took Starfire!! He used a fury which knocked Fireflight and Starfire out!! He even broke my leg and damaged my wing!!' Silro then showed him his wing. 'Please! I've turned against him!! But fireflight needs attention!! Her necks is bleeding!!' Quietfire looked and saw that he was right.
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#158 Posted: 19:29:50 31/10/2008
"ok! your right! she needs help! but i still don't trust you! DAWN!!!!!! WE NEED YOUR HELP!!!!!!!" he yelled, then a midnight blue female dragon walked in "what do you need?!" she asked
"Dawn, its Fireflight! shes hurt!" he said worried, dawn rushed over and healed her! "thanks! now take her in the other room! i wnna talk to our guest alone!" he said, as dawn letf with Fireflight, "so traitor, why are you here helping us?! don't you have some poor defensless creature to kill?! or are you here are some kind of secret mission we don't know about?!"
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#159 Posted: 19:32:27 31/10/2008
'Please!! I came back to save her!! i found her in the forest!! She would have died if i didnt find her!!' He tried to stand up but his leg made him drop and shreik out in pain.
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#160 Posted: 19:39:21 31/10/2008
"why should i listen to you?! you tried to kill us! you took my duaghter! you helped them take my wife! from where i stand i've got no reason to not kill you now while i have a chance! you took everything in my life that was good! and now you wanna help! well its a little late for that! look Fireflight will be fine! except for the fact that her duaghter is gone! when she wakes up...............you'll be in alot of trouble! i may not be able to kill you with only fire and ice! but my wife can! unless you can give me one good reason i should keep you alive!" he said as he glared at him! with angry eyes, and an angry vioce!
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#161 Posted: 19:44:03 31/10/2008
Silro knew he couldnt stay near him, and even with his wing's condition tried to fly away, but just couldnt.
'I had no intentions of taking them!! I was under orders!! I didnt want to do it, but i had no choice!! Kill me if you want, but it wont help you find your children and your wife!!' Silro looked at him to say he was begging for mercy.
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#162 Posted: 19:54:51 31/10/2008
Quietfire only glared at him, as if to decide what his punishment should be! he sat down, he was thinking but not of killing silro! of the first time he met Fireflight, the time Starfire was born, he missed that! he opened his eyes he looked at silro not with angry eyes, loving ones! "i miss them!" he said "if you help me get them back.................i will spare you your life! Dawn can heal you! if you help me!" he said, then he remembered one more memory, one where he had lost Fireflight once before, and got her back! he planned on doing that again! "silro, i couldn't kill you if i wanted to! i was mad..............i shouldn't have said those things...............you were here when Fireflight was, and you survived! i didn't want to believe the rumors i heard from the others! but when i think about it, there was smething diffrent her eyes when she looked at you! *he was looking down at the ground now* i've seen that look before! a long time ago when we first met! i know now how she really feels...................................i just wish it wasn't true!" he said
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#163 Posted: 20:00:55 31/10/2008
'I want to know if firflight will be safe, i couldnt let her die because of me!! It's also why i came back for her before, after what you said to me about her empath, i couldnt bare it......' Silro had almost started to cry when he said that. 'I cant let it happen again! I will go, and i will try to get them back. But i will go alone, i dont want anyone else to be killed because of this.' Silro said, still trying to get up, but failing.
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#164 Posted: 20:09:28 31/10/2008
"don't leave! you can't! not untill dawn heals you! but don't try and hide it silro! i know the truth! you can't hide your feelings! i've been around Fireflight too long to not know alot about feelings! i know you love her! i actually don't blame you for that! shes a great dragon! i also know she feels the same way! she won't die! she'll only die if she uses her rage fury again! and i doubt she has that much rage letf!" he said, just then dawn walked in "oh dawn! could you heal silro?! don't ask! just heal!" he said, as she walked over to silro and healed him! "thank you!" said Quietfire as she walked out "so............you ready to get the kids back?! after we get them back and bring them home..................i'm leaving!" he said in a sad vioce
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#165 Posted: 20:17:06 31/10/2008
'I will go alone..... I will bring them back, i promise.' Silro then turned into his X-Amour and flew off, he didnt know where the base was, but he would find it.
Big Boss had heard the entire thing, it turned out that the X-Armour, even when not equiped, veiwed what the user was seeing, but it only worked at certain points. 'So, you want to find the kids hey? Well, lets see how you cope with our new recruit, Dragonfire!!' Big Boss sent Dragonfire out to dispose of Silro. To make it worse for silro, the old base was ready to explode if needed to. Big boss also deactivated the camo on the base so Silro would fall right into his trap.
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#166 Posted: 20:20:48 31/10/2008
back home Quietfire had told the others everything! they then got to work, making a plan and looking in the vision pool, and also making sure Fireflight was being taken care of!
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#167 Posted: 20:39:22 31/10/2008
Darkfire knew all about silro, why he was coming, and the backup he had. Jamming was always going to be on. Silro had just found the old base and went into it, hoping to find the little ones.
'Can you guys see me?' He asked hoping they would see him in the vision pool. He knew that big boss told him to put liam in he underground cell, so his first stop would be there. Darkfire had turned his stealth on and followed Silro to the cell. When silro found nothing, he turned around and was held up against the wall by the neck. 'Who are you!!' Darkfire turned his camo off and revealed himself. 'Long time no see! Silro!' He said this and then put silro's claws into clamps that were on the wall. 'Darkfire?!! What do you want!!' Darkfire looked at him. 'Me, all i want is to see you die! But this is big boss' wish you see! I hope that none of your friends are coming to save you!! Because, do you see this?' Darkfire held up a small round metal plated object with a red circle in it. 'Executor?!' Silro said as he tried to get out of the clamps. 'Yes! and when this thing goes off, it will spred over 100 metres, killing anyone that happens to be there!' He then pressed some buttons on it 'Lets say, one and a half minuets. Enough for me to get away, while anyone that tries to save you will be killed in the blast!' He then put it down and left the room.
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#168 Posted: 20:44:22 31/10/2008
but help was already there! one of Darkcloud's shadow dragons! he was lurking in the shadows where no one would find him! he quickly ran up to silro "hey! remember me?! its shadow! i'm here to save you!" he said as he grabbed him and took him to the shadow relms! nothing can go there except shadow dragons! they would be safe there!
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#169 Posted: 20:50:16 31/10/2008
Darkfire knew about silro's friends and knew how hard Executors were to make, which is why he placed a dud, which, when it had to exploded, made the message "You think we're that dumb?!". Silro thought he was safe from Darkfire.
'You idiot! Dont you know anything about me?! You're never safe!!' Silro looked around to see Darkfire in the shadow realms. 'How can you be here?! You're not a shadow dragon!!' The five scouts then walked from behind Darkfire, who then looked at silro. 'You're even more pathetic than you look!! Big Boss' Six!! Each member with a talent for something. Mine being that i am a Shadow Dragon!!' He then took of his helmet to reveal he was a shadow dragon!!
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#170 Posted: 20:59:13 31/10/2008
"you!!! you were banned from our world!!!" said shadow "your not allowed in the shadow relms anymore!!! not for what you did!!! dosen't matter! no one will miss me! i'm a mere servent! my master will find a way to bann you or worse!!!" he said not scared at all of what would happen to him! "someone will stop you!!! by then it'll be too late for you to save yourslef! go ahead! kill me! it'll be the last thing you ever do! i'm not scared of you! and i never will be!" he said confident that the others were watching and thinking of a plan to get rid of them once and for all!!!
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#171 Posted: 21:08:28 31/10/2008
'You can ban me all you like, but you will never keep me away!! But never mind! Cause you're all going to hell in about 10 seconds time!!' the five scouts dissappeared.
'What do you mean?!' Silro asked. 'Wait five seconds and find out for yourself!!' He then dissappeared. 'Wha!..........' An explosion with a 100 metre radius then happend, almost killing silro.
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#172 Posted: 21:16:10 31/10/2008
shadow was dead he didn't manage to survive, back home Ironstone and Darkcloud saw the whole thing! while Quietfire and Dawn took care of Fireflight, who was probally the only one who could stop them now!
"i'll miss shadow he was a loyal shadow dragon! but i've got more where he came from!" said Darkcloud he wasn't sad just dissappointed he lost a good dragon! "don't bother!" said Ironstone "they'll just kill that one too! we need a better plan then that!" he said smiling "you've got something up your sleeve! what are you planning old timer?!" he asked "you'll see!" he said with a grin
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#173 Posted: 21:28:15 31/10/2008
Darkfire then came back to finish off Silro.
'Did you like my surprise?' He liften up silros head as he said this, and then dropped once he was done. 'Anyone that see's me, never survives, which is why i'm here.' Darkfire then grabbed a knife that was given to him by big boss. 'You wouldnt, not to you brother.....' Darkfire looked at him. 'Oh i wouldnt now? So you think you can? Show me then, prove to me that you are stronger!' He then threw the knife to him, and bent down to him. Silro picked it up. 'Go on then, right there' Darkfire pointed to his chest. Silro aimed, but couldnt brong himself to do it. 'I...I can't...' He almost started to cry of fear. 'Do you know why? Because you weak! You couldnt kill me, not your own brother!' Darkfire then grabbed the knife off of Silro and put his claw accros his neck, making him bleed badly. Silro then became weaker every second, in ten he would be dead. Darkfire was walking away from him about to leave when he turned to him. 'Oh, and did you think i would honestly give you a kinfe?!' He threw it to the ground which then shattered. It was made of easily breakable glass, which would of gone through Darkfires body without shatering before. Darkfire then left silro to die, he only had a couple of seconds left to live. Everything was going dark around him, and was having trouble breathing. He would only last three seconds more.
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#174 Posted: 21:38:21 31/10/2008
then he saw a light................but it wasn't what he thought it was! it was a female dragon that had come to save him! she healed him! then brought him back home, he was confused he couldn't tell who healed him, and brought him here! "its ok! your going to be ok!" said the female dragon
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#175 Posted: 21:45:59 31/10/2008
'You realize what you have just done? He'll be back to kill us all. No one see's him or saves his victims to tell the tale.' He said.
Darkfire had seen this and knew that the temple would be his next target.
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#176 Posted: 22:03:52 31/10/2008
"but she told me to save you! but if you must, you can go! we won't stop you!" said the dragon, silro could now see it was dawn! "if you really want to leave then go ahead! but the others won't like it! we're good dragons silro! its our job to save others from harm! the elders chose us to do this! theres nothing we're afraid of! except for what they'll do to the kids! we don't care what happens to us! but if your that much of a chicken, then leave! we'll do this with or without your help!" she said
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#177 Posted: 22:13:02 31/10/2008
Excuse me, my mum is making me pack for this holiday which i really dont want to go to.
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#178 Posted: 22:14:00 31/10/2008
ok! we can continue the story later!
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#179 Posted: 22:14:55 31/10/2008
If she'll ever let me back on tonight
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#180 Posted: 22:17:05 31/10/2008
i hope she will! but some of mt friends want to write something so i won't be bored!
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#181 Posted: 22:39:13 31/10/2008
yeah but im bored of going on holiday, she takes me every school break, unless it's a christmas we get to stay home, but thats it. Every school break, we normaly go away on holiday.
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#182 Posted: 22:45:47 31/10/2008
lucky! we never go anywhere, or do anything!!!
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#183 Posted: 22:48:09 31/10/2008
No but tis is the ummm, 15th time i have been to wales. im bored of going on holiday every school break, MUM just go without me!! i dont care what i'll miss out on, you'll miss out on me complaining that i dont want to go!!
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#184 Posted: 22:49:55 31/10/2008
yeah, maybe you should stay home! oh wait! great idea! i'll go instead! i'm dying to get out this dumb, boring house!
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#185 Posted: 22:55:34 31/10/2008
I dont want to go, because:
A I just want to stay home for an Entire break, not half of it. B: My friend asked me if i wanted to go and see Quantum Of Solace, the new bond film.
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#186 Posted: 22:56:15 31/10/2008
but even though i dont want to go, i dont know why i cant tell her.
But i dont care if she finds out
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#187 Posted: 23:13:29 31/10/2008
'Yes but if he finds you he'll kill you!!' Dawn was going to say something, but collapsed with a wound in the back of her, Darkfire was on two legs with a knife coming from under one of his front claws.
'Just like that!' Darkfire didnt put his knife away, but tried to get silro who only just missed. 'Im gonna kill you just like i did with her!'
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#188 Posted: 23:27:06 31/10/2008
ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "DON'T YOU TOUCH HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yelled Quietfirea behind them using fire breath on darkfire!!! with darkcloud comming from one side with shadowfire breath, and Ironstone on the other with poison! plus pablo a black dragon was comming from behind silro with shadow pwers and got inbetween them! "leave him alone!" he said "you'll pay for killing my wife!" then he used convexity breath!
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#189 Posted: 23:34:52 31/10/2008
'Hah!! Lets just see you try that again!' Darkfire had seemed to dodge the attacks without moving. Silro then realized why. Looking at the chest of Darkfire, silro saw doom.
'X-Amour......2?!' He realized some downsides to his one and then realized that they would be fixed on his. 'Wait you guys!! You cant beat him!! If you couldnt beat my armour, then your practicly dead with his!!' Darkfire then seemed to dissappear from where he was and appeared behind Silro. Silr then had a sharp object go into his back. 'Sweet dreams! Brother!' Darkfire then pulled his claw back revealing a blade under his hand, covered in blood.
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#190 Posted: 23:54:53 31/10/2008
"silro?! are you still with us?!" asked Quietfire, the others had gone to the pool, and started making a plan, then a dragon walked up and sat down beside Quietfire! "can you help him?!" asked Quietfire
"i'll try my best!" said the dragon, silro could now tell it was a male!, he then started to heal silro! using the same power that dawn was using! "thanks!" said Quietfire "no problem! i'd do anything for one of my sister's friends!" the dragon said, then he walked off!
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#191 Posted: 00:02:15 01/11/2008
'So, who how many more healers can i get?!' Darkfire said while flying. he waited for someone to either answer him or attack him. but they did neither. 'No answer hey? Well then, try heal yourselfs after this!!' Darkfire then swung one of his claws around sending four knifes into the dragons. He didnt miss any of them, sending the four knifes into the chest of the dragons, he then used a blackwave fury. The blackwave fury is so powerful that whoever had been attacked by one, never survived to tell the tale.
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#192 Posted: 00:12:28 01/11/2008
but someone did! but they weren't there when it happened! they didn't know who the male dragon really was! he was Fireflight's brother! Bluefire! he was a blue dragon! he had all the powers that Fireflight had! he was just diff. gender and color! but he had powers and abilities that she didn't have! he had things that no one had! which made him more powerful then Fireflight! and he can go to a place where no other dragon can go! not even anyone in his family! he was thier now! looking in the vision pool! wacthing, waiting, for his next move!
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#193 Posted: 00:41:44 01/11/2008
'And now silro, it just you and me.' He flew down to silro.
'You know you cant get away with this. We'll get the kids back and you'll be killed!' Silro tried to hit him away, but missed and put his hand through Darkfire's blade, Taking it off and screaming in pain. Darkfire dropped him and walked in front of him. 'You are an idiot. How do you expect to beat, when you dont even have your armour?!' Silro tried to activate it, but saw that his neck brace wasnt on him. 'Looking for this?' Darkfire showed him Silro's neck brace, who then threw it on the floor and destroying it. Silro now was no match for him, he had lost his armour and now was vonurable. 'I've always known that weakness of yours, you rely on your armour too much. And now you dont have it, i could kill you with one, simple, strike.' Darkfire then ran up to him and grabbed his head, putting his blade near his neck. 'And this time, no one is here to help you!!' Darkfire then raised his arm upwards and thrusted it down at silro's neck. Silro's heart was beating faster than it had been before and everything seemed to slow down, even though he had nearly died before, this had never happened to him. Maybe this time he would die and no one would save him, silro thought. He then saw Fireflight in front of him, and he appeared to be in white place. He looked at her. 'Fireflight? i-i'm sorry. I couldnt get the kids back, what was i thinking, i couldnt stop big boss and rescue them.' She walked up to him and held his face. 'It's ok, no one can do everything. You tried to stop him, and thats what i care about.' Silro calmed down. 'But, you wanted them back.' 'I know, but you went out there, despite him being stronger than you, and you tried to get them back.' Silro then returned to real life, just as Darkfires knife entered his neck. Darkfire then looked at him. 'Dont worry, you'll see your Fireflight soon, and you'll even see Starfire there with her.' He then dropped Silro's head and transported back to Big Boss. Then collapsed, he then saw fireflight again. 'Dont worry Silro, the pain will soon go away. Just follow me' He then raised his arm up to her. 'As long as i am with you.' Darkfire had stabbed him in the wind pipe, shortly killing him after seing fireflight. Even the best healer cant bring life back to a body, once the victim dies, no one can bring them back. Darkfire left Silro's body in the dark worlds. 'Even if they can bring you back to life, you will never survive. My knife is coated with poison, which when it enters the body, attacks the brain. Causing life to be unrestorable.'
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#194 Posted: 00:49:24 01/11/2008
but someone had watched the whole thing! silro saw Bluefire show up
"don't worry! i can fix you!" he said, Bluefire looked diff. from the others he had something they didn't have! amulets and armor! both magical and powerful! which increased his powers! making him invincible! he was able to heal silro completely! he was alive! Bluefire could even do other things, that no other dragon could do! "well your alive agian! thanks to me! your welcome! now what do you say we help the others!" he said as he went around to all the dragons and healed them!
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#195 Posted: 00:52:08 01/11/2008
(Ummm, not tryin to sound angry, but did you read the last bit? Quote:
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#196 Posted: 00:54:40 01/11/2008
you obviously don't know how powerful Bluefire is! hes got stuff that no other dragon has! none of my other dragons have anything like it!
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#197 Posted: 01:10:21 01/11/2008
But, i mean, making him could ruin some parts of a story. Cause, if you have heal constantly, everyone will geuss that he'll win every time. And will assume how it ends, and just walk away. I know this, because my friend told me a bit about a story he write, and he had a character like yours and cause he did this quite a few times, including to himself, i just said to him "Let me geuss, he goes against some big character, the big one tries to kill him but fails and he wins yet again" He asked how i knew and i said the same thing im saying here. Im not trying to offend you, just saying what i think
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#198 Posted: 01:19:37 01/11/2008
yeah, i didn't know, but i have to go soon!
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#199 Posted: 01:21:04 01/11/2008
Thanks for realizing, but try to think about these things before you do post a new part.
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#200 Posted: 01:29:43 01/11/2008 | Topic Creator
wow you guys wrote a lot!!!
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